Story: Crying In The Rain
Posted on Saturday August 30, 2003 at 18:55 by amethystserenity
Rated: PG13 Status: Completed
After getting her heart broken by her first boyfriend, Usagi is crying in the rain. Can someone who has always loved her in secret heal her pain? One shot. AR.
Number of Chapters: 1 Total Size: 6k Word Count: 1,130
You are indeed the mistress of romantic creativity: of course, there are others that stand about you with such a talent, but your little romantic gem shines with a light all its own that swept me away. I could feel everything, see it all. The pace of the narrative moved cleverly through each scene, we think it might turn one way, then it surprises us.
Short, sweet and heart-warming. It was both a pleasure and honor to read. *hands you a garland of pink-roses and bows* L.
cute but a little to unrealistic for my taste, i mean no guy who has had a crush on a girl forever will just come and blunt it out just for the sake of it, let alone say "i love u" from the beginning, these things take time and even if felt not said on the very first occation... but hey thats jsut me...otherwise it was a very nice story, one that i would like to experience myself(well minus the bad boyfriend part)
keep on it
Anonymous - Sunday March 06, 2005 at 17:48
i luv these romantic stories with mamoru and usagi! Great story.
I loved this! Your setting and the characters were both written beautifully. The story is very sweet and I'm heading to read the sequal right now. Fantastic job!
