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Story: Nanosecond
Posted on Friday November 03, 2006 at 11:41 by lady_baine
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Members Stories Season: Sailor Moon
Main Characters: Mamoru/Darien, Usagi/Serena

Genre: Angst, Drama

Rated: PG
Status: Completed

[PGSM] My two halves merge, causing me to revert to the form that I was born into in this lifetime. I am Tsukino Usagi once more. Not a princess, not a senshi, just a normal girl. A normal girl hugging her normal boyfriend...in the middle of a warzone.


Number of Chapters: 1          Total Size: 14k          Word Count: 2,443

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Loki - Friday November 17, 2006 at 15:15
potent!

WISE, what a powerful story, I found little to fault with it, only one thing, likely a typo, but (!?) watch those multiple punctuations as they are an evil grammatical trap. XD

Otherwise, it was flawless. The characterisation was fabulous, as was the imagery and pathos, the over-all affect intense and had me hooked from the start -- hallmarks of a good writer.

I loved the way you swung the pendulum between Beryl and Usagi, the princess and how different forms of power bring different advantages, yet present unexpected vulnerabilities -- love and death praxis -- but which course is true, which strength would vanquish the evil queen? It was all here. fabulous one-shot! *hands you a silver rose and bows* L.
galena_steel - Thursday November 09, 2006 at 11:04
I admit to some confusion - probably cause I don't think I have watched that episode (or it was so long ago that I can't remember the details...) But I loved the emotion you wove into the story. The way her confidence turns to confusion is so poingant. I felt my heart lurch. It was beautiful and beautifully written. Thank you.
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