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Story: A Hazard to Myself
Posted on Tuesday July 07, 2009 at 21:06 by Lady_Baine
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Members Stories Season: Alternate Reality
Main Characters: Makoto/Lita, Nephrite

Genre: Romance

Rated: PG13
Status: Unknown

Kino Makoto's life begins spiraling out of control as her lover leaves her for the unknown and she makes her way to Juuban, where she will find herself becoming a superhero whose mission is to destroy the only man she's ever loved...


Number of Chapters: 1          Total Size: 13k          Word Count: 2,233

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Loki - Wednesday July 08, 2009 at 17:01
a powerful snapshot of Makoto's life before her meeting up with Usagi and the girls, Nephrite's presence you pinned down perfect.

The atmospherics and imagery all well executed for maximum affect in such a short piece, and the Japanese gave the piece a nice authenticity as did the zodiac references.

Only one little thing to note, you had 'timber' I think you were looking for 'timbre'

Excellent ficlet! <3
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