This story was filled with tenderness and warmth, and the emotional power well presented.
WISE: I thought this story in a technical sense has progressed, there are still some minor punctuation, spelling with way-ward, should be wayward. Grammar and typos fewer, but a quick clean up via story manager should take care of those.
All-in-all, a wonderful heart felt story with angst and love. Congrats on a great little story. *hands you more rose quartz roses and bows* L.
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