Of Shadows and Light: The Truth of Solaris by StormChild
Reviewed by Loki - Thursday July 29, 2010 at 19:48
Good on you girl, a unique and fascinating spin on the crystal and the transformations of gold and silver, great work! <3 |
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Surprise Surprise! by Loki
Reviewed by arabella - Wednesday July 28, 2010 at 00:40
great chapter it had so much in it as well from the most embarrassing and hilarious thing (condoms for balloons??!! :-)))) only she wold do something like that ) to the getting her hormones in check :-))))
great job |
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To no A-Veil by Vipaka
Reviewed by Red_Elephant - Monday July 26, 2010 at 00:39
That was perfect. You seem very in touch with the darker sides of these characters, something I really commend you for. Please continue. |
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Beauty in the Breakdown by Lady_Baine
Reviewed by Loki - Sunday July 25, 2010 at 13:22
Reading this once more I was reminded of how fantastic a writer you are, and this is a classic by any definition, great work and hope to see more up in the near future! <3 |
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To no A-Veil by Vipaka
Reviewed by Loki - Sunday July 25, 2010 at 13:18
Dark, vivid and powerful, certainly did the trick and dealt with the theme perfectly, nit picks, some spelling things, but easy fixed.
Great drabble! <3 |
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Just Another Otaku by ClaidiWinter
Reviewed by Red_Elephant - Tuesday July 20, 2010 at 01:10
I'm really enthralled by what you have written so far. The plot is exciting and relatable but with just the right amount of fantasy added. I love your characterisation of Sarah and Darren and most especially Molly, she's fabulous. I have lots of questions so I hope that you are back for good now so that I can get some of them answered. Great story. Welcome back! |
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You Get Me by Red_Elephant
Reviewed by daisybell - Tuesday July 13, 2010 at 19:05
omg!! loved loved loved it!! please update asap!! |
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Cloudy, With a Chance of Meatballs by AngelMoonGirl
Reviewed by lexie - Monday July 12, 2010 at 16:52
I enjoyed reading your short story. It was believable and makes you wonder if he purposely set his schedule to "accidently" meet up with her. As Loki state, it was well written and I believe I will see what other stories you have written. |
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My Lady Queen by MoonSparkle
Reviewed by Anonymous - Monday July 12, 2010 at 13:15
you rebooted this, but nothing new added since you posted it the first time, don't you feel now might be a good time to offer something new instead of just re-posting? *pouts* |
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Christmas Stalkings by crystal_rose
Reviewed by daisybell - Thursday July 08, 2010 at 19:02
:) very cute i know it is only july and i should of read this story at Christmas time but it was such a cute Christmas in July story!! i loved the rhyme in the third chapter. |
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Hallows of a Past Life by AngelMoonGirl
Reviewed by Loki - Wednesday July 07, 2010 at 11:35
And so unbound, my spirit flies, and now, that you are free, I am free... (my idea of how Darien's spirit might have reacted, as he stood as a ghost, looking on, a teardrop in his eye and the tear falls, and splashes upon a budding rose...
Sad, but beautiful girl! <3 |
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Cloudy, With a Chance of Meatballs by AngelMoonGirl
Reviewed by Loki - Wednesday July 07, 2010 at 11:24
Oh the perfect title, soooooooooo cute, and just makes you glad to be a fan of Sailor Moon! Well written as always! <3 |
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The First Night by AngelMoonGirl
Reviewed by Loki - Wednesday July 07, 2010 at 10:55
Awwww! This is such a cute story, and Usagi, her adorable best and Mamoru handled himself so well, they are an amazing couple! Well written girl! <3 |
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You Get Me by Red_Elephant
Reviewed by Loki - Wednesday July 07, 2010 at 10:38
I hope you continue this, or an ep or sequel, there is so much more you can tell, we know how things are likely to unfold, but the proof is always in the eating,
BTW, nit picks: . "Truce"
you've a few sentence problems, punctuation -wise, little things, but worth a polish-up.
Dramatic, and passionate, the speed driving is a issue that is very much a problem here in Australia, 'hoon' drivers are very dangerous and irresponsible, you covered that in your story, if you wish to reinforce this point, in the notes you could note the stats in terms of injuries and deaths ascribed to speedy driving, in your home state, I feel this is a world-wide problem and would strike a chord with most readers.
Other than that, the relationship issues were expressed in a realistic way, and the manner in which each dealt with this had been understandable and often people have to deal with such realizations, the problems exist when one lies to themselves and or their partner and intended beloved.
Great fic! |
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Right Hand Red by Usabelle
Reviewed by toves - Wednesday July 07, 2010 at 05:02
This has to be one of my favorite stories on here! I adore it! You've got them down perfectly! Great job! |
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You Get Me by Red_Elephant
Reviewed by toves - Wednesday July 07, 2010 at 03:42
PLEASE WRITE MORE.
I really like it, I'm slightly heat stroked so I can't go into more right now, but I really like it! |
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You Get Me by Red_Elephant
Reviewed by Leeza - Tuesday July 06, 2010 at 18:54
Please continue!!!!! Love it. |
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You Get Me by Red_Elephant
Reviewed by FFPrincess - Tuesday July 06, 2010 at 14:45
Interesting start, you captured their relationship perfectly and Mamoru's cool aloofness on target. I'm eager to read the forthcoming chapters. The plot is something new and refreshing to me (not that I haven't read other friends turned lovers one but not in the way that you placed the two.) Can't wait till you update this. |
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The First Night by AngelMoonGirl
Reviewed by Red_Elephant - Tuesday July 06, 2010 at 11:46
That was very sweet and made me smile. Great one shot. |
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Breathe In Now by Red_Elephant
Reviewed by heaven85 - Monday July 05, 2010 at 05:02
Can't wait to read more. Love the plot and flow the story. |
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Breathe In Now by Red_Elephant
Reviewed by Loki - Saturday July 03, 2010 at 16:07
I love this chapter, drama, pathos, angst and a little ligher moments, I love your descriptions, and boy Mamoru is in hot water, and love Ami and Usagi's meeting, great work.
BTW, nit picky things: Motoki shrugged at his friend/suggest an apostrophe here/s and last, 'shiny' has only one 'ne' not, two, but aside from those, perfection! |
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Breathe In Now by Red_Elephant
Reviewed by Eternia - Friday July 02, 2010 at 04:38
I can't wait to read more of this. I hope you update soon. Love the plot, nice an refreshing.
~!*Eternia*!~ |
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Just Another Otaku by ClaidiWinter
Reviewed by Loki - Thursday July 01, 2010 at 19:25
So good to see you back girl! I enjoyed this chapter, and what a cliffhanger, I see a little trouble ahead, but like every storm, we hope for that silver lining... |
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Dabbling in Heartwarming Drabbles--UsaMamo Love by AlaVerity
Reviewed by ladymooncat - Saturday June 26, 2010 at 15:37
Oh man, I think the things I love most about your drabbles are the original, classic AlaVerity lines you come out with that really, really make me laugh.
My new favourite:
"Falling madly and deeply in love with a man who only stops long enough to tell you that your hair should be served up in a spaghetti dish."
HOW do you do it? xD
Absolute brilliance and wonderful fun as always :) |
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Attraction by Lara
Reviewed by Anonymous - Tuesday June 22, 2010 at 19:15
Ah this was great. But you missed the anniversary. I hope you haven't forgotton! Can't wait for the finale! =)
You're doing a great job. Minor grammar and typos.
But you have Usagi and Mamoru's personality and characters down very well. |
