 | Love Potion No. 19 by AliciaBlade
Reviewed by FFPrincess - Wednesday March 10, 2010 at 22:05
Still love this story.
<3 <3 <3
It was so great to reread it again at work! ^-^ | | Twenty Kisses by AngelMoonGirl
Reviewed by Red_Elephant - Wednesday March 10, 2010 at 11:02
You are a wonderful writer! I really enjoyed these drabbles, you reached me with every single one and thats something that is hard to do. Your grammer, spelling etc is good and I felt that your characterisation was spot on - except for Rei (I think you made her a little soft but that's just my opinion). You wove genuine emotion into each piece, something that's not always easy to achieve. Great fic and I can't wait to read more. | | Merry Christmas, Small Lady by AngelMoonGirl
Reviewed by FFPrincess - Tuesday March 09, 2010 at 17:17
Simple heartwarming. I felt the tears in my eyes when Serenity saw the Christmas miracle. Wonderful story. ^^ | | Not a Virgin Anymore by kihinranno
Reviewed by Loki - Sunday March 07, 2010 at 03:39
cute and very funny, trust our Minako! :D But Ami was a scream, our bunny is amazing! | | Lifted From The Depths by Red_Elephant
Reviewed by FFPrincess - Friday March 05, 2010 at 13:43
I really enjoyed this piece by you. It really shows that Usagi suffered so much after discovering Mamoru died and how she coped with it. Everyone would like to think that Usagi would just bounce back but there is dark thoughts in our minds and you demonstrate that in Usagi beautifully.
Also I love (hum this might be a spoiler...) how Usagi needs to feel him after he is revived. I like your play on Usagi's emotional trauma.
Great job! | | Tuxedo Anonymous by Valentine
Reviewed by Amethyst-Heart - Thursday March 04, 2010 at 02:35
I don't know if we're allowed to say who had our prompt (I think the mystery is more in who is doing the writing anyway), but I'm going to go ahead and tell you--this was all mine, and I have to say, I LOVED it. Although it's bittersweet in the end, and though I actually wrote you a summary-type blurb (I noticed many people didn't do that), you met everything I asked for and THEN SOME, and you spun this adorable, amusing, but also kind of heartbreaking tale that is quite different from the way I imagined it (but this is a GOOD thing--you put an original twist to it and I very much approve). I loved how this was entirely from Mamoru's point of view. I think you wrote him quite well, and he just felt so much like the Mamoru we know, so excellent characterization. The advice worked really well--I have no idea how it went down in my head, but I loved how people kept giving him such useless advice. My favorite would have to be the radio's "Think! What would Tuxedo Kamen do?" XD SO hilarious. Adding the Negaverse was a stroke of genius--I DID not expect any villains at all, and I loved how they were there. (You gave "crazy love letter" an entirely new meaning. I'm kind of curious about what it said, and I like how Rei and Mako knew it was a trap, but Usagi, so trusting and romantic, never suspected. Again, you write them quite well.) Anyway, thank you sooooooo much! Even though it's bittersweet, I really enjoyed it. (And also, I really loved your use of Disneyland, the song, and I especially love this quote, "No, Tsukino Usagi was a splash of cold water to the face. Every time he saw her he woke up from the long and tedious dream of life, and the boy in him was running through Disneyland again." Just amazing work!) | | Not a Virgin Anymore by kihinranno
Reviewed by Red_Elephant - Tuesday March 02, 2010 at 23:35
Ah, the innocence of youth. Parents have to be pretty careful what they tell kids, they can be taken so literally. That was very cute and very funny.
Just one thing. When you wrote that Ami looked 'pekish', did you possibly mean 'peekish?' | | Seeking and Finding a Courageous Heart by Valentine
Reviewed by Yumecosmos - Tuesday March 02, 2010 at 23:05
That was super cute! I like how you highlight all the little things Naru likes about Umino. The Naru/Usagi interaction was well done too. You really bring out the strength of Usagi's character in that she's supportive but still knows when Naru needs to say things for herself.
The ending was just right. It had both the waffy awkwardness of a classic high school romance and the candid sweetness of best-friends-turned-lovers.
Thanks for sharing this story and reminding me why I love this couple! | | Love is such a Strange and Funny thing by zaizai
Reviewed by moonshine515 - Tuesday March 02, 2010 at 08:05
more, please! and as soon as possible! | | Don't Touch the Hair! by lunafreak
Reviewed by Loki - Monday March 01, 2010 at 18:26
Every time I read this, it always touches my heart, and my funny bone, you hsould write more girl! <3333333333333 *roses and bows* :D | | Of Hoofprints and Harpies by Stormlight
Reviewed by Loki - Monday March 01, 2010 at 18:11
I loved this story the first time I read it and it still has its charm and cuteness, wonderful work Stormy! <3333 | | Tuxedo Anonymous by Valentine
Reviewed by Loki - Monday March 01, 2010 at 06:04
That was so incredibly romantic, and I feel this story is a classic that deserves a sequel. *hints unashamedly* :D
Beautiful sentament, imagery and affect, right on the money, sweet, touching and drama all combined to make this something very special, thank you for sharing your gift with us! | | If I Could Fall In Love by Valentine
Reviewed by Loki - Monday March 01, 2010 at 05:34
Oh so rmanticand for all its short sweetness, a gem.
Back story would be intriguing perhaps in a follow-up as Moon Flower suggested, but you did great.
Knit-picky things:
Careful with 'OK' and those kinds of contractions, 'okay' is best, although in a short story format, it passes, but good to bear in mind.
Lastly, this grammar thing: and it was easier to *breath.*
1She took in a deep breath.
2: I couldn't breathe!. (this second spelling is what you need, *winks*
Fabulous little story, the romance, and your style of drawing in the reader, and creating images and characterisation was impressive. I look forward to reading more of your work, keep it up, you have a gift and nice writing flare! | | If I Could Fall In Love by Valentine
Reviewed by moonflower - Sunday February 28, 2010 at 20:15
The fanfic was sweet and cute. I enjoyed the ever familiar Usagi/Mamoru banter in this AU story. The attraction between the two characters felt believable and natural in an easy going kind of way. You captured that beautifully.
The one thing I would have liked to have seen in the story was a bit more back story on Usagi/Mamoru. I felt you didn't know where either character was coming from. How did Mamoru come to be Usagi's bodyguard? What were their impressions of each other when they first met? When did Usagi realize she had developed feelings for Mamoru? Although it was mentioned the two of them have only known each other for a few months, I would have liked to have seen their interaction with each other during those few months through brief little flashbacks or recollections. It would make Usagi's dilemma over liking her bodyguard and struggling to tell him how she felt more understandable.
I did enjoy reading this and it was a good story to escape into for a moment. Good job! | | Tuxedo Anonymous by Valentine
Reviewed by moonflower - Sunday February 28, 2010 at 19:57
I really enjoyed this fic. Reading it made me realize why I fell in love with the series in the first place. Considering you don't usually write for this couple, it was a great job nonetheless. It had the right balance of romance and angst. I always enjoyed fanfics with Mamoru's POV. He's a serious and slightly dark character, but somehow he's drawn to Usagi who is the complete opposite of him. Going through the emotions with Mamoru really struck a chord with me and it makes you want him to end up with the girl who confuses him and yet makes him smile at the same time.
The ending feels right as well. If they ended up together, considering where the fic was going it would have felt forced and unrealistic. I could see this fic taking place in the first season of Sailor Moon, before Usagi and Mamoru find out each other's identities and before they actually come to fall for each other all over again.
Again, I commend you on this lovely Valentine's Day fic. | | Love is such a Strange and Funny thing by zaizai
Reviewed by IcyTranquil - Sunday February 28, 2010 at 19:35
Please update soon! This story is great! Can't wait til the end! | | This Sweet Madness by Covenmouse
Reviewed by Loki - Sunday February 28, 2010 at 14:56
Chapter 3 is even more intriguing and I cannot wait for the next installment, good work girl! <3 | | This Sweet Madness by Covenmouse
Reviewed by Loki - Sunday February 28, 2010 at 14:39
surreality! Amazing and complex, yet intricate, darka nd light, a prism of images deep pools of emotion and distorted magic tearing at the fabric of its confinement, perfect drama, and easy to lose yourself in, brilliant! <3 | | Broken Boundaries by k-chan
Reviewed by Loki - Saturday February 27, 2010 at 06:29
Fantastic chapter is 29, and the humor, drama, suspense and the power of your style of writing K, is amazing! Seto, Miranda are a good couple, and I thought all the characters were so real, and present so let's see the team Senshi and team Kaiba go in there and kick some butt! *cheers em on* | | End Of Innocence by darkpower
Reviewed by Loki - Friday February 26, 2010 at 04:18
a suspence and high-powered cliffy, salutations, to you, for delivering another dramatic chapter, and with a few tender moments, I was wondering about the girls and if they would use more of their magical attacks, also, the combination of their powers with that of Casto's? Perhaps I am guessing, but a Burning Mandala, and a Firebird attack, Venus Crescent Beam, and C B Smash, and Ice Storm Blast and other attacks would be cool to see more of, and new attacks in the united Sailor combined assaults, just thought I'd run the ideas by you, but you may already have this in mind, either way, great chapter, a few little knit-picky things, but easy to tweak.
Fantastic chapter! ^_^ *love the story of the bunnies and Sere in the pool and her reaction to Casto and how she says, 'Your Bunny needs you!'* That was cute! =^_^= | | If I Could Fall In Love by Valentine
Reviewed by Anonymous - Wednesday February 24, 2010 at 14:20
A bit on the short side but it was still cute nonetheless. I enjoyed how you incorporated SxD's relationship with his nickname for her. I didn't really see any grammatical errors so overall you did a fine job. =) | | This Sweet Madness by Covenmouse
Reviewed by Loki - Wednesday February 24, 2010 at 04:35
I was reminded of so many classic tales of how the mind, the heart and the uncanny were woven together in a maze of drama, fear, confusion, hope and longing for wholeness.
I really enjoyed chapter one and it is filled with depths that are teh hallmark of any good writer, if anything, the layers, symbolism and the clever way you work this fanfiction is admirable.
Knit-picks, some grammar, a few typos and little flaws, but a BETA would help with those, but in all, you have a refreshing and powerful style of writing, and one not without the grace a poise of a skilled storyteller, and I could picture, taste, touch and feel it all, the tactile and viceral style of writing is breathtaking and I can only encourage you to keep going with your writing. In time, I think you'd be capable of anything, well-done girl! <3 | | Breathe In Now by Red_Elephant
Reviewed by vaunam - Sunday February 21, 2010 at 18:00
Amazing start to the story. I love the way you protrayed the charaters. I relly enjoyed the air of mystery you left us with, so many questions are swriling around in my head! Can't wait for chapter 2. | | Seeking and Finding a Courageous Heart by Valentine
Reviewed by heaven85 - Friday February 19, 2010 at 08:02
Great job. I loved it! It was really sweet. | | Inc by MarshAngel
Reviewed by FFPrincess - Thursday February 18, 2010 at 20:37
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It was extraordinary and I like how you twisted it to force Darien and Serena together. You can see how they fell in love, each in their own way and how in the end it worked out all well.
I feel bad for Andrew but I'm sure with him everything will turn out okay.
Excellent job. |
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