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Story: Tomboy
Posted on Tuesday June 17, 2003 at 17:29 by Dreameress
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Members Stories Winner:Most Popular Story - September 2003 
Winner: Most Popular Story - September 2003

Rated: PG13
Status: Completed

Serena, the tomboy, is just one of the guys. And that's the way, uh huh, she likes it until her best friend becomes her head-long crush. And so POOF! With the help of her new match-maker friends, Serena becomes the woman she always wanted to be and soon unbeknowest to Darien, a mysterious woman of intrique. But what happens when her best friend finds out that his Sere is no longer the tomboy he has known??



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Number of Chapters: 13          Total Size: 109k          Word Count: 19,995

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princesa_angelbebe - Tuesday October 07, 2008 at 22:22
Tomboy serena who would have every though? loved it!
Nich - Tuesday September 09, 2008 at 20:53
How awesome! Great story, I loved it!
kbpluto - Saturday May 10, 2008 at 01:04
i loved it!
lexie_06 - Thursday November 22, 2007 at 23:00
i just love this story!!!
leeanne24 - Sunday July 01, 2007 at 02:25
this was very well written
angelwings86 - Sunday May 06, 2007 at 17:12
I loved this story! As soon as I read Serena, the tomboy, I knew it had to be good, and it was! ^_^ The story line, plot, and characters were awesome. Serena and Darien's character development was good and I totally could see it happening to someone. I kept seeing everything in my mind like it was really happening. lol. Loved it!
sailorrose2 - Sunday December 31, 2006 at 01:45
Hey, that was really cool. I love it. I think it was to put serena in a tomboy look. You have everyone in it. Good Job!
serena-son - Saturday July 15, 2006 at 17:06
i going to review on the last chapter and i just finished the last chapter and it was very good i enjoyed it how she didnt understand her feelings and didnt know what to do and how she learned how to center both being a girl and being a tomboy and i see minas playing 2 cool
heaven85 - Tuesday December 06, 2005 at 06:55
What a cute story. I love how she was in love with Darien and how they got together.
komadori - Thursday June 09, 2005 at 00:25
That was awsome girlie!! I loved every bit of it. Keep up the good work. Can't wait to read another story of yours.
astro - Thursday March 24, 2005 at 19:57
llllloooooooooooveeeeeeeeedd
it, but why use the word female, its so weird, wouldnt woman do
anyways
loved it
Skysong - Monday February 14, 2005 at 08:06
The story is pretty good, and though it borders on the generic side, it still has enough character and sweetness to make the story sincerly touching and loved by readers.

However, please go over and edit, polish, and improve it. Grammer, correct placement of dialog, and i would prefer a format that's easier to read on AI. Sometimes there are small words missing, etc.

because it seems like there are no indented paragraphs it's very jarring when all of a sudden it's a different day, or a different person.

I hope you keep on writing, and keep telling your stories. If you keep at it, not only will we readers get to read more lovely material, but you're writing will improve as you practice and keep trying.
cherry37sos - Sunday October 10, 2004 at 21:27
oh wow... the summary really caught my attention. it sounds great so far. can't wait to finish reading ur story!
Moori - Saturday July 31, 2004 at 03:42
I really liked your story a lot. I thought it was pretty funny when you had serena b*tching darien out on her porch. I almost fell out of my chair laughing. I think you did a good job with this and I enjoyed reading it.
Lady_Isis - Sunday April 11, 2004 at 14:50
This fic was amazing ~_^. I've read fics where Sere is the nerd or popular girl in the school, but never one where she is part of the foot ball team.
Iona
LadyKelly - Friday January 30, 2004 at 20:56
This story was very good. I liked it thru the whole think. Great job!
Cappuchino_Princezz - Monday October 13, 2003 at 07:56
congrats for a story well ended. It was truly a pleasure to read such an amazingly unique piece. HAve anything new up your sleeve?
serenasangel - Sunday October 12, 2003 at 20:06
awww!!! so cute i loved it!
Acid - Sunday October 12, 2003 at 05:15
*cries into the mountain of tissues in her lap*
it was so bootiful... *sniff sniff*
Oh, i'll miss those two *sighs wisfully* Now where the hell is my Miss Right?
- Acid.
Sailor_Angel - Saturday October 11, 2003 at 11:33
awww, ^_^ cute, I'm only a bit sad now since the stories finished :( but oh well, all things come to an end.
Serenia - Saturday October 11, 2003 at 01:56
Love how it ended! You're a very talented writer!
Usagi15 - Friday October 10, 2003 at 03:35
I love your story! It was great! I love both of your stories! I hope you plan to write more! This was great and I truly love it. You are a great wrtier!
Usagi ^_~
aman_akira - Friday October 10, 2003 at 02:54
Okay, I was wrong. I'm glad you wrote an epilogue.
Full-circle.
It was perfect.
tomato - Wednesday October 08, 2003 at 06:04
are you going to write another story because I thought Tomboy was one of the most well crafted stories ever and I enjoyed in immensely! Bravo! Bravo!
Kimmi-Chan - Tuesday October 07, 2003 at 23:18
By my Lord this is amazing! A good ending and a lovely way of wrapping this fic up. Very sweet might I add =). This will for sure be in my faves...

-Kimmi-Chan
MoonieDream - Tuesday October 07, 2003 at 20:27
ive already wrote but as a fithful fan i figures since its over i had to write again...I LOVE THIS STORY! THANKS FOR THE LAUGHS! lol...ure a great writer!
Ariel - Tuesday October 07, 2003 at 18:16
Fantastic!!!I loved the epilogue. Its was perfect!!!
lil_dreamer - Tuesday October 07, 2003 at 17:43
oh well its waqs great reading !!!
luv ya
lil_dreamer
lacyloss - Tuesday October 07, 2003 at 16:08
Awwwwwwwwww~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was so sweet i wish it didnt end!!! :( (But all good things must come
an end)!!!! I really love it since your finish with the whole thing then i am going to read it all over
again!!!! I hope you continue your other storeis!!!!!!!!!!!! Good JoB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sweetcece15 - Tuesday September 30, 2003 at 20:04
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! You STOPPED!!! WHY?!? You are such a butt...*crosses arms and pouts*....anyways, you should update really soon! Your story is really good. Can't wait to see the ending. What is Serena going to do? The guy just kisses her! If it were me I'd just go with the flow....but they are best friends....will he think more? Or is it just 'in the moment'? Well...Bye! Write more!
Sailor_Angel - Sunday September 28, 2003 at 14:34
Stick in an Epiilogue will ya? I ish likeings this one a lot ^_^ uh oh, Skool Lib. coming, I'll get in trouble if she finds me.
Acid - Sunday September 28, 2003 at 05:29
*blinks* ..a clink? ..what sort of clink?
Hey, it's good.. but i thought you could do an epilogue,you could only make it better. Well, unless you tried really hard, maybe... meh, whatever, do what you want ^-^

- Acid.
Tinks12115 - Sunday September 28, 2003 at 05:20
EPILOGUE PLEASE!
Ariel - Sunday September 28, 2003 at 00:19
Finish!!!! It was SOOO good!!! But I think I would love to have a epilogue to this storie. Just a little something something. Great storie!!!
SweetDreamer - Saturday September 27, 2003 at 23:50
I love the ending.. and the part with Serena ranting... that was halairious... keep up the good work, and I hope you write another amusing fanfiction.
sakura420 - Saturday September 27, 2003 at 22:51
i agree with sexylover, it feels like there's something missing but this story is still great! hope you'll write a epilogue!
Kimmi-Chan - Saturday September 27, 2003 at 21:48
You better make an epilogue!!! I will curse you to pieces and hex you if you don't! I loved it I really did...I was going to cry! But you better make and epilogue...I must know what happens to them!!!

-Kimmi-Chan
Sexylover - Saturday September 27, 2003 at 21:38
I think that was really good but you should write another chapter because there are other people that are in on this relationship.
true - Saturday September 27, 2003 at 19:56
Please write another another story about Tomboy.
lacyloss - Saturday September 27, 2003 at 18:16
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS SO SWEET I CANT
BELIEVE ITS FINISHED OH PLEASE OH PLEASE HAVE A EPILOGUE!!!! PLEASE I BEG
OF THAT WAS GOOD PLEASE I HOPE YOU CONTINUE TO WRITE STORIES!!!!!
Cappuchino_Princezz - Saturday September 27, 2003 at 16:15
that's it?

you're definitely NOT ending it there Missy! What will happen later? What about Serena's newly acquired friends... huh? huh? HUH?! C'mon! I want answers here! hehe.

oh... btw - great job on the chappie. I really liked this story because it had a different edge to it. Keep writing as wonderful as always!
Sabra - Saturday September 27, 2003 at 14:39
*swoons* That was so sweet.. I've loved this story forever.. Are you gonna put up an epilogue?? I really like what you did with this story.. You're a great writer, and I am very happy to have gotten the chance to read this story...*smile* Keep writing, it'll always be worth your time and effort.
lights_darkness - Saturday September 27, 2003 at 14:15
huh that can so not be the end i want more more more more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
luv
ME
lil_dreamer
Lady_Amethyst - Saturday September 27, 2003 at 13:51
You have once again outdone yourself, Dreamress. I think that the ending was perfect and an epilogue would be sooo cool! I think that an epilogue would end the story perfectly, but thats just me! Anyway, keep the great work up!
tomato - Saturday September 27, 2003 at 07:40
That story ended too fast! Everything went like... zooom... or something. But I liked it anyway
Effi - Saturday September 27, 2003 at 04:59
b... b... but... what happens next? Gah! You can't end it there!!! I want to know what happens after that! Write more!!! Please! PRETTY PLEASE?! PRETTY PLEASE WITH A ICE CREAM AND A CHERRY ON TOP?!
MoonieDream - Saturday September 27, 2003 at 04:22
MORE MORE MORE>...u CANT end it THERE...loL!
nika1107 - Saturday September 27, 2003 at 04:21
what?!??!?! the freakin' end?!?!?!? aww man, it must be the end of the world... [i love hyperboles] eh... it says on the thingy up there by the title that it's "incomplete" so you can't fool me!!! *cackles* it was so sweet! can't wait 'till u finish this! (n . n)
Ezza - Saturday September 27, 2003 at 04:00
YEHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
LOVE IT!
WONDERFULL!
Great job
aman_akira - Wednesday September 24, 2003 at 04:31
AHHH, this is soooo good. Geez, I'm going to fail my philosophy test because of this, I couldn't tear my mind away from your story!!!! Please update soon, and Seiya was cool.
Sailor_Angel - Saturday September 20, 2003 at 17:30
Holy Crap, what's going to happen now? I'm really looking forward to the next chappie soon,

~*S.Angel*~
MoonBABIsTaRshines - Thursday September 18, 2003 at 23:34
It's geatting interesting now.
lacyloss - Thursday September 18, 2003 at 02:19
OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD please oh please hurry up an update i really dont want this story to be over but it seems that all good things must come to end i was crying so bad when i read that chapter (it was great) i really love it i hope you contin and update soon!!!1
nika1107 - Thursday September 18, 2003 at 01:19
*sniffle sniffle* that was so good... it reminded me of something... *wipes off tears* that was so touching... now i can't concentrate on my homeworks! you have to finish it soon so i can finally work! hehe...
Sweetcece15 - Wednesday September 17, 2003 at 21:30
Aw! Come on! Why'd you leave it there? I was hopeing to read more...all well. I guess i'll have to wait till you update. So, update soon...please.
daisystar - Wednesday September 17, 2003 at 21:04
can't wait til the next chapter comes out and finds out what happens when darien and serena meet up again. what will they say to each other now? i hope the next chapter is coming out soon. keep writing!!!
Acid - Wednesday September 17, 2003 at 14:25
gah gah gah gah GAH. More!!!!!!!!
*pouts* Come on, i've just finished dancing my freaking stockings off, it's midnight & a half.. i've been dancing since 9am, my hair is covered in 3 different hair products, 4 nets, a thousand bobby pins and a few bands just for fun (of course, it's in a gorgeous bun..) and you finish like that?!
*sighs dramatically* well!! You'll just have to get another chapter out, now won't you!
*grins* well done chicka, keep it up.
- Acid.
pixxie_delight - Wednesday September 17, 2003 at 07:41
wow!!!!!!!!
simplyy wonderfull...c ant wiat for the next chapters to come!!!!
Sailor_Chick - Wednesday September 17, 2003 at 03:33
Please update!!!!!! its getting soo good! i hate all the suspense. it think the story is ggrrrrrrrrrreat! (like tony the tiger!)
MoonieDream - Wednesday September 17, 2003 at 00:39
this is my 2nd Review...THIS STORY ROCKS! what will happena fter the dance...the confession....I NEEED to KNOOOOOOOOW! lol UPDATE SOON!
Ariel - Wednesday September 17, 2003 at 00:39
OMG!!!!! Finaly he say her...and what A reaction. I'm sure he' madly in love with her but he doesn't know it yet. Hope you post a new chapter soon!!!
kireisnowtenshi - Wednesday September 17, 2003 at 00:12
Awwww...so truth is finally out...gosh....guys are dense...~sigh~
angel_eyes - Monday September 15, 2003 at 23:06
when is the next chapter coming out i'm tired of waiting i just read the story over and overt again waiting for the nezt chapter
Saphire - Sunday September 14, 2003 at 04:40
Please write more!!!!!!!!!! I would like to read the rest of this!!! Your story is very good and I Love it!! Can't wait for the rest.
Ariel - Saturday September 13, 2003 at 23:53
I cant wait to see Darrien reaction when hes going to see her!!! More chapters please!!!
sailorknight - Friday September 12, 2003 at 04:12
Not bad. The building of the tension you're putting between Serena and Darien is pretty good. I'm interested in seeing how this ends.
Sweetcece15 - Monday September 08, 2003 at 18:55
What an a*****e! (Pardon mon french) I ata....well....I could never really hurt him, BUT i'm really close to doing something mean! Why is he only thinking about his feelings?...'What happened to my best friend'....etc.... then he gets mad at her! What a butt! Anyways, I'm really getting into this story! You should update sooner! Can't wait to see his eyes pop out when he sees her (all hot and beautiful) at the dance with some hot guy...(maybe Seiya...*hint hint*...) hehehe....
lacyloss - Sunday September 07, 2003 at 17:39
OH MY GOD PLEASE OH PLEASE NEXT CHAPTER i really love it that cliffhanger made me mad because i wanted to read more!!!!!!!( but oh well i only hope that you continue this very soon please i beg of you too!!!!!
Pure_Crystallization - Sunday September 07, 2003 at 04:25
OOOOOOOh i really love this story. I hope that you update really soon cause it's a beautiful story. Love it!
Stargirl - Sunday September 07, 2003 at 00:56
I'm enjoying the fanfic so far! It always makes for a good plot. It might be nice if you formatted it more (so it doesn't show up every other line all the way throughout with no indents). I could still spot the paragraphs though, so it wasn't too bad. Anyway, I look forward to the end!
kireisnowtenshi - Saturday September 06, 2003 at 22:16
Mood swings!! LOL!!... Want more soon!
Sovern_of_Evil - Saturday September 06, 2003 at 18:13
Lol. Tha chapter was good but too short!!

Please continue. ^________^
MoonBABIsTaRshines - Saturday September 06, 2003 at 17:29
:: the tune form the Moew Mix commericla plays:: :: deep breath:: more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Cappuchino_Princezz - Saturday September 06, 2003 at 16:30
DON'T YOU DARE STOP IT THERE! C'MON- GET BACK TO THE KEYBOARD AND GET ANOTHER CHAPTER OUT!

it's good, I think I've said that about a thousand times...
so yeah. plz write more soon.
lil_dreamer - Saturday September 06, 2003 at 13:35
wow really cool story
plz write more soon
luv
lil_dreamer
Acid - Saturday September 06, 2003 at 09:29
...i'm confused. What a place to end the chapter!

I didn't realise you submitted Tomboy on here, as I've been reading it on ASMR... it's good!
You should get someone to look at it, for editing purposes, because you have quite a lot of mistakes.
I usually don't read anything with mistakes, but yours is really good!
I look forward to the next chapter!

- Acid.
Sailor_Angel - Saturday September 06, 2003 at 09:24
Uh Oh, I, as the all seeing seer of nothing, predict trouble in the near future. Darien, can't he be a man about it and accept that Seren's becoming to woman she was born as? I dunno but I DO know that I'm waiting for your next chappie

Ciao!

~*S.Angel*~
Darrien_4_Serena - Saturday September 06, 2003 at 08:59
please get more out soon cause chaoter 10 took 4eva to come out so plz hurry!!!!!
tomato - Saturday September 06, 2003 at 08:44
I love this story! PERIOD.
StArLiGhTgIrLiE - Saturday September 06, 2003 at 07:22
more please its really good
DaSuPaDuPa1 - Saturday September 06, 2003 at 02:32
*Sniff* *sniff* I live this story... I love you gosh darn it, but that will change if you don't update though. I love Serena in this, I remember when I used to be a tomboy but that changed and people still make fun of me caus of it. Anyway as long as Darien stops being so darn stubbern it'll be all good and dandy, but I still love the drama keep it commin.
nika1107 - Saturday September 06, 2003 at 01:03
this is so good... ^_^ i can't wait for the next one... the dance!!! [yet i have to wait like the others... *sniffles*]
Sabra - Saturday September 06, 2003 at 00:59
This story has always kept me reading... and I'm still really liking it... the onl problem I have.. is the updates. I want to read more! Lol, Seriously, though.. This is a great story.. and I love your work... I can see just by reading through the story how much your writing has improved. Keep it up!
DaeDreamer - Friday September 05, 2003 at 00:32
poor serena =( how can darien be so thick!!! this story rocks B) update soon ^_^
liza_W - Tuesday September 02, 2003 at 23:12
WOW!! that was REALLY good!! I hope u update soon ^_^!! I can't wait to read more. U are very talented.

CYA

PS:by the way i added u to my fAVs :D
raPsteZ_o2 - Tuesday September 02, 2003 at 23:10
u updated!!!!! KOOL!! ireally liked both of the chapters...and how dariens feeling are changing! ^_^
lilcutemar - Tuesday September 02, 2003 at 23:06
AAHHH!! UPDATE SOON PLZ!! thanx!! \I really really really like this story ^_^. well good luck n update soon.
SweetSins54 - Monday August 25, 2003 at 04:44
I can't stand it, I need more!!!!
Anonymous - Friday August 22, 2003 at 19:53
This is a good story!!!!! You have to update!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!
Anonymous - Sunday August 17, 2003 at 00:23
oh wow!!! loved the story please continue soon!
crystal_selene - Friday August 15, 2003 at 07:31
NOOOOOO I NEEEDDD MMMOOOORRREEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!phu-lezz update it SOOOOOOOON!!!!
Ariel - Thursday August 14, 2003 at 03:30
NNOOOOOOOOOOOO you can't stop there!?!?!?!Please write more soon. I wna't to see how Darrien will reacte to serena new apparences!!!Cool storie!
Sailor_Angel - Wednesday August 13, 2003 at 20:59
Have i told u lately that i love u? No? Then, I LOVE YOU!!!! You Finally updated this oh-so wonderful story that I love like crazy, keep going and update REALLY soon
SAILORMERCY - Wednesday August 13, 2003 at 17:52
Glad ur back...good chapters hope u update soon.
MoonBABIsTaRshines - Tuesday August 12, 2003 at 18:24
As I said before: MORE!
Sweetcece15 - Tuesday August 12, 2003 at 06:32
OH! Why did you end there?! It was getting so good!!! Well this is a really great story, hope you update soon!
Ezza - Tuesday August 12, 2003 at 05:25
wonderfull, i hope you are going to write more soon
arwen - Monday August 11, 2003 at 23:59
more,more,more,more,more please write more soon
Anonymous - Monday August 11, 2003 at 20:45
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SweetDreamer - Wednesday August 06, 2003 at 16:23
Finish this story soon. It's absolutly marvelous (soory but I can't really spell^_~)
But I have a question... when did Serena's eyes become purple, or violet. I had always thought that her eyes were a light shade of blue. This is puzzeling. none the less... the plot is extremly excellent.

Keep up the good Work...
SweetDreamer
firelightz - Friday August 01, 2003 at 05:21
I absolutely love this story!!! I would really like to see the next few days in the story so I can find out what happened, so PLEASE write a new chapter!!
lacyloss - Sunday July 27, 2003 at 10:21
please i beg of you to continue you said that you was going to update this if we keeep giving you reviews or email so please i beg of you another chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
cuttie_blossom - Friday July 18, 2003 at 18:46
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U HAVE TO UPDATE QUICKLY!! hurry and get back here!!! please!!!!!
Eimar - Wednesday July 16, 2003 at 04:15
This is such a cute story! Oh, I just felt like strangling Darien to death, then resurrecting him and killing him again by chapter 7. Please continue this soon!
ANGELBLOOD - Friday July 11, 2003 at 21:53
This is such a WONDERFUL story, and I have to wait 5 weeks!!! NO, I want to read more now, pwease! HA! Enjoy your 5 week vacation, but when you come back yuo better write more! LOL. J/K BYE!!!!!!!!!!

BTW, I love the way you portray Sere in this, I've read other fics having Sere as a tomboy, but your story blew them all away, seriously! Stupid Darien, I feel sorry for Sere! I know what it's like to be a tomboy and all! LOL. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK! AND HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPPIE! BYE!
Beautiful_Dreamer - Wednesday July 09, 2003 at 22:01
Girl, this is an AWSOME story. I honestly love it. I find it so cool to see her as another character, acting different and such. Keep writing!
Sweetcece15 - Tuesday July 01, 2003 at 17:56
Why are guys so clueless? All well. I really like your story. When you get back you better update!
Ariel - Tuesday July 01, 2003 at 04:23
This storie is FANTASTIC!!! I can't wait for more chapter!!!
Serenia - Monday June 30, 2003 at 19:28
Hmph.. it is truly hard to wait for chapters to come out when you really want to know what happens next and when you finish it.. you're like wow.. that's a really great story.. But, I'm not there yet.. so I'll be looking forward to your next chapter! ^^

-Serenia-
cici - Monday June 30, 2003 at 05:59
well all i can say is that im going to go crazy waiting for five weeks waiting for the next chapter i just love this story and cant wait for the next one.;)
tomato - Monday June 30, 2003 at 05:42
I love this story! Please continue to write and update because I'm falling in love with this story, and I'll be very disappointed if you stop writing this story.
crystal_selene - Monday June 30, 2003 at 01:01
Oooooh i really like this story.it is sooo, sooo good.i can't wait to find out what happens.phu-lezz update it soon before i go CRAZY..
lol
lil_dreamer - Sunday June 29, 2003 at 17:15
this is such a good story please write more !!!!!!!!!!!
i wish u wern't going on holiday but oh well have fun :)
luv Me
lil_dreamer
Ezza - Sunday June 29, 2003 at 07:46
your writing a great story and i wana read how it turns out so hurry it up already!
Sailor_Angel - Sunday June 29, 2003 at 07:14
really really good chapter, but men can be so thick sometimes, this guy I fancy doesn't even know when I give him so many clues that are soo obvious only short of telling him it's him I fancy. Ugh, men
lacyloss - Sunday June 29, 2003 at 06:47
Thank You so much for writing this chapter I luve it, it is a great story you just have to please get out the next chapter fast!! 5 WEEKS! Oh no! I hope the 5 weeks go by fast because i cant wait to read another chapter!!!!!!!!
Kimmi-Chan - Sunday June 29, 2003 at 05:45
OOOHHHH, I can't wait untill chapter 8!
Silentstar - Sunday June 29, 2003 at 05:25
well i'm glad the update was.. quite soon. I was dying to know what's next, and i still am. good job.
kireisnowtenshi - Sunday June 29, 2003 at 04:56
I Loved it!! Cant wait til the 5 weeks is up! Thats too long for me! Write more when u come back!
crystal_selene - Friday June 27, 2003 at 16:52
Oooooh really nice story. phu-lezz update soon. cant wait to find out what happens!!!
Sweetcece15 - Friday June 27, 2003 at 03:14
I wanna know what plan 'A' is! Can't wait for the next part of your story. This is such a cute story, I was waiting to see when you would update. Anyways, poor Darien. He's just being the concerned best friend and he gets all the abuse. All well, he's a guy, he can handle it. Good so far, update.
Serenia - Thursday June 26, 2003 at 21:31
... So far so good.. can't wait till Serena's transformation as a woman. ^^ This is really good and I've enjoyed it tremendously. Keep up the great work!!

-Serenia-
Kimmi-Chan - Thursday June 26, 2003 at 17:16
I REALLY NEED TO KNOW HOW PLAN A GOES *huffs and stalks off*!!!!!!!!
Sailor_Angel - Thursday June 26, 2003 at 12:30
you've gotta get more out soon
arwen - Thursday June 26, 2003 at 05:06
oh the story is so awesome you really need to write more please
Silentstar - Thursday June 26, 2003 at 03:54
oooh.. plan A! special. update soon.
crystal_selene - Tuesday June 24, 2003 at 20:10
i liked this story ALOT!!! i know that when i was in high school i went through a tomboy crisis. not as bad as serena's but you get the picture. well i hope that the next chapter comes out soon.lol
Vashsgirl182 - Monday June 23, 2003 at 04:48
its really good please cont.
Acid - Sunday June 22, 2003 at 12:03
*wails* i want morrrrrrrrre!!

*pout*

very good, hehe, keep it up. Might want to get an editor to whip over this, i saw a few mistakes, but not enough to make me want to stop reading. ^-^

Acid.
kireisnowtenshi - Sunday June 22, 2003 at 07:16
He he he he he!! Well this certainly has turned into a weird story! But I like it no matter...Write more soon please!
Serafina - Sunday June 22, 2003 at 04:11
I really like the idea behind this story. the desriptions are great and I really wanna see Serena get all girly!! LoL. However...(dontcha just hate that BUT that creeps into sentences?), I do feel that you can add to this. There are times where the story is described beautifully and it progresses nicely but then there are other times where the dialogue seems abrupt and the descriptions seem short. It almost jumps from one idea to the next. Other than that, I feel that if you can fix that, then you'd have a far more incredible story!

:wink: Keep up the good work hun.

~Sera
raPsteZ_o2 - Saturday June 21, 2003 at 21:56
WOW this is the beginning and is soo fantastic I can tell that this story will be good look at how many reviews u got WOOOOW!!!!have u posted this story on FF.net or ASMR? This is very very good. lets do it like ebort and robert LOL 2 thumbs up no...no 3 thumbs up-4 thumbs up 5,6,7,8,..........thumbs up!!! lol!! update soon please I really like it!! PWEASE PWEASE PWEASE PWEASE PWEASE PWEAS!!!!!It is well written and theres not a lot of spelling mistakes and good grammar well what r u waiting for eh? go update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDAtE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATEUPDATE UPDATE 1111!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i think u got the point UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE

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Thank u!!!
Aashka - Saturday June 21, 2003 at 19:57
Ooooh...I can'twait till you get to the part where Serena shows up all beautiful and girly!! Hehe...anyway, write more soon!
Silentstar - Friday June 20, 2003 at 22:40
ahhh. after i read this and i go.. hmm.. "and then... what?" so update!!
lil_dreamer - Friday June 20, 2003 at 22:00
this is a really good story
plz write more plz
luv
lil_dreamer
XxXxX
MoonBABIsTaRshines - Friday June 20, 2003 at 16:42
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more!!!!!!
Anonymous - Friday June 20, 2003 at 13:03
WOW this is defenetly going to be the next big story ~0^ Please updaTE soon PlEAse tHanX!!!!!!!!!!
princessk - Friday June 20, 2003 at 10:03
OOOOOOOOOOOOOh so gooddd keep going!
SAILORMERCY - Friday June 20, 2003 at 03:01
when she gonna transform lol...suspense is killing me
cici - Friday June 20, 2003 at 03:01
OMG this is great i need a new chapter asap...i love it its a great story:)
Usagi - Friday June 20, 2003 at 01:39
I really like this story. I like seeing a Serena as a tomboy every once in awhile and it's peaked my curiousity. I await patiently for another chapter!! :)
MorbidAngel - Friday June 20, 2003 at 00:45
It's getting really good! Please don't wait months to put out another chapter! I hate it when authors do that, it sucks, so don't do it! :) This was a really good chapter and i cant wait to read the next. Good work, keep it up :)
raPsteZ_o2 - Friday June 20, 2003 at 00:12
What a sad chappie! PLEASE UPDate soon!!!
Serenia - Thursday June 19, 2003 at 18:20
Wow.. the summary caught my attention and as I started to read, I found myself reading more and more and more. lol. I can't wait for the next chapter!!

.Serenia.
daisystar - Thursday June 19, 2003 at 18:01
interesting fanfic and can't wait til the next chapter comes out! keep writing!!!
Sailor_Angel - Thursday June 19, 2003 at 17:13
Oh come on, WRITE MORE!!!!!! How can he do that? I would've slapped and kneed him in his precious places and ugh, b*****d. HER BOOBS ARE HUGE!!!!!! 36 C?!?!?!
MorbidAngel - Thursday June 19, 2003 at 02:26
That was so good, I was really into it, I can't wait to read the next part. I hope you can get it out soon. I'll be waiting. Good Job. Bye! :)
emeraldz_jewel - Thursday June 19, 2003 at 01:26
Wow, this story is really good!!
Please keep going, you have a really great start.
The story is very interesting!
Sweetcece15 - Thursday June 19, 2003 at 00:10
THIS IS SO GOOD!!!!! MORE!! YOU MUST WRITE MORE!! Can't wait to read the next part!
Aashka - Thursday June 19, 2003 at 00:06
That was great!! I really REALLY want to read more!! This is a really interesting story line!! Update SOON!
Silentstar - Wednesday June 18, 2003 at 21:18
hey. this is really good. keep updating
lexie - Wednesday June 18, 2003 at 20:11
I love it. Update soon.
MoonBABIsTaRshines - Wednesday June 18, 2003 at 14:07
MORE!!
Anonymous - Wednesday June 18, 2003 at 14:02
Please update soon I really like this story a lot a lot a lot a lot a lot a lot a lot!!!!!!!!!! It's a really good start I hope you continue!!
arwen - Wednesday June 18, 2003 at 11:55
oh you have to finish it please
Darrien_4_Serena - Wednesday June 18, 2003 at 08:32
that is so cool,cant wait for more!!!!!!!!!
lil_b3bot - Wednesday June 18, 2003 at 06:12
I like this stories.plz write new chapters i can't wait to read
browneyes - Wednesday June 18, 2003 at 04:05
That was cute. I find Serena's and Darien's relationship very interesting. If my best-friend, who was a male, saw me in a bra, I would kind of embarrassed, but hey, it's your story! Great start, and keep up the great job.
raPsteZ_o2 - Wednesday June 18, 2003 at 00:38
More more I tell ya! I can't belive Serena tapes her breasts LOL! Update soon pwease pwease. This is really really good. :two BIG HUGE thumbs up!!!
SAILORMERCY - Wednesday June 18, 2003 at 00:02
It's really good i hope u continue with it. I can't wait.
SAILORMERCY - Wednesday June 18, 2003 at 00:02
It's really good i hope u continue with it. I can't wait.
SAILORMERCY - Wednesday June 18, 2003 at 00:02
It's really good i hope u continue with it. I can't wait.
SAILORMERCY - Wednesday June 18, 2003 at 00:02
It's really good i hope u continue with it. I can't wait.
kireisnowtenshi - Tuesday June 17, 2003 at 22:33
I can not believe he did that!! OMG!!! I would have shot him!!! I really really want u to write more soon!!
MrsGacktCamui - Tuesday June 17, 2003 at 22:06
Wheeee!! I think I started reading this either on ff.net or moonromance. I love it! ^_^ So cute!! Can't wait for more!
Roni - Tuesday June 17, 2003 at 21:36
MOOOOOOOORRRRRRREEEEEE!!!! MUST HAVE MOOOOOOORRRRRREEE!!!
I am loving this story!!! Please update soooooooon!!!
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