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Story: Trapped Together
Posted on Monday June 23, 2003 at 20:08 by LunaHope
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Members Stories Rated: NC17
Status: Completed

What happens when Mamoru & Usagi find the limit of Motoki's nice guy temperament? Written for Reba Jean's 10/2002 Contest.



Number of Chapters: 8          Total Size: 148k          Word Count: 26,641

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Karimoon - Monday February 08, 2010 at 07:08
that was awesome i wish i could write that good! XD
hope to read more from you soon :)
redrose - Friday September 04, 2009 at 21:23
I really liked that one and how u showed the couple growing emotionally. Very nice! =D
mi_addy - Wednesday March 25, 2009 at 20:37
nice story.. :)
Nich - Sunday October 26, 2008 at 03:48
I liked it! Really cute and I loved seeing the leadership from Usagi at the end. Great job!
LadyKurma - Wednesday July 16, 2008 at 20:53
love the story
Anonymous - Sunday March 09, 2008 at 21:54
it was a really good story I like most of the things the only one that I don't get why they left them naked but oh well is good
moonlitedreamer - Thursday December 13, 2007 at 00:27
awsome storie. I loved the fact they didn't rush into anything and had alot of complications. Is what make a great story. Very good job.
lexie_06 - Friday December 07, 2007 at 00:46
good story!
sailormoonlover12 - Monday September 17, 2007 at 01:36
do a sequel please
herm - Tuesday February 13, 2007 at 13:23
This was really a beautiful story. One could really see how their relationship devoloped slowly but steadily. It was not only hot and even breath taking from time to time *fans herself with her hand as she remembers* but it was really romantic as well. To be trapped on an deserted Island with a guy and to start falling in love with him.
However, there some aspects that I need to criticize as well: It is VERY OOC for Motoki and the girls bring their friends on a deserted Island and moreover to leave them NAKED!!!!Of course that caused the erotic tension between then, but come on. What kind of person does do something like this to a girl with her friends merely crying.
And the fact that seren`s mum lets her go without so much as seeing her once again...
Well, the way you brought them to the Island was not very convincing, but other than this, I liked your story a lot.
;)
Anonymous - Wednesday December 27, 2006 at 11:22
The story was well written hardly any typoz. Well planned out, nothing dragged.
Megan1502 - Monday November 27, 2006 at 03:43
I love this story every time i read it. Fantastic plot and great wording. You are a brilliant writer, keep em coming!
Taracova - Wednesday July 19, 2006 at 18:24
Wow, your last couple chapters are amazing! Is there a sequal to this one?
Taracova - Tuesday July 18, 2006 at 17:47
Good job with the detail's again. It's getting more and more interseting!
Taracova - Tuesday July 18, 2006 at 17:27
Wow, how did you come up with all this? Did you have to do some research? Way to go girl!


On to the next chapter.
Taracova - Tuesday July 18, 2006 at 16:50
Wow, I can't even form the right words to tell you how amazing chapter 2 is. Amy's guilt, Mokiti's (or whomever) little scheme and Rekia are all great. (sorry for name mispellings. i'm not accustomed to their japanese names.

Well on to the nest chapter.
Taracova - Tuesday July 18, 2006 at 16:36
Sounds great, I wounder what you have in store for them!
Missyface - Wednesday March 01, 2006 at 20:08
Wonderful. You are a good writer. Keep at it. I loved this story.
Nasuki - Tuesday February 21, 2006 at 03:45
this story is good kind of remind me of this other one but its funnie i like it
Anonymous - Thursday February 09, 2006 at 22:35
excellent story...you should create another...this story fulfills a person's every bit of their imagination
Anonymous - Wednesday January 18, 2006 at 06:21
that was great! one of the best stories ive read! i cant wait for you next one :D
jenna - Tuesday January 10, 2006 at 18:53
i loved it. SOOOO cute.
usagi_mamoru4ever - Wednesday December 21, 2005 at 06:40
the story was soo funny, it reminded me of the blue lagoon at first which made me almost die of laughter around the first 3 chapters becuase i thought that usagi and mamoru would kill each other before the month was over.
bluesands - Sunday November 06, 2005 at 10:15
Awsome!!! I loved it. It reminded me of "Blue Lagoon" which I loved also by the way!!!
cosmoscrystal - Wednesday August 17, 2005 at 04:28
Truly a wonderful story. You did a great job with the detail and the story line. Looking forward to seeing more of your work.
anime_girl - Sunday March 20, 2005 at 20:32
Wow! I really liked your story...very steamy too lol
jazmin07 - Monday September 06, 2004 at 14:04
I just love this story, it's great!!! I first read this in ASMR and I never get tired of reading this. Keep up the good work!!!
Loki - Monday March 22, 2004 at 18:02
I loved this story, so beautifully conceived & written. The romanti magical flavour of this fic was amazing, the dialogue & the chemistry, sensuality & the love all came through. Your characterisation was truly magnificent. I love the plot & narrative style, I found myself both laughing & moved with tears emerging via each tender loving moment. Well done! *Tuxedo Mask bows & hands Usagi a basket of multi-coloured roses and kisses her gently* L.
Babyblue4994 - Saturday November 15, 2003 at 23:46
I loved it!
LillyFair - Tuesday November 04, 2003 at 04:31
Totally Amazing....I really enjoyed it. Keep on writing
gwenie - Sunday August 31, 2003 at 09:47
Ooh, I loved this story! Was funny and so romantic! I can't wait to read more of your stories ^-^
SAILORMERCY - Tuesday August 12, 2003 at 13:24
i had read this before but it was so good and funny and cute lol that i read it again. It's awesome. YOur a really good writer.
cookybuttbutt - Monday August 11, 2003 at 03:52
I loved your story, especially the way in which they found out about each other. Lately, I've been reading alot of stories that start out different than the series, but the scene in which they find out about each other (princess serenity, endymion, sailormoon, tuxedo mask, etc.) always starts out and ends the same (elevator with zoisite, and him being taken away) which makes the story very disappointing, but your twist is beautiful and happy endings are yay!!! LoL
MoonBABIsTaRshines - Tuesday July 01, 2003 at 06:01
i liked it and i think u should write more
starryice18 - Tuesday July 01, 2003 at 03:31
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!! Please continue writing!!
baby - Monday June 30, 2003 at 22:19
Wonderfully, just absolutely wonderfully. That's all I have to say. That was just absolutely wonderfully story. One of the best.
Serenia - Thursday June 26, 2003 at 21:05
That was very good. Funny too. ^^ I want to go on a vacation like that too, except with my clothes and all the necessary needs.. ^^; But not with Darien.. with my boyfriend. Yes yes. Anyways.. Great write!! I enjoyed reading it. Do keep writing more stories!!

-Serenia-
Ezza - Wednesday June 25, 2003 at 11:46
very good story that i very much enjoyed!
Darrien_4_Serena - Wednesday June 25, 2003 at 10:04
that story is wonderfully written!!!!!!!!!
Sailormaya - Wednesday June 25, 2003 at 07:09
I must say that that was a very good story and probably my favorite one involving usagi and mamoru locked up and or sent off together. I thought the no clothes thing was a bit unnecessary and cruel but i guess it played a major part in the story. I was very desturbed when usagi's hair was cut and you are lucky that i didn't stop reading because if there is one thing that i think usa should never change about herslelf that is her hair. I am glad that you made it grow back because otherwise i would have hated this story. but i love it! good job!
PrincessofLight - Tuesday June 24, 2003 at 23:51
I've read this story before in other places and I love it just as much now as I did then. Keep up the good work
Anonymous - Tuesday June 24, 2003 at 08:20
I LOVED THAT STORIE IT WAS THE BEST I HAVE EVER READ KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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