A Harry Potter/Sailormoon crossover. Don't read if you haven't read OotP (the 5th book). Alternate Universe. Albus Dumbledore meets his protege, Usagi Tsukino, who for the past 16 years has been listed as Missing In Action (MIA). She was the best Auror that the ministry had, and was the leader of the elite Senshi, who fought against Lord Voldemort, the first time he rose to power. Now Usagi is back and ready to fight. This story is meant to explore a coupling. SS/UT
Number of Chapters: 5 Total Size: 225k Word Count: 38,480
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|Loki - Wednesday December 17, 2008 at 15:27|
I admire the lavish attention to detail and your characterization is scintillating .
Dialogue is natural and flows nicely.
world building, vocabulary fantastic.
If flaws there are, these are those found in a writer's creative surge on a rough draft, althuogh, there are copy proofing type of adjustments and corrections required with some spelling and minor grammar, the story itself is of a quality that ranks amongst some of the best I have read.
I would suggest a BETA go over it for you and there are a lot of adverbs with the -ly ending that need pruning, but really, the power of the narrative and your story telling ability is such that it deserves all the praise it ought to get.
Reading this story when I first had a while ago inspired me to dabble in my own HP-SM cross-over, so thank you for that, but really, this is a classic and I urge you to continue, please. <3
an avid fan L.
|Loki - Sunday May 16, 2004 at 18:49|