Runner Up: Most Popular Story - April 2004
Jaded fashion designer Serena Weston decides it's time to take a break from all the glamour, so she heads back to her hometown to lay low for a little while. Unfortunately, a certain jerk that goes by the name of Darien Shields is still there too.
The two have never gotten along but when together their chemistry is undeniable.
But what happens when their love/hate relationship is put to the test? Where will they stand with each other? Will they ever realize what they truly mean to one another?
Number of Chapters: 11 Total Size: 323k Word Count: 58,248
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|Anonymous - Saturday February 12, 2011 at 13:21|
I'd love to see mor of your stuff on here, I think you are great - a talented writer in my lil book! <3
|Loki - Wednesday July 08, 2009 at 15:53|
Congratulations Psycho Bunny, it is a special moment for any writer to finish a story, and the journey is an adventure and one we cherish, this is your moment and a special one, and thank you for sharing your gift! <3
Great story. I absolutely love it. Interesting plot. can't wait to read more! please update soon!
|2Twins2 - Thursday October 04, 2007 at 17:23|
Aww...you must write more this gets more and more interesting by the minute! I can hardly wait until I read the next chapter!!!!!!!!
|Lena204 - Tuesday October 02, 2007 at 07:19|
I really am enjoying this story and I love the action between Serena and Darien not to mention the hints between Mal and Mina, I really hope you update soon as I can't wait to see what you have Diamond do next!
|twine - Wednesday February 07, 2007 at 01:46|
will we be seeing an update sometime in the near future?
this story is very good
|Anonymous - Monday January 15, 2007 at 16:56|
|Anonymous - Wednesday January 10, 2007 at 19:41|
Great chapter! I hope that you have another chapter soon
I have a sory to tell. Once upon a time, I knew this girl with a fabulous story. We haven't been in contact for a long time, but one day I went on the site we used to know for the first time in a long while, and I look up and there's that story Perfect Match I used to know.
It's fantastic, babe.
girl... plz... write more.... when will the next chapter come out... and conciderin u didnt hav a editor for the last chapter it is very well done ... thumbs up
|twine - Tuesday January 09, 2007 at 08:29|
Oh that's terrible! You finally update and then leave me with that terrible cliffhanger?
The suspense was killing me. You lead me to believe Diamond had hired Malcolm to watch Serena. Keep up the good work.
|Anonymous - Saturday June 17, 2006 at 06:17|
i like the story please uipdate soon
summer? are you crazy ITS NEARLY NEW YEAR!!!! where are the rest of the chapters i am about to cry....i want darien so badly to get with serena arghhh evil woman "" gives evil glances at psychobunny ~_~""
well hun please please please try to hurry i neeeeedd more lol
NO!!!!!!!! i wanna know what happens!!! not fair not fair not fair!!!! argg.... you better update and update SOON!!! ill b waiting!!!! good luck!!!
|Redroses - Tuesday January 04, 2005 at 09:33|
I must say first off I really like what you have written so far. A cute story and the writing is too bad either. Actually I am really enjoying the banter between Serena and Darien. Serena's come back and talking to herself are really funny. I really am enjoying seeing how their relationship will progress.
Now the last chapter where it revelled that Darien was Diamond's cousin... that was wow. I never saw that coming. Now does that mean Darien knows about Serena and Diamond? I know when Sapphire almost spilled the beans that Darien was shocked. Does Darien not keep in touch with his cousins to know at least who they are dating?
I liked where you ended the last chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next. And what will happen when the guys watching Serena see what is happen right in front of them? Well can't wait to see what happens. Keep writing. I really am enjoying your story.
|Anonymous - Wednesday October 20, 2004 at 20:19|
greatt!! update soon! darien and serena getting it on! ;D
|Anonymous - Wednesday October 20, 2004 at 00:40|
You're so evil. Leaving us hanging like that. Hmmph.
Nah, I can't wait to see what happens next. Especially with Malcolm. Anyway, update soon. :)
AWW!! c'mon! Get the next chapter out soon please!!!!
AHHHH! This is soo good!
Omg. YOU MUST UPDATE AGAIN SOON! THIS IS TOO GOOD TO LET GO FOR SO LONG!
I love it, I love it! I love just absolutely love it! The story had me saying "awwwwwww" the entire time. The story is very well written and the complex relationship Serena has with eveyone is very interesting. Charles was a wonderful addition, he put more originality into the story. I hope to see more =).
I am really enjoying this story, so I beg you to get the next chapter out soon! I know you said you are busy, but please write more soon!! You have a great tallent and it's wonderfully displayed in this story! I can't wait for the next chapter.
OK, just a few little things. When using hyphens in the text, and not as a link for joining words, they should have spaces either side. Also, you need to use < i >Blah< / i> for your fic instead of [i]Blah[/i] otherwise it doesn't work (uh... without the spaces though). And the only tiny little mishap I noticed was that you changed the spelling of Ann to Anne near the beginning of the chap.
Now that all of the boring stuff is out of the way, I really liked this chapter. Very very cute. Still if the next one is going to be longer, I think that more problems should occur. This one seemed to just drag out Serena's exasperation of her rather complicated love life ^^
Still, I'm loving this fic, and definitely can't wait to see more!
EVERYONE! Stop, look, read, get amazed, review and worship. The 6 steps to proper homage to PB. Now, next lesson, the 5 steps to recognizing the problem between the long chapters aka me. Stop, turn, stare, point, glare. And tah-dah! You have successfully glared at teh problem straight in the eye. Now you can all stop blaming PB over there for the long wait.
On the real reason, PB, you never cease to amaze me, I LOOOVE PM! I want that kitten! You already have Angel! Can't I at least have the adorable grey kitten? *bats eyes at you*