2013-04-22 11:34 In the name of Glamour & Glitter, Fashion & Fameā€¦- Amy Mebberson http://t.co/icF4yx6qZW @amymebberson

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brilliantly constructed. Your story has the feel of a cinematic experience. the shifts from scene to dream, and back, the bare footed mother seeking the scent of the heady blossoms. the soundscape, the visual motifs and your excellent characterisation was amazing. you created an atmospheric tapestry that maintained high suspense and continued to its tragic apex. I look forward to more, beautifully written! L.

JESS-CHAN!!! WOW!!!! You got my nibbling my nails and at awe at the poetic choice of words... I could go all romantic on you but I'd drive you crazy! LOL...
WRITE more!!!! :) The hammer will be waiting... BWHHHAHAHAHA!!!

Awwww, that lst part made me cry Jess *glomps*

What a story this is and now I want more! MORE DAMMIT! ~.^;;

Everything flows together in perfect harmony. I love your use of vocab and description is lurvley! *smoochies*

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That was goooood. T__T *clings to Jess* *stretches your cheeks* Tell me what happens next!! x) *hugs* ^^; Sometimes it was confusing, but I got it, overall. ^^

Maybe you should slip in some of the vernacular that was common for the bandits, at that time? o.o Like, they spoke in broken English with like those c**kney accents, or something? @.o >>; 'Cause I don't think that they knew how to speak like the upper classmen. ^^;;

Anyway, other than that, I luffed it. x) *bites and gnaws* >> Now. Give me chapter 3 of SD and chapter 1 of HO. Please. XD

Oh, this is seriously becoming one of my new favorites. ^_^ Not one boring spot in the chapter, and it's only the prologue! hee How sad that Maurice... yeah. Can't wait to read more Jess! You did a great job. :D

Oh Jess, wonderful job! I do remember reading the very beginning of this. It has to be some of your best writing yet. You're doing a wonderful job with the descriptions, emotions, and the flow of it. Look forward to more!

Wow . . .
It sounds good.
*bashes moonflower*
STUPID TEASER!!! I WANT A PROLOGUE!!! (and chapters)

ooh.. highway men we all love a good raid.. er yea.

Suspicious...I think u should continue it!! Has a great storyline that I wanna follow! Write more soon please!

WOW! I love your choice of words, and the discriptions. *continues to be amazed* The summary also got me hooked. ^_~ All I can say is, awesome plot, and I can't wait till you get the actual prologue out.

*whispers* You'll let me know when you update, ne? *pokies Jess*

really interesting, when's the whole prologue going to appear?

I hope you update this fic because i really love it!!!! please update!!!! NExt chapter please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey Jess! *hugs* Here's my review *grins*:

"rapidly graying skies" I don't know about anyone else but that sounds weird to me. Slightly...off.

"It drove her crazy and could have sworn that her mind was out to make her lose her sanity."

"The shaking and rattling of the carriage had subsided little by little as the drive had become a lot more smoother." The shaking...as the drive became smoother...

Very smooth descriptive writing. It was easy to read and very enjoyable! See! I told you it'd come out fine! I can't wait to read the whole prologue! :)

Raven