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Story: More Than Meets the Eye
Posted on Monday August 25, 2003 at 18:24 by elysia
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Members Stories Rated: PG
Status: Completed

Usagi and Mamoru have been married for several years now, and their life is almost perfect. If it weren't for the fact that hinders Mamoru from seeing his wife the way she wished he could, then everything would be perfect.

Maybe.


Number of Chapters: 5          Total Size: 95k          Word Count: 17,370

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heaven85 - Thursday August 07, 2014 at 05:18
It is a great story. Great work.
SerenityTsuki - Monday November 28, 2011 at 23:15
Hi! I REALLY love your work, Elysia! I read your stories when they were on ASMR, and you are a great author. This story is one of my favoites!

Hope you keep writing great work in the future!
lfleurdelys - Saturday March 15, 2008 at 05:06
This story is wonderful. I read it again the other day and always enjoy it no matter how many times I read it! Thank you for your works ^_^
lexie_06 - Thursday December 27, 2007 at 00:32
I LOVE IT!!
ladymooncat - Wednesday June 13, 2007 at 18:48
oh my goodness T_T
that was without a doubt, the most beautiful story i have ever read, simply amazing.
Anonymous - Saturday July 01, 2006 at 05:39
that was amazing.
Anonymous - Sunday April 09, 2006 at 01:26
That was THE best story i have ever read! i love ALL your stories PLEASE keep writing!
Dream_Angel1986 - Wednesday March 29, 2006 at 00:19
Wow. I remember reading this a very long time ago. It was a wonderful story. I really loved it. You rock!
Loki - Tuesday March 21, 2006 at 13:53
There is so much I could say, but it would not be enough to express how your story has moved me.

WISE, I noticed some little flaws, but nothing serious that a little polishing couldnt fix.

High Points:

Beautifully written -- you have a fabulous insight into the world of a blind person. I was especially impressed by the way you presented the relationship between Mamoru and Usagi. You are spot on in so many ways, from how life is with a disability and how love conquers all, to how others, in a positive way like Motoki, and in the real-world, (good people with the right understanding respect and accept), and deal with it in a positive way, as opposed to what is sadly too often the case -- find difficult to accept, and sometimes react with cold fury.

Brilliant and a story that has touched my heart in more ways than you could possibly imagine. Kudos and congrats on a job well done. *hands you a basket of sapphire roses and bows* L.
Teffers - Saturday March 18, 2006 at 20:06
Very well written story... Although I'm kind of wondering what happened to Kage after the operation.
You use your words very efficiently, if you know what I mean... not too flowery which would have made the story too cheesy, and not to sparse so that we lost the magic. It was juuuuuust right. Thanks!
AbysSerenity - Sunday September 04, 2005 at 01:50
I love this story you have a good work
mythling - Wednesday August 17, 2005 at 02:51
aw.. that was so sweet! it leaves a fuzzy feeling inside =) anyway, i thought it a very well written story- keep up the good work!
nina_girl - Tuesday July 19, 2005 at 22:42
Your story is very touching. I'm glad that Mamoru was able to see his son. Your title fits very well with the story, and I really like it alot.

Teary,
~Nina
loverofendy - Monday April 04, 2005 at 04:18
wow this story is so sad, but i love it, the only thing i dont like is how usagis parents treated mamoru that way
astro - Saturday March 26, 2005 at 18:13
i can hardly find the words to desribe it. its beautiful, simply...i dont know...just how i would like it to be..the love part i mean, not the one with mom and dad always nagging..anyways...simply wonderful!
MMHYUM - Monday March 21, 2005 at 17:34
Awesome fic! Very beautiful love story!
lingy - Friday February 04, 2005 at 19:48
I must say, I loved this story when I read it at fanfiction.net, and I still do.
You portray the love and tenderness between Usa and Mamo quite well, and evoke feelings of warm fuzziness from a reader.
I did notice some small errors but I'm not going to nitpick. It was too sweet.

But to be honest, I didn't really care for Usagi's parents' reactions. They seemed so cold and heartless. I can't imagine real parents being so...detatched.

Great story!
jazmin07 - Monday September 06, 2004 at 12:59
I LOVE THIS STORY! I think I read this the first time in ASMR but I never get tired of reading this story again and again and again..... It shows that when it comes to love, there's no such thing as disability prejudice (at least with Mamoru and Usagi's point of view, but with her parent's, well....). Keep writing more wonderful stories and we'll keep reading!!!

I LOVE YOUR STORIES!!! (at least the ones I read in ASMR, I don't know if you have anymore that I haven't read yet)
selenis - Tuesday March 02, 2004 at 01:48
ok.... my first review didn't submit properly.... anyways... it was along the lines that I LOVED this story It was one of the first I read, oh so long ago (I still remember posting a "help me find it" forum topic about it) Anyways I LUB this story and I'm glad you've posted on AI so I can read it here too! (hugs!) LUB IT!!! Good Work Elysia!!
selenis - Tuesday March 02, 2004 at 01:44
BWAHAAHHAHAHHAHA!!!! (
zanzibar - Sunday February 29, 2004 at 12:43
My only comment is it's a very good story!!!!
FairyHime - Saturday September 27, 2003 at 05:34
He wasn't in the delivery room with her? Shame on him! Otherwise I really enjoyed the story. It was so cute.
meartballheard - Sunday September 14, 2003 at 04:37
one word sweet
yadrianne - Friday September 12, 2003 at 22:37
wow
that was great, is that the end??

I loved it
Sabra - Tuesday September 02, 2003 at 07:36
*swoons* I Wanna read more. This story is totally different from every SM story that I have ever read, it has that... spark, to it.. that I can't find quite often. You're doing a great job, and I'm really loving your story. Keep writing, and I hope to see another chapter up soon.
NicolleteCrescente - Tuesday September 02, 2003 at 02:57
This story is truly beautiful and a wonderful twist on the Usagi/Mamoru romance. Your characters are gorgeous and I can't tell you how often I've wanted to reach for the tissues to stop the tears! You have amazing talent and I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon please!
Leeza - Saturday August 30, 2003 at 21:06
Oh gosh I love this story, it is so romantic.
EvilIllusions - Thursday August 28, 2003 at 05:01
I've read this at ff net... ten times. I love it!

EI
EllaRose - Wednesday August 27, 2003 at 18:05
I love it. Please write more!
This is very good.
Leeza - Wednesday August 27, 2003 at 01:21
Please continue, it is so good. Leeza
Sailor_Angel - Tuesday August 26, 2003 at 18:55
Oh! I remember reading this somewhere else, it's a sweet story, especially that Mamoru- um I better not finish that and spoil the story for the other readers.

Ciao!

~*S.Angel*~
Sailor_Angel - Tuesday August 26, 2003 at 18:55
Oh! I remember reading this somewhere else, it's a sweet story, especially that Mamoru- um I better not finish that and spoil the story for the other readers.

Ciao!

~*S.Angel*~
Sailor_Angel - Tuesday August 26, 2003 at 18:55
Oh! I remember reading this somewhere else, it's a sweet story, especially that Mamoru- um I better not finish that and spoil the story for the other readers.

Ciao!

~*S.Angel*~
Sailor_Angel - Tuesday August 26, 2003 at 18:55
Oh! I remember reading this somewhere else, it's a sweet story, especially that Mamoru- um I better not finish that and spoil the story for the other readers.

Ciao!

~*S.Angel*~
Sailor_Angel - Tuesday August 26, 2003 at 18:55
Oh! I remember reading this somewhere else, it's a sweet story, especially that Mamoru- um I better not finish that and spoil the story for the other readers.

Ciao!

~*S.Angel*~
Sailor_Angel - Tuesday August 26, 2003 at 18:55
Oh! I remember reading this somewhere else, it's a sweet story, especially that Mamoru- um I better not finish that and spoil the story for the other readers.

Ciao!

~*S.Angel*~
Sailor_Angel - Tuesday August 26, 2003 at 18:55
Oh! I remember reading this somewhere else, it's a sweet story, especially that Mamoru- um I better not finish that and spoil the story for the other readers.

Ciao!

~*S.Angel*~
Sailor_Angel - Tuesday August 26, 2003 at 18:54
Oh! I remember reading this somewhere else, it's a sweet story, especially that Mamoru- um I better not finish that and spoil the story for the other readers.

Ciao!

~*S.Angel*~
Darrien_4_Serena - Tuesday August 26, 2003 at 07:57
i love it!!!
Nichire - Monday August 25, 2003 at 23:20
Elysia! I'm such a great admirer of your writings. I've read this at your website. I've enjoyed reading all of your stories. This one in particular is one of my absolute favorites. I'm so glad you're posting it here.

Nichire
RENA630 - Monday August 25, 2003 at 22:33
I think I've read this at fanfiction.net and from what I remember its a really cute story! SO please contine!

~*RENA*~
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