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Runner Up: Most Popular Story - December 2003
Season: Alternate Reality Main Characters: Mamoru/Darien, Usagi/Serena
Genre: General, Humour, Romance
Rated: PG13 Status: Completed
Christmas story competition entry. All prologues for all entrants will be the same as per rules of the competition. All additional chapters will be the author's own work.
"A romantic comedy about a guy, a girl, an information booth, and a sexually frustrated dog thrown in the mix." --original summary.
After single-handedly destroying the Santa Claus house at the mall, Serena is reassigned to the information booth to work with none other than Darien. Sparks (and insults) fly, as Serena and Darien try to fight their mutual attraction. Christmas shopping leads to stalking, and soon, the stalker becomes the stalkee. What happens when you throw a sexually frustrated dog into the mix? Read to find out.
PG13 for language. Romance, Comedy and everything in between.
Number of Chapters: 6 Total Size: 83k Word Count: 14,904
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 |  |  |  | :) very cute i know it is only july and i should of read this story at Christmas time but it was such a cute Christmas in July story!! i loved the rhyme in the third chapter. |
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 |  |  |  | This was fun. And a cute christmas story. I feel sorry with serena dealing with the kids though. Lucky she got out of that. Darien's gift was different. And the negaverse part was funny. |
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 |  |  |  |  | Megan1502 - Tuesday November 28, 2006 at 23:21 |  |
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 |  |  |  | Great chrissy sotry. I love the tiara, rock and fish hook idea, great plot and wording. |
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 |  |  |  | cute! It is a great story I loved it! Then again I like all your stories I read. I liked the epilogue about the negaverse celebrating christmas. and Serenas father chasing Darien! It was hilarius great job!!! |
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 |  |  |  | That was officially the funniest Christmas story ever! I laughed so hard during the dog scene that my brother cane in to see what high I was on. And then I made him read it and we both cracked up together... Your story helped us bond as brother and sister, we actually agreed on how funny that scene was- so thank you for that once-in-lifetime moment:)
*snicker* Um... why did the sexually frustrated dog listen to Darien? |
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 |  |  |  | Hahaha, I love the last chapter. There were a few spelling mistakes, but other than that, an enjoyable story. I loved the twist of humour at the end.
Good work. |
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 |  |  |  |  | Anonymous - Saturday February 26, 2005 at 20:18 |  |
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 |  |  |  | nice story. i especially like the last chapter with the negaverse. i thought it was hilarious. wonderful job. |
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 |  |  |  |  | lingy - Monday January 24, 2005 at 19:55 |  |
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 |  |  |  | Argh, I can't believe I never reviewed this story.
Well, here goes...
I really loved it, REALLY. It was witty (dry but not pompously so), funny and a joy to read - I never laughed as much in my life as when Usagi found herself in the ally with the dog. And it is a nice change to see a arrogant Mamo, most authors portray him as a simpering lovesick fool (*cough*).
I will mention nothing about your mechanics, oh goddess of grammer, but I will say it ended too abruptly. At least, I thought so. But since it was for a competition, and you probably ran out of time, I will not harbor too much disappointment at that.
To sum up my ramblings, it was fabulous, and I hope you write more comedy in the near future. |
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 |  |  |  |  | sakaoru - Wednesday December 29, 2004 at 05:45 |  |
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