2013-04-22 11:34 In the name of Glamour & Glitter, Fashion & Fame…- Amy Mebberson http://t.co/icF4yx6qZW @amymebberson

Full Stories
Short Stories
Part Stories
Original Stories

Members Stories
Members Crossovers
Members Song Fics
Members Poems
Members Original
Members Teasers

As always, an incredible chapter. The twist at the end there was a good one and I'll be looking forward to the next installment with enthusiasm - well done Jase!

Wow! I am soo happy to see Mercury rising from her post-shock. Thank you for updating, can't wait to see more.

I loved this story. I hope you continue to write it, because I can tell the finished product would be amazing. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time--great work!

o please do the next chapter soon . this is a really great story.

I am so very happy for the update. It would be nice to see Uranus and Michi come back yay!

This was another riviting thrilling chapter, and you can just feel it building and the next chapter will be amazing also, great job! :)

Oh poor Michiru, will she have something happen that will heal her? Artemis, poor fur ball, when he jumped off the bed and felt the discomfort I felt for him, poor lil guy!

Oh and Ryoko, he can't go like that!!! I love the idea of flying youma, a dilemma for Sailor Moon with them looking humanoid!! Great work, please don't keep me waiti'n! ^^

After reading all the current portions of the story and catching up, I am keen to see the next installment, I thought this latest chapter was incredible. The action, the angst, the humanity in the face of such dire times amazing.


The Senshi, the Blades, even the youma and the civil war is all the good stuff that make an epic what it is, Sailor Moon Classic Magic!

Well done Jase!

Hey, I think this is the kind of story fanfiction of Sailor Moon thrives on, I hope you add more chapters soon

Oh wow what a chapter. Please more.

First I must say, how could you leave it there??

I love love love this story, I really feel that this is my all time favorite, and I'm really happy that you're still going strong with this story. I can't wait to read the next installment, just please don't leave it with such a cliffhanger!! :)

Woot!I am glad to see you pick up this story from where it left off. A couple of mismatched names but the chapter is very good.

Very nice to see the comparison and contrast between the senshi and the generals of how they either work together or alone. Very good, can't wait for more!

Woo! Awesome new chapter. I enjoyed it and can't wait for more. Keep it up. =]

WOOT, YAY! I am sorry you had to get a new laptop but I am sooo very happy you got this story going again this is becomming one of my favorites!

I am very, very happy you had updated these 3 chapters! I hope Serenity does recognize the senshi without the glamor if she can. I also hope that Serenity can cleanse the humans that became Zoi's youma because Usagi always rather cleanse the evil than kill. I wonder if she does have to do it how will that effect her with the broach? In chapter 18 was mentioned about Mirichu having children but in a way doesn't being a senshi kind of cleanse all physical things done and can she in the end have a child even though she was considered hollow?

Mamoru & Ryo have a lot to take on their shoulders but it is great to see them in leadership or co-leadership roles. Haruka was a reluctant soilder so it is good to see her now running away but actually taking more of a stance.

I wonder if chibi-moon will make an appearance as well? Food for thought. Good Job on the story overall.

you are doing such a wonderful job on your story. please dont take too long posting the next chapter.

Woot! Yay! I am sooo very happy you updated. I can't wait to see more chapters. A song that I thought of was Angels by Within Temptation is a really nice to go with this.

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for the next update....hope it doesn't take so long as this one.

Too short a chapter. I reread the story to make sure I was on the same page. It seems Usagi is more happier when she is out of range of the broach. I wonder what feelings it will transmit to Makoto if she was in range of it? Interesting...I wonder if guilt would transmit for Makoto because she lived in a deep stasis while everyone else died? I wonder what would happen if that demoness revealed herself to the senshi thinking she can take them down? Would Rei's powers activate or because you would need a pure unselfish need to activate that power? Mamoru should feel something I know he is the one that is always brainwashed or has memories erased it would be good to see him a little more than just a solder boy though. lol Just grasping straws.

It was worth the wait....but will Makoto start training female blades so that they can defend themselves? I hope so maybe that can be a distration from dealing with her changes. Hopefully, the other girls will start getting their memories back. Thanks!

Great chapter!! I truly love this story; please update as soon as possible!!!

This is sent as a private review to avoid sending out spoilers to the readers.

I like the way you contiue to portray each character in minute detail and take the time to explore emotions for each one. I'm looking forward to finding our what's on Haruka's mind as well and having her and Michiru discover their sailor identities.

In all the chapters, I feel as if Mammoru is the one character you haven't focused on extensively. Aside from his undying devotion to the Blades, he still seems like a mystery from an emotional point of view. However, I'm sure he will be more prominent in future chapters.

Oh such a wonderful chapter!! I swear no matter how long they are, I read through them so fast. I could scream too you know, but I am just so glad that events are moving on. I still love how well you describe everything, I can easily visualize it in my mind. That's great props to you as an author to have the ability to do that. Again please continue the great work, and I will continue to read the great chapters.

Ja,
Fushigi Hime

you have done a wonderful job with this story. i just couldnt stop reading it until i got to the end. it took me a while but i finally finished all 15 chapters. PLEASE finish VERY SOON.

Incredible, SK

WISE: a masterstroke of storytelling genius in the magical world of SM.

I only noticed a few minor flaws, x Colloquialisms such as, _off of_ are a little out of sorts in the third person, though in dialogue and with an in character speaker these are fine, just something to look at. Try and avoid using multiple punctuation such as the (?! or !!!) etc, fine for text messaging, emails and forum posts and the like, but these are grammatically incorrect and have no place in quality writing. But all in all, this is a fantastic story. ^_^

Highlights

I have enjoyed reading these last five chapters and admire the research and depth you have obviously brought to the narrative. World building is first rate, imagery woven together into a structural tapestry that speaks volumes of how good a storyteller you are.

Characterisation of Usagi/Serenity -- pure magic -- well executed. The cats too, and for that matter all your characters are truly potent and feel so real.

Dialogue is good and you bring to the reader the right mix of action and affect, and this and much more drives this remarkable epic.

The over-all scope of this work keeps me on the edge of my seat. I salute your efforts with this story. The detail and humor, and the movement over a range of differing emotional landscapes is truly amazing, just a little polishing here and there and it will shine even more. Great job. I look forward to continuing to follow this incredible classic! *hands you a crystal sword and bows* L.

I was waiting holding my breath to find another chapter to this story. Thank you! More on Mamoru please and Setsuna it should be interesting on how they start to remember.

Another great chapter!!! Please keep them coming!!! :)

I just read this chapter again and I thought this would be getting ahead of myself. Would being hollow being 'pregnant' or everything surgically removed from her so that she would not have any kids? She was Jedeite's personal assistant in his base needs. I think with Darien starting to gravitate toward Serenity more so than Usagi because of the past . Will you kill off Usagi completely or somehow maybe she can technically die in sprit but come back inform as twin of Serenity to create a spin-off of a Sailor Earth? Or, how will Usagi ever merge into one being with Serenity even though it would seem they are 2 halves of one whole? The more the peronsalities are seperated the more they have life on their own. Can't wait for the next chapter!^-^

I absolutely love this story!!! Please update soon!!!

Yay!!!! Another chapter done. So........ how long is it going to take to come out with the next chapter?

I agree with Fushigi_Hime that I like the way the story has all the senshi behaving within character even in the context of their situation. Your authors notes definately had all the elements I'm looking forward to in the next chapter. I'm also looking forward to reading about the senshi that weren't mentioned in this chapter: Makato and Rei. Keep up the great work and I look forward to another chapter.

I'm sorry there must be something wrong with the chapter you posted, because it ended! >.<

Yet again another wonderful chapter by you. I've enjoyed every word written, even though it always seems to end too soon. I love Haruka's attitude, you kept her well into character. The talk between Setsuna and Minako, and what was revealed at the end of the conversation made me giggle a little. Setsuna has always been my favorite.

Keep up the great work, and I have my "Happy Dance" ready for when you post the next chapter!!

Ja,
Fushigi Hime

that was great!!! i really can't wait for more

Just had to reread this chapter I hope Ryo would be able to find the other senshi. I hope he is able to get a hold of his feelings and I reallly want Makoto to wake up but I wonder...would it make a difference if she completely had her memories in tact of the Millenium? hmmm. Just food for thought. lol

Thank you. Yes you have not sated my interest with a short chapter I want more! lol I'm cheering for Huraka and Michu to make it alive!

First - great chapter. As always. Second, I think I preferred the shorter chapter and the fact that it is a change to all of the action. So much has been going on that it has sometimes felt like the chapters haven't moved fast enough. This one had a nice rhythm and got you a lot closer to another apex (you know which one). So all in all I actually think that this is one of your better chapters. Job well done and looking forward to the next one.

It was good to read another chapter of The Brooch. It seems like so many of the good authors have had to stop writing, I was wondering if you were going to continue the story. I like the way the story's developing (although you are evil to not reveal Jovan's decision regarding his 3 girlfriends) because we are getting to see and understand the emotional background of each of the senshi. I love the way you've built up each character - too often authors only concentrate on Usagi/Serenity and the others seem to appear out of thin air ready to serve.

Aside from the senshi, I was wondering if you would also have Endymion's generals in the story - to complete the list of characters from the Silver Millenium. Aside from characters, I'm looking forward to the action being built up as Jedite finishes making his plans.

I don't mind that it was a shorter chapter than the rest, I'm just happy that I had a new chapter to read. Here I was at the edge of my seat wondering who Ryoku was going to name and all those interruptions! How frustrating. This chapter I feel really sets up the next couple of chapters to your story in regards to who is being discovered and how they are going to fit in with the rest. Keep up the great work, and like always, I will be here for the next chapter!

Ja,
Fushigi Hime

Your story is absolutely one of my favorites. I love this chapter. It deals with so much more than the war with the negaverse but also the comflicts of the human emotions. Its a bit like a soap-opera. Its all so complicated be easily followed. I really look forward to ur next chapter.

Thank you so much for an update I was sitting on pins and needles. I can't wasit for another chapter comes through and I hope that the outer solders awaken soon.

Awesome story, please finish soon!!!!!

As always I have enjoyed another well written chapter from the man more superior than Vartan!

Stylistically I sometimes find a couple of sentences/paragraphs quite long; but the pace of the story doesn't get bogged down by this which keeps me reading all of the story and not just skimming for the best parts. I would say be careful that you make sure you advance enough along with the plot in each chapter as sometimes the pace does seem a bit slow (I'm thinking of this from the perspective of not just myself, but maybe other readers). Not that this keeps me from jumping on the next chapter again every time you release a new one; I am utterly addicted to this story and love it. Hopefully my comments are constructive, but don't make you think that I am not a huge fan of this story (cos I am!).

I'm glad to see this story has resolved an end or two, while opening up others. I look forward to seeing the next chapter SK!

I've been following this story since the beginning (granted not on this site initially) but it is truly captivating. The tale you weave with characters and the intricate plots pulls readers in and makes them question everything and especially what happens next. Ami being a mute and not being able to harness or activate her powers is a wonderful twist! I love the love "square" and Usagi's reluctance to fight and her final decision to help out, but I question if there will be romance between her and Mamoru ever...one can hope being a fan of the classic pair. Keep up the excellent work and post soon!

Love your story. please update soon, it's going to slow.

Your chapters always leave me begging for more! Like I've said before, you do such an awesome job describing everything that I have no trouble painting that image in my mind. You not only do that with the scenery, but with the emotions in this story as well. I am so glad that I got to read yet another wonderfully written chapter by you. I will sit here and wait for the next!

Ja.
Fushigi Hime

Awesome!!!! Please update soon!!!!

keepup the good work.....keep writting....please....

Your chapters just get better and better! I could really feel the fear and urgency you displayed in this chapter very well. I really hope you have a good hold on your muse, this story is just wonderful!

If a person has not read this story you realllly should! I can't wait until the next chapter. I also read your alternate reality site it is really good writing plz keep it up. :)

You write battle scenes very well and so I'm definately looking forward to chapter 11. Hopefully you will address all the things you wrote in the notes at the end of chapter 10. I also hope that the update comes soon!

Words cannot describe how much I love this story and your writing style. This has me so hooked that I feel like I've read only a short chapter, when I know it's longer. The emotions that were felt from the broach was interesting, I hope you are able to delve into that a little more in the future chapters. Plus I cannot wait to read what will happen in the next one, it sure seems geared up for an action packed ride! Patiently waiting for the next installment

Yesh, Usagi is soo grim. I really like this story. I think that you really build up the characters in here. Their thought and actions are very human and there is so many layers of emotion going through the whole story. I hope to read more soon.

Please keep the chapters comming! I like this twist in the story each senshi has to face their own emotions interesting.

So good, so very very good!! I only wished you gone on a little more with Setsuna, but I know why you did what you did. Got to leave us readers begging for more! I am so hooked on this story that when I saw a new chapter was up I jumped for joy! I am serious I actually jumped out of my chair and cheered! I guess that gives you an idea just how much I like what you are writing! Keep up the great work, and I will wait patiently like a good girl for the next chapter.

Ja,
Fushigi Hime

Wow, this is *so* interesting. Not many people could pull off a story like this, but the matter-of-fact way you have of writing allows it to sound so realistic. I like that you are keeping us on our toes and surprising us with the way it is all coming together, yet you continue to set it up so carefully. I can feel that the awakening of Sailor Mercury (because she is mute), Sailor Jupiter (because of her coma), and Endymion (just because he's...well... Endymion for goodness sake!) are all going to be big moments in the story and I find myself aching for them to happen.

Very good story. I can't wait for more.

Nice job on chapter 7! I like a story that isn't predictable. I'm glad you're planning to portray the Dark Kingdom in the next chapter because so far they seem to be this abstract evil force; it will be nice to be able to visualize the other side better.

I think story is amazing. Its got me hooked. I am definitely gonna continue reading this. For all those readers who haven't read this: READ IT!!!!
Its original and perfect!!
I like the facts that its different from other Sailor Moon stories and is very original. Sailor Knight please continue writing this story. I love it i love it!!!

I usually try not to leave things like this but... AAAARGH!! you evil evil writer you! What a place to leave us...
Great as always, keeps me coming back!

This is really getting cooler but i can't believe u killed off Rei! I mean dang. oh well. she might be pretty but she ain't one of my fav characters. i really like how u lay everything out with were each scene takes place and at what time, but it does get a little frustrating have to scroll up again just to see what time certain things are happening. anyway. update soon.

I would do a happy dance, but no doubt, something would be slung at my head. So, in deference; this fic kicks the llama's ass.

How...dare...you!!! That was a joke right, you didn't end it like that really right? Chapter 6 was so action packed, that I had to tell myself to slow down while reading it cause I was so excited. You do such a wonderful job describing the surroundings of the characters that I feel like I am right there. I gladly sit and wait until you feel it's time to post another chapter to this really awesome story. May your muse never leave your side. :)

Ja,
Fushigi Hime

Oh my gosh, Sailormoon or any other mystical forces MUST save Rei! Ah!! Another excellent chapter. The whole battle scene was really exciting: the pace was slow enough to describe everything happening, but fast enough to let the readers feel the panic and force of the battle. Yay to Sailormoon's Tiara Action! But err, when is she going to get other types of attack, or more importantly, is she going to get other Sailor Senshis to help her? Will def look foward to your next chapter. Loved this chapter!

SK, you make me want to inflict evil things on you for that cliffhanger. This last chapter (6) was fantastic. I have been hanging onto this story for months. I like it because you're plot is simpler and more contained, thus making it easier to follow. However the amount of detail that you manage to contain in one chapter is amazing. I am looking forward to some advancement in the plot though because the story seems to be getting to a point where it will become not "stale" by any means, but lose some of its momentum if there is not a "big" event - bigger than the one of this chapter. That has been one of the good things about this story; it has had a lot of momentum and I don't want you to lose it. This is what makes this story stand out in particular more than some of the others you have written and shows your advancement as a writer.

Keep up the good work and hope you get a chance to get another chapter out soon.

Wow. I am so impressed by this story. It is very rare that I understand stories of such complicated nature, (well, more complicated than the typical Sailormoon fanfiction anyways,) and that just shows how well the story was written. Admittingly, the first chapter was a bit confusing, but everything cleared up in the second chapter. Chapter 4 and 5 have especially been amazing. And I love how Serenity/ Sailormoon isn't the typical ditz. The story has been amazing so far, so pls continue. Update soon pls!

Dag namit!! u just had to have a cliffhanger in chapter 5 didn't u? lol. this is gettting fun. transfered angers, jedite's long awaited invasion. update soon! got to know what happens next.

I reviewed this at ASMR, and I'll say it here, too; MORE! I must have more! Originality! A grasp of writing ability! AND IT DOESN'T SUCK. Give me more AR fic!

The return of Sailor Moon was awesome! I can't wait for the next senshi to appear. This story is brilliant!

0.0 To leave off in that chapter right there... Ahh! Do get the next chapter out soon! That cliffhanger is quite a doozie. XD I was a little hesitant in reading this at first when I saw the journal formats from others. I thought it would be confusing, seeing as it's a whole different world. I'm glad I read on ahead instead and now have another story to be addicted to. The characters and the storyline are so well written. I love the plot, even if I'm not fond of war stories. I love the idea of there being a Sailor Moon in this war torn city (even if SM doesn't show up yet. Guess I have to wait till the next chapter for that). You did such a good job with this story and I can't wait to read the future chapters.

I was excited to see a new chapter out, and just overjoyed when I read it. I really really love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter to come out, you do such a wonderful job! Please keep up the great work, and I will keep coming back for more!

Ja,
Fushigi Hime

Yay! it seemed so long, I've been waiting for an update. You didn't disappoint! I'm really enjoying the character interactions.. well done!

WOW! i can't wait for more! this is a realy good story and you better get writing more! or else i'll have to set a fire under your behind to get you to work fast! i can't wait to see more!

Chapter 3 was great! I love the way you built up the return of Luna, Artemis and Sailor Moon. Can't wait for the next chapter and for more SM characters to show up.

Oh this is getting juicy. I can't wait for the next chapter. It's taken a bit of time to get here, but it's been worth the wait!

This has been a long and coming story to be published on the net. Then again only the good stories take time. Keep it up girl and have an awesome summer!

wow.. those are the first words I will type.
this is great start, the characters are interesting and I like how the story is unfolding.
I'm impressed!

*Jumping up and down* Not fair, not fair, not fair. You gotta write more soon. I'm dying for more here!

I reckon this is one of the most original concepts I've encountered regarding Sailor Moon stories. Its brilliant. I was fascinated with how you wove the events of WWII into the narrative, & if you've not read Herman Wook, *not sure of spelling* who wrote extensivly on this period in his fiction with one story set in Tokyo during the fateful air assault on Tokyo, your story has something of that feel about it. I love the reconstituted historical landscape, one is curious of the nature of the world's cultures etc in the fascinating world you've built for the reader... I thought it on the whole fabulous, the characterisation& style of writing excellent. Just polish it and nurture the story as it deserves the best attention! congrats on a future classic! L.

Wow! I want more!! This story is so refreshing even if it is depressing. Your detail and imagery is so vivid in my mind when I read this. Please please write more of this story, I can't wait to see how you will put Sailor Moon into this. I really hope to see more of this soon!! Good luck!!

Ja,
Fushigi Hime

I can't wait for the next chapter. This alternate reality you created is fasinating!

Brilliance, SK. Sheer brilliance. I loved the way you incorporated actual historical events into your story.

Wow. Amazing. Fantastic.

Continue soon ~ JG

This story is unique and original, haven't read anything remotely like this before. I love your writing style and just the story in general ^^ So, for the sake of the remainder of the sanity of the readers, will you PLEASE start writing more of the next chappie!

I loved the teaser, and now the story is turning out great! Great job dear daddi, continue please ^^;

I thought that this was an interesting idea when I read the Teaser for it, and reading the actual story is a joy! I really love this style of story; the good battling against almost impossible odds against the evil. It just seems to put so much drama into it.
It's 2:30 in the morning, so I wasn't really looking for errors, but I didn't notice any that stood out...so good job on spelling and grammer.
You have a really nice flow going with this story, I really liked the diary entries in the beginning. Keep up the great work! I really can't wait to read more.

AWESOME!!!
I love your story, i'm so happy that the story is finally beginning, i can't even count how often i read the teaser and prayed for the real story to begin, and now it is finally there! YAY!

this is truly unique! I can't wait to see what your going to do with this story. You writing skill is definatly proven in this story.

I love the writing style for this story - and the story line too. Please update soon!

brilliant story, if i have ever read one! bravo! very good job!

All I have to say is wow! It's a very good beginning to what seems destined to be a fantastic story. Please, please please get the next chapter out soon! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Woah.....you're right SK, this is quite different from your usual fare-- but I like!! It's very..well..deep, for lack of a better word, and definitely VERY unique- keep it up, I'm anxious to see more! ^__^