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I am hooked. I'm more than hooked.

The direction you are taking this story in is bloody fantastic! I think you really have a winner here and it would be a shame if you failed to complete this story.

Please update soon! This is an amazing plot and storyline, I hope they stay together and fight through all the tumoil :/

Please please please please update soon! You are a terffic writer! I love stories about vampires and the maiden of light.

Please update soon! This is an amazing plot and storyline, I hope they stay together and fight through all the tumoil :/

Please please please please update soon! You are a terffic writer! I love stories about vampires and the maiden of light.

Hey Usabelle i just reread the story man i cant get of enough of it...i cant wait for the next chapter so PLEASE update SOON...cause everytime i read it, it have me on the edgy of my seat so PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE...THANK YOU!!!!!

o please o please o please please please UPDATE SOON!!!
im begging you!!! ive been waitin for an update for sooo long!!!
this is one of the greastest stories on here and im soooo disappointed that you havent updated in such a while.
i keep reading and re-reading it everytime in online!!
:'(
xxx

Hey I've always loved this story and was estatic when I saw the update! Great chapter, great progress for the story! Update soon, please!

Hey i love the story...a friend of mine told me about it and like i said i love it...i cant wait til u write the next chapter so please hurry <(^_^)> The question i want to know is: will Serena go back with Beryl or will she stay with Darien?

omggg i lovveee iiittt - ! please update ; your an awesome writer - this story kept me up till 3 in the morninq =] PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE USABELLE =] =] =]

OMG OMG!!!! That is such an amazing, brilliant piece of work! But WHAT HAPPENS!!!!! Please Please update!! I love it! You are amazing! I will be so sad if this gem is another fic that will die an untimely death! Please Please finish it! Thank you for sharing!

ph my god!! YOUR STORY JUST KEEPS ON GETTING BETTER AND BETTER!!! i hope you add more real soon!! this chanpter has definatley got to be mine favourite! please update real soon!

LOVED IT!! I swear I could feel her pain, I can't wait to find out what happens next, please update soon!

Hey!! Hope the writing is going well!! I know you updated a few days ago, but I am just really looking forward to future chapters. I hope you are able to update again soon.

I have to admit... you've done it.... the first vampire story.... very real...although you didnt keep up with most common vampire terms and ideas ( i love that you put in the incubus and sucubus terms though not fully embeeded and the fact that Serena fears that the child will rip out of her... surprisingly i had hope that if this hybrid is so special does it need 9mths to incubate)...
Anyway....you protrayed the story with vitality..... i love the humane things you keep in the story...i mean why wud a vampire need a bath.....or watch sports....however it was hilarious reading. i cant wait for updates

Ohhhhhhh man!!! That was great. So wonderful of you to update too. It was worth the wait but i hope that you are able to update soon because I can't wait for another chapter!! You are doing a great job on this story. Keep up the progress pleeeeze!

Welcome back, Usabelle! Another fantastic chapter - tons of emotion! I've been tracking this story for a while now. Please keep it up. Can't wait for the next update!

I love it! and I'm excited for the next chapter. please upday soon!

Hey I luv ur story thankz for the update nd hope that u finish the rest soon itz very good

Oh!! Why couldn't it have been Diamond??!!! What's going to happen now??!! Anyhow, thanks for the update. This was a great chapter. I hope you get your muse back!

Please continue the storyis very good and I enjoy Reading it alot!!!!!THANKZ!!!!

Please dont stop!

I don't know when the last time you posted was... but I am in absolute fear that you will never finish! I hope you will post soon! Also, please leave any, any indication that you plan to!

i read this story again and was hoping that you added more, just to make a suggestion/question it'd be nice to see (in this case read) Darien give into Serena and for her to have a bit more control not only over him but over herself aswell. aside from that i cant wait to read more!

PLEASE CONTINUE!! This is one of my favorities unique and great. You wrote that you had a livejournal what is the website? Please let me know via message. Thanks! I would love to see updates :)

Just to let you know, there is a thief in the air. Someone under the name Sailor Moon Serenity on Fanfiction.net has plagiarized your story Usabelle! From the summary to the title and down to the plot! Shame isn't it. I just wanted to let you know....some might be flattered that their story was good enough that someone would copy it but it is still an offense if they claim it as their own!

Here is the proof! Lil'Thief
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3325867/1/Blood_Lust
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Oh yea one more thing, when are you gonna update i can't wait anymore the suspense is killing me! Come On Chapter 6!

WOW! This story is great! Let me know when you've added more to it I really got into it, I want to finish reading. Hopefully it'll be soon!
p.s dont forget...let me know.(hopefully you get this)

YOUR STORY IS TH EBEST I'VE READ SO FAR! Please update it soon! I beg you!

Where is the rest of the story....we need more ...i reread this like five times already!

I love your story!! ^_^ Please update soon!

o wat happens nxt?! write chapter 6 like now! i kant wait!
dis has 2 b da best story ever written

I totally love your story. Keep up the good work and Don't leave us in suspense anymore. please up date asap.

that is a agreat story. I hope that continue that story cuz it's great and I hope that thay have a happy ending

Awesome storry cant wait for the next chapter. :]

Glad to have you back!! :)

wow. that was one good chapter! there was a whole lot of bloodlust in that chapter! whew. Well anyways, I have been waiting for the updates and I finally noticed that it was updated! YAY!

WISE: You used this one word a few times, deamenor (something like that), so watch out for repetivness. Don't worry I suffer from that too.

You description was amazing! Every intimate moment was well described, emotions were painted out. I could see the whole chapter happen in my head. Very good job.

Serena's feelings were what I thought they would be. Characterization is perfect. Also, diction was immensly used. Having Serena and Darien curse at certain moments was completely...what's the word im looking for... real? Not the right word but I hope you know what I mean.

Very very good job. You should be very proud of this chapter and I cannot wait for more!

<33 Lady Moon goddess

Good cliffhanger by the way!

Awesome! Can't wait to read the next chapter and what ever chapters come also. Keep up the great work!!

OMG she's pregnant!! Oh I can't wait to see what will happen next! I hope she gets to see funlight again!.. please please update soon

wow...what a very steamy chapter, but I LOVED IT!!! it was awesome and your awesome for writing it , i hope u write more very soon :)

Yay!!! another chapter. as usual, really good, and i can't wait to read the next chapter (hint hint!!). keep up the good work!!!!

Awesome chapter, well worth the wait! Although, I hope we won't have to wait that long again ;)

PLEASE FINISH I need to know what happens next

WOW! Great story. I am sitting on the edge of my seat. I can't wait until you update this story. I think I like this out of all the stories I have read that are dealing with vampires. Keep up the juicy writting!!!

No words can describe this story but wonderful and Sassy! Love It! Can't wait for more.....Hiyaku Hiyaku Hiyaku....

hey when you going to update???

please update soon! the writing is done excellently! I loved it! I love how easy it was to read it and how I couldn't stop reading! please update soon!

I luved it plz finish

its going good so far-keep up the good work and continue writing- i can't wait to find out what happens next!!!

You cant leave it there! Please continue! I am loving this story!

YOu know what youve got such a good start in this chapter and i think that your grammar and speelings are great and this story is soowwww amazing pleaseee update soon I love this story please update soon

Nice. I like and can't wait for the next update.

gd gd so far-can't wait to find out what happens next!!! keep writing!!!

This is a fabulous story. The plot is very intriguing. I love that Serena has a back-bone and speaks her mind. Nothin like seein a woman push come to shove. Can't wait to see the next chapter updated. Definitely one of my favorite stories! Keep writing fabulously and take care~

wat a great story....... LOVE it .. update please

Please! Please! Please! Update the story, its soooooo good. The story is awesome and I really need to know what happens next! :)

omg, i've been waiting for ages for this story to be updated. and im having it tracked on both websites i think.. plz update, its a great story and we must know what happens especially due to all the secreacy and past happenings.

Alright I just finished the first few chapters of your second story. May I say that I loved this one. I also read your first one and loved it so why should I be surprised about liking this one. It has been hard to find really good fics out there lately.
I really can't wait to see what you have plan for your up coming chapters? Keep writing.
And as for grammar or spelling mistakes. I really haven't found anything that stands out. Looks like your beta reader is doing you justice.

I KEEP READING AND REREADING THE LAST TWO CHAPTERS AND I CAN'T WAIT ANY MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
COULD U PLZ HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTERS, I'M PRACTICALLY ABOUT TO BURST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hey...I got to this story from the Top Stories page, for July Most Recommended or something. It is amazing and I thoroughly enjoyed it! The concept is so totally original; it was invigorating to read an S/D fic (which I love) in a fresh new incarnation. I don't know when your last update was, but please continue to write this story! I am eagerly awaiting the continuation of the plot (especially to see Beryl's motivations...)

great story!!! cant wait for the next chapter!!! update sooooon!!!!!!!!!! ^-^

please write more soon I really enjoy the story so the sooner the better.I would also like if you could make it an e-book your story is eally good and I would love to down load it to my computer.

This is an excellent story!!! I like it, I like it alot!! Altho, I was wondering, did you get your idea from that movie "UNDERWORLD?" Anyway good job and I cannot wait to read the rest of it.

This was awesome! You have got to add more. I can't wait! INTENSE!

WOW! Your story and storytelling is really really fabulous; you have such talent! I usually shy away from vampire stories, but your summary intrigued me, so, here i am, one in the morning, drooling and wishing for more more more!
thanks!

want more soon I only wish that It could be an e-book great job hope to read more soon.

great story. The vampire plot is hardly original but I'm delighted that you put a creative spin on things. Forgive me for saying so but the whole new race seems similar to the movie 'Underworld'. Still, I liked your writing very much. It was quite clear that you weren't comfortable while writing the more intimate scenes but you managed to pull it off nicely. May I suggest that you leave more to the readers' imagination in the future or perhaps read some of other people's work to draw some inspiration for the love scene. Overall, well done!

I like it and I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope that you will update soon

Fantastic love it, keep up the good work and please update ASAP!!

I really like the story so far, but there are some things that just don't quite add up. For example, Darien is deathly allergic to silver, yet Serena's blood is silver (in color at least). I don't know if this is intentional irony on your part or not, but it's a little confusing. Also, if Serena and Darien have the blood bond, then why are they still so insecure when they consummate their marriage? Shouldn't they each just know what the other is feeling?

i love your story, and with the risk of sounding completely perverted, go ahead and wrtie more "steamy, if u know what i mean scenes" you do them well, honestly. hope to see a new chapter soon.

WOW, Ummm where do I begain?? I LOVE IT!!! I WANT MORE I WANT MORE!! LOL
Its soo incrediable! I love the detail and the plot! You are an awsome writer I felt like I was right there watching all this stuff happen!!!
Waiting for more!!
GoddessSerena

i loved it. your story is getting better and better with every chapter you write. keep up the awesome work.

Great job once again, I loved this chapter. I must admit that their relationship is a bit rushed, it worries me that there's little to be built in future chapters though. However, the the story itself, the writing, the characters ...wonderful. I think Prince Darien has become a favourite, him being all dark and sexy. I'm loving this story!

-Kimmi-chan

I love it. I mean I really love it. Please hurry up and write more.

Usa usa usa...............*tears up* sniff sniff. I swear I get a little more sad every time it comes to the end of a chapter. You really have an amazing talent for drawing your readers into your stories. I honestly don't know when the last time was that I was so excited to look forward to your updates. I look in my email every day to see if my little tracking alert went off yet. You did very well on your fist sex sceene ever! Yay go usa! *Gives high five* It was tastefully done. Not in the least bit trashy. You also did a great job with there emotions. I could feel how much they needed eachother and I liked that you incorperated that into your, ahem, sexy parts of it. tee hee. No but seriously, you did a great job. I wish you would stop being so hard on yourself and realize that you do have a great talent. Hooray for you!! And hooray for me because I get to enjoy the fruits of your labor. So, just so you know, I want some more fruit! Ha ha, you didn't think that I would actually leave you a review and not say that did you? Well you should have known better. Now get crackin' sister! Lol, just kidding, you know I love you. Not really. Well not about the love you part but about the get cracking. Oooookay, I'm just going to shut up now. ;)

I can't believe you wondered if chapter 4 was okay. The way you described every detail (event he explicit ones) and emotions was fabulous! I'm just hoping that Serena finds out about Beryl's history with her parents soon. I also hope she gets the upper hand over Darien's family. Looking forward to more!

nothing short of amazing....

THHHAAAAAANNNNNNKKKK YYYYYYOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A message to all you beautiful people out there: READ THIS STORY!

WAS IT OKAY?!!!!!!! It was amazing! I'm am completely and utterly hooked onto this story!!!!!!! Needless to say, I love it and I absolutly cannot wait until the next chapter. You are such a talenter writer and it shows when you leave your readers wanting more. I must implore to you to write more, b/c I can only read this story so many times over--waiting for the next exciting part of the story. You really do inspire me to become a better writer and you remind me with each chapter what it is I love about reading and writing fan fiction. It's a whole other world and I, as well as countless others, adore every bit of it.

Im so sorry to hear about the plagerism, but at least you found out about it. This chapter was incredible and I was so happy to see Saphire help Serena out like that. The writing was awesomely exquisite, its really made for the subject. Great job!

MMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!
I love it!!!!

Great chapter! I really love Darien in this story; he has this aggressiveness that I'm incredibly attracted to. You're scenes are very descriptive and I'm able to picture everything that's going on. I do feel that Darien & Serena's relationship is a bit rushed. Serena seems to trust him too quickly. I think if it was slowed down a bit it would be more believable. But, I do love this story and am anxious to read more. Vampire fics are so sexy. :]

I can't say that I was disappointed- because it was wonderful.
Just not long enough for me! I crave more.
it's a silly obsession I have- I like vampire fics. I am very impressed with your story and I know that I would be unable to write like you. It's been so long since I've even really touched a fanfic. I started to rewrite some of mine but lost interest. Keep updating- I'm not tracking this story for nothing yanno.

it was great, and dont worry about explicit content. i love this story, and i hope a new chap will be on soon.

Love it, fantastic story so far, please update
ASAP!!

This is such a great story!! Please, please, PLEASE finish it soon!!!

I just love this story!!!!!!
Continue writing this story is amazing!^-^

thank goodness your continuing with this story...its sooooo awesome...please update soon...I cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!

I have been waiting for this chapter to come out for the longest time. Now that it is here I have to say that it was worth the wait. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.

I do want to know if Berly knows if Darien is a vampire? I want to know why they was an explosion and where is Sapphire? I think he is the only one that will support Serena.

I can't wait so update when you can.

<---ish amazed. Your word choice and graphical depiction of every scene is stunning. Darien is coming off a lil strong, but hey, thats what vampires are suppose to do. XD I love the personality you've given to all your characters, it really makes them 'come alive'. Details are vivid and strong; a must have in the makings of a great story. ^^ So far the plot seems a lil sketchy, but my bet is that you're saving up a really unpredictable end for this story, and dropping tiny hints all the way along? *wink* I particularly liked chapter two for some reason. Maybe it was just your wording, or you sentence structure or something. Whatever, I totally loved it. ^.^ You could spend a little more time working on your setting descriptions, but overall this story is the product of a mastermind. *pets* Finish soon!

ohmigod that was so brill!!!!
pleez, pleez keep writing!!! i luv it!!!

I'm hooked! This is a great story--very well composed. One of the best in a long time! Please update soon!

wow. I'm not usually much for vampire stories but let me say that this is one hell of a story you've got going on here. A few things I just love about this story:

1)Serena has an attitude. A believable one for a girl her age who has been frisked away by a vampire, and yet not an annoying one. That in itself is a very hard thing to accomplish, but you seem to have done just that.

2)It's sexy. Darien as a vampire = strange hotness.

3)It's original. I love that she's a daywalker and I love this little war you've thought up.

Now, if you'll excuse me but it is two o'clock in the morning here and I'm a bit out of my mind, a few other random thoughts:

I freakin knew that Raye was his sister!

Wow, vampire Darien really was hot!

Oh no, did you say she was getting together with Diamond? Were you kidding? Is it a joke....??? A typing error??? I'm sorry, but Diamond kind of creeps me out. Whatever you do I'm sure I'll love it but, well... you know.


Well that's about it. I hope you can forgive this random post but I am really tired and really impressed right now.

More soon? Please?

Mattie

this is really good!i like the details and the setting... keep up the good work, please write more soon

BAH!! This story is simply amazing!! So amazing, in fact, that you should update as much as possible so I may continue to read such a piece with my unworthy eyes!!! You describe things in such a way that I am fully convinced that anything can happen. And you edited things wonderfully, which makes me even happier to read!!! Please, update as soon as possible!

I really really like this story! I hope you get into more detail about the war between the vampires and the daywalkers. I think that's the only thing that's kind of vague here. Unless it's intentionally like that. The suspense is killing me though, update soon! ^_^

Aww, I'm so happy that you finally updated. I love this story and have been waiting forever and a day. Thanks for sharing that. Keep up the good work and I hope this review will prompt you to write more! I would've read this asap but life is hectic, as you say, so I understand that updates are rare and inbetween. BUT! PLEASE please PLEASE, update when you can! this story is getting too GOOD!

Usabelle....I...I...I love you!!! I'm so happy that you got out chapter three. When I saw that it was updated I swear I almost peed my pants I was so excited!! You are so talented. My only complaint is that I want more right now!! However I know how hard it is to find time to write when life is so hectic. But I love you for what you do give me. Keep it up and I will be watching!!

omg you have to write more i am dying right now i need to know i hate cliff hangers please please please hurry with the next chapter!

that was great I've been waiting for that chapter. cant wait for the next. keep them coming

I started reading this sotry yesterday, and I was unable to finish yesterday and the thing I was looking forward when I got home from school was your story. I'm addicted, wonderful job. I really enjoyed reading this. You really know how to capture the readers' interest. Very good job. I have many problems with writing in my story and it has taken me forever to update. Take your time and do your best. It's better to have a 'finished'chapter within a long time than a quick and not developed chapter with a short period of time. I absolutely loved it!I will be checking often to see when you update!

*Lady Moon Goddess*

Thanks so much for finally updating. I hope u continue updating its an awesome story!! I love vamp fics

Dun dun dun! I love this story! It reminds me a little of Buffy the Vampire Slayer - which is something totally awesome. The part with the kissing was freakin hot ... please write more!!

what a shame you're stopping it there! I am really looking forward to reading the rest- vampire fics really do interest me. Maybe it's because they're sexy. heh..I dunno. It's dark and wonderful- I enjoy your story very much. Please continue to write this- so I can continue to enjoy it. :)

I love it, I can't wait to read the next one. I's so good. Plus I can't wait to see what's happing down stairs.

oh my god you like so have to hurry up and update on this this story is so freaking good i cant believe you left us fans in suspense please hurry up and update soon and fast because i cant wait to see what happens please tell me you are going to update fast you have good writing skills so keep up the good work

Great chapter, I love Serena's spunky attitude. :]

i loved this chapter and this fic!! send in the next chapter soon!!

I loved chapter 3. It was good to see Serena having a backbone and not being the gifted victim in all this. But you're a sly one to leave the story in a cliffhanger! I hope you have more time in the summer to update.

i cannot wait til the next chapter to this fanfic to come out. i'm curious to know what is happening between beryl and darien right now. did she figure out what darien really is? what is going to happen next? keep writing and updating!

I'm really enjoying this story. It's fun and sexy, with some intricacies of plot that make it stand out from other S/D vampire stories.

I'll be keeping an eye out for the next chapter. I hope it comes soon!

hey hey
luv the new chp..u've got me wondering if serena said nything b4 running downstair or if she told diamond she luved darien or if she didn't
yea so hurry up luv the new chp hope u can update soon
rach

Now we're getting somewhere! I love this story, because there's never a dull moment. Keep up the good work! I am definatly in love with this story and the cliff hangers! OMG!!! They're so intensly insane! I love it! No other story has excited me more than this one. I wish you the best, usabelle, and I absolutly can't wait until the next chapter! So, please please please, finish chapter four soon. I will be checking in all the time, waiting for your updates. Thanks for such an amazing and unique story! Please write some more!!! ~Jupe

i truly hope u update soon, cause the tention is already killing me!!!!i love ur story, wonderfully written , great discription of surroundings emotions, it feels like im there!god, please post more soon!

hey! i'm so happy you updated and i understand that it took awhile but hey wait just makes it more sweeter right? neway i LOVE your story and i am looking forward to reading more of your works! ^_^

i totally loved it please i'm waiting for the other chappters hope they come out soon

Okay I really think its about time you update the story! we are dying here! I love it i love it! ;-)