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Story: Bloodlust
Posted on Monday December 06, 2004 at 16:07 by Usabelle
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Winner: Most Recommended Story - July 2005

Rated: R
Status: Incomplete

Darien, Prince of the Vampires, is the sole heir to the throne of the undead. Serena is a Day Walker destined to have his child as commanded by a treaty. But when she forgets her oath, Darien is forced to leave his underground world to find what he has so long been denied...


Number of Chapters: 7          Total Size: 292k          Word Count: 51,782

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Monolo - Tuesday June 07, 2011 at 02:22
I am hooked. I'm more than hooked.

The direction you are taking this story in is bloody fantastic! I think you really have a winner here and it would be a shame if you failed to complete this story.
tiffanybgood - Friday September 11, 2009 at 08:31
Please update soon! This is an amazing plot and storyline, I hope they stay together and fight through all the tumoil :/

Please please please please update soon! You are a terffic writer! I love stories about vampires and the maiden of light.
tiffanybgood - Thursday September 10, 2009 at 22:04
Please update soon! This is an amazing plot and storyline, I hope they stay together and fight through all the tumoil :/

Please please please please update soon! You are a terffic writer! I love stories about vampires and the maiden of light.
MISSJ902004 - Thursday June 25, 2009 at 14:34
Hey Usabelle i just reread the story man i cant get of enough of it...i cant wait for the next chapter so PLEASE update SOON...cause everytime i read it, it have me on the edgy of my seat so PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE...THANK YOU!!!!!
Jadey1793 - Wednesday June 24, 2009 at 14:05
o please o please o please please please UPDATE SOON!!!
im begging you!!! ive been waitin for an update for sooo long!!!
this is one of the greastest stories on here and im soooo disappointed that you havent updated in such a while.
i keep reading and re-reading it everytime in online!!
:'(
xxx
Anonymous - Tuesday March 17, 2009 at 01:44
Hey I've always loved this story and was estatic when I saw the update! Great chapter, great progress for the story! Update soon, please!
MISSJ902004 - Wednesday March 11, 2009 at 17:37
Hey i love the story...a friend of mine told me about it and like i said i love it...i cant wait til u write the next chapter so please hurry <(^_^)> The question i want to know is: will Serena go back with Beryl or will she stay with Darien?
suqar_babyy - Saturday March 07, 2009 at 04:38
omggg i lovveee iiittt - ! please update ; your an awesome writer - this story kept me up till 3 in the morninq =] PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE USABELLE =] =] =]
Nich - Wednesday January 07, 2009 at 06:55
OMG OMG!!!! That is such an amazing, brilliant piece of work! But WHAT HAPPENS!!!!! Please Please update!! I love it! You are amazing! I will be so sad if this gem is another fic that will die an untimely death! Please Please finish it! Thank you for sharing!
lexie_06 - Tuesday September 30, 2008 at 01:25
ph my god!! YOUR STORY JUST KEEPS ON GETTING BETTER AND BETTER!!! i hope you add more real soon!! this chanpter has definatley got to be mine favourite! please update real soon!
princesa_angelbebe - Monday September 29, 2008 at 07:37
LOVED IT!! I swear I could feel her pain, I can't wait to find out what happens next, please update soon!
bandgeek - Saturday September 06, 2008 at 04:12
Hey!! Hope the writing is going well!! I know you updated a few days ago, but I am just really looking forward to future chapters. I hope you are able to update again soon.
serenityslove - Thursday September 04, 2008 at 13:41
I have to admit... you've done it.... the first vampire story.... very real...although you didnt keep up with most common vampire terms and ideas ( i love that you put in the incubus and sucubus terms though not fully embeeded and the fact that Serena fears that the child will rip out of her... surprisingly i had hope that if this hybrid is so special does it need 9mths to incubate)...
Anyway....you protrayed the story with vitality..... i love the humane things you keep in the story...i mean why wud a vampire need a bath.....or watch sports....however it was hilarious reading. i cant wait for updates
bandgeek - Tuesday September 02, 2008 at 01:55
Ohhhhhhh man!!! That was great. So wonderful of you to update too. It was worth the wait but i hope that you are able to update soon because I can't wait for another chapter!! You are doing a great job on this story. Keep up the progress pleeeeze!
yuna - Sunday August 31, 2008 at 08:37
Welcome back, Usabelle! Another fantastic chapter - tons of emotion! I've been tracking this story for a while now. Please keep it up. Can't wait for the next update!
LadyD - Saturday August 30, 2008 at 21:30
I love it! and I'm excited for the next chapter. please upday soon!
maqui - Friday August 29, 2008 at 19:22
Hey I luv ur story thankz for the update nd hope that u finish the rest soon itz very good
rainbabie - Thursday August 28, 2008 at 20:38
Oh!! Why couldn't it have been Diamond??!!! What's going to happen now??!! Anyhow, thanks for the update. This was a great chapter. I hope you get your muse back!
maqui - Thursday May 01, 2008 at 18:22
Please continue the storyis very good and I enjoy Reading it alot!!!!!THANKZ!!!!
Moonmew - Monday April 28, 2008 at 08:45
Please dont stop!
rainbabie - Tuesday January 08, 2008 at 22:54
I don't know when the last time you posted was... but I am in absolute fear that you will never finish! I hope you will post soon! Also, please leave any, any indication that you plan to!
lexie_06 - Monday December 31, 2007 at 19:36
i read this story again and was hoping that you added more, just to make a suggestion/question it'd be nice to see (in this case read) Darien give into Serena and for her to have a bit more control not only over him but over herself aswell. aside from that i cant wait to read more!
angeleyes13 - Sunday September 02, 2007 at 05:14
PLEASE CONTINUE!! This is one of my favorities unique and great. You wrote that you had a livejournal what is the website? Please let me know via message. Thanks! I would love to see updates :)
ButtaUsagi - Friday August 10, 2007 at 18:05
Just to let you know, there is a thief in the air. Someone under the name Sailor Moon Serenity on Fanfiction.net has plagiarized your story Usabelle! From the summary to the title and down to the plot! Shame isn't it. I just wanted to let you know....some might be flattered that their story was good enough that someone would copy it but it is still an offense if they claim it as their own!

Here is the proof! Lil'Thief
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3325867/1/Blood_Lust
_____________
Oh yea one more thing, when are you gonna update i can't wait anymore the suspense is killing me! Come On Chapter 6!
lexie_06 - Friday August 10, 2007 at 15:56
WOW! This story is great! Let me know when you've added more to it I really got into it, I want to finish reading. Hopefully it'll be soon!
p.s dont forget...let me know.(hopefully you get this)
lizparker180 - Tuesday June 19, 2007 at 14:55
YOUR STORY IS TH EBEST I'VE READ SO FAR! Please update it soon! I beg you!
ButtaUsagi - Saturday May 19, 2007 at 05:49
Where is the rest of the story....we need more ...i reread this like five times already!
angelwings86 - Tuesday March 20, 2007 at 03:40
I love your story!! ^_^ Please update soon!
all_4_my_prince - Thursday March 15, 2007 at 20:55
o wat happens nxt?! write chapter 6 like now! i kant wait!
dis has 2 b da best story ever written
aquaserenity2002 - Tuesday March 06, 2007 at 19:00
I totally love your story. Keep up the good work and Don't leave us in suspense anymore. please up date asap.
storygirl - Wednesday February 14, 2007 at 03:20
that is a agreat story. I hope that continue that story cuz it's great and I hope that thay have a happy ending
FrozenxPromise - Sunday February 11, 2007 at 07:01
Awesome storry cant wait for the next chapter. :]
yuna - Sunday February 11, 2007 at 04:08
Glad to have you back!! :)
Moon_Goddess - Saturday February 10, 2007 at 16:14
wow. that was one good chapter! there was a whole lot of bloodlust in that chapter! whew. Well anyways, I have been waiting for the updates and I finally noticed that it was updated! YAY!

WISE: You used this one word a few times, deamenor (something like that), so watch out for repetivness. Don't worry I suffer from that too.

You description was amazing! Every intimate moment was well described, emotions were painted out. I could see the whole chapter happen in my head. Very good job.

Serena's feelings were what I thought they would be. Characterization is perfect. Also, diction was immensly used. Having Serena and Darien curse at certain moments was completely...what's the word im looking for... real? Not the right word but I hope you know what I mean.

Very very good job. You should be very proud of this chapter and I cannot wait for more!

<33 Lady Moon goddess

Good cliffhanger by the way!
jupiter_2005 - Saturday February 10, 2007 at 04:22
Awesome! Can't wait to read the next chapter and what ever chapters come also. Keep up the great work!!
princesa_angelbebe - Saturday February 10, 2007 at 04:04
OMG she's pregnant!! Oh I can't wait to see what will happen next! I hope she gets to see funlight again!.. please please update soon
Rae - Friday February 09, 2007 at 17:00
wow...what a very steamy chapter, but I LOVED IT!!! it was awesome and your awesome for writing it , i hope u write more very soon :)
asianprincess - Friday February 09, 2007 at 15:59
Yay!!! another chapter. as usual, really good, and i can't wait to read the next chapter (hint hint!!). keep up the good work!!!!
gwenie - Friday February 09, 2007 at 07:54
Awesome chapter, well worth the wait! Although, I hope we won't have to wait that long again ;)
nichole - Saturday January 20, 2007 at 23:47
PLEASE FINISH I need to know what happens next
jupiter_2005 - Monday October 23, 2006 at 04:26
WOW! Great story. I am sitting on the edge of my seat. I can't wait until you update this story. I think I like this out of all the stories I have read that are dealing with vampires. Keep up the juicy writting!!!
ButtaUsagi - Wednesday October 18, 2006 at 01:31
No words can describe this story but wonderful and Sassy! Love It! Can't wait for more.....Hiyaku Hiyaku Hiyaku....
princess-angel - Wednesday September 27, 2006 at 00:52
hey when you going to update???
maf - Sunday June 18, 2006 at 15:43
please update soon! the writing is done excellently! I loved it! I love how easy it was to read it and how I couldn't stop reading! please update soon!
Anonymous - Sunday May 21, 2006 at 12:08
I luved it plz finish
asianprincess - Sunday February 26, 2006 at 13:37
its going good so far-keep up the good work and continue writing- i can't wait to find out what happens next!!!
Missyface - Sunday January 22, 2006 at 11:43
You cant leave it there! Please continue! I am loving this story!
Lyla - Tuesday January 10, 2006 at 16:20
YOu know what youve got such a good start in this chapter and i think that your grammar and speelings are great and this story is soowwww amazing pleaseee update soon I love this story please update soon
Dark-Huntress - Wednesday November 30, 2005 at 22:42
Nice. I like and can't wait for the next update.
asianprincess - Sunday November 20, 2005 at 18:13
gd gd so far-can't wait to find out what happens next!!! keep writing!!!
Unek530 - Thursday October 27, 2005 at 05:55
This is a fabulous story. The plot is very intriguing. I love that Serena has a back-bone and speaks her mind. Nothin like seein a woman push come to shove. Can't wait to see the next chapter updated. Definitely one of my favorite stories! Keep writing fabulously and take care~
serenitykiss - Friday October 14, 2005 at 23:19
wat a great story....... LOVE it .. update please
nate - Tuesday October 04, 2005 at 21:04
Please! Please! Please! Update the story, its soooooo good. The story is awesome and I really need to know what happens next! :)
golden_pond - Sunday October 02, 2005 at 11:33
omg, i've been waiting for ages for this story to be updated. and im having it tracked on both websites i think.. plz update, its a great story and we must know what happens especially due to all the secreacy and past happenings.
Redroses - Thursday September 15, 2005 at 07:55
Alright I just finished the first few chapters of your second story. May I say that I loved this one. I also read your first one and loved it so why should I be surprised about liking this one. It has been hard to find really good fics out there lately.
I really can't wait to see what you have plan for your up coming chapters? Keep writing.
And as for grammar or spelling mistakes. I really haven't found anything that stands out. Looks like your beta reader is doing you justice.
purple1793 - Monday September 12, 2005 at 13:55
I KEEP READING AND REREADING THE LAST TWO CHAPTERS AND I CAN'T WAIT ANY MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
COULD U PLZ HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTERS, I'M PRACTICALLY ABOUT TO BURST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
amaterasu-no-ki - Saturday August 20, 2005 at 21:45
Hey...I got to this story from the Top Stories page, for July Most Recommended or something. It is amazing and I thoroughly enjoyed it! The concept is so totally original; it was invigorating to read an S/D fic (which I love) in a fresh new incarnation. I don't know when your last update was, but please continue to write this story! I am eagerly awaiting the continuation of the plot (especially to see Beryl's motivations...)
xMoon_Princessx - Friday August 19, 2005 at 17:48
great story!!! cant wait for the next chapter!!! update sooooon!!!!!!!!!! ^-^
luna10111 - Wednesday August 17, 2005 at 07:30
please write more soon I really enjoy the story so the sooner the better.I would also like if you could make it an e-book your story is eally good and I would love to down load it to my computer.
Laylia - Wednesday August 17, 2005 at 06:35
This is an excellent story!!! I like it, I like it alot!! Altho, I was wondering, did you get your idea from that movie "UNDERWORLD?" Anyway good job and I cannot wait to read the rest of it.
cosmoscrystal - Thursday August 04, 2005 at 04:51
This was awesome! You have got to add more. I can't wait! INTENSE!
truecolor - Monday August 01, 2005 at 06:22
WOW! Your story and storytelling is really really fabulous; you have such talent! I usually shy away from vampire stories, but your summary intrigued me, so, here i am, one in the morning, drooling and wishing for more more more!
thanks!
luna10111 - Wednesday July 20, 2005 at 08:05
want more soon I only wish that It could be an e-book great job hope to read more soon.
mouse6 - Tuesday July 19, 2005 at 15:11
great story. The vampire plot is hardly original but I'm delighted that you put a creative spin on things. Forgive me for saying so but the whole new race seems similar to the movie 'Underworld'. Still, I liked your writing very much. It was quite clear that you weren't comfortable while writing the more intimate scenes but you managed to pull it off nicely. May I suggest that you leave more to the readers' imagination in the future or perhaps read some of other people's work to draw some inspiration for the love scene. Overall, well done!
angelsere - Friday July 15, 2005 at 23:15
I like it and I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope that you will update soon
stacey - Thursday July 14, 2005 at 23:18
Fantastic love it, keep up the good work and please update ASAP!!
kasumi - Saturday July 09, 2005 at 03:54
I really like the story so far, but there are some things that just don't quite add up. For example, Darien is deathly allergic to silver, yet Serena's blood is silver (in color at least). I don't know if this is intentional irony on your part or not, but it's a little confusing. Also, if Serena and Darien have the blood bond, then why are they still so insecure when they consummate their marriage? Shouldn't they each just know what the other is feeling?
astro - Friday July 08, 2005 at 18:34
i love your story, and with the risk of sounding completely perverted, go ahead and wrtie more "steamy, if u know what i mean scenes" you do them well, honestly. hope to see a new chapter soon.
GoddessSerena - Friday July 08, 2005 at 16:42
WOW, Ummm where do I begain?? I LOVE IT!!! I WANT MORE I WANT MORE!! LOL
Its soo incrediable! I love the detail and the plot! You are an awsome writer I felt like I was right there watching all this stuff happen!!!
Waiting for more!!
GoddessSerena
cheeseness - Friday July 08, 2005 at 09:03
i loved it. your story is getting better and better with every chapter you write. keep up the awesome work.
Kimmi-Chan - Friday July 08, 2005 at 06:23
Great job once again, I loved this chapter. I must admit that their relationship is a bit rushed, it worries me that there's little to be built in future chapters though. However, the the story itself, the writing, the characters ...wonderful. I think Prince Darien has become a favourite, him being all dark and sexy. I'm loving this story!

-Kimmi-chan
andreadm - Friday July 08, 2005 at 04:35
I love it. I mean I really love it. Please hurry up and write more.
jennie - Friday July 08, 2005 at 03:46
Usa usa usa...............*tears up* sniff sniff. I swear I get a little more sad every time it comes to the end of a chapter. You really have an amazing talent for drawing your readers into your stories. I honestly don't know when the last time was that I was so excited to look forward to your updates. I look in my email every day to see if my little tracking alert went off yet. You did very well on your fist sex sceene ever! Yay go usa! *Gives high five* It was tastefully done. Not in the least bit trashy. You also did a great job with there emotions. I could feel how much they needed eachother and I liked that you incorperated that into your, ahem, sexy parts of it. tee hee. No but seriously, you did a great job. I wish you would stop being so hard on yourself and realize that you do have a great talent. Hooray for you!! And hooray for me because I get to enjoy the fruits of your labor. So, just so you know, I want some more fruit! Ha ha, you didn't think that I would actually leave you a review and not say that did you? Well you should have known better. Now get crackin' sister! Lol, just kidding, you know I love you. Not really. Well not about the love you part but about the get cracking. Oooookay, I'm just going to shut up now. ;)
Critika - Thursday July 07, 2005 at 14:21
I can't believe you wondered if chapter 4 was okay. The way you described every detail (event he explicit ones) and emotions was fabulous! I'm just hoping that Serena finds out about Beryl's history with her parents soon. I also hope she gets the upper hand over Darien's family. Looking forward to more!
MG - Thursday July 07, 2005 at 14:05
nothing short of amazing....
Anonymous - Thursday July 07, 2005 at 06:03
THHHAAAAAANNNNNNKKKK YYYYYYOOOOOOOOUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A message to all you beautiful people out there: READ THIS STORY!
Jupiter - Thursday July 07, 2005 at 06:01
WAS IT OKAY?!!!!!!! It was amazing! I'm am completely and utterly hooked onto this story!!!!!!! Needless to say, I love it and I absolutly cannot wait until the next chapter. You are such a talenter writer and it shows when you leave your readers wanting more. I must implore to you to write more, b/c I can only read this story so many times over--waiting for the next exciting part of the story. You really do inspire me to become a better writer and you remind me with each chapter what it is I love about reading and writing fan fiction. It's a whole other world and I, as well as countless others, adore every bit of it.
Lioness-Rampant - Thursday July 07, 2005 at 05:41
Im so sorry to hear about the plagerism, but at least you found out about it. This chapter was incredible and I was so happy to see Saphire help Serena out like that. The writing was awesomely exquisite, its really made for the subject. Great job!
aidensgrl - Wednesday July 06, 2005 at 23:28
MMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!
I love it!!!!
MMHYUM - Wednesday July 06, 2005 at 21:10
Great chapter! I really love Darien in this story; he has this aggressiveness that I'm incredibly attracted to. You're scenes are very descriptive and I'm able to picture everything that's going on. I do feel that Darien & Serena's relationship is a bit rushed. Serena seems to trust him too quickly. I think if it was slowed down a bit it would be more believable. But, I do love this story and am anxious to read more. Vampire fics are so sexy. :]
Cappuchino_Princezz - Wednesday July 06, 2005 at 20:26
I can't say that I was disappointed- because it was wonderful.
Just not long enough for me! I crave more.
it's a silly obsession I have- I like vampire fics. I am very impressed with your story and I know that I would be unable to write like you. It's been so long since I've even really touched a fanfic. I started to rewrite some of mine but lost interest. Keep updating- I'm not tracking this story for nothing yanno.
astro - Wednesday July 06, 2005 at 19:34
it was great, and dont worry about explicit content. i love this story, and i hope a new chap will be on soon.
stacey - Sunday June 19, 2005 at 09:47
Love it, fantastic story so far, please update
ASAP!!
bluehawaii06 - Wednesday June 15, 2005 at 02:51
This is such a great story!! Please, please, PLEASE finish it soon!!!
aya_ceres - Saturday June 04, 2005 at 22:25
I just love this story!!!!!!
Continue writing this story is amazing!^-^
celeste - Thursday June 02, 2005 at 05:37
thank goodness your continuing with this story...its sooooo awesome...please update soon...I cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!
lexie - Tuesday May 31, 2005 at 10:31
I have been waiting for this chapter to come out for the longest time. Now that it is here I have to say that it was worth the wait. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.

I do want to know if Berly knows if Darien is a vampire? I want to know why they was an explosion and where is Sapphire? I think he is the only one that will support Serena.

I can't wait so update when you can.
Kon - Tuesday May 31, 2005 at 01:52
<---ish amazed. Your word choice and graphical depiction of every scene is stunning. Darien is coming off a lil strong, but hey, thats what vampires are suppose to do. XD I love the personality you've given to all your characters, it really makes them 'come alive'. Details are vivid and strong; a must have in the makings of a great story. ^^ So far the plot seems a lil sketchy, but my bet is that you're saving up a really unpredictable end for this story, and dropping tiny hints all the way along? *wink* I particularly liked chapter two for some reason. Maybe it was just your wording, or you sentence structure or something. Whatever, I totally loved it. ^.^ You could spend a little more time working on your setting descriptions, but overall this story is the product of a mastermind. *pets* Finish soon!
purple1793 - Saturday May 28, 2005 at 12:37
ohmigod that was so brill!!!!
pleez, pleez keep writing!!! i luv it!!!
yuna - Saturday May 28, 2005 at 06:04
I'm hooked! This is a great story--very well composed. One of the best in a long time! Please update soon!
Mattie - Thursday May 26, 2005 at 06:17
wow. I'm not usually much for vampire stories but let me say that this is one hell of a story you've got going on here. A few things I just love about this story:

1)Serena has an attitude. A believable one for a girl her age who has been frisked away by a vampire, and yet not an annoying one. That in itself is a very hard thing to accomplish, but you seem to have done just that.

2)It's sexy. Darien as a vampire = strange hotness.

3)It's original. I love that she's a daywalker and I love this little war you've thought up.

Now, if you'll excuse me but it is two o'clock in the morning here and I'm a bit out of my mind, a few other random thoughts:

I freakin knew that Raye was his sister!

Wow, vampire Darien really was hot!

Oh no, did you say she was getting together with Diamond? Were you kidding? Is it a joke....??? A typing error??? I'm sorry, but Diamond kind of creeps me out. Whatever you do I'm sure I'll love it but, well... you know.


Well that's about it. I hope you can forgive this random post but I am really tired and really impressed right now.

More soon? Please?

Mattie
Sophie - Thursday May 26, 2005 at 05:53
this is really good!i like the details and the setting... keep up the good work, please write more soon
Beautiful_Dreamer - Wednesday May 25, 2005 at 05:29
BAH!! This story is simply amazing!! So amazing, in fact, that you should update as much as possible so I may continue to read such a piece with my unworthy eyes!!! You describe things in such a way that I am fully convinced that anything can happen. And you edited things wonderfully, which makes me even happier to read!!! Please, update as soon as possible!
Rhiannon - Wednesday May 25, 2005 at 03:35
I really really like this story! I hope you get into more detail about the war between the vampires and the daywalkers. I think that's the only thing that's kind of vague here. Unless it's intentionally like that. The suspense is killing me though, update soon! ^_^
lostvangel - Tuesday May 24, 2005 at 23:48
Aww, I'm so happy that you finally updated. I love this story and have been waiting forever and a day. Thanks for sharing that. Keep up the good work and I hope this review will prompt you to write more! I would've read this asap but life is hectic, as you say, so I understand that updates are rare and inbetween. BUT! PLEASE please PLEASE, update when you can! this story is getting too GOOD!
jennie - Tuesday May 24, 2005 at 14:49
Usabelle....I...I...I love you!!! I'm so happy that you got out chapter three. When I saw that it was updated I swear I almost peed my pants I was so excited!! You are so talented. My only complaint is that I want more right now!! However I know how hard it is to find time to write when life is so hectic. But I love you for what you do give me. Keep it up and I will be watching!!
freaky - Tuesday May 24, 2005 at 02:35
omg you have to write more i am dying right now i need to know i hate cliff hangers please please please hurry with the next chapter!
cheeseness - Monday May 23, 2005 at 23:05
that was great I've been waiting for that chapter. cant wait for the next. keep them coming
Moon_Goddess - Monday May 23, 2005 at 20:44
I started reading this sotry yesterday, and I was unable to finish yesterday and the thing I was looking forward when I got home from school was your story. I'm addicted, wonderful job. I really enjoyed reading this. You really know how to capture the readers' interest. Very good job. I have many problems with writing in my story and it has taken me forever to update. Take your time and do your best. It's better to have a 'finished'chapter within a long time than a quick and not developed chapter with a short period of time. I absolutely loved it!I will be checking often to see when you update!

*Lady Moon Goddess*
angeleyes13 - Monday May 23, 2005 at 06:37
Thanks so much for finally updating. I hope u continue updating its an awesome story!! I love vamp fics
Tris13 - Monday May 23, 2005 at 03:51
Dun dun dun! I love this story! It reminds me a little of Buffy the Vampire Slayer - which is something totally awesome. The part with the kissing was freakin hot ... please write more!!
Cappuchino_Princezz - Monday May 23, 2005 at 00:38
what a shame you're stopping it there! I am really looking forward to reading the rest- vampire fics really do interest me. Maybe it's because they're sexy. heh..I dunno. It's dark and wonderful- I enjoy your story very much. Please continue to write this- so I can continue to enjoy it. :)
MoonStar15 - Sunday May 22, 2005 at 20:14
I love it, I can't wait to read the next one. I's so good. Plus I can't wait to see what's happing down stairs.
lacyloss - Sunday May 22, 2005 at 19:44
oh my god you like so have to hurry up and update on this this story is so freaking good i cant believe you left us fans in suspense please hurry up and update soon and fast because i cant wait to see what happens please tell me you are going to update fast you have good writing skills so keep up the good work
MMHYUM - Sunday May 22, 2005 at 19:22
Great chapter, I love Serena's spunky attitude. :]
devilsangels11287 - Sunday May 22, 2005 at 18:28
i loved this chapter and this fic!! send in the next chapter soon!!
Critika - Sunday May 22, 2005 at 17:20
I loved chapter 3. It was good to see Serena having a backbone and not being the gifted victim in all this. But you're a sly one to leave the story in a cliffhanger! I hope you have more time in the summer to update.
daisystar - Sunday May 22, 2005 at 16:20
i cannot wait til the next chapter to this fanfic to come out. i'm curious to know what is happening between beryl and darien right now. did she figure out what darien really is? what is going to happen next? keep writing and updating!
Syrinx - Sunday May 22, 2005 at 13:48
I'm really enjoying this story. It's fun and sexy, with some intricacies of plot that make it stand out from other S/D vampire stories.

I'll be keeping an eye out for the next chapter. I hope it comes soon!
rach - Sunday May 22, 2005 at 08:56
hey hey
luv the new chp..u've got me wondering if serena said nything b4 running downstair or if she told diamond she luved darien or if she didn't
yea so hurry up luv the new chp hope u can update soon
rach
Jupiter - Sunday May 22, 2005 at 07:52
Now we're getting somewhere! I love this story, because there's never a dull moment. Keep up the good work! I am definatly in love with this story and the cliff hangers! OMG!!! They're so intensly insane! I love it! No other story has excited me more than this one. I wish you the best, usabelle, and I absolutly can't wait until the next chapter! So, please please please, finish chapter four soon. I will be checking in all the time, waiting for your updates. Thanks for such an amazing and unique story! Please write some more!!! ~Jupe
astro - Sunday May 22, 2005 at 06:46
i truly hope u update soon, cause the tention is already killing me!!!!i love ur story, wonderfully written , great discription of surroundings emotions, it feels like im there!god, please post more soon!
hobbit - Sunday May 22, 2005 at 05:08
hey! i'm so happy you updated and i understand that it took awhile but hey wait just makes it more sweeter right? neway i LOVE your story and i am looking forward to reading more of your works! ^_^
luna10111 - Thursday May 19, 2005 at 19:20
i totally loved it please i'm waiting for the other chappters hope they come out soon
Anonymous - Wednesday May 18, 2005 at 20:13
Okay I really think its about time you update the story! we are dying here! I love it i love it! ;-)
dolphines - Friday April 22, 2005 at 21:05
this is a really good story so far keep writing please. i'm excited to see what you write next.
cheeseness - Saturday April 09, 2005 at 18:57
exciting story i wonder what happens to serena. please update
hotglittergal18 - Monday March 28, 2005 at 05:00
This is a great story, I love everything about it! Update soon!
keishaq - Saturday March 19, 2005 at 20:03
Really good :) very amusing :)
MMHYUM - Monday March 14, 2005 at 20:26
Wow! I am so intrigued! I love where this story is going so far, and I can't wait to read more!
freaky - Saturday March 12, 2005 at 00:16
that was unreal it was so fantasic u have to write more!!!
Animefreak242 - Wednesday March 09, 2005 at 02:33
I love this story so far. It isn't one of those cliche stories where Usagi finds out Mamoru's a vampire and falls in love with him instantly. At least he's taken her away to his home now. And there's some conflict outside the usual Diamond obsession thing (though that's still good motivation). I just wonder how Beryl and Diamond are going to take her disappearance. I hope Sapphire'll be okay (I love him so much *sniffles*).

I just wish you had the time to update. *fustrated* I hate school! But I know how you feel. *ish a senior* It's time consuming, not to mention fustrating. But I'll be waiting for your update. Please don't keep us waiting too long. *crosses fingers* Til next review?

~Animefreak242 = D
aka
Kawaii Girl ^_^
SweetSacrifice - Friday March 04, 2005 at 00:15
Simply beautiful.
Im very in love with the Vampires...
Anonymous - Wednesday February 23, 2005 at 20:33
The story is great, and I understand that you are busy and when you can PLEASE write more. I can't wait to find out how this story ends.
Sophie - Saturday February 19, 2005 at 04:06
Please, write more... its really good and you have a great idea going... good work..
StormChild - Sunday February 13, 2005 at 21:50
That was great! I love it, it's one of the best that i've ever read. Update as soon as possible I want to know what happens after Serena blacks out!
Lyla - Wednesday February 02, 2005 at 20:27
Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee wright more
Cant wait

and i love that you let them meet each other soon

Keep up the good job
Lyla
Critika - Monday January 24, 2005 at 04:13
I'm glad you had Darian and Serena meet quickly -stories that drag out their first meeting get annoying with the teasers. Since you're busy with school, I'll be looking for updates around spring break!
DemonChild - Saturday January 22, 2005 at 17:19
Hmm... I really like it a lot! Is his sister Raye? I love how you were able to keep the characters rather in character as well, well done! I really hope you get a chance to update soon as it seems to be a good story thus far. Good Luck, and hope to read more soon.
starryice18 - Saturday January 22, 2005 at 04:26
Love it!!!! Please finish ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lexie - Thursday January 20, 2005 at 16:07
I'm so upset that the chapter is over. I was really getting into the story. I know you have school and updating will be hard, but please update when you can. The story is getting real good.
becxfok01 - Wednesday January 19, 2005 at 20:48
Ooo... I love your story! Update soon!
nina_girl - Monday January 17, 2005 at 19:15
Wow!!! This is Great!!! I would like it a lot if finish the next chapter!!! You know what I kinda feel sorry for Serena, I mean its all up to her . . . .'kinda.'
angelvenus - Monday January 17, 2005 at 11:38
Hi, I liked your storie. But when is the next chapters coming out?

Plese reply soon

angelvenus
celeste - Sunday January 16, 2005 at 23:45
puleeeeeezzzz continue with this story...it's amazing...please don't be one of those author's that leaves us hanging for months (possibly years on end) by refusing to finish their story...lemme tell u that it leaves us (the fans) very frustrated...you have an amazing talent with words...please continue to share your gift with us.
lylcq525 - Sunday January 16, 2005 at 19:39
lovely just lovely. i like the plot of the story that you have created. but while i read this it makes me wonder why darien wouldn't be p****d off at her for not being there at the night of her birthday. he just still believes he was meant for her. *shrug maybe you'll explain it more later eh?
Dagger - Sunday January 16, 2005 at 18:40
Wow I love this story please continue this story I cant wait for the next story.
Dagger
Catzy - Sunday January 16, 2005 at 03:09
Amazing!! I really like what is going on so far. I can't wait for the next chapter.
jennie - Saturday January 15, 2005 at 09:07
Finally!! Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!! So wonderful. As always usabelle your writting amazes me and.....sigh. Okay so
what are you waiting for!? Next chappie please. This fic is just to good. I can't wait!!
Jupiter - Saturday January 15, 2005 at 06:58
I love the latest chapter, but you shouldn't of stopped it at all. This story is getting really good, so update soon!
mila - Saturday January 15, 2005 at 00:55
things r getting really interesting. my one and only comment is that u take too long to update. please update asap. the suspense is getting to me!
daisystar - Friday January 14, 2005 at 15:35
keep writing and updating! i look forwardz tor eading the next chapter, what will happen to serena? darien has a sister? what about beryl and diamond, what will they do when they find out serena is missing? what about serena's necklace? isn't it suppose to protect her from being attacked, now that it's gone, do we expect darien to be protecting her every time like the first time? i'm interested in reading more of this and see how darien and serena's "relationship" will progress. also, read what will happen when serena meets darien's parents. keep writing. i cannot wait. also, good luck with school.
lacyloss - Sunday January 09, 2005 at 00:26
Thank you so much for updating this is soooooo good could you please update another chapter please i cant wait till serena meets darien i love this story so far i think that this will be my favorite story so i only hope you update more often
Anonymous - Friday January 07, 2005 at 17:41
This is so awesome I love I think It'll be one of my favorite storys keep writing
Anonymous - Friday January 07, 2005 at 01:05
Please update this soon! It's such a good story.
angelfire - Thursday January 06, 2005 at 16:18
i demand another update now!
Ariel - Wednesday January 05, 2005 at 21:32
OMG!!! that was amazing. I can wait to read more. Please post a new chapter soon!!!
ANGELBLOOD - Sunday January 02, 2005 at 02:17
I'll just review again since I want the next chapter out before New Years or close enough to it xD I'm even mor edrawn to this now that the plot is starting to kick up. I especially love your dialogue. Man can you write! Everything flows together really well and there is not much for you to improve on. I also like the brotherly rivalry. I mean most would but the 2 brothers with each other instead of against. Kudos to you! Though I do wish Serena had a lot more back bone. She's a half vamp! ^^;; Don't keep us waiting too long xP
Anonymous - Saturday January 01, 2005 at 07:44
i really like your story! The suspense is killing me! Please update soon!
Cappuchino_Princezz - Thursday December 30, 2004 at 19:51
I better get this new years present way before new years! haha.
The storyline is rather mysterious, which keeps me reading and wanting more. While Diamond is a spooky-creep, he and Sapphire don't seem to have much substance to them. If they had more depth, it would be better. Sapphire- he's a photographer and Diamond a scientist? not polar opposites, but there could be a set up battle between them over Serena or something. Like- Diamond gets jealous about something that doesn't really exist with Sapphire and Serena. Just a thought. But yeah- I'm waiting for when Darien meets Serena.... don't leave us hanging please.
Critika - Thursday December 30, 2004 at 13:56
Well, this was a treat to get to read this after I got back from my vacation. The second chapter is really good and I'm hooked on this story! As far as the storyline goes, I guess I'm just confused by Beryl's 'kind aunt' act; I thought she was going to mastermind Diamond and Serena's courtship since she murdered Serena's parents. Can't wait for the next chapter to find out who makes the next step.
tennyo - Wednesday December 29, 2004 at 07:12
ah.. an exciting storyline! At last! The prologue was a bit confusing since the descriptions didn't connect with the names until later on. So for half the prologue, I wasn't sure who had what attributes. The storyline is still brilliant. I'm genuinely interested and I hope to see an update soon. ;]
Lissa - Monday December 27, 2004 at 16:29
Wonderful, wonderful! I love vamp fics, and I can tell that I'm going to love this one. Seemed fine with grammar and spelling, etc. Great descriptions, great plot, great beginning. Keep it up! ^-^
MoonStar15 - Sunday December 26, 2004 at 09:35
I love it can't wait to read more of it.
Jupiter - Saturday December 25, 2004 at 07:48
I would looooovvvve another chapter as a new years eve present! Haha! Anywayz, your story has so much potential and it could become my favorite vampire story yet! Can't wait for the next chapter...keep it up and have fun with it.
SimplySexieSweet - Saturday December 25, 2004 at 05:28
i love it! i can't wait till the next chapter gets out, but keep doing what you're doing!
teresa - Friday December 24, 2004 at 22:11
That was soooo incredibly good! For the past 3 months, I haven't really read an actual story that I deemed was worthy of a review. They were either written to please the reader (to scrounge for reviews) or the plot was too overdone/unoriginal. Thus I found myself in a position where I thought I would actual withdraw entirely from fan fiction!

And here you are!! You re-ignited my interest for fan fiction! You have no idea how much you made my day. I absolutely adore this story! I only hope you'll update on a regular basis, I don't think I can bare it if you discontinued this due to your hectic life or whatever typical reasons authors come up with. Lastly, thanks for sparking my interest for fan fiction! =)
jennie - Friday December 24, 2004 at 19:10
YAY!!!!! She wrote more!!(does a little dance) I just want to say that this story is awesome. I dont even have a single thing bad to say about it. How awesome is that? Pretty awesome!! I've said awesome a lot haven't I? Oh well, it's awesome!!!! So now there's only one more thing to do.....more chapters!!! Alright I will let you get to it then. keep it up....AWESOME. tee hee. Sorry, I had a lot of sugar today.
Dariens_Angel - Friday December 24, 2004 at 17:30
I just love this story. Can't wait to see what happens when our favorite couple meets. Update soon and Merry Christmas!!!
ggrlusagi - Friday December 24, 2004 at 06:28
This is a lovely story. Please write soon! Have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! :)
jennie - Tuesday December 21, 2004 at 04:45
oh no..its not crappy at all. please continue. i love vampire fics and i have yet to read anything like this. i usually dont get sucked into a story in the first chapter, but you girl.... you did it. please please please finish writting. and soon!!! im so impatient.
Raye73 - Monday December 20, 2004 at 07:17
hey i really like your story and cant wait to hear more. it sounds really promising.
lacyloss - Sunday December 19, 2004 at 23:21
HEy this is a good story i am glad that you thought of making this story up please oh please update this i really enjoyed it so far i think this is the best story ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
starryice18 - Tuesday December 14, 2004 at 19:14
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LokisNight - Saturday December 11, 2004 at 21:22
Hey usabelle, wonderfull start. Your story is very creative, with description and emotion to make it seem real. I'd say it's even better than your first. Please write the next chapter soon!
princesa_angelbebe - Thursday December 09, 2004 at 21:54
Great Story! all I have to say is please keep going with it I can't wait to see what happens next
sailormoon123 - Wednesday December 08, 2004 at 22:40
woooowww! i like where this story is going! keep up the good work! hurry up wit the next ch!!!^^
Bakayaro - Wednesday December 08, 2004 at 22:06
Just like ClaidiWinter I too am looking for a new vampire story to read just after Dark Secrets was finished (but it is going to have multiple endings so no worries), and I have stumbled on your humble fanfic. Please update soon or I will have to -in 'vampire accent'- suck your blood!
Anyways update soon ok?
G-star - Wednesday December 08, 2004 at 20:07
Really fantastic, please update soon! I really want to find out what happens next! Good job!


Lotsa Luv,

~Galaxystar~
angelfire - Wednesday December 08, 2004 at 18:34
love vam stories please update sooooon!
ggrlusagi - Wednesday December 08, 2004 at 02:12
That was a bloody brilliant story. Please write more soon. I can't wait to see what happens next!
ClaidiWinter - Tuesday December 07, 2004 at 20:23
I think you have a very promising start here! I really do like vampire stories, and with Dark Secrets finished I've been hunting for a new -good- one, which I seem to have found ^^

I vote you continue it! It sounds almost like Underworld with... er, a more coherent plot. :p

~Claidi
ClaidiWinter - Tuesday December 07, 2004 at 20:23
I think you have a very promising start here! I really do like vampire stories, and with Dark Secrets finished I've been hunting for a new -good- one, which I seem to have found ^^

I vote you continue it! It sounds almost like Underworld with... er, a more coherent plot. :p

~Claidi
ANGELBLOOD - Tuesday December 07, 2004 at 01:26
Are you kidding me?! Of course you should continue with this. It really is hard to fine good, completed or at least updated Vamp fics now a days. I truly did enjoy Untitled and I am def. enjoying Bloodlust. You're developing the plot along really well. The prologue was written really well; it didn't reveal too much but it did add suspense. Nice touch. I can't wait till you write more, I am hooked and it should be interesting to see what's going ot happen next. Keep up the great work ^^;
Cappuchino_Princezz - Tuesday December 07, 2004 at 00:38
I'm not sorry- and I wish I had a more.....enlightening review to give you-
but that was awesome! hehe. I'm waiting to read more.
Vampire stories are very interesting to me.
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