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Posted on Monday September 19, 2005 at 09:11 by Stormlight
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Season: Alternate Universe
Main Characters: Mamoru/Darien, Usagi/Serena

Genre: Adventure, Fantasy, Humour, Romance

Rated: PG13
Status: Incomplete

This Story has been Queued for Removal

Number of Chapters: 11          Total Size: 233k          Word Count: 40,971

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Anonymous - Wednesday August 08, 2012 at 16:24
Good style, great story - I like very much thnx
Loki - Sunday May 22, 2011 at 05:46
I second the motion, Stormy I hope you take this up again, and dazzle us once more with your story magic! <3333
mooney - Sunday May 22, 2011 at 05:32
I absolutely love this story, please please please update again! I have read this from when you first started writing it and I was heart broken when you stopped updating it... please continue writing it!

P.S. I LOVE the changes, please keep going!
ladytokyo - Tuesday March 15, 2011 at 01:17
Oh my gosh I was looking for this fic it has a new name and has been rewritten from what I originally read. I still found myself enjoying this quite a bit and was excite with each new chapter I was reading. If you so happen to have this finish somewhere I would love to continue reading it.

Terri721 - Saturday July 25, 2009 at 21:34
please update!!! I've loved this story from the very beginning and have been hoping one day you'll come back to it...
Anonymous - Wednesday December 03, 2008 at 04:35
Heck I know some people don't like crossovers, but this is a beautifully told story and not just a thrown together thing of somebody's favorite fandom. Well thought out, great characters you can feel with and for, and plenty of great stuff to do with plot, themes and romance and that magical touch, the Lady and the minstrel all part of your writing gift! More please Stormlight!!!
kitn - Thursday November 06, 2008 at 14:01
As always another wonderful chapter. I enjoy how you portray all the characters, especially Endy and Usagi they are very true to their original counterparts. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
SailorPheonix3 - Wednesday November 05, 2008 at 17:11
I liked the chapter on how thngs went between Eny and Sere. I think though they have a lot more challenges ahead especially with trust. Miaka and Hort would definately need to be seperated before they jepordize everything. Maybe create a little more angst. I hope to see more chapters comming in.
Loki - Wednesday November 05, 2008 at 16:24
Hi Stormy!

Well, this was another classic piece of writing magic, the sword fighting scenes were brilliantly written.

You asked for feedback about the edit side of things:

I will try and remember some of the litle flaws for you.

You use a lot of adverbs, in particular, the '-ly- ones, sometimes these are okay, but one you repeated constant-ly ^^ was 'softly,' I did notice the second time you used 'Endymion' in the opening paragraph, I suggest replacing the second with 'he'

Also, aesthetically, the 'chapter 9' was annoucned twice. (Careful of tenses in one or two places) ^^

In this sentence:

"Sorry, I couldn't think of any other way to make you stay long enough *to*listen to me. (the 'to' is missing)

In one sentence, you wrote the word, 'linens' shoulddn't this be linen ? ^_^

But that was it, if I missed anything, it would only be slight.

This was an amazing chapter, the characters in tense moments, perfection, dialogue superb and the as always the vivid scens, the humor and the affect first rate, stunning, simply stunning Stormy! <3 *hands you a rose and boes*
Anonymous - Tuesday October 07, 2008 at 05:23
Stormlight. This and other fics I have seen posted proves that good quality fanfiction is alive and well. I love this, Foundling is every bit as wonderful as those of the 1990s when SM was in its hay-day.

You have warm and believable characters. Love the portrayals of Serenity, Endymion and the other characters from the Fushigu Yuugi universe, works so beautifully and I am looking forward to more! Thank you for sharing your talent with us! <3
Loki - Saturday September 20, 2008 at 06:22
Oh the depth of talent we have on AI always makes me feel so priviliged to be a part of it all.

Stormlight this latest chapter, 8 is superb, and sooooo romantic, and yet, in its passion, it lifts the heart and we feel for the characters in a real way.

I loved how Endy has his - little clash with the elemental being, haha! Poor Endy, but he should have held his tongue, but with the last scene, this is one of the moments that I found so enchanting, Fantastic Stormy! <3

"Oh, Miaka." He stepped forward and pulled her into his arms, hugging her tightly. "You fool. You little fool," he berated, sounding aggrieved. "Now. Why only now do you reveal your heart? Why, when it is too late to do anything about it?" Holding her at arm's length, he shook her slightly, his golden-brown eyes searching her confused face. "What good does it do either of us to acknowledge these feelings now?" His voice rose as he became more agitated. "I am betrothed to a foreign princess. I have given my word; the betrothal cannot be broken without risking a war." He shook her again, his expression a strange mingling of fury and elation. "Miaka, my Miaka, why did you—Why did we wait so long?"

And he kissed her.

Now, what more could you ask of a writer and a story? Hmmm? ^___^
Loki - Tuesday September 09, 2008 at 02:14
WISE magic!

If you want to know how to write magic, purist story magic, then you only have to read Stormlight's amazing compendium of stories. She is one of the best, and in my book, in the top five writers of SM ever. I say that without hesitation B/C she is a genius and what is the best part, she is a really wonderful person as well.

Foundling for me was when I first read it a great journey into a lavish world of courtly manners, and cute royal children, and the deeper weft of the tale in this re-write is superb to say the least. Stormy, you're amazing.

I felt the tragedy of Serenity's mother, her flight from dark tragedy, like the Lady of Shalotte, the imagery and the mood was powerful and evocative.

The children endearing as always, and a new backstory underpinning the narrative adds more to the telling. I love this and while only finished chapter 1 and the prologue, I am really going to savor this one. Good one Stormy! <3 *billions of crescent wishes and roses*
SailorPheonix3 - Friday April 25, 2008 at 16:09
I miss this story I truely hope you will take time to finish. It is beautiful Storm.
cherrups - Wednesday August 29, 2007 at 20:32
This rewrite is very good so far. I have very much enjoyed both this version and also Heart of Silver, Soul of Glass. It seems that both are progressing in different ways. I really hope that you will continue to update both, as it seems a pity of leave either one hanging.
Anonymous - Sunday January 29, 2006 at 15:35
OMG that was sooooo great!!! I LOVE I LOVE I LOVE IT!!! this story is so unique and so EXTREMELY EXCELLENT!!!!!! I'm so gladed I made myself wait atleast 7 chapters before i started readign it. *dies* IT WAS AMAZING! I CAN NOT WAIT FOR MORE

and yes...the plot thickens..... =D
Anonymous - Sunday January 29, 2006 at 11:53
You are truly the mistress of the fantasy imagination and tell a tale so well. I am reminded of the stories of my childhood. You are really good. Creating a landscape of entertaining and haunting dialogue, wrapped in a parcel of sights and sounds that put us right beside Serenity. I am looking forward to more of your beautifully told story!!!
SailorPheonix3 - Monday November 21, 2005 at 15:43
I like it! I'm surprised his mother didn't ask her but maybe the maid/nurse didn't tell anyone. Keep the Chapters comming please. :))
Dark-Huntress - Monday November 21, 2005 at 00:06
Another wonderful chapter. It seems that soon Endymion and Serenity shall realize just how deep their feelings are. Thanks again for updating, and have a wonderful Thanksgiving and whatever holiday you celebrate.
Anonymous - Tuesday November 15, 2005 at 09:16
Hey Stormlight this is amazing. Well written and got me in straight away! You rock girl!
SailorPheonix3 - Wednesday November 02, 2005 at 14:54
This is a good turn of events caan't wait to see what happens now. Really good work! Wanna see more chapters!:)
Dark-Huntress - Wednesday November 02, 2005 at 00:06
Awwww, poor Endy!!! Please update again soon so that I can be sure that he's all right!!!! It's sad to see one pain-in-the-butt who is sooooo loved be injured, but the chapter did a wonderful job!!!! Keep up the good work!!!
SailorPheonix3 - Wednesday October 26, 2005 at 14:26
I liked that the fact the you brought her mother back to come upon visiting her from time to time. I hope she will be in the next chapter to shed some light to Serenity's past. That way Serenity will have to leave the castle to come upon her own to find her destiny. LOL...OMG the dung Endy deserved it!lol I wonder hmm, I'm curious since Endy is a jerk if you were to bring a charater for Seiya will be as sensitive Lord? lol lol. Bring more chapters please.
Dark-Huntress - Wednesday October 26, 2005 at 03:48
nice. I loved the dung hitting Endy. Gods know that he deserved it. I hope he gets something worse from his family on his birthday!!
Anonymous - Tuesday October 25, 2005 at 17:19
An enjoyable read. I found the magic and humor most effective. Keep it up, you are a talented author for sure!
becxfok01 - Wednesday October 19, 2005 at 22:25
Oh my gosh, you're rewriting this story! I'm so excited! This is THE story that got me into Sailormoon fanfiction, even though it's not strictly pure SM fanfic.

I can see the difference in this new version. More information is given, like in the Prologue, Serenity's mother and father's names were already mentioned. And you def are giving more detail to every part of the story. Like we see the children growing up gradually. And that incident of Endymion and Sere falling into the river is def more clear now. Oooh, and I love the bit where Sere has inherent mysterious powers -makes the story much more interesting from the start.

Keep writing! I can't wait to read more.
charitylei - Saturday October 15, 2005 at 22:24
if you guy haven't already read this story you should it's wonderfully put together and actually pulls you into it!!!
bec - Saturday October 15, 2005 at 11:58
Please hurry up and write some more of this story, I love it!
SailorPheonix3 - Friday October 14, 2005 at 14:43
Please more chapters I like this story.:)
curly - Thursday October 13, 2005 at 17:30
Excellent! You have a great talent with how you go about using words in the story. I doesn't sound choppy in the slightest like others that I've read have. Congrats! Please, keep writing! Thankies!
Anonymous - Tuesday October 11, 2005 at 17:12
What an enchanting story this is. It flows nicely, and this chapter is full of humor and the children are especially cute! Good job!
Redroses - Wednesday September 21, 2005 at 00:11
I like what you have started. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Loki - Tuesday September 20, 2005 at 06:50
I thoroughly enjoyed chapter 1. WISE: I think there are some small technical flaws and word usage issues that caught my attention. Otherwise, an excellent start. L. "A Moon Cat is forever WISE, love your stories!" =^_^= l.
Loki - Tuesday September 20, 2005 at 00:32
I was enchanted. I loved this the moment I began to read. I would encourage you to follow through on your intention to finish this and write as an original.

WISE: I loved your use of language, you showed us, rather than told us of the imagery, affect and power of the narrative. Characterisation -- briliant. I would however, suggest that in (night-time) you need only write 'night' and further down, the use of (even) was unnecessary, but this is a moot point when looking at the piece as a whole. I loved it, and can only urge you to keep going. watch punctuation as you followed (!) with lower case, but her, the character's name would suffice to make the sentence structurally sound.

I am hooked. You know how to weave magic. I loved the vocabulary -- visualisation superb. Plot exciting and writing style flows nicely. Congratulations on a classic in progress.

*hands you a cluster of shimmering diamond stars & bows* L.
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