What a wonderful story. I loved the small yet extremely effective touches such as Mamoru's wedding band, and that phrase, "I know I did."
This was so very well written, and a beautiful insight to the creation of Crystal Tokyo and Neo-Queen Serenity. Plus it's original, which is always a bonus ^^
Thank you for such a wonderful story. I've always been fascinated by the creation of Crystal Tokyo and what others imagine it might have been like - but I never thought about it quite like that. I especially thought it was great how you used the point of view. Keeping it all from one person's eyes I think made it alot more powerful. It was great thanks!
Wow.
That was really moving, one of the best things I've read in a while. There were some nice creative touches too, like mentioning Mamoru's wedding band.. the detail to give his words more weight.
Thank you for this story.
I love this story and reading it once more brought a surge of emotion, I thought it so perfect. An expression of how friends discover strength within their hearts -- monarchs & warriors, all too wonderfully human personify the power of love.
Outstanding Dejana, you rock! *hands you a crystal star and a rose-gold basket of blood-red roses and bows*
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Wow- awesome story. The emotions you portrayed were quite realisitc and it showed a side of the senshi we don't normally get to see- made them a little more human. Again, great job!! Keep it up =)