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Story: Serenity of Golden Hair
Posted on Wednesday March 22, 2006 at 10:37 by Loki |  |
Season: Alternate Reality Main Characters: Mamoru/Darien, Usagi/Serena
Genre: Angst, Fantasy, Romance, Supernatural
Rated: R Status: Completed
Falling under the power of an ancient curse, Serenity sleeps and as she does, powerful forces fight for control not only of the White Moon, but for the soul of Princess Serenity, will she prevail?
(Based loosely on the myth of Rapunzel and a prequel to Akitsubata and the Crystal Flower)
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Number of Chapters: 20 Total Size: 391k Word Count: 69,883
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 |  |  |  | Stunning. Is all I can say.
As much as I hate to see this [like Aki... *mourns Aki*] end, you wrapped it all up brilliantly.
And do I hear the word sequel? :O
To be honest with you Loki, your reviews just write themselves out of the brilliance of your stories.
This story didn't write itself, you and your talented, original and wonderful knack for creating stories made this tale, and I loved every second of it.
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 |  |  |  | Okay, first an apology Loki-san. I promised myself that I would only read this when I had the time to read it all, and be able to appreciate it all in all its splendor.
And after a long time of waiting...
T_T
I finally have that time!
And good lord was it worth the wait :D
I absolutely love this story, it is just exquisite and I am absorbed within a few sentences.
And I did spot the reference to myself ^^ *blush*
To be mentioned in one your stories is nothing short of honourable to be honest!
I love the inclusion of Setsuna, and the relationship she shares with Endymion, that has always fascinated me. I love the fact that Luna is Serenity's sister, not just a guardian. And most of all, I really love your portrayal of Beryl, she is stunning in this.
I am intrigued to hear more, I want to see how Endymion and Serenity end up, although given the current situation it looks highly impossible for them to be together :[
And the Queen as a Senshi! Wonderfully creative ^^
This is flowing as smoothly as always, making it even more enjoyable, I can't wait for an update!
And in the four, five chapters I just read, I found very few mistakes but all of the same nature. Which was that you hadn't put capital letters at the beginnings of a couple of names.
E.G "so vast and alien to beryl"
And that was it. Now come on, if that doesn't shout talent, what does?
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