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Story: Decided Bride
Posted on Monday April 10, 2006 at 14:53 by Anja
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Members Stories Season: Alternate Reality
Main Characters: Mamoru/Darien, Usagi/Serena

Genre: Humour, Romance

Rated: PG
Status: Completed

Princess Serenity had no intentions of getting married, and her mother was leaving to choice up to her. However, due to much needed peace between the moon and earth, she decides to marry Endymion, the Prince of Earth. However, before Endymion comes to the moon, she meets a man with midnight eyes named Darien. Will she stick to her decision?


Number of Chapters: 31          Total Size: 312k          Word Count: 57,257

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Nich - Friday November 07, 2008 at 04:47
beautiful story! I loved it!
angeleyes13 - Monday February 18, 2008 at 03:53
This was an excellent story. I am so happy that you were an author who kept with it and didn't leave us hanging and completed it. I am starting the Hope of Revenge tonight. You are very talented. Decided Bride had a great plot and I absolutely loved it!
2Twins2 - Monday September 17, 2007 at 13:01
This is by far the most amazing story that I have ever read on the website! You have inspired me to write better. In fact I'm starting somthing new that you have inspired me to write through this stroy. Your details were so clear and strong, you have taught me how to show then in the dialoug. Thank you again hopefully now I will actually be able to get a story fully submitted.

(I was also known as Taraciva Universa on this site before but got you know disabled because I got grounded from the net for like 3 months)

Well thanks again Anja your the greatest...well...besides Aria and Loki that is!
sweetxdisaster - Sunday February 11, 2007 at 02:53
a wonderful tale about how Serenity and Endymion met, those sneaky devils. I think it was written well, with only a few typos here and there. :)

One thing I'm wondering about however, is why you gave most of the characters their original Japanese names, and a few their American dub names (Lita, Negaverse for example)... It's not a big deal, just something that I was pondering.

Still, I can't wait to move onto the prequal and sequal. :)
jupiter_2005 - Saturday November 11, 2006 at 01:31
Oooo! I can't wait to read your next story that continues after this one. I enjoyed this one as much as I did the Prequel. Keep writing. I enjoy your stories.
XxMelaxX - Monday July 24, 2006 at 03:41
I loved It!!!!!!!! So what happens next :-) Can't wait to read the rest!!! keep writing and good work!!!
Anonymous - Saturday July 08, 2006 at 12:49
A cool story, the only thing is you have trouble with spelling, some typos, verbs, adjective use and other tiny inconsistancies that grate. [the grammer here is out: came Motoki's clear voice,should be, Motoki said clearly. and knee's, a plural and possessive here is wrong. I noticed these things mostly in chapter 8 on]. You have a great story. But sentences and typos and odd phrasing needs to be corrected.But keep going. You are obviously gifted.
SorceressBlkLady - Monday May 29, 2006 at 08:12
Damn...there's so much to say! It was awesome!! Not only did I have a great story that kept me up until...it's 4:09am...damn...but I also got a new favorite song out of it! *laughs* I never heard that song until you said to play it! I love how you used both japanese and english names...best of both worlds, there. Showing the difference between the moon and earth. At one point, I was actually confused...when Serenity's watching the welcoming and Darien pops up behind her I actually started talking to my computer like it was you haha. I started yelling "WAIT! WHAT?! I THOUGHT WE WERE AT AN UNDERSTANDING HERE!!" Then, I calmed down a bit and figured it out. All and all...awesomeness, Darlin!
Anonymous - Thursday May 25, 2006 at 06:06
Wow I was blown away by the fact that such a classic Silver Millennium fic as this is on AI. Wow! I wish more writers would do this, I mean, write a fic with imaginative Manga and such magic, romance, intrigue, suspense and well told story. Hey, I am blissed out with the romantic feel and the its humor and heaps more I can say. It is stories like yours anja that rock my world, and for any lover serious about Sailor Moon, basic to the list of must reads!!! Heheheheeee! Loves your other fic too!!! ^^
Sailor_K - Sunday May 21, 2006 at 20:15
This was the very first fanfic I ever read, and I absolutly fell in love with it. When it wasn't completed I had checked everyday, and was at the edge of my seat. It inspired me to read more, and is still my favorite fic by far.
Loki - Saturday May 13, 2006 at 20:16
An amazing epic

WISE, though there were a few things that need tweaking -- grammar, punctuation etc, those things aside, the story itself was amazing

Highlights:

Again, your characters were alive and animated, the emotional tapestry you wove and the imagery was superb. Your vocabulary excellent. The identity theme, a fascinating plot device, and it worked well and you carried it off to perfection. I also thought your timing was good.

Aside from the structural issues etc, I take my hat off to your storytelling talent and I really enjoyed your epic. Your imagery and world-building combined beautifully to bring it all together, you only have to clean up the typos and other things, but all-in-all, a good plot and enjoyable reading experience that can only get better with a careful proof-reading and edit. *hands you a cluster of silver roses and bows* =^_^=
mythling - Friday May 05, 2006 at 07:16
aw, that was really cute ^.^ the ending seemed a bit rushed though- i was actually expecting the story to continue with their adventures fighting against beryl, so i thought you were just trying to move the plot along more quickly. nevertheless, i really enjoyed it =)
galena_steel - Tuesday April 25, 2006 at 13:33
Wonderfully well written. You have a beautiful world and engaging characters. I really enjoyed getting to know them and to follow all the plot twists along. Now off to find the promised sequel...
SerraDee - Monday April 24, 2006 at 06:52
This story was so beautifully written! I notices you spelled Rei as Rai frequently, which was a bit of a beef for me. Also, the chapters were really short. I think you could have combined them to make for longer, more involved parts, which also would draw your reader in more. Your writing style is beautiful. You have strong flow, good descriptions, and some very witty dialogue.

Thanks for a great distraction from studying!
cittykat21 - Monday April 24, 2006 at 02:55
Their love shall conquer all. Children like parents. Cute way to describe the parents. I love how you update so quickly. *Waits patiently for the next few chapters*
katmouse1969 - Monday April 24, 2006 at 02:05
This is a great story. It is keeping me on the edge of my seat. I like the way you portray Serenity as a strong person in control of her destiny. Patiently waiting for more. :)
purple1793 - Saturday April 22, 2006 at 20:08
OH MY GOSH!!!! This story is brilliant!! please write some more soon!!!wow, i have a few favourites and this is going to become 1 of them. update soon !! thnx
starryice18 - Thursday April 20, 2006 at 13:15
Please, please, please write more soon!!!!!!!!
cittykat21 - Thursday April 20, 2006 at 10:04
Oh that is so sweet. Another excellent chapter.
starryice18 - Wednesday April 19, 2006 at 14:32
Please have the next chapter out soon!!!! I don't know how much longer I can wait!!!!!!
nalia - Wednesday April 19, 2006 at 06:04
Wow, love the cliffhanger. The story has good flow about it. Keep up the good work and try to update as much as possible.
Isy - Wednesday April 19, 2006 at 03:39
Darien's so evil!!! He's playing such a mind game with her. Wonder if Usagi will slap him silly after she finds out. This is so great. I love ur story so much. I look forward to reading more.
armobaby - Wednesday April 19, 2006 at 01:10
It's really good! Hope you update soon! -armobaby-
cittykat21 - Tuesday April 18, 2006 at 06:27
I love the way you've done this. So does this mean that Darien has done the same as Usagi?? Can't wait till for your next update.
starryice18 - Monday April 17, 2006 at 19:29
very good; please write more soon!!!!!
Midnight16 - Monday April 17, 2006 at 15:40
You have to continue! I'm not a really big fan of Princess Serenity, but the way this is written made it easy for me to get into the characters and love them.
cittykat21 - Saturday April 15, 2006 at 12:03
This is an excellent story. The relationship you have developing between the two characters is wonderful! I haven't seen any major errors. I can't wait for the update. Well done.
Isy - Wednesday April 12, 2006 at 08:06
Gawww. This is soo cool. I love this fic!!! There were some spelling mistakes but all in all this story is really well written. I love the way the couples meet and grow. Its really natural and everything flows. I can't wait for the next chapter.
babydee - Tuesday April 11, 2006 at 18:40
OH PLEASE FINISH UR STORY IT WAS GETTING SO GOOD .THANK YOU FOR WRITING IT. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. OH ALSO U ARE A REALLY GOOD WRITTER
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