Season: Alternate Reality
Story: Decided Bride|
Posted on Monday April 10, 2006 at 14:53 by Anja
Main Characters: Mamoru/Darien, Usagi/Serena
Genre: Humour, Romance
Princess Serenity had no intentions of getting married, and her mother was leaving to choice up to her. However, due to much needed peace between the moon and earth, she decides to marry Endymion, the Prince of Earth. However, before Endymion comes to the moon, she meets a man with midnight eyes named Darien. Will she stick to her decision?
Number of Chapters: 31 Total Size: 312k Word Count: 57,257
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|Nich - Friday November 07, 2008 at 04:47|
beautiful story! I loved it!
This was an excellent story. I am so happy that you were an author who kept with it and didn't leave us hanging and completed it. I am starting the Hope of Revenge tonight. You are very talented. Decided Bride had a great plot and I absolutely loved it!
|2Twins2 - Monday September 17, 2007 at 13:01|
This is by far the most amazing story that I have ever read on the website! You have inspired me to write better. In fact I'm starting somthing new that you have inspired me to write through this stroy. Your details were so clear and strong, you have taught me how to show then in the dialoug. Thank you again hopefully now I will actually be able to get a story fully submitted.
(I was also known as Taraciva Universa on this site before but got you know disabled because I got grounded from the net for like 3 months)
Well thanks again Anja your the greatest...well...besides Aria and Loki that is!
a wonderful tale about how Serenity and Endymion met, those sneaky devils. I think it was written well, with only a few typos here and there. :)
One thing I'm wondering about however, is why you gave most of the characters their original Japanese names, and a few their American dub names (Lita, Negaverse for example)... It's not a big deal, just something that I was pondering.
Still, I can't wait to move onto the prequal and sequal. :)
Oooo! I can't wait to read your next story that continues after this one. I enjoyed this one as much as I did the Prequel. Keep writing. I enjoy your stories.
|XxMelaxX - Monday July 24, 2006 at 03:41|
I loved It!!!!!!!! So what happens next :-) Can't wait to read the rest!!! keep writing and good work!!!
|Anonymous - Saturday July 08, 2006 at 12:49|
A cool story, the only thing is you have trouble with spelling, some typos, verbs, adjective use and other tiny inconsistancies that grate. [the grammer here is out: came Motoki's clear voice,should be, Motoki said clearly. and knee's, a plural and possessive here is wrong. I noticed these things mostly in chapter 8 on]. You have a great story. But sentences and typos and odd phrasing needs to be corrected.But keep going. You are obviously gifted.
Damn...there's so much to say! It was awesome!! Not only did I have a great story that kept me up until...it's 4:09am...damn...but I also got a new favorite song out of it! *laughs* I never heard that song until you said to play it! I love how you used both japanese and english names...best of both worlds, there. Showing the difference between the moon and earth. At one point, I was actually confused...when Serenity's watching the welcoming and Darien pops up behind her I actually started talking to my computer like it was you haha. I started yelling "WAIT! WHAT?! I THOUGHT WE WERE AT AN UNDERSTANDING HERE!!" Then, I calmed down a bit and figured it out. All and all...awesomeness, Darlin!
|Anonymous - Thursday May 25, 2006 at 06:06|
Wow I was blown away by the fact that such a classic Silver Millennium fic as this is on AI. Wow! I wish more writers would do this, I mean, write a fic with imaginative Manga and such magic, romance, intrigue, suspense and well told story. Hey, I am blissed out with the romantic feel and the its humor and heaps more I can say. It is stories like yours anja that rock my world, and for any lover serious about Sailor Moon, basic to the list of must reads!!! Heheheheeee! Loves your other fic too!!! ^^
This was the very first fanfic I ever read, and I absolutly fell in love with it. When it wasn't completed I had checked everyday, and was at the edge of my seat. It inspired me to read more, and is still my favorite fic by far.
|Loki - Saturday May 13, 2006 at 20:16|
An amazing epic
WISE, though there were a few things that need tweaking -- grammar, punctuation etc, those things aside, the story itself was amazing
Again, your characters were alive and animated, the emotional tapestry you wove and the imagery was superb. Your vocabulary excellent. The identity theme, a fascinating plot device, and it worked well and you carried it off to perfection. I also thought your timing was good.
Aside from the structural issues etc, I take my hat off to your storytelling talent and I really enjoyed your epic. Your imagery and world-building combined beautifully to bring it all together, you only have to clean up the typos and other things, but all-in-all, a good plot and enjoyable reading experience that can only get better with a careful proof-reading and edit. *hands you a cluster of silver roses and bows* =^_^=