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Story: Teacher Extraordinaire
Posted on Tuesday May 02, 2006 at 09:41 by Reyus
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Members Stories Season: Alternate Universe
Main Characters: Mamoru/Darien, Usagi/Serena

Genre: Drama, Humour, Romance

Rated: R
Status: Incomplete

Mamoru Chiba is a handsome, young teacher whom all the females of Juuban High wanted to be with... well, all except Usagi. The more Usagi tried to ignore him, the more the hot teacher seemed to be drawn to her.



Number of Chapters: 3          Total Size: 70k          Word Count: 11,835

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minna - Tuesday October 26, 2010 at 04:36
this writet is torturing us why doesnt he ever update anymore chapters COME ON REYUS PLEASEEEEE UPDATE ) :
dani8951 - Wednesday September 23, 2009 at 00:36
great story please update!!!
Nich - Friday December 12, 2008 at 03:27
OMG OMG OMG This story is truly a gem! I beg of you. wherever you are, please consider finishing this! I was totally captivated by this piece and I sincerely hope that you consider what I have said. It is truly amazing! Please pLease plEase!!!!!!
Nich
booba - Thursday February 21, 2008 at 04:27
WAAAAAA!!!!!! are you still alive?!?!? please update your stories! its killing me!
moonangel47 - Monday June 25, 2007 at 23:55
Great story...Keep Up
ardilla - Thursday February 15, 2007 at 09:00
please continue whit your fic:

Teacher Extraordinaire
The glass house.
flameblessed - Thursday January 18, 2007 at 03:53
Wow great story I totally love it so far keep it up!
Anonymous - Saturday November 25, 2006 at 04:53
I love the subtlety in your writing. You are very good and this story has me very entertained. I hope you update this. Great job!

(I've also read your other story, 'The Glass House', VERY good story, your stories are just so good!)
Lovely_Girl_12 - Sunday November 12, 2006 at 14:47
Why won`t you update? This story is so far one of my favorites and i am diening to knoe how it ends.....so PLEASE UPDATE IT SOON
stel - Saturday November 11, 2006 at 04:20
i love your story. i've been wait for a lng time for you to update. pls. update soon.... your a very good write. i've also read the glass house. i love is so much.so please update soon....
Anonymous - Sunday October 08, 2006 at 07:00
Reyus -- I love this, great tension between Darien and Serena, great images and love dialogue, and as for those wishing to get you to update, especially annon, give her a chance as she has a life to lead as we all do and tell her why you liked it and all instead of getting on her case, K XD sweethearts, but Reyus hon, we will all be ready and willing to give you praise when you do choose to update, so thunbs up for a great effort so far girl...you rock!
Anonymous - Tuesday September 12, 2006 at 14:57
when are you going to update?????????????????? PLS UPDATE SOON!!! I want to read this story. its sooo good!!!!!!
angelfire - Monday August 28, 2006 at 04:57
REYUS IS AWESOME!!! REYUS IS AWESOME
ANOTHER FAV!!!!!!!!!!!
sailorlunakitty - Sunday August 20, 2006 at 12:27
verry gooood!!!!
cinz_bunny - Friday July 07, 2006 at 11:17
Love it so much! Please continue soon!
Anonymous - Sunday June 25, 2006 at 04:56
Very interesting story! Please continue
searchingformydarien - Tuesday June 20, 2006 at 02:11
oh my god i love it! it's so funny, and i agree with minako, i can't wait for what happens next. but you know? i would really like to know what's going through chiba-sensai's head. is he ever gonna have a point of view?
til next time . . .
later
Lovely_Girl_12 - Saturday June 17, 2006 at 16:07
wow, this story is really amazing. I like it how you keep an eye for details f.ex. the sakura leaf as it was mentioned in another review before + i like the fact that the relationship between mamoru and usagi grows slowly, but constantly. This makes the story realistic.
So all in all i come to the conclusion that i am desperatly waiting for the forth chapter like a lot of other people here ;)
Anonymous - Monday May 29, 2006 at 19:13
I LOVE this!!! one of the best stories iv read, and iv read nearly everything on ariasink as well as other links! i hardly ever leave a review only to the ones which i LOVE!! plz continue!!
nina_girl - Saturday May 27, 2006 at 22:18
Yeah . . .those were the days.*Nina-dream like smile* High school, hot guys, and set-ups. 'I so worship you.'- something like that.

Waiting for the next chap.-Nina
Loki - Thursday May 25, 2006 at 11:43
Fabulous chapter

WISE, some grammar and typo things to tweak, but over-all, excellent writing & storytelling

Highlights:

As always, your characterisation, visual landscape and your use of language was superb -- humor, affect and mood all wonderfully done. The set-up with Ami being in no way aware what was up was a stroke of pure writing genius on your part. I loved the scene where Mamoru brushed Usagi’s cheek with his fingertips as he removed a stray Sakura leaf, so sweet. Looking forward to more! *hands you a Sakura bloom and bows* L. =^^_^=
Labyrinth - Thursday May 25, 2006 at 04:24
I've been checking ariaink everyday since last chapter for this update. I hope that her plan is not all not telling her all friends to help her win a guy, that'll be one chain of matchmaking mess. Too bad, this chapter does not have a lot of interaction between my two favorite characters. Please update soon.
cosmoscrystal - Thursday May 25, 2006 at 03:55
And the plot thickens.......Reyus, you know how to hook us! Update soon. I am loving this story!
anastasia_ng - Thursday May 25, 2006 at 00:20
omfg you are such a good writer omg omg omg omg i love it so much you have to update like now. Come on i know you want to. You have to some how put Chiba and Serena together soon they would so make a good couple!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lor06 - Wednesday May 24, 2006 at 23:59
Really good so far! I'm really enjoying the plot - just get to it faster! It seems like it's taking forever to get to any relationships and the sub-plots are practically nonexistant! Just push it along a bit more - write what you mean to write. I really am enjoying the story however. Good luck!
Loki - Thursday May 11, 2006 at 12:22
I was hooked from the start, truly compelling

WISE, Well, I noticed a lot of grammar, structure and punctuation flaws, and one alright that needs to be all right. In all honesty, I think if you get somebody to clean up all those superficial errors, this story will shine brighter than the sun!

Highlights: Characterisation was the first thing that struck me about your story. Insight into Usagi was beautifully done, those other characters around her were refracted fragments of light cast through the eyes of Usagi. The realist feel to the school and the events therein, well executed.

You have a good vocabulary and a great narrative style. The narrative held its own and supported your characterisation.

Visualisation was great and the last scene was clever and full of subtle meaning. I loved it. Just fix those structural and other errors and you will have a real winner on your hands.

In short, it is a great fic with a plot with real oomph, and the tension between Mamoru and Usagi is interesting as well. *hands you a basket of solid gold roses & bows* L.
Homie_G_Skillet - Wednesday May 10, 2006 at 21:35
I really like your story and the plot is something different, and new/ The only suggestion I have is to be more careful when using your tenses, you move to present then to past and future, just stick to the one. but great story.-homei g
Anonymous - Saturday May 06, 2006 at 02:22
excellent story,you deffentely caught my attention. hope to see an update soon
glicky - Friday May 05, 2006 at 19:29
I like this story a -lot-. I hope you update soon. You've done a great job making Chiba-sensei sexy and mysterious.

WISE I noticed two things: "it's a blur line" should be "it's a blurred line," and "you can be prejudice" should be "you can be prejudiced." These are utterly minor details, nothing that detracts from a very fun story.

Keep it coming!
Labyrinth - Thursday May 04, 2006 at 21:31
This is a wonderful story. What are the chances that he still ended up being her teacher, now twice in homeroom and chemistry. The irony makes it so fun to read. You introduced Jed in the first chapter so I thought the same will go for the rest but then I was surprise that Ryo showed up instead. I wish that the fic could stay light-hearted like this but it's rated R so I guess it will get heavier eventually. I wonder how this matchmaking plan of her will back-fired...all this just because she couldn't stand one person. Why can't she just not think about it?...Well I guess then there wouldn't be a story for me to read. Please update soon.
MMHYUM - Tuesday May 02, 2006 at 22:46
I love this story so far, Reyus.
Anonymous - Tuesday May 02, 2006 at 21:52
wow! i Absolutly LOVED it! PLZ continue!!!
misslanggam - Tuesday May 02, 2006 at 21:19
wow you post this story in here!!! cool. I love it. it is so different from the Glass House but that means you are such a talented writer!
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