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Story: The Untouchable Princess
Posted on Sunday August 13, 2006 at 08:46 by anja
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Members Stories Season: Alternate Reality
Main Characters: Mamoru/Darien, Usagi/Serena

Genre: Drama, Romance

Rated: R
Status: Completed

Prince Endymion saves Princess Serenity from a man who wants to violate her, but now she can't stand to be touched by men. The fate of the kingdom depends on her marriage though, so she needs a man with limitless patience to teach her love. Endymion promised to protect her, and he intends to keep that promise.

Number of Chapters: 22          Total Size: 333k          Word Count: 62,717

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Loki - Friday April 08, 2011 at 05:04
I finally got around to finishing the last chapter and epilogue, a beautiful and clever ending too, great work and hope you've got soemthing coming soon - take care <3
Nich - Sunday May 03, 2009 at 08:58
Wonderful story! I absolutely loved it!
Dagger - Sunday March 22, 2009 at 02:39
I love this story. It is wonderful and well written!
Moonmew - Monday April 28, 2008 at 08:19
You have a real gift for writing. I enjoyed every moment.
galena_steel - Monday September 03, 2007 at 22:38
Great story, wonderful characters. I loved the way you slowly worked out all the problems so it felt authentic. I especially love the interactions between Serenity and Endymion. So glad I read this! The epilogue is perfect.
sailormoonlover12 - Sunday September 02, 2007 at 21:50
whats the first storys nay?
Eternia - Saturday August 18, 2007 at 03:27 was sooo cute!! I'm glad you made an epilogue. Keep up the excellent writing.
SailorPheonix3 - Wednesday August 15, 2007 at 12:40
Wow what a wonderful way to end a story like this and given that Serenity is a forgiving girl and Anne was willing to repent what she has done and it suited or fitted with how Endymion is in itself. People can choose to be forgiving or wallow in hatred. Nice. Thank you for gracing us with this story!
princesa_angelbebe - Wednesday August 15, 2007 at 04:17
OMG this story was amazing! It was a true pleasure reasing it, I hope to read more of your stories soon, take care and keep up the good work!
ladymooncat - Tuesday August 14, 2007 at 21:24
ohh its over now =[
i dont think you could have ended this better though, i really did enjoy this story - it's now in my favourites ^^
Isy - Tuesday August 14, 2007 at 06:24
Oh wow. It really ended. Thanks for the story. It was so sweet but Anne really got off very lightly. Atleast she repented.
babydee - Monday August 13, 2007 at 18:45
thank you for finishing this story i thought that you did a wonderful job . Im glad that i read it .
sweet_bella - Monday August 13, 2007 at 15:04
That was a good ending. I enjoyed reading this story and your others as well. You know how to make the story amd where to stop them to keep readers wanting more.
cittykat21 - Monday August 13, 2007 at 10:43
Sigh. Wonderful ending. Makes one feel all happy and good. Well done.
Isy - Sunday August 05, 2007 at 07:19
Aww. They finally did it. And lets party w/ Diamond gone. Too bad theres a war coming because of him. This story is so beautiful! I look forward to the next chapter.
jenna - Sunday July 15, 2007 at 18:06
thats so sweet i almost want to cry. Great job on this whole story, i was never disappointed.
tinkerbell_18 - Wednesday May 16, 2007 at 14:55
Is that it? what happens? Does she finally get over her fears. What happens next? Is there another story that continues this one?
risoriality - Wednesday May 09, 2007 at 17:47
very well done, your writing is impressive! Keep up the good work.
SailorPheonix3 - Friday May 04, 2007 at 15:28
Sniffle. Wow the story is going to end? This was really great struggle between two Alpha males to dominant over the female. But righeousness won in the end. Cool.
princesa_angelbebe - Friday May 04, 2007 at 00:36
oh snap, how awsome.. great storie loved it!
princesa_angelbebe - Tuesday May 01, 2007 at 19:04
Aja so it was him.. I knew it! I can't wait to see what happens next.. I hope to read your other stories as well.. keep up the good work..
Anonymous - Monday April 23, 2007 at 00:19
SailorPheonix3 - Tuesday April 10, 2007 at 15:54
Oh my. IT all makes perfect sense. I can't wait to see how this story closes!
Eternia - Monday April 09, 2007 at 19:15 can't just Leave it there...oh the horror. please update soon!!!!
risoriality - Wednesday April 04, 2007 at 00:41
please update soon!
princesa_angelbebe - Thursday March 15, 2007 at 07:40
OMG OMG OMG OMG!!! Ok so He supposedly had nothing to do wiht it.. what about the link?? I bet he's running to it huh? I'm haing here.. you're awsome but please please please put me out of my missery!!
Loki - Wednesday March 14, 2007 at 18:25
Oh cliffy!

WISE: Lady anja, a few lil typos, but this was a thriller and also heart-wrenching.

The confrontation and the appearance of Diamond in his moon prison and no Serenity and his cold calculating bitterness towards Endymion, we know he's a snake and up to something, how is he doing it, what slight of hand, manner of magic, Dark, yes and how he gets away with it... Looking forward to your next offering! *hands you a crystal sphere and a moon tiara and bows* L.
Loki - Wednesday March 14, 2007 at 18:03
I loved the streams of narrative magic you wove in this chapter Lady anja

WISE, a couple of little typos, but otherwise superb writing

Endymion and his connection with Usagi-Serenity, so powerful and well told. I love your characterisation and Motoki and Naru, that was so sweet the way you wrote their interaction. Sterling chapter. *hands you a bunch of moon roses and a crystal pen and bows* L.
Loki - Wednesday March 14, 2007 at 17:46
Lady anja you keep proving how much of a mistress of mystery you are

WISE, beautifully written and flowed nicely

I loved the darkness, the surreal atmosphere of the Moon Palace, the image of the shimmering Earth, haunting, breathless and the characters, Diamond and even Luna and Artemis, dream-like and mysterious, the ending had the quality of nightmare about it, I know what Diamond is up to! Excellent chapter! *hands you a moon rose and bows* L.
tiegoil22 - Wednesday March 14, 2007 at 02:35
You're killing me here!
Another wonderful chapter, my dear. Please upload soon!
SailorPheonix3 - Tuesday March 13, 2007 at 17:52
What can I say my breath is caught it needs to be released. Waiting to exhale.
cosmoscrystal - Tuesday March 13, 2007 at 01:04
Anja, another fabulous chapter! WISE - a few typos but nothing you can't caught later down the road. Over all, totally brillant chapter. Looking forward to future updates! Hugs!
AshleyHill0626 - Tuesday March 13, 2007 at 00:35
Noooo! How could you stop there?!?! Please please update soon! This story is so good it hurts!!
ladymooncat - Monday March 12, 2007 at 18:09
brilliant briliant!!

but another cruel cliffhanger, please upload soon!!
SailorPheonix3 - Wednesday February 21, 2007 at 13:45
Cry. That villian...Prince Diamond made Serentiy think that Eny attacked to break her link with him and now Endy thinks she is dead. Oh this is a tragedy. I hope Ann gets what she deserves for betraying Eny's trust. I wonder though the Generals are not exactly there either too. Hmm, the plot thickens.
jenna - Wednesday February 21, 2007 at 13:13
This story keeps getting better and better. i love it.
cittykat21 - Tuesday February 20, 2007 at 03:37
Thats mean. The chapter was awesome as usual.
nalia - Monday February 19, 2007 at 19:57
Has anyone told you lately how extremely cruel you are?

Thanks for the update that led to yet another cliffhanger! (I'm telling my mommie)
ladymooncat - Monday February 19, 2007 at 17:07
gahhh you're so mean!!
finally an update but such a cliffhanger ending!!

im glad some questions were answered though, i LOVE this story
babydee - Monday February 19, 2007 at 14:15
your story is going very good i hope that the prince will find usagi soon. Update soon
your fan
astro - Monday February 19, 2007 at 08:54
you are utterly cruel, i hope you know that :p
SailorPheonix3 - Monday February 12, 2007 at 20:49
OMG! I read chapter 12 I think Serenity didn't realize that she loves Endy. Chapter 13 is tricky because I think she is being brainwashed through her dream to like Diamond more than Endy. I hope that Golden thread Endy comes for Usagi.
tiegoil22 - Monday February 12, 2007 at 20:46
Oh no! I can't wait for another update!
Anonymous - Monday February 12, 2007 at 14:06
Write more soooooon please please please!
I can hardly bear the wait!
jupiter_2005 - Saturday February 10, 2007 at 19:39
Can't wait to read the next chapter!
sweetxdisaster - Saturday February 10, 2007 at 18:55
I'm really enjoying this story and can't wait to see what happens next. I have some ideas of what I think is going on, but I'm sure you'll blow them away with something better.
gwenie - Friday February 09, 2007 at 08:07
Oh no, I can see where this is going! If Diamond and Endymion have really switched completely.. =X Bah, can't wait to read the next chapter :)
twine - Thursday February 08, 2007 at 17:48
I have to say that I wasn't very fond of this chapter. Your style is amazing, but the point of this chapter, and its length...left me lacking even the slightest explanation. If you could- please make the next chapter a little longer.

still- I look forward to the next chapter.
SailorPheonix3 - Tuesday January 23, 2007 at 20:54
She can't sense the string? Oh no, Endy hurry and get her back fast. You sure know how to keep us guessing. I think though Diamond either brainwashed her or took her back in time to when she was first looking at possible suitors? Oiy!
Critika - Monday January 22, 2007 at 15:52
Well, you definately accomplished the task of putting some suspense into the story. Of course, that's one of the things I've loved about Anja stories - they are not predictable even for us know-it-all readers. I'm looking forward to more as usual!
Loki - Sunday January 21, 2007 at 14:30
You are being a little of a mystery girl with this amazing chapter Lady anja! ^_^

WISE, a few minor typos and spelling things, but easily fixed.

The twist was intriguing, I wondered about a couple of scenarios, but I am really keen to see how this plays out and what you have in mind.

Poor Serenity is certainly in a difficult situation. I enjoyed reading this chapter and anticipate the next with enthusiasm. ^_^ Great job! *hands you a Moon Rose and a silver pen and bows* L.
starryice18 - Sunday January 21, 2007 at 03:48
Please get the next chapter out soon!!!! I want to see if Endy finds Serenity!!!!!
BuwanAnghel - Saturday January 20, 2007 at 05:14
i knew something wasn't quite right when i read this chapter because i remembered what happened in the previous chapter. i must say your cliffhanger was rather good, it really did leave me hanging after reading it. oh and i'm really happy that you finally got to update this story. i do hope you will not leave your readers hanging for too long though.
Anonymous - Saturday January 13, 2007 at 04:02
I really like this story. Filled with action and careful steps from Endymion to Serenity, and the last chapter was suspense filled as well. I did find a few mistakes, but I am sure these are no problem to take care of. Love your style! M. ^^
SailorPheonix3 - Tuesday January 09, 2007 at 19:45
A lot to think on a "who-done it". I like it. I'll keep track of it.
cittykat21 - Friday January 05, 2007 at 01:34
And there is a cliff hanger. The story is progressing well. I like how you've developed Serenity's character and Endy and Serenity's relationship. I look forward to the next installment, keep up the great work.
Eternia - Wednesday January 03, 2007 at 10:36
You can't just Leave it there......i need to know what happens next, please update soon. As always it is a pleasure to read your work.
Clara_Destine - Wednesday January 03, 2007 at 00:21
Oh no! You -had- to throw in a wrench, just when things were starting to smooth out! Of course I know that's your job, as the author of the story, lol. Still. *sigh* Now I really, REALLY want to know what's coming. That's the only thing I didn't like about the update; having to wait for the next installment >_<;;

I think you did an awesome job building up anticipation and action in this chapter. Nice twist, too! (I really thought we were done with him O__o;; Didn't see it coming).
Anonymous - Tuesday January 02, 2007 at 21:01
Amazing story, I like the turn of events. Please update soon!
SailorPheonix3 - Tuesday January 02, 2007 at 20:53
Thanks for the update. Omg, Usagi is starting to know Eny more better by his body cues. That was great! Can't wait for another chapter!
jenna - Tuesday January 02, 2007 at 18:59
i love it, another wonderful chapter. There was a few misspelled words but nothing serious. And im so glad that you are starting to write this one again, i almost thought that you forgot about it. LOL. PLease write more soon.
Rae - Tuesday January 02, 2007 at 16:35
such a good chapter it was great!!!!please write another soon
twine - Tuesday January 02, 2007 at 16:30
I agree that this chapter was worth the wait. Please update soon.
cosmoscrystal - Monday January 01, 2007 at 23:34
This chappie was worth the wait, Anja. Very well written; details - A+ Editing - A+ You ahve outdone yourself again. And I think that Prince D is a real jerk! I can't wait to see what Endy has in store from him. HUGS!
SailorPheonix3 - Thursday November 30, 2006 at 19:47 computer crashed and I missssed this wahhh! Ok, I am over my tantrum. Still an inspiring, awesome story. I am thirsty for more chapters! It was great that Sere wasn't too afraid to be with Endy through the storm so I really like it because for Sere she still has a lot to learn about Earth. Maybe she can travel with Endy to help the poor and remember not everybody liked him being married to someone who was not an earthling. Yep, things could get very interesting indeed.^-^
anastasia_ng - Wednesday November 01, 2006 at 22:49
OMG U HAVE TO UPDATE SERIOUSLY I LOVE THIS STORY !!!! and alls fair in love and war you have ot update you im a huge reader of ur works
starryice18 - Wednesday October 25, 2006 at 15:51
Yay, another two great chapters; more more, please!!!!! It's really good!!! :)
Isy - Wednesday October 25, 2006 at 00:18
Awwww. This is so sweet!!! She confessed her love! Awww. Its definitely a slow process that Endymion has to go through w/ Serenity. Even as a reader i'm feeling the slowness and the careful aproaches of each chapter. Excellent chapter and I hope to read more!
cel1999 - Tuesday October 24, 2006 at 20:25
I'm so glad that you update this so regularly. I really enjoy this story and your ideas - so simple and yet so nice to read. All the WISE criteria is there; so no reason to critique this really. Looking forward to the next chapter.
cittykat21 - Tuesday October 24, 2006 at 05:37
Another fantastic chapter! I'm glad to see that Usagi is starting to trust Endy more each day. Keep up the excellent work.
Cappuchino_Princezz - Sunday October 22, 2006 at 00:14
ah! what a cliffhanger. now i'm anxious to see if she has a panic attack again.
While the boyphobia is getting a bit old- I understand that it's necessary for your plot. The chapter was a bit short for my taste, but we don't get everything we want.
Congrats on another well-written chapter.
anastasia_ng - Saturday October 21, 2006 at 12:39
I love it ur so good
jupiter_2005 - Wednesday October 18, 2006 at 23:22
i can not wait to read more of your story. keep up the good work.
SailorPheonix3 - Monday October 16, 2006 at 19:11
That was a GREAT chapter! I can't wait for the other chapters to flow from your fingertips. Thank you!
OdangoBaka - Thursday October 12, 2006 at 18:30
KEEP GOING! Im loving this.
cosmoscrystal - Thursday October 12, 2006 at 02:43
Anja, you just keep improving. I love this plot. I felt like Endymion and yet, I could also feel Serenity's emotions too. You are truly gifted. I eagerly await your next update! Hugs! :)
babydee - Thursday October 12, 2006 at 02:09
Im loving this story more and more. Your doing a wonderful job. keep up the good work and please hurry with the next chapter.
SailorPheonix3 - Monday October 09, 2006 at 16:39
Please let there be dancing! ^-^
cosmoscrystal - Friday October 06, 2006 at 03:24
Wow Anja! Another great chapter! You really rock! I'm glad you decided to come to AI!

Hugs! :)
starryice18 - Monday September 25, 2006 at 17:45
Absolutely wonderful!! Please update again soon!!
thekawaiineko - Saturday September 23, 2006 at 08:01
as always another great chapter. the way you describe serenity and endymion is great, they just come alive. keep up the good work.
SailorPheonix3 - Friday September 22, 2006 at 15:01
I love this Chapter! It really made sense to have Endy think through as to how to win his fair maiden's heart. I like how you described the chess game and what it made him realize to do so that he can succeed. Makes me want to play some chess with my hubby again ^-^. As I've said it before I will keep track of the story no matter what. I feel that you are a generous and a thorough writer and the fact that you gave clarity to what Serenity charater is going through not just say the usual "she is scared". You really did justice with both Endy and Sere thanks!
Isy - Wednesday September 20, 2006 at 05:53
This is awsome. Anne and Allen will be a pain won't they, now that they know this secret. Gossips will run wild and who knows what will happen. I deffinitely like the flow of this story. I hope to read more.
midnyghtskye - Wednesday September 20, 2006 at 02:37
I absolutely love your story. It's so different from everything else out there, and that makes it really intriguing. Your characterization is amazing, and I love how you make the situations seems so real. I only wish your chapters were longer so that I'd have more to enjoy. Keep up the great work!
SailorPheonix3 - Tuesday September 19, 2006 at 18:42
Hehe I liked the story I can't wait to see the other chapters!
anastasia_ng - Saturday September 16, 2006 at 03:41
OMG this is one of the best stories ive read you so have to update quickly!!!
Darrien_4_Serena - Saturday September 02, 2006 at 00:55
ohhhh please dont stop! i love it! very different...!

love it all the same xx

love always D4S
SailorPheonix3 - Wednesday August 23, 2006 at 13:07
This is a good story. I am patient so I will keep track of it no matter what it takes lol.
thekawaiineko - Tuesday August 22, 2006 at 07:29
i really like the story so far. please keep it up and update often.
celeste - Monday August 21, 2006 at 08:27
I'm absolutely in love with the story line, and love how you capture my attention with your writing. I can't wait for the upcoming chapters. Your one of my favorite authors!! Keep up the awesome work!
cittykat21 - Friday August 18, 2006 at 13:27
Going well. You definetly come up with a few interesting plots. I hope that between the two stories your updates aren't few and far between. Looking forward to more.
SinfullySaintedAngel - Thursday August 17, 2006 at 22:26
Great story. Keep it up, I can't wait to read more.
OdangoBaka - Thursday August 17, 2006 at 08:53
Please, please, please keep writing. This is a wonderful story and i cant wait to read more!
Moon_Goddess - Wednesday August 16, 2006 at 17:55
Glorious. You did wonderful. I feel bad for Endymion, he's so loving and he cares for her and wants to know more, but she cannot be touched. So sad. When they need a heir...things will get difficult. haha

Keep up the marvelous work!
Moon_Goddess - Wednesday August 16, 2006 at 14:33
Well, you did a very good job. 1st person was a good choice and having it done by Endymion. Very good choice. Usually I don't like 1st person period, but since I have read your work before I thought I'd give it a chance. haha Good thing I did. You described the situations very well.

WISE- In a couple areas you forgot a word maybe because I didn't understand a few lines, then I figured out that maybe there should have been a word there and then it made sense. So, no big deal at all, just keep on a look out for it.

Other than that minor detail, you did wonderful. It kept my interest, it wasn't boring, and this is one of the few stories where Serenity has to be married before twenty not eighteen. haha

Keep up the fabulous work!
starryice18 - Monday August 14, 2006 at 15:49
Love it so far; please update soon!!
cittykat21 - Monday August 14, 2006 at 10:53
Going well so far.This should definetly be an interesting story. Keep up the good work.
cosmoscrystal - Monday August 14, 2006 at 06:26
Anja . . . another masterpiece! You rock!
babydee - Monday August 14, 2006 at 01:14
i like your story so far, but i wish that it wasnt in dariens perspective. I wish that you were the narrator, so that way you can feel the characters emotions. You can't really feel their emotions.I know you just started the story but i know you will make me happy .
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