Season: Alternate Reality
Story: The Untouchable Princess|
Posted on Sunday August 13, 2006 at 08:46 by anja
Main Characters: Mamoru/Darien, Usagi/Serena
Genre: Drama, Romance
Prince Endymion saves Princess Serenity from a man who wants to violate her, but now she can't stand to be touched by men. The fate of the kingdom depends on her marriage though, so she needs a man with limitless patience to teach her love. Endymion promised to protect her, and he intends to keep that promise.
Number of Chapters: 22 Total Size: 333k Word Count: 62,717
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|Loki - Friday April 08, 2011 at 05:04|
I finally got around to finishing the last chapter and epilogue, a beautiful and clever ending too, great work and hope you've got soemthing coming soon - take care <3
|Nich - Sunday May 03, 2009 at 08:58|
Wonderful story! I absolutely loved it!
|Dagger - Sunday March 22, 2009 at 02:39|
I love this story. It is wonderful and well written!
|Moonmew - Monday April 28, 2008 at 08:19|
You have a real gift for writing. I enjoyed every moment.
Great story, wonderful characters. I loved the way you slowly worked out all the problems so it felt authentic. I especially love the interactions between Serenity and Endymion. So glad I read this! The epilogue is perfect.
whats the first storys nay?
|Eternia - Saturday August 18, 2007 at 03:27|
Awwww...it was sooo cute!! I'm glad you made an epilogue. Keep up the excellent writing.
Wow what a wonderful way to end a story like this and given that Serenity is a forgiving girl and Anne was willing to repent what she has done and it suited or fitted with how Endymion is in itself. People can choose to be forgiving or wallow in hatred. Nice. Thank you for gracing us with this story!
OMG this story was amazing! It was a true pleasure reasing it, I hope to read more of your stories soon, take care and keep up the good work!
ohh its over now =[
i dont think you could have ended this better though, i really did enjoy this story - it's now in my favourites ^^
|Isy - Tuesday August 14, 2007 at 06:24|
Oh wow. It really ended. Thanks for the story. It was so sweet but Anne really got off very lightly. Atleast she repented.
|babydee - Monday August 13, 2007 at 18:45|
thank you for finishing this story i thought that you did a wonderful job . Im glad that i read it .
That was a good ending. I enjoyed reading this story and your others as well. You know how to make the story amd where to stop them to keep readers wanting more.
Sigh. Wonderful ending. Makes one feel all happy and good. Well done.
|Isy - Sunday August 05, 2007 at 07:19|
Aww. They finally did it. And lets party w/ Diamond gone. Too bad theres a war coming because of him. This story is so beautiful! I look forward to the next chapter.
|jenna - Sunday July 15, 2007 at 18:06|
thats so sweet i almost want to cry. Great job on this whole story, i was never disappointed.
Is that it? what happens? Does she finally get over her fears. What happens next? Is there another story that continues this one?
very well done, your writing is impressive! Keep up the good work.
Sniffle. Wow the story is going to end? This was really great struggle between two Alpha males to dominant over the female. But righeousness won in the end. Cool.
oh snap, how awsome.. great storie loved it!
Aja so it was him.. I knew it! I can't wait to see what happens next.. I hope to read your other stories as well.. keep up the good work..
|Anonymous - Monday April 23, 2007 at 00:19|
Oh my. IT all makes perfect sense. I can't wait to see how this story closes!
|Eternia - Monday April 09, 2007 at 19:15|
No....you can't just Leave it there...oh the horror. please update soon!!!!
OMG OMG OMG OMG!!! Ok so He supposedly had nothing to do wiht it.. what about the link?? I bet he's running to it huh? I'm haing here.. you're awsome but please please please put me out of my missery!!
|Loki - Wednesday March 14, 2007 at 18:25|
WISE: Lady anja, a few lil typos, but this was a thriller and also heart-wrenching.
The confrontation and the appearance of Diamond in his moon prison and no Serenity and his cold calculating bitterness towards Endymion, we know he's a snake and up to something, how is he doing it, what slight of hand, manner of magic, Dark, yes and how he gets away with it... Looking forward to your next offering! *hands you a crystal sphere and a moon tiara and bows* L.
|Loki - Wednesday March 14, 2007 at 18:03|
I loved the streams of narrative magic you wove in this chapter Lady anja
WISE, a couple of little typos, but otherwise superb writing
Endymion and his connection with Usagi-Serenity, so powerful and well told. I love your characterisation and Motoki and Naru, that was so sweet the way you wrote their interaction. Sterling chapter. *hands you a bunch of moon roses and a crystal pen and bows* L.
|Loki - Wednesday March 14, 2007 at 17:46|
Lady anja you keep proving how much of a mistress of mystery you are
WISE, beautifully written and flowed nicely
I loved the darkness, the surreal atmosphere of the Moon Palace, the image of the shimmering Earth, haunting, breathless and the characters, Diamond and even Luna and Artemis, dream-like and mysterious, the ending had the quality of nightmare about it, I know what Diamond is up to! Excellent chapter! *hands you a moon rose and bows* L.
|tiegoil22 - Wednesday March 14, 2007 at 02:35|