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Main Characters: Mamoru/Darien, Usagi/Serena
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Fantasy, Romance
Rated: PG13 Status: Incomplete
“When the Sun’s tears flow, a betrayer of the Moon shall murder its Light....”
She was the High Princess of the Silver Court. Those who look upon her lust after her unattainable beauty, and those who lust after power desire her dead.
To save Serenity, King Endymion commits high treason, risking an all out war with the Court. But does he dare break the ultimate taboo? Would he dare loving the unattainable?
Number of Chapters: 12 Total Size: 212k Word Count: 37,821
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 |  |  |  |  | Loki - Tuesday May 10, 2011 at 11:47 |  |
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 |  |  |  | Oh Bunny-chan, I hope you are going to continue this amazing story,, hope life is good girl! <3 |
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 |  |  |  |  | Eternia - Thursday January 29, 2009 at 07:01 |  |
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 |  |  |  | AHHH!!! How can it end there?! Please tell me that another update will be coming soon. Such a bad spot to leave it...
Sigh, you are an extremely gifted writer, and you had me hooked from the beginning. Please update soon, the suspense might quite literally, kill me.
~!*Eternia*!~ |
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 |  |  |  |  | Anonymous - Thursday January 01, 2009 at 19:25 |  |
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 |  |  |  | Oh my goodness. Excellent. Great chapter.
I hope you update soon |
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 |  |  |  |  | Nich - Sunday December 28, 2008 at 07:56 |  |
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 |  |  |  | OMG OMG OMG!!!!! I can't contain myself! What a wonderful new chapter! Please Please Please Please Please.....Please Please Please continue! Such a cliffhanger! You are so awesome! I am eagerly awaiting more! |
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 |  |  |  |  | daisystar - Saturday December 27, 2008 at 22:37 |  |
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 |  |  |  | i just started reading this entire fanfic in one sitting and i love it so far. i look forward to reading more of this, you really got me hooked, especially after reading this latest chapter. i hope both come out of this okay. i cannot wait. keep writing and updating. also, happy holidays!!! |
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 |  |  |  |  | Anonymous - Saturday November 22, 2008 at 21:02 |  |
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 |  |  |  | Very enjoyable, well written and well told. <3 |
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 |  |  |  |  | Ellourrah - Friday November 14, 2008 at 17:33 |  |
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 |  |  |  | What a fun, fairly well written little read! I just wanted to thank you for sharing this with us, and maybe give a little encouragement for another update, of course! Your plot is interesting (though I do consider that bit with mars somewhat of a sellout moment) but well, things like that happen in anime all the time.
As far as constructive criticism goes, it's well written, but would hurt at all to flesh out the paragraphs a tinsie bit more (this is NOT a bad comment, I say it to everyone, promise!) and the vocabulary is a bit superfluous. Other than that, very well done. |
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 |  |  |  |  | Nich - Thursday November 06, 2008 at 19:16 |  |
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 |  |  |  | Oh wow! This is a very very very good story! I beg of you please please please continue! I must know what happens! This story has truly captivated me! Please continue! |
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 |  |  |  |  | Anonymous - Wednesday November 05, 2008 at 10:54 |  |
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 |  |  |  | Please update again soon! |
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 |  |  |  | What a fantastic read, i was so wrapped up in it, that i didnt realise that i had finished i thought i had more chapters to go. I do hope there is more VERRYYY soon! Loved how you incorporated Loki your editior into your work, made me laugh :) D4S |
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 |  |  |  |  | Anonymous - Sunday November 02, 2008 at 16:47 |  |
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 |  |  |  | OMG! You’re updated!!! I love your writing. Great story. Looking forward to reading more! Please update soon! |
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 |  |  |  |  | Loki - Thursday October 30, 2008 at 16:07 |  |
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 |  |  |  | What a pleasure it is to read and to work on for you Bunny-chan! =^_^=
I love the way you bring the characters alive, you feel for and with them, see their faces and they move you, you're there every step of the way, I enjoyed the atmospheric touch, the flower rite, very much like old European traditions in Hungary and elsewhere, haunting, touching, splashed with a little humor, drama and the little twists and turns, amazing. I love this story and Endy and Sere, Luna, (we see into her character a bit more in this chapter) awesome!
A beautiful inclusion of lyric prose, and a cliffy, TR is a writer who will have you coming back for more and weaves worlds of texture and depth, reminiscent of Stormlight and other greats...a class act! *hearts* |
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 |  |  |  | I love this story as much as I love "Letters from Serenity" *hint hint* What a beautiful story you're weaving, I patiently wait for more. I did find the next chapter posted on ff.net that wasn't here, and I was very glad to have found it. Of course after reading I want to know who she chooses. Please continue soon, I eagerly wait for the next chapters. |
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 |  |  |  | WOW! I was at first kind of a little cynical when I first starting reading this story. The descriptions and details and history that you give to each chapter is a blessing! I am very happy to see such wonder in your writing and it was a breath of fresh air! Please continue writing I can't wait to see how the story unfolds and ends. |
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 |  |  |  | Great job!!!! I love the story so far. Can't wait to read the next chapter. |
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 |  |  |  |  | Anonymous - Sunday May 20, 2007 at 18:37 |  |
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 |  |  |  | Oh gosh this is soooo good, the characters, venus kicks butt, and you had me wondering about that boy... the whole chapter was brill, you rock... I love reading all your work TK, keep it up and love the scenery and the vocab and all. top rate!! ^^ |
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 |  |  |  |  | Loki - Saturday January 13, 2007 at 16:41 |  |
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 |  |  |  | It was a pleasure once again reading this latest chapter TR, ^_^ and working with you. I was enchanted as I read, and read it over three times to get the power and atmosphere you managed to generate for us.(I love Dead Can Dance, and anything of theirs is powerful, beautiful and evocative -- Lisa Gerard is a great vocalist and wrote the soundtrack for Gladiator, if people are curious to know who she is).
I can only say, that you never cease to amaze me the way you are continuously blossoming as a writer. It shows, especially in this chapter.
Beautiful characterisation, the images, the emotions and the otherworldly magic saturates the narrative and I can only say...Wow!
Mars, she was incredible and the temple scene, breathtaking.
Kudos for a wonderful and beautifully penned chapter! *hands you fiery red roses and a crystal wand and bows* L. =^_^= |
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 |  |  |  |  | Anonymous - Thursday January 11, 2007 at 07:28 |  |
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 |  |  |  | Simply amazing. I feel like I am part of it. Serenity and Endymion, I love this and your characterizatio is right on the money. Sooo cool! You are a great writer! ^^ |
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 |  |  |  | This story continues to capture me. ^^
Endymion's changing regard toward Serenity is what got me. They're both surprising each other. :D
Hee, Luna was funny in this chapter. X3
Good job! Lookin forward to reading more, and no rush. :P
Tesh-chan : ) |
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 |  |  |  |  | twine - Sunday January 07, 2007 at 07:49 |  |
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 |  |  |  | I look forward to the next chapter. I'll be waiting patiently....or at the very least I'll be trying to wait patiently. |
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 |  |  |  |  | Rae - Sunday January 07, 2007 at 02:39 |  |
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 |  |  |  | GREAT chapter please update again soon |
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 |  |  |  | This is beautifully written, the plot has its own uniqueness and your characters are well developed. The muses prose was well written and the story is flowing well. I look forward to future chapters. |
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 |  |  |  | Hi again! I finally got a chance to finish reading! ^^
I laughed a little in chapter 6 at Serenity's reaction to the horses. XD I also enjoyed her reaction to hats and parasols. She does seem a little on the spoiled side, but it's understandable being somewhere new.
Well done, I really like your style!
Eagerly awaiting your next update,
Tesh-chan : ) |
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 |  |  |  | Howdy! I just wanted to say that I'm enjoying your story and can't wait for the update. That whole card game scene is one of my faves (and of course the fencing scene!). You make it interesting and entertaining (which I need sometimes :) ). Keep it up! |
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 |  |  |  | Great story, i really love it, the characters are funny and caring you are very descriptive the plot is interesting and the dialogues are also very good..can't wait to read more....this story is amazing |
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 |  |  |  |  | Tesh-chan - Saturday November 25, 2006 at 05:22 |  |
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 |  |  |  | Great job so far! I just read the chapter involving Serenity and Endymion's fencing match. Did you do some research on the rules of fencing? ^^ It was cool.
*yawn* Bedtime. I wish I could write more, but I'm wicked tired... I'll definitely read more!
Tesh-chan : ) |
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 |  |  |  |  | Anonymous - Saturday November 18, 2006 at 21:46 |  |
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 |  |  |  | I love your story.. it's original! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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 |  |  |  |  | Tesh-chan - Wednesday November 15, 2006 at 06:49 |  |
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 |  |  |  | This fic is absolutely original. I love how it takes place in Silver Millenium times. Your descriptions are excellent. I would NEVER have thought of including Greek mythology in a SM fanfic! ^^ I've always been interested in it. I also like how Serenity's Inner Senshi are princesses, but the Outers are Queens. Their names are so pretty... ^_^ Did you do some research to find names?
Anyhoo, I love how the story's going from reading the prologue and 1st chapter. I'm sure these questions will be answered later, but who is Serenity's captor? Initially I thought it was Endymion, but it seems like it's a completely different guy. o.o
Good job, and keep it up! I'm planning to read more as soon as I can. :D
Tesh-chan : ) |
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 |  |  |  | Another great chapter!! :) This story is progressing well; I can hardly wait to read another chapter!! :) |
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 |  |  |  |  | Rae - Friday November 10, 2006 at 05:40 |  |
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 |  |  |  | wonderful story plese write more soon |
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 |  |  |  |  | Anonymous - Monday October 30, 2006 at 11:51 |  |
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 |  |  |  | *Dances around and does star-jumps* Wow! I feel this is such a great story. Plot I love, naturally... characters richa nd warm, truly real and lovable -- Love the humor and the images you weave, narration and style and all the grammar is really good and I am soooo in love with thisand got you in my fave stories of all-time hahaaha! So, keepin an eye out for more of it, *winks* ^^ |
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 |  |  |  |  | Anonymous - Monday October 23, 2006 at 03:45 |  |
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 |  |  |  | I understand that Endymion is annoyed at having to fight the princess but wouldn't he understand that anybody under that situation would fight to get away? I don't understand why he was so ANGRY. It doesn't make sense yet, they got along well the night before. But I want to see Endymion annoyed, it's positively delightful. |
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 |  |  |  |  | Rakusa - Friday October 20, 2006 at 06:41 |  |
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 |  |  |  | I'm do in love with this story! |
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 |  |  |  | Wonderful start! I was caught from the first lines. I think I know who the mystery man is but there are a few details that make me question my assumption. I can't wait to find out. Your characters are charming and your dialogue is wonderful, it flows very well. The whole mood of your story is really unique. It feels like a darkish fairytale - you know the russian kind that hardly ever has a completely happy ending - mostly coming from our mystery man I think. I love it.
If I had to make one suggestion is would be to not worry so much about readers following your characters 'new' names (I assume that was why you added 'Queen Persephone' in brackets that one time. I found it a distraction. If you do think its a problem maybe add a list in authors notes that people can refer to. But otherwise, its great. Keep going! |
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 |  |  |  |  | Loki - Friday October 13, 2006 at 19:14 |  |
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 |  |  |  | A beautiful and exciting chapter
WISE: I did find some structural, grammar and other flaws, like multiple (?!) no-no punctuation errors and such, but in this review I wish to confine myself to other aspects of your writing.
A fabulous narrative style, your ability to create worlds that set the tone of the Silver Millennium epic you are giving us is so vivid and truly amazing. I love the characters, they are real and have presence, affect amazing. Serenity and how she interacts with the other characters, even Luna, was beautifully done.
The plot is grand and the intrigue and the mythology and atmosphere you bring to the writing is first rate.
Your vocabulary and use of language, the prose by the Muses, and so much more was breathtaking.
So, just sort out those flaws and this story will truly shine!
All the best and looking forward to more. **hands you a basket of dew-splashed Moon Roses and crystal pen and bows* L. |
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 |  |  |  |  | Loki - Friday October 13, 2006 at 17:32 |  |
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