2013-04-22 11:34 In the name of Glamour & Glitter, Fashion & Fame…- Amy Mebberson http://t.co/icF4yx6qZW @amymebberson

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just finished chapter 35 - K that was super awesome, will read the next soon and looking forward to updates in the not too distant future *winks* ^_^ Great work!

You're an amazing writer, I want to read more of your stuff, more please K-chan? :)

Fantastic chapter is 29, and the humor, drama, suspense and the power of your style of writing K, is amazing! Seto, Miranda are a good couple, and I thought all the characters were so real, and present so let's see the team Senshi and team Kaiba go in there and kick some butt! *cheers em on*

I am on the edge of my seat, and you really know how to blend worlds and pull it off, visual images are amazing, the dialogue compelling and the world building, second to none. You make the the two fandoms flow as if they were designed to do just that.

Characterization is fabulous and the tension, suspense and the pace of the story is perfect. I love how you opened chapter 8 with Khepri flying across the room, but she is a pretty savvy kitty and landed on her feet after said charge, Zoe's impromptu nightmare, the moon cat is gorgeous and the dream sequence was filled with powerful images, and the battle awesome Satoshi is baaaaaaaad pure evil!... great chapter!

This is a really fascinating story, please continue ^_^

A powerful and action-packed story

WISE: loved the battle Lady K, be careful of some repetition with purred, groused, crowed and smirked. You do use other words to good affect, but I would use these mentioned here less and mix it up a bit. Some typos, but otherwise brilliant!

Highlights

I love your dialogue, the girls and Yuugi's friends hit it off so well and you write their interactions so naturally that anyone would think the two series were meant always to be together.

Characterisation is excellent, imagery is amazing, the dark themes and pure evil of the protagonist is well created and he sounds like somebody we'd all love to hate, and this villain makes Seto Kaiba seem a nice cheerful kind of guy.

I love the duel and how you've pitted both men against one another with the color, magic and mystique of Duel Monsters so faithfully -- truly magnificent. A great story and looking forward to plenty more fabulous chapters! *hands you a Winged Dragon of Ra card and a Luna and Artemis plushy a Tux rose and bows*

Wow! Amazing! Oh this is so darn good. I like reading your stories and this is incredible! Poor Mamoru, and even Pluto is non-plused. Kaiba is so.....him! LOL it is an all-round great chapter and flows beautifully. Keep up the uber work!

What an imaginative piece of fiction, I enjoy both Yugioh and Sailor Moon of course, but I am amazed at how well they go toggether. This is well written, a few little typo things, but easy to clean up. What is the most exciting part of this is the characters and how you described them. I like that. This is a great fic and I take my hat, 'if I had one' off to ya!!!

I am a big Yugioh fan, and I also love Sailor Moon naturally, I am intrigued by this story, it sounds really exciting and I love the way you're painting Yuugi and Rebecca, Kaiba hass himself in a bit of a mess doesn't he? Keep up the great work^^ M

The ultimatums are flying, the outrage Seto Kaiba feels is reaching fever-pitch! the call to arms is clear, but the rumbles are also present. I enjoyed this chapter and looking forward to plenty more! Well done K! *Hands you a golden pass to Kaiba-land and bows* =^_^=

Drama and humor fantastic!

WISE: I really found this chapter a contrast of good humor and finishing of with the intensity of a cyber-battle that Kaiba had to deal with.

The first part of the chapter with Rebecca, Yuugi and the gang having fun together, the restaurant, the quips, all in good fun, were great. I felt for Kaiba as we all know about how computers can be sooo, unco-oprative, another gem! *hands you a Dark Magician Girl Card and bows*

Let's Duel!

WISE: I really enjoyed this second chapter K, it was funny, well written and flowed beautifully. I loved the banter between Yami and Yuugi, it was priceless! ^_^ Rebecca was gorgeous and also she has indeed come a long way, it was a pleasure to read and as this is a Yugioh and Sailor Moon crossover, I am looking forward to how this fabulous fic unfolds... Well done and looking forward to reading the next chapter, which, BTW, I am about to do right now! XD *hand you a crystal duel disk and a moon wand* L. =^_^=

Hey, you got a great writing style, and I love cross-overs and the NaNo thing, it is so exciting, I could never do it, but, this is a good start, I love to see what and where and all with this one, so please keep the chapters coming, wants more, got to have more.....now -- but I am patient, *giggles*

A fantastic first

As this is a NaNo, I will simply say it is a fantastic first chapter, I loved the flow, the characterisation and the humor, Kaiba was typically himself, andI love his dry humor.

Anzu and Yuugi and the others you captured their essential natures and I love how it flowed, your visual descriptions and the fact you are writing this on the fly makes it all the more amazing for that. Well written and most enjoyable and I am hooked, looking forward to reading more! *hands you a Millennium Eye and Moon Rose and bows* L. *winks*