Posted on Thursday November 02, 2006 at 19:12 by Aria
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Number of Chapters: 13 Total Size: 271k Word Count: 52,316
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That was fabulous! I like the plot and the intermingling of mythical characters. . Little strange how Beth was sent away and not brought back and where did Mors go? Overall very well written. A pleasure to read!
|Loki - Tuesday July 21, 2009 at 02:34|
I'm innocent! I swear! I didn't do that to Ava! *hides in my temple in the Norselands* :P
Great chapter, lots of laughs, but the drama and magic were superb in this eighth encounter, now off to keep the fire nymphs up to date, Hmmmm, Loki has sooo much to do! *winks*
|heaven85 - Wednesday October 29, 2008 at 03:58|
I finally had a chance to finish reading this fic. I also totally agree that you should considering doing a sequel. The story was so well written and you ended it at a good spot where it could been seen as an end yet as a beginning for the sequel if you choose to write it.
Yes, I totally agree, there needs to be a sequel. And if you do not have time, and we can't convince you to loose sleep and work time for it, Lady D and I can write it for you, with your permission of course! ;)
|LadyD - Tuesday September 30, 2008 at 00:00|
I meant to say I hope you have plans for a sequal, please let me know if you do. Thank you! ^.^
|LadyD - Tuesday September 23, 2008 at 03:44|
I have plans for a sequal. It doesn't seem complete. perhaps a Goddess 101, now that she has taken Mors's position?
WHAT?! No... It is complete, but I am not yet happy about the ending. I want more! No fair writing a cliffhanger at the end of the story. Are you going to continue? Are you going to write an epology, or a second story on Ava's search? I beg of you, please continue. *wink*
|LadyD - Tuesday September 16, 2008 at 21:16|
you find the most perfect places to end. I swear these clifhangers are going to drive me insane. I loved this chapter, and I'm extremely excited for the next one. I look forward to reading the ending whenever that may be. keep up the good work.
I love your story! You are always imaginative, even giving the gods and goddesses their own human characteristics. Please continue, as waiting for the newest chapter every morning makes my day.
|LunaCorn - Friday September 12, 2008 at 05:39|
I absolutely adore reading this and can't wait to see where it is going to end up. You have a remarkable gift for imagery and story telling. Thank you for sharing.
|LadyD - Friday September 12, 2008 at 02:12|
I love this story and I beg you to post the next chapter soon! It's driving me insane not knowing whats going to happen next.
|Skysong - Tuesday September 09, 2008 at 06:29|
chapter 10 just makes you go AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
that's about as clear as my brain can put it at this hour. i pledge to WISE in the future, maybe when all the chapters are posted
|heaven85 - Thursday September 04, 2008 at 05:30|
Great work. I find the concept of the story very interesting. I enjoy finding more about her "other life". Can't wait to read what happens next.
|Skysong - Wednesday September 03, 2008 at 06:55|
It's so fun to read this again and get new chapters, but i'm afraid chapter three is missing. It's just chapter two again!
|Loki - Saturday April 12, 2008 at 14:23|
Definitely a great story, and I hope you continue with it as it is fascinating and aside from a few little typos, it is amazing!
|Loki - Saturday April 12, 2008 at 14:04|
I am up to chapter four, and I love the whit, the humor, and also, how effortlessly you shift the tides to a more dramatic and powerful element, that is a gift a lot of writers cherish and you've got it all covered, another great chapter, Jupiter's daughter, an endearing character. =^_^=
|Loki - Saturday April 12, 2008 at 12:59|
This story is so good, the more I read, the more I am taken into its wonderful crazy and hilarious universe
Flora, Fortuna and Venus, I bow down before thee in absolute mirth and story reverence, such a lot of fun! And, beautifully written. :D
|Loki - Saturday April 12, 2008 at 12:30|
Richly realistic and steeped in fantasy all at once
WISE, only one flaw, the 'alright' contraction, but writing at speed through Nano... it's an easy oversight, but otherwise, one or two missing little words, it was fabulous!
The first person POV you command so well, I like the place behind the eyes as a reader, you evoke so many memories of childhood and school days, I laughted a lot at the dialogue and the images of exam time, the stunts of Beth were a classic.
Ava's mother, I thought really sweet, and I could also see the love and good cheer between mother and daughter. Breakfast and the inner dialogue was impressive and most entertaining.
The fantasy aspect, now there's a punctuation point of the consumate storyteller if ever I saw it, and y0ou conveyed the images of invisible merging the realm of the fantastic with the stressful realism of finals.
Congrats on a great first chapter Lady AI! *hands you a crystal pen and a shopping voucher* LOL *winks*