2013-04-22 11:34 In the name of Glamour & Glitter, Fashion & Fameā€¦- Amy Mebberson http://t.co/icF4yx6qZW @amymebberson

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Oh snap! This chapter was too good to stop reading! I like how the way Jess and Toni was starting out being good friends. I like this chapter well thought out and well written too!

I liked this a lot. The character kinda reminds me of the different personalities of the Senshi put together. The tone of the story is starting off nice and I hope you keep up the great work.

I happened on this by chance, but you've got me intrigued. ^^

I really like the main character Toni and the tone that she projects in the narration. Very bold, witty and fun to read. (But what else would we expect from the bold, witty and fun Mae? XD) The rest of the characters, however, are still a bit of a mystery to me. They aren't quite distinguishable yet. You only have a chapter out, so it's understandable. Of the two guys (or who I assume are the two main guys) I'm not yet sure who to root for yet. ^^;

I thought it was clever of you to include the prologue because it really draws me to want to find out who the guy is. However, I felt that other parts of the prologue were a tad bit too vague for me. The scene seemed a bit too generic, and I believe it would have been more attention grabbing if you added a bit more information to the scene such as more background on how they ended up "tickling" each other or why the whole thing felt so surreal to Toni (besides meeting the guy by chance).

But I'm very interested to read the next chapter. I hope you keep churning them out. :D