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Crossovers: Free Me of My Demons
Posted on Saturday October 11, 2008 at 13:39 by saiyagurl87
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Members Crossovers Rated: R
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After some shocking events Sailor Pluto is forced to send Serena to the GW dimension. dark fic/angst/abuse


Number of Chapters: 23          Total Size: 316k          Word Count: 57,071

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Loki - Friday February 04, 2011 at 17:04
It is always a good sign when you read a story and don't stop until it is done, or near complete.

Ifound it intriguing, and the twists and turns kept me anchored to the story, you have a real knack for spinning a yarn, I am looking forward to the next chapters.

Something that might help with writing technique, hope you get something out of it, good work!

http://www.users.qwest.net/~yarnspnr/writing/adverbs/adverbs.htm
Loki - Friday February 04, 2011 at 12:33
Brutal, cruel, and very reminiscent of a true event; this was powerful, tragic, and though Darien is way OOC here, it is shocking to think him of all people capable of such a thing, though in RL it does happen far too often and in this respect it is an important piece.

I will say, you have a few grammar and structural issues, but a good BETA editor would help on that score, but those points aside, this is an important narrative and very confronting and disturbing; it has to be to raise awareness on this vital issue in the real world.

I am reminded of China Doll, I think it is, or something similar, and writers like Ellourra, vipaka and other writers who have written on this subject, I will keep reading and see where the story takes me, congratulations for writing this as I am sure it will help some people out there as well as for its own sake as a piece of powerful drama and poignant contemporary writing we need to read - well done! <3
daisybell - Monday June 14, 2010 at 08:38
omg!! ive been a member for almost threeyears now and this was amazing. i know you wrote this forever ago but you must finish!! this story had me from te very beginning.
cittykat21 - Friday March 13, 2009 at 05:54
Ohh suspense! Way to hook a reader.

Great work, can't wait for more.
StarGoddess - Thursday November 13, 2008 at 02:52
Continue asap. This is wonderful!
cittykat21 - Monday October 13, 2008 at 04:26
Looking good so far, though it may be wise to explain what GW refers to. The only anime I can think of is Gundam Wing.

A few spelling errors and you used "DW" at the beginning, but all in all a good start. Looking forward to more.
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