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Story: Paradise v2.0
Posted on Saturday October 06, 2001 at 20:33 by Aria
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Part Stories By Aria Season: Alternate Universe
Main Characters: Mamoru/Darien, Usagi/Serena

Genre: Drama, Romance

Rated: R
Status: Completed

Serena Jacobson thought her life was stable. She had a good job, a nice man was her fiancé. So how could one man turn everything upside down?

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Number of Chapters: 9          Total Size: 197k          Word Count: 36,883

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Johnetta - Tuesday December 21, 2010 at 03:27
Ahh, now I'll have to read the first Paradise story to see the differences. I always do this, read the second part first. Very good story!
kbpluto - Monday November 26, 2007 at 03:54
yaah! It was so goooood!
Sunwritten - Sunday August 05, 2007 at 08:00
Hey! This is an awesome story! I've been reading alot more alternate reality fics and i find them much more fun to read, but i haven't read an excellent & completed one in such a long time! you definitely have talent! i definitely love your works!!!
XxSailor_PrincessxX - Saturday August 12, 2006 at 14:55
I really liked this version of paradise that you wrote. I like this one better though compared to the first one. I would like to see another story with the same story line, but I would like to see the wedding!!
serenity01 - Tuesday June 27, 2006 at 19:56
i think that was sweet but i think you should add another chapter about the wedding
Anja - Saturday June 17, 2006 at 22:27

This story was very sweet and enjoyable to read. You wove the plot quite nicely, creating a dramatic fairy tale. There were a few typos and some grammar that needs to be fixed up. In chapter 1 for example, you wrote:

"He the folder he had been carrying down and looked..."

Little things like that are littered throughout the story. Overall it was pretty good though. I didn't really feel like I was reading a Serena/Darien story, just because they were a little too OOC for my taste, but the story was enjoyable. Good job.
nav - Monday January 02, 2006 at 18:30
it was a really nice story please keep writing i would like to read some more of your stories. so far i have read almost every story of your and i love all of them.
Missyface - Friday December 23, 2005 at 12:15
Keep writin!
sowme_chow - Thursday October 13, 2005 at 02:10
yay a happy end i love it!!! it's really good.the storyline was good well written. i cry a couple of the parts in the story its really good keep up the good work. it has become one of my favorites on here!!!
sowme_chow - Thursday October 13, 2005 at 02:02
omg i luv this fanfic a well done story i like it. u have done a great job keep up the good work. beautiful i love this story it is well written too good job!!!
beastofnature - Wednesday June 22, 2005 at 14:12
brill story.. are u goin to do the weddin and the birth of the baby... if so plzzzzzz contact me cos im fallin in love wiv this story.. it great..
moonangel4567 - Tuesday March 29, 2005 at 00:18
awe sweet write more
MMHYUM - Tuesday February 08, 2005 at 18:22
Another great fic! I like the twists in this story, esp with Malachite.

I hope to read more of your writing!!
Redroses - Thursday December 23, 2004 at 10:53
Loved the story. Keep up the great work.
Anonymous - Friday October 29, 2004 at 03:55
*TEARS* i really do have tears in my eyes, this story is sooooo! i don't even have a word to describe it because it was soooo SOOO damn GOOD!!! =] don't stop writinq i love all your stories
Anonymous - Friday October 29, 2004 at 03:55
*TEARS* i really do have tears in my eyes, this story is sooooo! i don't even have a word to describe it because it was soooo SOOO damn GOOD!!! =] don't stop writinq i love all your stories
WildCat - Wednesday September 15, 2004 at 16:03
I LOVE it. Can't wait for it to be finished!
Sailormaya - Monday June 30, 2003 at 06:20
Wow! That was so nice. Loooooooooved it!
lacyloss - Tuesday June 17, 2003 at 12:24
This Story was so omgod good i wish that you dont leave it like that i hope that you have at least an epilogue because the story was so good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!
cryina - Wednesday June 11, 2003 at 16:44
Please get the next part out soon! I love this story. Its too cute.HURRY!
Miaka_Sukunami - Tuesday June 10, 2003 at 20:05
*_* This story is so ADORABLE!!!! ^________^
Sailor_Angel - Friday May 16, 2003 at 06:31
fabulous! it was wonderful
Anonymous - Sunday May 04, 2003 at 05:03
OMG, this is my favourite story. Never stop writing Aria, you have a great gift. My compliments to you
Sovern_of_Evil - Monday April 21, 2003 at 16:39
Aria! You've done it again!

Making me fall in love with Darien all over again.....

Great story!

Lotsa Love,
ClaidiWinter - Tuesday December 31, 2002 at 06:14
AWWWWWWWWW!!! Wow that story was... WOW. lol i liked Paradise too, but i can't decide wich is better! I'm going to go buy your book tomorrow i swear! thank you for letting us have this wonderful site and for writing beautiful stories!

~Claidi Winter.
LiLo_LaO_eMoShUnZ - Saturday November 02, 2002 at 23:31
OMG!!! I LOVED IT!! hehehehe a wonderful story, couldn't stop reading it till i was at the last chapter poster.. i just loved the plot and everything!
Sabra - Thursday October 17, 2002 at 21:54
I love this story! It was awesome!
Anonymous - Sunday September 29, 2002 at 14:45
O how sweet* . . . . . but . . . . is there more ? he he he I hope so !
**Good Luck and Keep Up The Great Work**
MasacoMamoru - Saturday September 07, 2002 at 11:37
Ohh ohh!! Wonderful story!! I love it!! Almost....but not quite finished......I wanna see the wedding!! PLEASE!! Until then.......ja ne!

MasacoMamoru ^.~
Serendipity - Monday July 15, 2002 at 18:48
I luv this story!!! It is so good. But it says it isn't complete.... Do you have to add a epilogue or something?
LadyA - Thursday July 04, 2002 at 18:10
I can't believe I've spent all morning reading your wonderful stories! I am such a DID (Damsel in Distress) fanatic! Especially when the DID in question has such a wonderful hero to save her!

Thanks for all the hard work!
lovelyNori - Sunday June 30, 2002 at 17:48
I totally love this story...I especially love the part when Darien was on his knees....awww it was soo cute....
Anonymous - Sunday June 30, 2002 at 00:25
more more more!!
Anonymous - Saturday June 29, 2002 at 22:56
great story, as usual! im hoping thats not it tho... so if its not, keep writing!
Anonymous - Thursday May 30, 2002 at 15:40
Hurry up and finish the story, you're already so close to the ending!!!!
Anonymous - Friday May 17, 2002 at 22:16
I'm wondering, How are you going to finish it? with the wedding maybe, or maybe at some other special occation!
SereanaNicole - Tuesday April 30, 2002 at 01:35
Awww, I am such a sucker for sweet and sappy endings, Aria don't you EVER stop writing!
han_chan_imoto - Saturday April 13, 2002 at 16:53
*grabs story* I love this one too!It took a minute to get into it but it`s good.:) Dragon Ball Z is almost on!
Innocents - Wednesday April 10, 2002 at 20:57
Oo!!! Finally, I get to comment of Paradise!!! Yea! *Does a little happy dance* I've been waiting! *Giggles* Anyway, it was ultra sweet! I swear on my little black blook that it nearly gave me a cavaity!!! *Sighs* I thought that it was very romantic... Hehe, and as all of you should know, I love romance... *Looks around room at unsuprised faces* Yeah, like you don't! *Giggles again* Well, anyway, this was a very nicely written fiction Aria! I was glad to read it... *Whispers* Do you relize that I read this like, three weeks ago and I still remember it? Like I've said before... You rule! *Looks at everyone and says proudly as she can* Aria-chan and Ice-chan happen to be my fav. authors here... They totally know how to make a story work! *Sigh* To be like them! Hehe! Ja!
selenis - Friday April 05, 2002 at 02:43
Awwww... I LOVED IT!!! I would DEFINATELY read it again...and again... and again.... ok so i'm getting a little carried away! But I do have one exactly are ypu going to finish it? It seems ended to me... ah was GREAT :)
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