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Story: Wounded Souls
Posted on Saturday June 22, 2002 at 06:56 by crystal_rose
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Season: Alternate Universe
Main Characters: Mamoru/Darien, Usagi/Serena

Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance

Rated: R
Status: Completed

Something from Serena's past is affecting her present. As a physical therapist, she is brought in to the Shields mansion to help one Walter Shields, grumpy ex-business man and recovering stroke victim. There she meets his son Darien Shields, a millionaire playboy who's just as unlucky in love as she is.

Will Serena be able to put her past behind her so she can have a future with Darien?


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Number of Chapters: 21          Total Size: 946k          Word Count: 171,368

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heaven85 - Tuesday June 21, 2011 at 04:42
Awesome story. I loved it.
Laurence - Tuesday August 05, 2008 at 17:34
Iloved your story
xXJessieXx - Tuesday June 10, 2008 at 18:00
I absolutely love this story. I've read it at leat 20 times and I still find it as interesting and wonderful as the first time.

You did a fantastic job with this fanfic! Thank you for sharing it with us.
silvermage2000 - Friday May 30, 2008 at 16:44
This was a pretty good story. I liked how serena was still strong after what she went through. Darien was a jerk some of the time though. And shouldnt of acted like that. Though I think that if I didnt know about my daughter i would be abit upset to. I liked the romance in this it wasn't to graphic and fairly believeable. I am glad that serena got her own back against darien. Even though I think she should of taken longer to forgive him and abit fluffy. I't was still a pretty good story.
awakeandreeming - Friday April 11, 2008 at 23:56
Wow, that was one hell of a story. Lovely writing, beautiful characterizations, so realistic. I think I must've cried about ten or twelve times, especially around chapters nine and ten.
Wonderful job--keep up the great writing! :)
Anonymous - Thursday March 13, 2008 at 04:52
oh my god this is the second time I read this story I love it you make it seem like if the whole story is true and I love it congratulation keep up the good job
rainbabie - Thursday November 01, 2007 at 02:14
I love it!!! It's so well written. I love stories that make me tear up and then have a happy ending! Thank you for posting it...
Lena204 - Wednesday October 03, 2007 at 07:02
Wow! I simply enjoyed this fic, certainly one of the best in the Sailor Moon fandom.

I loved Serena's personality and her past, it was so real and you really understood her pain. Not to mention the dynamic between her and just everyone that she met. The ending was the icing on the cake, it certainly did the story justice.

Awesome Story, completely stole my breath away!!!!!!

-- Lena
Sunwritten - Monday August 13, 2007 at 17:41
I am with out a doubt overwhelmed by this story! I have never read a fanfic that made me laugh and actually CRY! I have to say it takes alot for me to even tear up, but you are the first author that actually got me to cry from just READING a sailormoonfanfic! You can see the passion you have for writing in this story, especially the way you go in detail in every emotion and the lives of each character, not just Serena and Darien. I love how you go in depth about their kids and how Raye and Amy later on went through their struggles. I applaud you on how you tastefully wrote the problems Serena had to go through and how Darien would later have to deal with. This is an extraordinary piece of work and I wish you the best in all that you that and hope you write more stories, as it is evident that you possess great talent and have innate writing skills to invigorate imaginations!
Sunwritten :)
princesa_angelbebe - Wednesday August 01, 2007 at 19:03
this is a trully wonderfull story I was so happy to know you had finished it. I hope to read more of your stories in the future! good luck.
saphrylle - Saturday June 16, 2007 at 08:00
This was amazing.

Are any of the stuff on AriasInk ever on ff.net or anythin???

I've been reading since 7 and i finished at three. In the morning.

TGIF!
Anonymous - Tuesday May 22, 2007 at 04:17
Wow.. that was amazing. I completely understand how this is the no. 1 favourite story!! =]
moonchild08 - Monday April 09, 2007 at 03:42
great story!
ladymooncat - Friday February 23, 2007 at 18:57
I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVED it!!!

It was SO well written, especially when Serena went back with Isabella and got the cold shoulder, you expressed her feelings perfectly. And it wasn't rushed either, nor was it cheesy. I really enjoyed this, and I will be adding this to my favourites!!
Lazifelicous_2-18 - Wednesday December 20, 2006 at 19:48
This story was written so exceptionally well. I laughed tons of times and wanted cry several other times(but being the ever cynical thirteen year old I am crying didn't happen). C'est magnifique! This story is wonderful.
sawabawa - Wednesday November 08, 2006 at 15:24
Loved the story~! Keep it up. =D
Usagiandmamoru4ever - Saturday September 23, 2006 at 01:45
This is my favorite fanfic yet! It's soooo well written. I love how you really captured the carachters and went in depth about their background. (I also loved your use of the word "Stud muffin"...one of my favorite words...lol) Also how you didnt make serena innocent and shy, it was great. i also found the part about serena finding out it wasn't her fault and those names werent true very moving. This was one of the best fanfics ever, and i can't wait until more of your work comes.
mooniceblue - Wednesday July 19, 2006 at 19:30
I love this story it's so great one of the best serena and darien story
Jolaine - Friday June 30, 2006 at 03:02
I read this story all at once.... I was addicted! The story was awesome and so nice to read. Good job!
XxMelaxX - Friday June 30, 2006 at 01:27
I've read this story so many times and it still brings tears to my eyes. I love your work, keep it up!!!
Anonymous - Tuesday June 20, 2006 at 04:43
A bit average, if you ask me.
CrossWings - Sunday June 18, 2006 at 22:08
WONDERFUL story! I know you get that a lot, but really, it was great. I couldn't stop reading! Keep up the good work!
Alana-Cherice - Saturday March 18, 2006 at 07:22
This is a really good story... ....even though it took forever to read. I really liked it. crystal rose you're a good writer

Luv,
Alana Cherice
RenaMoon - Tuesday March 14, 2006 at 03:32
Although it took a while to read. It was very much worth the effort. Excellent job. You're a VERY talented writer.
I loved how you kept the original personalities of the characters. Yet still made them different. GREAT JOB!!!!!!!
babydee - Monday March 13, 2006 at 17:35
you did a excellent job on this story i felt as though the characters were real. it was a little long but hey it was worth it! keep writting.
Adins - Wednesday March 08, 2006 at 23:21
Well I gotta confess I'm not really into the whole romance thing but this story was the exception. My only critique is that I started reading around midnight one evenining and ended up being frightfully late for work the next morning, having only recieved about three hours of sleep. ;D

It was getting rather eerie at some points the way the story echoed my own reservations about relationships, but I guess everyone is in the same boat more or less and it all depends on your situation. Anyway, great stuff keep it up.
Anonymous - Wednesday March 08, 2006 at 12:31
This is probably the best story I have ever read. I loved it! I cant wait to see what comes next from you.
Lialyn - Wednesday February 15, 2006 at 20:18
OH MY GOD!!! This is one of THE best stories I'ev ever read in my entire life (and trust me when I say that I've read quite a few). I love the way you slowly made the story grow and progress over time. I find that a good amount of authors who write stories with an extensive plot, just like this on has, they tend to release information about the characters in their stories a bit too quickly. There are just some bits of information that should be left for later chapters. I didn't see any anything like that at all while I was reading. Although, you need to be careful about dragging out certain peices of info for long periods of time. For instance, the time that Darien was miserable when Serena left.There were specific parts which I felt did not need to be included because you were basically restating the same thing. When these little tibits came up I felt it was basically pointless and repetitive.It sort of left me hanging on the for a tiny bit and I was like, COME ON ALREADY!! But all in all, it was good, very good. Leaving your readers wanting more is a great skill that many authors need but very little have. And you are most certainly an author who is very accomplished when it comes down to this. You just need to perfect it a litte bit more. Remeber, there's a big difference between enticing the reader to read more and unecessarily stretching out certain pieces info. You are so definently on your way there. Ok, enough with the constructive criticism.
I LLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDDDDDD ITT.
I am soooooooo glad at the way this story turned out. It was the perfect ending. Keep it up and keep me posted on when you write more stories.
Missyface - Friday January 20, 2006 at 16:18
I cried & laughed. It was brill. Please keep writing.
beastofnature - Friday December 30, 2005 at 14:53
IMMM BACKKKK!! finally i have found your story again, i saved this story and when i lost internet access i could not remember the name of the story i was guted i have spent over 30 hours tryin to find ur story, i have found and read again and still i want to cry and still u left me speachless, this deserves every award goin this is still the best story by far, wel done girl, im really proud of u n this story.. please if u ever wanna tlk you no how to get me...thank you for this pleasure..xxxx
kimmy xxxx
nav - Wednesday December 21, 2005 at 19:05
hi this is the first story that i have read and i really like it it was funny at first buy after it was very sad that i cried so much but it is different from other stories as it tells about some real facts that happen. once again the story is fantastic.
Nasuki - Thursday December 08, 2005 at 00:20
this story is good i love it its so good i like it
inugirly22 - Tuesday November 29, 2005 at 04:04
wounded souls is one of the best stories i have read congrats
katmouse1969 - Monday August 29, 2005 at 15:55
That was great! I laughed, I cried, I couldn't stop reading. I throughly enjoyed the story. :)
cosmoscrystal - Monday August 08, 2005 at 04:24
I loved it! It have emotions you could feel! You have a wonderful talent! It's one of the best I've read!
GoddessSerena - Sunday July 31, 2005 at 01:53
I liked it vry much!
I hated it because since it was long I had to read it in 3 day, it was hard to stop reading! LOL after everychapter I wanted to read more but I knew I had to stop to go to bed!!

Well again it was a very good story!!
Can't hear more from you!
Silver_Art - Saturday July 02, 2005 at 16:31
This is a fantastic story, makes me cry ;p
KittyCrazy - Thursday June 16, 2005 at 01:44
Congradulations on such an awesome story. It was amazing. It had me laughing, crying and on the edge of my seat in anticipation of what was to come next. You are an excellent writer, awesome!
freaky - Monday March 28, 2005 at 03:30
i loved the story! absolutly love it^^
Anonymous - Monday March 14, 2005 at 00:20
I love this story. I could not get myself away until I finish it.
beastofnature - Thursday March 10, 2005 at 20:36
omg i think im gonna cry again... your story stopped time, i cant say a word to describe your fanfic... im speachles.. all i can say is do more stories and especially ones like this.... im actually speachless and still cryin..... loves you lots and i hope you can produce more like this

kim.. a number 1 fan of this fic
Anonymous - Saturday February 26, 2005 at 02:32
This is a lovely story. It's the third time I've read it but the first time i reviewed since i just started reviewing recently.
I like your other stories as well and can't wait til the next one if you decide to write another one.
dragonborn_crystal - Monday February 14, 2005 at 10:53
This story rocks. Congratulations!!!!!
MMHYUM - Thursday February 10, 2005 at 19:03
This story really captured my mind. I found myself on the verge of tears at some of the situations Serena had to endure when she came back to the Shields home (especially with what had happened in her past). I love how you gave life to Darien's parents, and I enjoyed seeing Walter's "transformation" from being a grumpy, stubborn old man into somebody Serena was able to turn to and trust.

Great, great story!
Anonymous - Sunday January 09, 2005 at 02:54
Good Story really good sorry for Darien and Serena for not being able to have some.
Anonymous - Friday December 10, 2004 at 20:57
Finally I just finished reading it .I think that this story is really fantastic and interesting. I would recommand anyone , who hasnt read yet , should.
rajah - Friday July 30, 2004 at 07:07
this story is really great
Moon_Goddess - Wednesday July 07, 2004 at 02:10
I am in love! That was the best story I have read! Great Job!

Moon_Princess
amaterasu-no-ki - Tuesday June 29, 2004 at 07:04
Hey, I really like this...it's so original -- never seen anything like it before -- and I'm really liking the character development. At least Serena and Darien aren't fumbling around, but they're self-assured adults, and I love the characters of Walter and Candace Shields!
Colors - Tuesday June 15, 2004 at 07:30
I read your story so long ago, and just browsing through today.. the title caught my eye, looking awfully familiar, nothing something i ever did the first time i read it, even though i highly doubt you'll ever ead this, I just wanted to tell you that your story was probably the best i've ever read.. I remember trying to print it out for when i went on vacation without a computer.. horrible, isn't it? You are an awesome writer, anything you write has got to be wonderful.
Anonymous - Thursday June 10, 2004 at 21:15
Wow...verrry loooongg...but very gooood too! You have a talent...keep on using it!!
lyss - Friday May 14, 2004 at 10:10
that was nice!! very sad...i was telling my friends the story n there were all "u must tell me what happens next!!"
selenis - Tuesday February 24, 2004 at 04:40
Ok so my review isn't going to be as long as the one before this one, nor is it gong to be as er... shall we say informative, but I liked this story a lot! Well thought out and well executed, great job! Yeah, the part i liked the most was seeing all the Canadian/Toronto references (haha zellers... and understanding how far it actually is from queen and yonge to the CN tower, lol)But this is my second time reading this and it just keeps getting better! Look forward to seeing more of ur work!
Loki - Tuesday January 27, 2004 at 18:50
I must say CR, as this is the first story of yours I've R & R , its certainly deserved the praise its recieved. It has a stratified structure, blending the real & surreal in a brilliant tapestry of human emotion. I found the intensity both cathartic & very moving, tears are the hallmark of any good story, & most writers strive to evoke this response ffrom our readership & you've succeeded ... Your story possesses the power of a V C Andrews novel, re-its narrative tension. The character's interactive dynamism was truly amazing. The issue re-child abuse struck a heartfelt cord ... I believe such accounts can stir us to heal deep wounds many of may relate to, cultivating empathy & awareness- you've succeeded in this regard, I salute you. Reviews can sometimes spark emotive reactions in others as sometimes the story can shake the heart & soul cutting a little too close tfor some, but it may be part of a healing process not just a review-flame as they may be grappling with their own issues just hitting out ... so don't be discouraged as there are few flaws in your fic. I love the SM references, the horses names & Dianna the kitten, sooo cute! ... I love the humour and the strength of the human spirit & hope this story promotes-The sub-plots re-Sere's family & friends was also worthy of praise as these balanced the central plot... the atmospherics & visualisations ... Isabella & the parenting of Darien & Serena's children are gorgeous - truly heart warming ... over all your story stands as a testiment to the ability to overcome all adversity with lots of love, courage & determination! *gold roses showering down for CR from Tux! many bows*
Neilrose - Tuesday December 23, 2003 at 12:12
my dear CR,

three words, to paraphrase The Phantom from PHANTOM OF THE OPERA. BRAVI BRAVI BRAVISSIMI! nicely done. very poignant and very entertaining. methinks we have an issue with the Outer Scouts. looking forward to more masterpieces and a suggested challenge-Beryl NOT being her usual b***hy self. peace out and again a terrific job.
hikkifan - Saturday November 29, 2003 at 12:26
;_; great chapter!!!
hikkifan - Saturday November 29, 2003 at 12:26
;_; great chapter!!!
SweetDreamer - Tuesday November 25, 2003 at 17:39
There are no words that can describe this story. It took my breath away. The writing, fabulous... ENTERTAINING. I just couldn't keep the tears of laughter out of my eyes. Amazing..... Breath-taking..... Inspiring...... Humorous.... THE BEST EVER!

..~..*..~..A Fan..~..*..~..
Sweet Dreamer
Anonymous - Wednesday October 29, 2003 at 01:01
This is the one of the best stories I've ever read. You're great and should keep writing good things!
temptress_kitten17 - Wednesday October 08, 2003 at 07:05
I love this story! I love it so much that I would copy it by hand chapter after chapter just so that I could read it whenever I wanted to. Of course if I did that I would definitely write your alias on the top of the pages so that nobody would think I wrote it. Your story is just so captivating. I laughed when Serena talked about how she would eat shoe leather and wood glue, and when Darien did that soliloquy. I cried when Serena's mother died. I was in suspense every time Serena and Darien had a fight. I love the name you came up with for Serena's child and also the meaning behind it. Beautiful. Keep up the good work!
Angel_Grrl - Monday October 06, 2003 at 21:04
*does the Snoopy dance of Joy*

It's finished! It's finished! Bathroom scene....my imagination...cold water now. Kudos to you and now...
>>
DaSuPaDuPa1 - Monday September 08, 2003 at 22:57
Beautiful, magnificient,wonderfu; and shoot I can't of anymore dang that was such a good story hhmmmmm that story won me over write when you put "Nobody Knows" by The Tony Rich Project my favorite song in the whole wide world in it. Thanks to you this story got me through many nights that would have been boring if i didn't have this story to read. Thankyou for not stopping it this story is truely amazing
Kamikaze_moon - Monday September 08, 2003 at 20:29
This is a great story! I love reading every bit of it. I hope that u will continue to write great stories like this one!
Anonymous - Saturday September 06, 2003 at 06:28
Oh, say can you see by the drama's early light... what so awed we just read in the chapter named seven... WOW Girl, forget TNT you know drama ^_^
Anonymous - Saturday September 06, 2003 at 06:13
WOW! Just finished chap6.. that was very tender the way you handled the sitch there .. I apreciated the realism .. Keep it coming !
Danie - Saturday September 06, 2003 at 05:38
Just started and I object to the orange joke. The word is awww rang ... not oooh range!!!! Ha, but this is a really good read..I see why it is# 1.
Selena_is_Aprodite - Thursday September 04, 2003 at 22:51
I really liked this story! It shows that all women are strong and in control of their decisions. One of my best friends was, you know, and when she read this story, she thought she could at least try to get out of her depression. Anyways, keep up the good work!!!
Lyna - Tuesday August 19, 2003 at 23:00
Your story captivated me and I spent hours reading it until I clicked on the last chapter, instead for studying for my exams. But it was worth it!
Wonderful! =)
It's been such a long time since I've discovered a good story so thank you so much!!
serenashields18 - Tuesday August 05, 2003 at 18:24
If i haven't mentioned before, i like and hate this story at the same time. i hate the fact the two had to go through so many obsticles, however, it make the story a lot more interesting, as i obviously have to admit. and as any U/M or S/D lovers/ supporters would agree, as long as the two are together in the very end, it's still a good fic. Once again, CR had a outstanding write!
SilverRunningWater89 - Tuesday July 29, 2003 at 00:26
Oh yes, I am DEFINITLY glad that I skipped studying and taking my pills for this! ^_~ Wow, you finally finished it! It's such a great story, written fantastically and kept us hooked on the lives of Serena and Darien. You did an amazing job portraying Serena and Darien wonderfully and I loved how you took your time and didn't rush the story. Fab job and I can't wait to read more form you!
andreadm - Monday July 28, 2003 at 06:26
i love this story it one of my fav. keep on writing
Wreath_of_Roses - Monday July 28, 2003 at 03:44
All righty! I can finally post my last review! (Darn freaking computer)

(Scene Graveyard: Dark and dreary day)

We have gathered here today to say good bye to "Wounded Souls." May we never forget the good times that we all shared together, and always keep WS in our hearts. WS's road may have come to an end but we will always remember it fondly.

(Bag-pipe music plays)

All right everyone lets get out of here and go for some Italian! (Everyone cheers and rushes out)
Cherry - Saturday July 26, 2003 at 22:38
Fantastic! One of the best Sailor Moon stories Ive ever read. The epilogue was extremely interesting and just felt like real. Hope this is not the last I read from you. Congratulations.
Xnedra - Saturday July 26, 2003 at 03:02
wicked! absolutly bloody wicked! this is such a good story! it made me laugh it made my cry it's a total literary wonder-piece. i've been reading this for a very long time -it's kinda what really got me into sm fanfiction, and i started reading it on ffnet, so sorry i havent given other reviews -im just lazy. regardless of expectations and possibly some critisicm you have written a story that is so original and doest conferm to dodgy sterotypes and cliches! i dont even think that i can write a review that's good enough to express this - so i'll just stop
Jenn
crystal_selene - Saturday July 26, 2003 at 02:53
i was hoping for another chapter but i found something BETTER...an epilogue..it was really good.. i really liked it,it ended very nice..hope we find another good story from you soon....lol
yadrianne - Saturday July 26, 2003 at 02:34
wow
that was awesome
I'm gonna miss it, although there's always rereading
hoping to a new story.
you're an awesome writer
rampant_desire - Saturday July 26, 2003 at 00:30
I ABSOLUTELY love..... wait i adore ur story!!!!! GREAT JOB!!! *gives a high five, then gives a bone-crushing hug* ((/^_~\))
Sailor_Angel - Friday July 25, 2003 at 20:48
*wails* WAHHH!!!!! Hmph, WS is over *pouts* at least I'm not waiting impatiently anymore but still.....Oh well, JUST GET MORE STORIES AS GOOD AS THIS ONE OUT SOON!!!!! kapeesh?

~*S.Angel*~
RENA630 - Friday July 25, 2003 at 20:17
Oh CR I loved it! This story made me laugh and cry and scream at my computer! I cant believe its over! You did a great job with it! I hope you have a new fic in mind cause I want to read more of your stupendous(sp?) writing! Luv ya!

~*RENA*~
PsychoBunny - Friday July 25, 2003 at 19:35
Congrats on finally finishing your story! That was amazing! I'm truly sad to see that the end is finally here but it was well worth the wait. The story was marvelous, excellent, wonderful, great, magnificent, ect. Your probably sick of all the flattery but I just couldn't help myself. (Course, who could be get tired of that?) I hope you keep writing cause I love your stories. I can't wait to see what you do with Six Degrees! *wink*

~Good Luck~
PsychoBunny
GlitteringFairy - Friday July 25, 2003 at 18:46
Congratulations with your wonderful story!!!
Great job! I have truly enjoyed reading your story, and it was definitely worth waiting for the final chapter! I hope to see future stories written by you.

-smiles- Bye.
lacyloss - Friday July 25, 2003 at 12:52
Crystal... This story was good!! I praise you for writting it!!! I just want to cry knowing that this is the end of wounded souls!!! I just hope and pray that you write another sailormoon story!!!! I beg of you to... please!!Even if you are not wanting to go in the writing buisness i praise you that you should!!! you have good writing talents!! and i hope that you use it to the best of your ability!! And if you decide for writing in your career just to let you know that i will be your first buyer of your first book!! Good Work!!!
Darrien_4_Serena - Friday July 25, 2003 at 06:24
noooo...it is finished i can't believe it!!!!ohh well fantastic story thow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
crazzieblue - Friday July 25, 2003 at 05:16
That is the perfict ending!!!!! this is much better than a wedding!!!! it was funny and sad at the same time. I really loved this story! and i'm so excited about the ending. Great job! i can't wait to see what you come out with next
StarletteX - Friday July 25, 2003 at 04:18
omg...i love this story. i absolutely adore it. haha. i think i am gonna go back and read it 10 more times!
ChibiJ - Friday July 25, 2003 at 03:21
*cries* it's over...

I will so miss the updates to this story. It has made me laugh, cry, and read for hours on end. Of course, it will be reread often...
raPsteZ_o2 - Sunday July 06, 2003 at 03:34
WOW this stoey is sooooo great I'm soo glad is not over yet Please Update SOOn Cr You're doing a fantastic job.....U are a great insperation to me and many other writers out there..so please continue!
raPsteZ_o2 - Monday June 23, 2003 at 17:34
WOW!!! that was really good CR!!REALLY REALLY GOOD!!!~0*
Hope u update soon and congrats for achieving 10000 views heres one more LOL!!
hikkifan - Wednesday June 18, 2003 at 10:37
Wah Scarborough *o* I go to school there! hehehe That's right, US citizens, we don't say, "a-boot" o_0;

great chapter crystal_rose ^^
hershey - Tuesday June 10, 2003 at 22:52
This is absolutely the best story I have ever read. I have never cried so much, actually I usually don't cry for sad parts, my eyes just get watery, but this time actual tears fell out of my eyes!(Just for the sad parts) It is so detailed that it seems I'm actually there watching the whole thing like a movie. I LOVE IT SOOO MUCH! It's sooo sweet. Please continue your work. It would be so tragic if you stopped.
RENA630 - Monday June 09, 2003 at 10:29
i completly adore this fanfic! i love it i love it i love it!!! please update as soon as you can!!!!
XxMelaxX - Saturday May 31, 2003 at 14:43
I LOVE this story...and I mean it...You really got me into it, and even made me cry. I like how you balance out your story with the sad parts and the funny parts. I don't really know what to say except I love this story...Keep writing!!!
Anonymous - Saturday May 24, 2003 at 00:26
totally love this story!!! keep up the great work!! and update soon
Freyja - Thursday May 22, 2003 at 09:12
That was a wonderful story! i havent finished reading the 3 remaning chapters yet but i just have to compliment you on your amazing work! It was amazing! i absoloutely have to leave a review.! i get touched reading well written stories esp with godd drama. Again wonderful work!
Dcahill124 - Thursday May 22, 2003 at 00:09
i just wanted to say that i started this novel back in god, maybe july? august? and it was extremely well written then. even now as i finish reading it, i think this is one of the best fanfics that i have ever read and tops my list of my top 10. this story is amazing with its ups and downs. it makes you cry, and it makes you laugh. this was an amazing story.

(this is Poshers)
scruffy0133 - Friday May 16, 2003 at 19:37
This story is with out a doubt the most awesome romantic and just the greatest fanfiction out there!!! Can u write a sequel? PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ariel - Friday May 16, 2003 at 03:14
I'M so happy this storie is finish. It was sooooo very good. And I'm just happy that everything whent well with the both of them. Loved the chapter!!!Great Storie!!!
darknessangel - Thursday May 15, 2003 at 22:08
yay they worked out i hoped they would i can't wait for the next chapter i hope it's out soon i don;t think i could wait for more than 2 weeks at the most for the next one well until then thanks for right this story it's close to heart and it's was great to read bye
MG - Thursday May 15, 2003 at 01:56
wow...that was nice...very waff...places me in a good place...I'm in a good mood now.

mg
darknessangel - Thursday May 15, 2003 at 00:41
i think ur story is really raelly great i can't wait for more and one last thing me real name is ambrosia like the wife of the vp in this chapter and i've always gotten the best complimeantson it and it was surprising to see it in this story but a pleasent surprise lol well thanks again
Usagi_Usako_Chiba - Wednesday May 14, 2003 at 19:23
Is Serena going to find out that Darien slept with trista???
TeenAngel518 - Wednesday May 14, 2003 at 00:02
WOW!!! I just love your story!!! I hope your next chapter will come out soon. KEEP WRITING :-D
Wreath_of_Roses - Wednesday May 14, 2003 at 00:00
Hmm...Let's see...14 new chapters since the last time I've been on. Read that...read that...that was weird...I'M HAVING VISIONS, THAT CAN'T BE A NEW CHAPTER OF WOUNDED SOULS!!!! IT IS!!! (gasp...choke...*THUD*) (doctor steps up) We regret to inform you that Wreath of Roses has collapsed due to extreme shock produced by authors that haven't updated for quite some time. If you want to keep this or similar episodes from happening to others, remember to update your stories in a timely fashion!!!

(Several days later) Well now that I have recovered, I just want to tell you, CR, that that was a great chappie. Sweet and spicey...TRY ALL THE FLAVORS OF CR'S FAMOUS WOUNDED SOULS IN A BUN!!! There's Bitter Sweet, Light and Fluffy, and Lemon Pepper!!!
Anonymous - Tuesday May 13, 2003 at 21:49
Great job CR..I loved the story line, not quiet what I expected, but great all the same:). Can't wait till you Complete the story, I'm looking forward to an interesting ending.....Oh and a congrats goes out to LS too (can't thank the author without mentioning the editor).
CrystallineLily - Tuesday May 13, 2003 at 21:33
omg, you FINALLY got this chapter out! Even if it WAS good, very good, so good that I could read it all over again, I was waiting for...just about HALF a YEAR. Geez...O, this isn't finished yet, is it? 'cause then...that wouldn't be good

Oh, and was the rumor about the lady who originally wore the ring? The person got cut off by Darien...

~C Lily~
bluegurl - Tuesday May 13, 2003 at 19:59
Oh my gosh!!!! u finally updated, i've been waiting monthes for this chapter to come out and woot woot its finally out i just wanna be the first to sumbit a review although i haven't read the the story yet, but i will as soon as i'm done writing this review. *speechless* i luv u!!!i still can't believe it.
austin - Tuesday May 13, 2003 at 14:27
CR the ending was beautiful, it was well worth the wait. I bet the next story you write I'll be buying from Barnes and Noble. Congrats on finishing an outstanding and exremly well writen story. (congrats to LS also)
Acid - Tuesday May 13, 2003 at 10:22
Whoa, haven't read this fic for ages...

Mistake:
1. Unable to resist, he leaned over and teased the pout away from her lips using her own.
A: using his own, maybe? otherwise it doesnt make too much sense.

2. ust as soon as the perfect opportunity presented itself.
A: Ust..? hehe, what language is that? *grin* is it like 'ustard? *laughs* ^_~

Awww, very nice.
Glad to see it finally has an end.

Acid.
Xnedra - Tuesday May 13, 2003 at 09:55
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh it's finnaly done oh oh ohoh so so excited -this was truely wonderful -and who gives a damn if it took 6 months it was worth it! you have no idea how fast my heart raced when i saw that you had updated!
wow-i'm speechless -that was great hope you write more in the future -you truely have talent
Aurora_21 - Tuesday May 13, 2003 at 07:19
YAY!! Another fantastic chapter!! Thankyou Crystal Rose!!
lil_usako - Tuesday May 13, 2003 at 05:28
sniff sniff...i waited so long 4 dis...
EvilIllusions - Tuesday May 13, 2003 at 04:35
WOW!!! So good! I loved it
Lilbluebear - Tuesday May 13, 2003 at 04:33
OH MY GOD!

CR: I love it! You're a goddess! I've been waiting forever for this chapter. I can't figure out which part I love the most.... my favorite angsty part in chapter 13 - The Last Straw or this chapter with the conclusion. *sighs* Pssh! Love it all! Girly, you're awesome!
Jamestown - Tuesday May 13, 2003 at 03:44
YOUR ALIVE! *runs and hugs author to pieces* Where have you been young lady we have been worried sick? *while smothering author w/a pillow* Its good to read from you again and once again you did an excellent job. Keep it up! ;-)
Angel_Grrl - Tuesday May 13, 2003 at 01:37
As always, very good.

I was totally blushing during some *ahem* provacative scenes....

and I want that ring. Emerald cut...ONE DAY I shall have thee.
Joey - Tuesday May 13, 2003 at 00:38
ah.....great happy chapter.....
contin. pleaseeeeeee
silly - Friday May 09, 2003 at 23:27
i really enjoy this story and cant wait till the next the next chapter comes out
raPsteZ_o2 - Wednesday April 23, 2003 at 21:21
WOW!!!!!!!!!that's all i have to say....this one of the best storys out there!!!one of my all time favourite storys!!!can't wait till the next chapter comes out i'll be the first one to read it LOL!!
you are a really really talented writer!!
update sooN
bai bai *wink*wink*

~* mar mar *~
Lucilla - Monday April 21, 2003 at 01:28
I love your story so far. There is no pressure in writing the next chapter. I've given you a much longer review at Fanfic.net, but I hate it when people post the same review twice so this is the shorter version. If you want to read the longer one (with much more articulation), then you know where to find it. Good luck with the rest of this story!
Aurora_21 - Sunday April 06, 2003 at 02:34
Your story is AMAZING so far!! It's one of my favs!! Take all the time u need 2 finish it, although I'm crossing my finger that it'll be soon!! Keep up the good work!!
Anonymous - Sunday March 30, 2003 at 00:33
Are you ever going to post
Anonymous - Saturday March 29, 2003 at 04:22
Cr, ignore that flamer person. Just concentraite on whatever you're doing, and don't let them give you stress. ^^ And anyways, if that person's so brave, then why didn't she put out her name earlier? ^^
Anonymous - Monday March 17, 2003 at 01:38
spent less time writing about people flaming and more on writing more chapters.
Violet - Sunday March 02, 2003 at 03:25
I love it, and all your story is really good. Please keep on writting
Sovern_of_Evil - Saturday March 01, 2003 at 00:45
Great story! I'll be watching, and it's ok Cr, take your time. I'll wait because I love this story so much! Made me cry.........now.....the hard part is, finding another tear-jerker......^^
PrincessSelene - Sunday January 12, 2003 at 10:27
CR, I've got to hand it to you. Do you have some sort of drawer full of talent that you're hiding from the rest of us so we can't have any? ^_^ Honestly, this story has made me cry so many times already. I've sighed in happiness, felt the emotions that the characters felt....all I can say is damn! You can write one hell of a story, hon! Take your time writing the next chapter while the rest of us eagerly salivate for it. I'm sure it will be well worth the wait.
Once again, congratulations on such a fantastic story. Maybe you should submit it to be published sometime? It is that good.
Anonymous - Sunday January 12, 2003 at 08:02
You are so hypocritical. You can dish it out but you can't take it. So what if a person had an opinion that you didn't like. It's life. There's bound to be things you don't like. Just because you can't see that your story has bad characters and a stupid plot doesn't mean that you can just go on and on about a person who was just expressing herself to begin with.

Oh and by the way. I can dish it out and take it. So bring it on. I don't care.

Your story was flamed by Crazy Ball of Fire
Aallycat - Saturday January 11, 2003 at 04:52
This story was awsome. I cant wait for the next chapter
CrystallineLily - Saturday January 11, 2003 at 01:53
well....update soon....I hope
CrystalMoonBunny - Saturday January 11, 2003 at 00:23
**wow** This is one of the best fics i've read in a long time. I absolutely love it.. Im hooked... (need to print for keeping).

Im usually picky about what fanfics i deem so awe-some but this is just amazing. Please try to get more chapters out if you can, cause im just addicted to this story now.

Don't let the flames bother you cause they prolly just jealous of such a great and creative person you are to make a story like this.

I'm already trying to be pstient for the next 1 or 2 or 10 chapters to come out.

:o)
Anonymous - Friday January 10, 2003 at 21:40
why don't you just poet what you have done to make people happy.
Anonymous - Friday January 10, 2003 at 00:04
i love your story!!!! It's the best fanfic in the WORLD!!!!!!!!
MarshAngel - Thursday January 09, 2003 at 13:51
I've read through the greater part of this story so far and while I'm enjoying it I have to say there is a hole in this story that just baffles me enormously. Why is it, if Darien is so very much in love, is he pining away like an ass as though the concept of using the phone has completely eluded him. He hasn't tried to call her, write her, contact her in anyway??? It just doesn't make sense. He has tons of money, he knows where she lives and he doesn't know why she's mad at him. if she's the love of his life why hasn't he even tried to visit her or find out what's wrong?
That just leaves a huge hole in the plot and it counters logic all together.
Anonymous - Thursday January 09, 2003 at 05:05
:( you shouldn't listen to those meanies, I mean really... Anyways, if it a takes you 2 years to put out another chapter I'll wait. You're stories worth it! Take as long as is necessary.
Anonymous - Wednesday January 08, 2003 at 20:30
It must take a whooooole lot of double sided surgical tape and a degree in physics to make an empire waist, strapless and backless gown to stay up!
Anonymous - Wednesday January 08, 2003 at 12:20
Why do you car so much when people flam you??????????
Deny - Wednesday January 08, 2003 at 08:01
Hi, to say that I love this story is an understatement. I am so Loving this story I Have been all 17 chatper in the last 2 days. I could wait to get back up and read somemore. I was sad to come to the last chapter so please hurry and updat. This a very good story and I don't remember seeing on ff.net I read there all the time I can't believe I missed it there but I'm sure glad I found it here. Bye see ya next update
cfluter - Wednesday January 08, 2003 at 05:14
first of all, great story!

secondly, i think that the reviews corner is set up so that other readers can give the writer encouragement and some positive suggestions. well, apparently someone has decided to be pretty negative and has the nerve to call readers of CR's stories "people with bad taste and no lives." all i would like to say to this person is that if you don't want to be of any positve help, then don't even bother writing a review. and if all romances could be as simple as get together and live happily ever after, i guess there wouldn't be a lot of angst, pain, etc, would there?

last of all, to crystal Rose, keep up the great work! i'm looking forward to the real chapter 16.
Anonymous - Sunday January 05, 2003 at 03:09
How dare you leave us hanging like that! Please keep writing! I really want to know what happens next!
cici - Friday January 03, 2003 at 10:04
okay girl it has been forever since a last update...i hope the chapters are comeing along and i hope to see new chapters out soon...your a great writer and this story is great;)...well keep writing
Anonymous - Wednesday January 01, 2003 at 14:17
Are you ever going to update
Anonymous - Monday December 30, 2002 at 07:13
Hello! Might I remind people of a little thing called freedom. Everyone's entitled to their own opinions. So what if you don't like someone's reviews. It's not like you can do anything about it. And this story, totally overused and stretched out way too much. I mean, if you're gonna put them together just to split them up again, you might as well just kill everyone. Stop wasting your time thinking up plot lines. Everyone's read em sweetie and the only thing you've gained are people with bad taste and no lives.
Yeah yeah, you're going to ask me what I'm doing reading this fanfic then right. Yeah well I thought this was going to be good. I mean, look at all the reviews. But this just turned out to be another waste of time and if you know any better, revise it. If not, then this just better go into the original stories section. Everything about the characters has changed and the only thing that you kept were the names.
This was uninspiring, and not at all satisfying. And you know what, I don't care that I flamed your story. It sucked and I thought you should know that. People are so ignorant these days.
Kawaii_Neko84 - Monday December 23, 2002 at 16:26
*sinffles* That story was soo good CR, you have to finish the next three chapters or I'll come to your house and stalk you. ^_^;
cowgirl - Saturday December 07, 2002 at 10:49
i have read this story 10 times or more
i have saved it in my favourites cause i don't want to lose it.
you are a fantastic wrighter
tell me when you are wrighting more!!!!
well got 2 go
ps wright more stories
*cowgirl*
Lilbluebear - Thursday December 05, 2002 at 06:40
I love your stories! Heheh... I could barely tear myself away from the computer to attend a program. Must do physics hw now before I end up rereading this story again.
Anonymous - Wednesday December 04, 2002 at 02:41
When are you going to update?
Uzume - Tuesday December 03, 2002 at 09:02
Today I discovered the disadvantage of finally getting my phone hooked up... people call me and take me away from reading this story! It was amazing. I loved how you developed the details of the story, from just hinting at Serena's problems to finally explaining it all. When it all came out I had tears in my eyes. The same goes for other scenes, like the parts where Serena's being treated like an outcast in the Shields mansion. I wanted to kill Candace! It says something that I got so emotionally involved with the characters... er, not in a psychotic way, really! I just got so wrapped up in it I had so much sympathy for Serena, hated Darien in parts... even though I understood his point of view too. And I loved the parts that made me laugh out loud. I like the balance of seriousness, sadness, and happiness. It had a great plot, great characters, great writing. I picked out some grammatical errors but hey, nobody's perfect :p I really enjoyed it and I plan on reading your other stories soon.
Anonymous - Saturday November 30, 2002 at 05:41
You really need to read your new reviews at FFN. Some are down right hilarious and then some are...their seems to be a fight going on with your readers. Good stuff.
Anonymous - Thursday November 28, 2002 at 13:18
i've read this story a few times now and i'm still not sick of it yet. Your style seems to have changed a little since the beginning. I loved the whole thing even if the plot got a little dark but i guess its reality and we can't change it. Waiting for the next installment in this little saga...SJ
Anonymous - Thursday November 28, 2002 at 12:34
All man i hope she get's the 16th chap up soon. this is the second story i didn't finish. Well anyway the stroy was great! Everyone who has or will read it will know what I'm saying SO GET THE READIN'

Leni
Anonymous - Thursday November 28, 2002 at 12:25
Hey this is Leni and I just read the 15th chapter it was great of course So GET READING!!!!
Anonymous - Wednesday November 27, 2002 at 08:41
I just finshed the 12th chap. It was great but sad so read it if u want to find out what happened!!

Leni
Anonymous - Wednesday November 27, 2002 at 06:51
this is LEni again I'm going on the 12th chap i can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anonymous - Tuesday November 26, 2002 at 01:15
This is Leni and i got done with the 6th chap. Of course is't GREAT SO READ IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anonymous - Tuesday November 26, 2002 at 00:36
I'm going to give myself a review name so you all will know who sent this. It's Leni. I just read the 5th chapter it was SO GOOD!!!!! All of you who see this read the story!!! REALLY!!!!!!!
Anonymous - Monday November 25, 2002 at 23:20
I 'm about to go to chap. 5 and i know it will be good along with the rest of the story so READ IT~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anonymous - Monday November 25, 2002 at 03:39
I"v just got done with the 1st chapter but i know it will be a great story so everyone who see looks at this review READ THIS STORY!
Anonymous - Monday November 18, 2002 at 19:00
I've been checked back everyday for an update!!! Please post the rest of the story!!! I'm waiting for a sign!!
Anonymous - Sunday November 17, 2002 at 04:49
From: CuteLilRedHottie@hotmail.com
To: crystal_rose

You write sooo good! I was so looking forward to chap 16 but den it was just a AN. Dun't listen to wut Gigi seys. She doesn't knoe anything and aparrently she has too much time on her hands. Dun't let her get to you. Your story was so beautifully written I was crying. My mom thought I was heartbrokened or something... LOLZ... It's sooo good... You got to keep it up!!! OR ELSE I'M COMIN AFTER YOU!! Just Kiddin... hehe... I knoe where u post!! LOLZ... Just messin again... You are a talented writer and don't let people mess with you. Though some parts I didn't want to read cause I was sooo mad at Candace... hehe... Keep it up!! Love it!!

Lizzie
Anonymous - Sunday November 10, 2002 at 16:45
Wonderful Story!!!!!!
Anonymous - Sunday November 10, 2002 at 05:27
omg!!!!
dis is the best stor ever!!!!!
i love it
i love it
i love it
update soon!!!
SilverRunningWater89 - Thursday November 07, 2002 at 05:19
First of all, that Gigi (which means something along the lines of c**t in Chinese I think) is a c**t of a whore! (the name was rightfully chosen) You are one of the best authors in fanfiction history! You're right, she is jealous that she doesn't have as much talent you! (well... we all are jealous) but unlike any *normal, lovingly sweet supportive* PERSON, she flames you whereas we shower you with the praises you *deserve*. Those who don't appreciate or realize talent are slower than me, which goes to say much. :-D, keep up your fab writing and I love this story!
kasumi - Thursday November 07, 2002 at 01:56
[I] don't mean to be some vigilante or whatever, but it sounds like you were a little (and this is an understatement) harsh. I mean... "rightfully flamed your story"? Isn't that a bit, well, arrogant? Maybe your tastes & standards are different. I'm not accusing you, but wouldn't just ignoring her flamed reviews be the more mature approach? After all, most people only flame a story out of an impulse of anger or revenge, and their goal is to get a similar response likewise out of the author they've flamed. This person Gigi might have deserved your flames, but maybe what she/he really needed to make her/his story better was also just what you asked for -- constructive criticism. Besides, if you want respect for your stories, is it so unfair for Gigi to ask the same? Just observing. I have nothing against either of you, btw! :o)
Nocis - Wednesday November 06, 2002 at 02:39
Personally, I think your stories are written better than some of the classics i've read. And those are my absolute favorites that i'm comparing you to. So Gigi can put a stick up her ass because you should keep writing. Thank you for explaining why your chapters are taking so long.
Anonymous - Wednesday November 06, 2002 at 01:35
Dont let that bother you. i happen to love your story and your other. I happen to check all the time to see when you update. i look forward to your new chapters!
Anonymous - Tuesday November 05, 2002 at 18:15
hi! crystal_rose im one of your avid fan in reading wounded souls i just want to tell you how much i really love your story and i hope you keep it up. Hope you post the new chapter it really gettin to me (u know the suspense) on what is about to happen.godbless....................cj
ella_fedrick - Tuesday November 05, 2002 at 17:30
Crystal_rose, when will the next real chapter be out. Because I would really like to read it. ella_fedrick.
Wreath_of_Roses - Tuesday November 05, 2002 at 07:11
You have a lovely way with words CR. I can't blame you, stupid, b***hy flamers are the worst! It is one thing to say that you don't care for the story, it's another to repeatedly flame for no reason. Maybe the girl has a short memory and she can't remember what she already wrote? Hee-hee! Anyway not to offend anyone but what kind of name is Gigi anyway? It reminds me of something you would name a small, snipy, poodle!
Anonymous - Tuesday November 05, 2002 at 05:50
HI!!!!!! actually i read this story on FFN, but a person can't get enough praise right!? well anyways just wanted to say its great no matter what people think..blah u kno people there's always the stupid and ignorant ones. Well i was wondering since u wont post updates till u got 3 chapters..do u kno when those 3 chapters are done? I can't believe there's still 3 chapters or more becuz in my mind i thought it was almost ending well whatever you decide to do GOOD LUCK! We cant wait to read it!Bye! i hope yur muse is on overdrive becuz i really wanna read some more!

p.s. r u working on that story wit lady solo? I think the ..uh i forgot the name but i remember moo moo something...well i think thats yur story hehehe sorry if im wrong but its hella funny if you r working on it keep it up too!
LiLo_LaO_eMoShUnZ - Tuesday November 05, 2002 at 00:14
i just finished reading all 15 chapters that are up so far.. and wow.. i mean really WOW! this story is so great.. it's the best i've ever read and I mean it.. this is my #1 fav! I just love your writin style and comparing it to me.. makes me look like nothing! Can't wait till your next chapter is out.. your a great writer!
solomoon14 - Monday November 04, 2002 at 21:19
You go girl! Don't let anyone bring you down. I can be patient for chapters. Take your time. Rock on!!
Anonymous - Monday November 04, 2002 at 21:07
well all i have to say is:
that f*ckin b*tch better leave you the f*ck alone cuz her sh*t probably deserved wutever flames she got...*growls*...oh and crystal plz upload the next 3 chapters soon! ^^*
Anonymous - Monday November 04, 2002 at 19:30
Gigi !?! Urg, what do you know?!? This is a fantastic story and I got all excited when I found out that you updated, o well. DON"T LISTEN TO THEM!!
Anonymous - Monday November 04, 2002 at 05:44
One of the best stories I've ver read and I don't mean that lightly. You had me really feel for poor Serena and made me want her and Darien to make up. Great imaginative stuff.
Homie_G_Skillet - Monday November 04, 2002 at 03:32
I'm sooo sorrry about this whole flaming person, but any ways, I was all excited thinking you updating, but then found out someone was just being rude to yu. Don't feel bad I probably would have hunted them down and thrown burning poop at their front door. Please do, if you wish, to use my idea, I give you my complete permission. And throw hard!!!
Sovereign_Lily - Sunday November 03, 2002 at 21:31
*cheers on CR-chan* Yea CR! *sniff* You remind me of me sometimes . . . (It's a compliment.)
I'm horribly mad at you for tricking me and getting hopes up with a "Chapter 16." *glare* But, I've decided to forgive you. Can I track her down to flame her, too? I've been out of practice for so long.
Anonymous - Saturday November 02, 2002 at 18:00
OMG !!!! please update
Anonymous - Thursday October 31, 2002 at 06:59
I love this story! I need chapter 16, I keep coming back looking for it but its not here. I use these stories to escape the monotony of Greek philosophy. (Yes i submitted a review on Moomoo stink as well, Hi again!) BTW i think its very mean of you to leave us with such a big cliff hanger for so long. :(
Please write some more when you can. Your an extremely talented author and your work is always a pleasure to read. :)
Thanks (again)!
Kristi
Anonymous - Wednesday October 30, 2002 at 05:13
i desperately need more!!!! Please, please, please!!! This is soooo good. Keep it up and please let everybody read the next chapter and crank out the rest. pretty please??
Anonymous - Tuesday October 29, 2002 at 06:00
I have never been so enthralled by a story, like I felt Darien kisses on my neck. I so happy you got a publisher for your book. I would never read incompleted works because they leave me so high strung and I've enjoyed reading completed works but the title "Wounded Souls" got to me, I had to read it. I so glad I got to read the last chapter(15) because if I had to wait for Darien to make his move on Serena, I'd be high strung. I'm still hungry for more but I'll wait ever so patiently to hear from you.
A little suggestion, it would make it easier to sort the thoughts of character or past event if its typed in Italics or a different font.

Sincerely your devoted fan,

Dora
bleu - Wednesday October 23, 2002 at 05:26
OMG! This is simply.. amazing. I cried like a baby in some scenes. Anyhow... great job! Please update soon!!!!!!!
CrystallineLily - Tuesday October 22, 2002 at 22:32
omg, Crystal....i just got a friend hooked on ur story. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anonymous - Saturday October 19, 2002 at 22:36
You story is the best story that I have ever read!!!! You have to keep the chapters comin' and hurry up!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anonymous - Saturday October 19, 2002 at 16:54
I love this story!!!!!!!!!
You have to write more!!!!!!!!!!
SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please write more.... can't wait for more!!!!
eeeeekkkkk
Usagi - Thursday October 10, 2002 at 04:21
*giggles slightly* you know I never did reveiw this story.. I guess CR really CAN write.. and good too

darn good.
I ask one thing.. more mamoru touchiness *drewls* *sighs*
I give it the 5 stars it deserves ,Crystal-Rose. No BSing around with you. You got some talent..got some major talent...

now i get to torment you AND solo for more chapters...or beg..whatever works..
Anonymous - Thursday October 10, 2002 at 03:52
hey great chapter keep um coming..i love this story
ladysolo - Monday October 07, 2002 at 23:27
You amaze me, you skank whore. I thought you were all talk and no . . . well, all talk. Who would of thought I didn't know this story was by *you*? *throws head back and laughs* Yes, fellow nosy readers of reviews, I didn't know CR wrote Wounded Souls. *shakes head* It was just one of those freak things, you know?

Well, terrific story, and of COURSE I will edit for you. *rubs hands* First DIBS. Yes. Yes, I believe I will. Yes. Yes . . . yessss . . .

We will make a deal right here and now: for every chapter of Wounded Souls you send me, I will send you a chapter of Merletto 2. If you should choose to accept this mission, review your own story. *laughs harder* No, I wouldn't make you do that. PM me. This tape will self destruct in 5 seconds. *poof*
Minako - Sunday October 06, 2002 at 05:07
hi!! i love your story!! one of my friends gave it to me to read a while ago.. and i finally am reviewing!! its so good!! keep it up i hope the next chapter is out soon!! i can't wait!! haha ^_^
SaturnStar - Saturday October 05, 2002 at 18:01
yay! wa a perfect bday present... even tho its kinda late... ive waited patienly too... sorry for takin so long to read it... heyz! i gotta work on the fan fic that we sorta made up... maybz we kan write it together... but i am writtin a storie right now n i havent been able to write in it... i love ur storie... damn it! y kant i write like u... lol... thanxz for the awesome present... kant wait until the next chapter comes out
~Saturn*Star*~
jainyln - Friday October 04, 2002 at 08:49
Ugh...how I love this story! Keep it up!!!
Lady_Artemis - Tuesday October 01, 2002 at 09:55
yay!! another fantastic and sweet chapter, can't wait for more! good luck, happy b'day!
silvermoonruge - Monday September 30, 2002 at 00:29
PLEASE FINISH IT I BEG OF U....:((. and hopefully soon
CrystallineLily - Sunday September 29, 2002 at 22:53
YAY!!!!!! *Lily skips in circles, singing* *sings* You finally updated, you finally updated YOU FINALLY UPDATED!!!!!!!!*stops singing and stares at CR* Ya know, you can prevent me from going into the psyco ward if you update soon! I WANT ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!! *starts sniffing* It's not FAIR!!!! You only posted ONE chapter!!! *wails* You're so MEAN!!!!!!!!! Why didn't you post TWO?!!! *sniffs* *starts laughing maniacly* I WANT ANOTHER CHAPTER! YA HEAR THAT, CR??????????

*starts running off into the mist, threatening anyone who get's in Lily's way, especially CR if she doesn't get another chapter out soon.....*
Anonymous - Saturday September 28, 2002 at 18:15
wow, look at the people wanting to read more of your fantastic story! I am so happy that you got chapter 15 out, I cannot wait to see more!
***Good Luck and Keep Up The Great Work***
Poshers - Saturday September 28, 2002 at 16:40
wow! that was great! i loved it! im waiting for that next chapter! ^_^
Ariel - Friday September 27, 2002 at 20:28
OOOOOMMMGGGGG that was just sooo...sooo...I can't even find the word...

Please continue...that was so good!!!
Homie_G_Skillet - Friday September 27, 2002 at 05:20
Hi I'm new but I want you to know that I've been following your story for about sixe months now and absolutly love it. I mean I love it!!! Anyhoo. Please update soon and keep up the wonderful, extordinary, offtheheesyfoocheesey work. yay!

-Homie G Skillet
ChibiJ - Friday September 27, 2002 at 01:44
CR!!! i am going to have such a hard time sleeping tonight! visions of that last scene will be dancing in my head. *twang*

more please. i'll let you have whatever of the guys you want if you give me a new chapter. *walks to closet door* see...they're all right here, ready and waiting!
Sovereign_Lily - Friday September 27, 2002 at 00:48
*Lily stabs Thomas and Jake to death with rusty pointed knife* *Lily proceeds to chop up remaning limbs withaxe dousing in rubbing alcohol* *Lily dumps gasoline over him* *Lily sets him on fire* *screams are heard* *Lily walk away*

This could be you CR-chan if ch. 16 isn't coming out soon.
Sailor_Sista - Thursday September 26, 2002 at 12:47
ehhehe.. what do you think the chances are of finding a Thomas Gibson who lives in Sacremento on AI?
Now, that WOULD be an interesting statistic!

Wow... that was just.. wow. I mean, my god.. it was so good. I especially liked the end bit.. *wiggles her eyebrows*
Very very cute.
And some bits int here just had me laughing hysterically. Like the melvin walter bit, ehehhehe.

I saw quite a lot of mistakes, maybe you should think about getting an editor to take a look at it.

Ciao, Sista.
mya - Thursday September 26, 2002 at 08:28
happiness.
it's just how i feel since the time i read your e mail, so just imagine my state once i read this chapter.
don't worry about the wait, do what you have to do and have fun, like i hope you had on your holidays.
bye
Anonymous - Thursday September 26, 2002 at 04:13
that was an awesome chapter
Anonymous - Thursday September 26, 2002 at 03:36
@#*$&#(*$&)@($*#(&%
two months [basically] and finally.
amazing, wonderful, *stands up throwing good stuff at cr*.
so now i cant wait for the next chapter.
foenixfyre - Thursday September 26, 2002 at 01:24
Wow. Chapter fifteen was definitely worth waiting for.
*groans*
But now we have to wait for Chapter 16!!!
IT'S NOT FAIR!!!!!!!!!!!
Angel_Grrl - Thursday September 26, 2002 at 01:02
OMG!!!!!!! that was really really good.....ooh and steamy too! ^_^ All the better!!! BRAVO!!!
Anonymous - Wednesday September 25, 2002 at 04:47
pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeze update the next chapter soon!
Anonymous - Tuesday September 24, 2002 at 21:16
Please hurry with this increble story. Please hurry!
CrystallineLily - Friday September 20, 2002 at 15:08
YOU STILL HAVEN'T UPDATED YET!! ITS THE END OF SEPTEMBER!!!!!! sheesh, i swear i'm goin' crazy....like that little outburst in class yesterday....*puts on thoughtful expression* I guess it COULD be the fact that NO ONE HAS UPDATED THE GOOD STORIES YET!!! *looks pointedly at Aria* sheesh!
Anonymous - Thursday September 19, 2002 at 16:57
i will love you forever if you update.
Anonymous - Monday September 16, 2002 at 09:01
its september..........r u back yet?????? whens the next chapter coming out???
Anonymous - Friday September 13, 2002 at 23:35
omg please write moreeeee
Anonymous - Friday September 13, 2002 at 04:55
Well all i could say about this story is that it rocks. Really, i have been attempting to write a story. However, upon reading this story i think i am ashamed to ask someone if they could post my sorry ass story on their site. I like the plot the theme and everything. It makes me want to rewrite my story and develop a new plot. Keep it up and hopefully that you, crystal rose is working on a new story because i want to read it.
Anonymous - Saturday September 07, 2002 at 17:26
love it love it love it! but wheres the rest???
Anonymous - Thursday September 05, 2002 at 00:59
more. please. asap. *begs*
Anonymous - Sunday September 01, 2002 at 00:38
hey i just want to say that in capter 6 litas b-day is dec.5 b/c it the same as my b-day hehe.
Cherry - Thursday August 22, 2002 at 02:44
I simply love this story, there were chapters that made me cry so hard, and also laugh a lot...omg. But relly, its great, i just cant wait to read the next one. Excellent work
dragonballz - Tuesday August 20, 2002 at 14:07
hey! I just finished reading this chapter...sorry it took me so long, but I didn't want it to end since I would have to wait a WHOLE month until you got back.

but nice chapter! I'm having the withdrawal right now, so I'm going to go sulk right now in front of the tv...cya!
Anonymous - Tuesday August 13, 2002 at 12:25
It's beautiful,fantastic,wonderful written story and i loved it.I hope you keep the execellent work up and good luck to you....

@--,--'
mandie2484 - Tuesday August 06, 2002 at 21:11
I started reading this story on ff.net, and I loved it! It was the first time I read AU and now I can't get enough. Hurry back and finish this! I hope you had a great trip.
foenixfyre - Tuesday August 06, 2002 at 16:36
Wonderful story, beautiful writing. I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Poshers - Tuesday August 06, 2002 at 04:45
i would just like to say that i love your story. i can NOT wait till you get back to update it. please dont keep me in suspense too long! you wouldnt believe what i had to do to finish up to the point im at! lol i love it!
Anonymous - Thursday August 01, 2002 at 05:16
MORE MORE MORE MORE..........I really love this story. It is so awesome, please continue writing, can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Cappuchino_Princezz - Wednesday July 31, 2002 at 09:22
OM! I'm obsessed with this story. get more out soon. I don't know what I'll do when oyu go on vacation!
Anonymous - Wednesday July 31, 2002 at 07:08
please..please continue with the story...im soo totally hooked...I cant wait till the nest chapter!!!!
Sovereign_Lily - Tuesday July 30, 2002 at 23:33
YEA!! I LOVED IT!! Too bad you won't be able to write for so long . . . *pout* I can't say I'm happy, but it leaves me plenty of time to collect ammo to throw at you when you get back. Have fun!
CrystallineLily - Tuesday July 30, 2002 at 15:11
omg, omg!!! i wanna no wht happens next!!!!!! i wanna i wanna i wanna!!!!!!! *sigh* a monthe wthout updates..... *wahhhhhhhh!* not fair!!! humph! the world is out 2 get me!!!!!!!!!! is the next chapter going 2 b the last....wait....thatz not good....then there'd b nothing else 2 read.....but i wanna no wht happens next....awwww! not fair, not fair, not fair!!!!! itz 2 good...i think i'll read it again.....
Lady_Artemis - Tuesday July 30, 2002 at 07:26
yay!!!!

more!!!

we want more!!!

lol this keeps getting sweeter and sweeter....
SaturnStar - Sunday July 28, 2002 at 02:02
Ooi! this was a very good chapter.. im soo happy that they finally made up n everythin is gettin bak together... now i got to wait for my bday present in sept... lol.. keep it up!

Hotaru~chan
Anonymous - Saturday July 27, 2002 at 22:28
next chapter?
Anonymous - Saturday July 27, 2002 at 20:58
This story gets better by each chapter. Hope you have a great vacation. Will be waiting for the next chapter!!!
Anonymous - Saturday July 27, 2002 at 08:33
you cant leave...after that chapter...for a month. what? not write anything! *throws something hard at the computer*
Sailor_Sista - Saturday July 27, 2002 at 04:34
*sighs dreamily*
God i love this story....
Why do you have to go on vacation? *sulky look*
I want MORE!!
This is a fabulous story, and i'd be quite happy if it never ended.
Ciao, Sista.
Anonymous - Saturday July 27, 2002 at 03:54
Hey! I love your story! It's really cool! Cant wait till CHp15! Bye!
ChibiJ - Saturday July 27, 2002 at 01:59
Awww...I'm so happy! But at the same time, I'm so sad. The fact that we will all have to wait all of August to read chapter 15 is terribly sad. But, then I can look on the bright side! Chapter 15 will be great, because you always end up waiting for the best, plus you'll have a whole month to think about it! Or, a whole month to enjoy your vacation and then come back and think about chapter 15, but, still...it will be worth the wait!
GwyLui - Saturday July 27, 2002 at 00:15
GrrrRR........sOo not fair.....ur goin' on vacation. I badly want 2 goOo sumwhere, but can't [summer job]. AnywayZz.......great chapter, but Darien n Candiance still ne3ds 2 pay! Muahahahaha......jus kiddin'.....Im over dat. *hehe* =-)
GoddesGr14 - Friday July 26, 2002 at 21:41
Another great chapter! I wonder if Serena is going to realize that Darien slept with Trista...who knows. Anyways, just wanted to leave a nice note saying that I'm going to be anticipating September so you can post another chapter! Have fun on your vacation!
Anonymous - Friday July 26, 2002 at 20:45
Oooo... I was wondering where the story was going to go after chapter 13, but after 14, I have no doubt in my mind its just gonna get better and better. ^^ I can't believe you're going on vaca for a whole month though. Please keep writing while you're gone. We'll be sitting here... at our computers, anxiously awaiting your return. Have fun!

**~Chikara~**
mya - Friday July 26, 2002 at 20:28
what to say,of course it's great, i must confess i was a little affraid about the trista 's incident even if i'm not sure you're finished with her.... and don't tell me you're recieving flames for this story,if it's so just don't care about them,it's probably from people with
1.very very very bad taste
2.frustated with their love/sex life
3.who can't go in holidays this year
speaking of which i wish tou to have fun and enjoy yours to the max, so you'll ba abble to come back with a new chapter
Anonymous - Friday July 26, 2002 at 19:36
really great chapter kudos. have a great vacation :)
Anonymous - Thursday July 25, 2002 at 03:15
update? soon? please?
crazzieblue - Wednesday July 24, 2002 at 06:16
WOW! that's so so so so so so so so so so so so good! i can't wait to see te next chapter. you should set up yahoo group about this story because i konw that a bunch of people who would love to tlak about this story! and you could tell us readers that you updated too! i love how you add every character. although there are still a couple people missing... i know that you'll put them in. keep up the good work!
CrystallineLily - Monday July 22, 2002 at 19:02
omg!!!!! this story is soooooooo good and soooooo sad!!! keep on writing!!!!!!!! i NEED it finished!!!!!!!!!!!
Anonymous - Monday July 22, 2002 at 01:37
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keera-chan - Saturday July 20, 2002 at 19:26
wow, wow, wow! i can't believe how good that chapter was. i think this story was become one of my top five stories now and i gotta tell u that i'm very picky. well, i can't wait for the next chapter. i love this!!!
jainyln - Friday July 19, 2002 at 02:56
More more MORE!!!!! Want to know more! Next chapter please!!! Can't wait! Ugh! Have to know what happens next!
Cappuchino_Princezz - Friday July 19, 2002 at 02:49
OMG! I love this fanfic! I'm sure I'm hooked on it because I read all the chapters in one day. Please hurry up with the next chapter! I'm dieing to find out what happens to them and how they get back together....if they do!
Anonymous - Wednesday July 17, 2002 at 20:31
'sobs' Im totally in love with your story....this is definitely the best story that I have ever read...They way teh plot is...makes me feel everything that Serena is feeling....I totally cried while reading this story...Please write more....
Anonymous - Wednesday July 17, 2002 at 13:58
what happens next what what what
Sailor_Sista - Wednesday July 17, 2002 at 12:32
*bursts into tears*
*CR-chan hands her the tissue box*
*sniff* Thanks... oh my god.. that was so sad!!
I ADORED IT.
*sniffs pathetically and wipes her tears away*
Please put another chapter out.. please please please.

Ciao
Sista *sniff* ^-^
Lady_Artemis - Wednesday July 17, 2002 at 06:10
*grabs tissue box*

ive been sitting here sobbing like crazy. how dare u!!!!

hehehehe j/k

wow this was WOWWY!! go team! luv it, cant wait for more!
Anonymous - Wednesday July 17, 2002 at 06:07
Dis is da best story i've ever read. I'm dyin 2 noe wut will happen next.....hurry...
SaturnStar - Wednesday July 17, 2002 at 03:06
Thanxz for lettin me to b able to read something great like this... i love ur fan fic... once u complete it, i'll probably read it again... i'll look for wen u update... ur fan fic is great, keep it up, n i hope u write more in the future!

Hotaru-chan
Anonymous - Tuesday July 16, 2002 at 23:45
I love it. Please continue.
Sovereign_Lily - Tuesday July 16, 2002 at 22:47
*sob* I've been crying too much these days. First that one about Mina and Ji Won and now this. Frankly, I think Jake got off too easy. All he got was being blown up in a car crash?! Like THAT's fair retribution! There should have been more torture . . . like curcification, burning at the stake, hanging, the rack, being buried alive by red-hot embers, being operated on while still awake and not sedated, being beaten with sharp sticks and stones, and still living through everything so Lily can find some more tortures methods.
Anonymous - Tuesday July 16, 2002 at 21:37
Thank you for this wonderful chapter. I hope that they do become a family. I want more soon.

~*~Tazzie_Vic~*~
angel0119 - Tuesday July 16, 2002 at 20:43
Totally cool and incredibly toe-curling... luv it.
selenitey1000 - Tuesday July 16, 2002 at 19:15
Thank You Thank You Thank You Thank You Thank You

Thank You so much Crystal
graciep0o0h - Tuesday July 16, 2002 at 17:19
Crystal-chan~
chapter 13 of Wounded Souls is incredible. I couldn't help but cry while i read it. (all the other chapters were also wonderful)Thank u soo much for posting it. Keep up the good work. =)
ChibiJ - Tuesday July 16, 2002 at 08:32
Okay, I just finished reading Ch. 13 and I have to say that I was in tears. Okay, so none actually fell, but that's because I knew it would blur the words and I would never get to finish the chapter. The emotion that you portrayed with your words was so captivating and real that I could feel everyone's pain. This is a great story and I can't wait to read more to see what happens with the 'friends' relationship!
Anonymous - Tuesday July 16, 2002 at 05:18
What happens next?? I have read all 13 chapters and still in agony! Do they ever get married and live happily ever after? I need closure!!Please tell me this is not the end!!
Anonymous - Tuesday July 16, 2002 at 04:55
SW33T!!! I love this story! It is so awesome! You kick...uhm...the prverbial butt I suppose. Ya that works. lol..anyways update often or I'll cry. I promise I will! :)
Anonymous - Tuesday July 16, 2002 at 04:32
'sobs' I love that story soo much...'sobs' Please continue
Anonymous - Tuesday July 16, 2002 at 03:12
FINALLY! it's almost better, right? no more bad things, right? *gets down on knees and begs* great chapter, i'm glad everything came out....*sighs* it took long enough just like real life. bah.
Usagi_Usako_Chiba - Tuesday July 16, 2002 at 02:32
i loved it
silver_moon_guardian - Tuesday July 16, 2002 at 02:26
This is definately one of the best stories I have ever read!!!
Sovereign_Lily - Monday July 15, 2002 at 14:39
If you don't come out with anymore chapters within the next day, I'm coming after you to carve your heart out. *sob* Great, I hate getting swollen eyes.
Anonymous - Saturday July 13, 2002 at 05:58
i love your story, really i do....just one thing:
UPDATE SOONNNNN

thanks
Silentstar - Thursday July 11, 2002 at 05:17
wow! this is very good. can't wait for the next chapter. Love it. Hurry there are lot's of impatient people out here who want more!
Anonymous - Thursday July 11, 2002 at 05:15
It is such an awesome story!! I just can't wait to read the next chapter. I feel so angry with Darien's behavior that I wish that Drew tells him what really happened that night or Serena's past, I know he can't tell, but I just wish somebody let him know.... Poor Serena is going to get sick with all that stress and it'll be HIS fault... (I got a little carried away) =)
Anonymous - Thursday July 11, 2002 at 02:54
wonderful chapter ^_^ can't believe Darien and Candace can act so cruel to Serena... they don't deserve her or the baby... well... lets see... wonder what Darien is going to do to make things up to Serena for being an ass... well great job... and keep up the good work...
GoddesGr14 - Wednesday July 10, 2002 at 20:28
Awwww....this story almost made me hate Darien...LoL...almost... You are really good at this, I felt so bad for Serena when she was treated so horribly by Darien and his mom. I honestly cannot wait for the next chapter to be posted.
KiTkAt - Wednesday July 10, 2002 at 02:46
wonderful! absolutely wonderful! *stands up and applauds loudly* ^_^...*sits down as people start to look at her strangely*..-_-*...uuh yeah... as i was saying i luv ur story! please finish it soon! i'm begging you! i was bawling like a baby at the end of chapter 12! it was so heartwrenching to read how the shields had treated poor serena...i luved every minute of it though;)
Anonymous - Tuesday July 09, 2002 at 02:35
Hey Crystal Rose! I just wanted to say that your story is one of the best that i've ever read. Just wanted to say keep up the good work. :) i hope the next chapter comes out soon because I'm lookiing forward to reading it. :)
Anonymous - Tuesday July 09, 2002 at 01:22
Oh my gosh..please finish this..im so totally hooked...
Chikara - Monday July 08, 2002 at 20:59
Agh! This story is turning out to be so great! I wanna beg you to finish it soon, but I'm not sure if I even want the story to end. >.
Anonymous - Monday July 08, 2002 at 19:21
WOW!!!!this story is grrreat!!I cant wait to know what happens next!pleeeeeeeeeeeeze can u update the next chapter soon.
angel0119 - Monday July 08, 2002 at 05:21
wow....this is just getting better and better! Keep it up!
Anonymous - Monday July 08, 2002 at 03:45
I luvvvvvveeeeeee That story! I wept through the whole thing! Hurry with the next chapter!
_TheRoguess
dragonballz - Sunday July 07, 2002 at 17:16
I REALLY lOvE your story!!!!!!!!!!! I think it's one of the best I've ever read (and believe me, that's a LOT). It just keeps getting better and better!
Sailor_Sista - Sunday July 07, 2002 at 12:43
*looks slightly uncomfortable* Isabella sounds so sweet.. it alsmost makes you want to start liking children..

Oh well. GREAT chapter!!! It was so good.. you have a way of writing that.. wow. I don't know, it's just really makes me think, i feel involved in the story, that's a magic not many people posess..

One error i saw.. "Why what?" Walter could see her eyes clouding up with confusing as she tried to decipher his motives for being nice to her.
-- Should probably be "Walter could see her eyes clouding up iwth confusion as she..."
Yeah. Okay. Good-o. Hope you don't mind, it's the editor in me.. Oh, and in Chapter 11 theres one point where Trista's name is still Setsuna. Just thought you should know..

Um.. Fab chapter, eagerly awaiting Chapter 13.... *holds her steel tipped plushies in one hand, her fluffy pink fairy wand in the other iwth a angelic smile on her face*
Can you SEE the halo???

Well done CR.
Sista.
keera-chan - Sunday July 07, 2002 at 03:40
today when i saw that ur story was finally updated i was so excited. i simlpy love this story! i can't get enough of it. but why'd u have to end it off like that. go write some more, i can't wait to see what happens next. great job.
Anonymous - Sunday July 07, 2002 at 03:31
OMG!!! OMG!!! OMG!! Poor Sere I want to know what happens next. This story is sooooo good!!! Please finish it soon!! Please Please Please!!!!
Anonymous - Saturday July 06, 2002 at 20:11
i love your story.its nicely written.update soon!!
Anonymous - Saturday July 06, 2002 at 19:58
hurry pls finish!! i luv it!! keep it up!! more chap pls!!
Anonymous - Saturday July 06, 2002 at 13:35
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uhhhhh, did i mention update???!?!!?!?
Anonymous - Saturday July 06, 2002 at 13:33
WOW........that was AMAZING!!!! this has got to be my favourite sm fanfiction of ALL time!!!! you are truly a TALENTED writer!!!! keep it up!!!! please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please UPDATE soon!!!!!
Lady_Artemis - Saturday July 06, 2002 at 08:43
wow!!!!

write more, this keeps getting better and better!

*^~Artemis~^*
silvermoon - Saturday July 06, 2002 at 05:42
No word can ever describe this fic...totally superb. I think i was about to cry after reading it. keep it up!
Anonymous - Saturday July 06, 2002 at 05:21
sooooooo good. pleeeease continute. dying to know what happens.
Anonymous - Saturday July 06, 2002 at 04:04
Keep up the good story!!! actually let me put it this way MORE!! MORE!! MORE!!! and before i forget ASAP!!!!!

- Sere-chan ( tuxiesrabbit@msn.com )
Jamestown - Saturday July 06, 2002 at 03:26
This story is so emotional I actually feel I'm as wounded as everyones favorite couple is right now in chapter 12. My props to an author who knows how to tell a story!
Anonymous - Saturday July 06, 2002 at 03:14
This story is soo sad...'SOBS' I'm soo totally hooked with this story.....please pretty please write more....
GwyLui - Saturday July 06, 2002 at 00:42
OmG......i have be3n god damn lazy writin' a review...ever!! But ur last chapter (12) wuz sOo great!! Amazin'......awesome......dat i cried a whole box of tissue!!! Can't wait 4 ur next update!! Ke3p up da great work!!! *B HappY*
Anonymous - Saturday July 06, 2002 at 00:31
This chapter was so sad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really hope I can read the next chapter soon and they cane start to resolve their conflicts.
BunnyMoon - Friday July 05, 2002 at 05:12
Ahhh!!! Where's the next chapter?? I hope you'll be able to post it soon!! Please!!
angel0119 - Thursday July 04, 2002 at 18:10
To be honest, I wasn't all that impressed with "The Road to Hell". I think it was missing that certain spark that readers usually look for, but this one is really interesting and it grabbed my attention. Keep it up!!!
Anonymous - Thursday July 04, 2002 at 08:55
hello! I love the story. you must update and finish the story soon, because I can't take the suspence. I'm just not the patient type of person. So please write more sooooon!!!!
Anonymous - Tuesday July 02, 2002 at 02:05
Im soo... hook with this story!!!!I LOVE IT!!!
Anonymous - Monday July 01, 2002 at 19:27
wow..that was great!! keep up the good work! it was a amazing story that was really well written!
Serenade - Monday July 01, 2002 at 13:23
Thank you very much for that wonderful read. I absolutely enjoyed this story. Keep up the excellent work, I'll be looking forward to hearing from you soon. ^.^
Tapestry - Monday July 01, 2002 at 13:04
AAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRrrGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHH!!!!!!
Where's the next chapter to this thing????!!!!!!
When are they gonna get back together???? Better yet, when is the baka idiot Darien gonna wake up and remember????!!!
*shakes author by the lapels* WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE!!!
silvermoon - Monday July 01, 2002 at 09:33
hiya! i love it. Someone just recommended it to me...and im so thankful she did. Its certainly worth reading at 4am in the morning! keep it up girl!
Lady_Artemis - Monday July 01, 2002 at 06:55
wonderful, once again...

more! more i tell u!!!

hehehehehehehe keep on writing u have talent!

*^~Artemis~^*
selenitey1000 - Monday July 01, 2002 at 02:50
Thank you sooooo much crystal.I told you that ann and beryl would be in that chapter. i guessed right. Please write the next one soon.
Angel_Grrl - Sunday June 30, 2002 at 22:50
Top NOTCH! Absotively posilutely love it! Please continue.....
Anonymous - Sunday June 30, 2002 at 05:55
please please update soon!! i absolutely LOVE this story!!! i've been waiting SO long for you to update!!!!!!!! i'm sure others would agree!!!
Anonymous - Sunday June 30, 2002 at 01:25
I really love your story! I really can't wait for the meeting between Serena and Darien. Please keep writting and finish this soon! I don't think I'll be able to get your story out of my mind....
Anonymous - Sunday June 30, 2002 at 00:47
this is a great story keep it comin
GoddesGr14 - Sunday June 30, 2002 at 00:18
That was really good! I really hope you post the next chapter soon...I can't wait to see what happens next...
Anonymous - Saturday June 29, 2002 at 20:09
I am so hooked to this fic. Continue to write please.
Anonymous - Saturday June 29, 2002 at 17:13
please, please, please continue!! i'm going to die if i don't know the ending sometime soon!!
Anonymous - Saturday June 29, 2002 at 16:23
Yay! Another Chapter!! This chapter was pretty good but you have to have Darien and Serena get together soon!!
Sailor_Sista - Saturday June 29, 2002 at 12:26
Wow!
That was SO cool!!
*bounces about happily like a hyper three-year old*
SO GOOD! I REALLY want the next chapter out sooN! So what are you waiting for? Move move move!! *runs after you with a newspaper*
^_~
S-chan.
Anonymous - Saturday June 29, 2002 at 07:24
write more soon...this is one story i cant wait to have a new chapter up. ok, but cmon when is darien gonna remember what happens or something? its getting aggrivating! *#&$#*%&$ okimdone.
Serinbabe - Saturday June 29, 2002 at 05:30
I love this story from the start. You have a very good talent when it comes to writing. keep it up.
lovelyNori - Saturday June 29, 2002 at 02:09
I love this story!!I think that it's amazing..please write more..by the way I love the drama!!
Angel_Grrl - Friday June 28, 2002 at 20:38
This story.....just takes my breath away. I cannot explain it. The raw emotion just oozes from every word...I am absolutely in LOVE with this story. Now you must finish this quickly or I shall seek you out with my big pink mallet. ^_^ Cheers mate!
Lady_Artemis - Friday June 28, 2002 at 11:53
GAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

write more, i luv it, i luv it, I LUV IT!!!

now that ive scared u... sorry im typing oddly cuz i have bandaids all around my finger... ANYWAY... this was REALLY good, pls write more soon!

here, for ur good story, u receive the honorary weapon of my tribe.

*hands over giant concrete donkey*

use it well my child.

*grins*

good luck!

*^~Artemis~^*
Anonymous - Friday June 28, 2002 at 10:05
good story! whens the next part coming out?
Anonymous - Friday June 28, 2002 at 01:42
I totally love this story...need more chapter 'groan' ohhh pretty please write more!!! 'pout'
Anonymous - Wednesday June 26, 2002 at 20:01
this story is great no matter where it is. thx for the tip of findin it here in case ffn is down again. :)
Sovereign_Lily - Wednesday June 26, 2002 at 18:04
Oh my god. I just finished chapter 6. (was it? I mean the one with Jake and al lthe child abuse) *sob* My eyelids are gonna be all swollen now. It's happened before and then I can't open my eyes fully. That was one of the saddest things ever. Losing it at age 11 to that f*cking b*tch wh*re @$$hole desparate scum that even a hobo won't look at in fear of damaging their eyes. He deserves rot slowly in decay in a rancid bog of eternal painful tortures in hell with flesh-eating bacteria. *sob* *sob*
Sovereign_Lily - Wednesday June 26, 2002 at 17:48
The story is pretty good, BUT IT HAS SO MANY BAD DETAILS!!! SERENA HAD AN AFFAIR WITH HER TEACHER?!?!?! EEEEWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!! *Lily begins bashing head repeatly against wall* Just fiction . . . just fiction . . .
And besides the people being whores, I loved the story. And, who was this Jake person and what did it have to do with her dad?

P.S. I loved that bit with Ann and Beryl. hee hee . . . funniness . . .
browneyes - Wednesday June 26, 2002 at 05:50
WOW! I don't know what to say. That is an amazing story, a little sad, but amazing. How do you manage to a chapter in one day? I'm on my knees, I want to know how you do it?
Anonymous - Wednesday June 26, 2002 at 04:45
your story is WONDERFUL! i love alternate reality stories the best, and i have to say yours is one of the best i've read. keep up the good work. i'm counting the seconds til the next chapter.
Anonymous - Tuesday June 25, 2002 at 22:11
absolutely awesome and amazing story.... please keep writing!!
Sailor_Sista - Tuesday June 25, 2002 at 10:24
OMG!
You didn't tell me you could write!
I don't mean just write, everybody can write... but _WRITE!_ That was AMAZING!
Oh my god.. i was going through withdrawel periods of having no storys that whisked me off my feet.. but you've DEFINATELY won that trophy!
You go girl!!
Get the next chapter out, k?
SSista.
Anonymous - Monday June 24, 2002 at 09:07
yeah at least i've got to read another and new chapter!!!
tha,ks a lot for your mail and this site adress!!!!!hope to read more and soon and wherever you want it!!!!
GoddesGr14 - Monday June 24, 2002 at 02:34
I'm...in...love...with...ur...story! I will never do that '...' again! Anyways, amazing story! I hate how they missed each other by like, what? 5 minutes?! Hopefully the next chapter will be out soon and just as well written as the other 10 chapters you wrote! I hate howw ff.net is down too! Ugh! Anyways, great story!
ebony - Monday June 24, 2002 at 01:16
i love this story i started on ff.net but u know how that was offline for a week im soooo happy i get to continue you it this is wayyyy better that road to hell!!!!!1
Anonymous - Sunday June 23, 2002 at 22:47
I totally love this story!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!! Keeep it up!!!!
Anonymous - Sunday June 23, 2002 at 04:03
this is a great story keep it goin
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