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Awesome story. I loved it.

Iloved your story

I absolutely love this story. I've read it at leat 20 times and I still find it as interesting and wonderful as the first time.

You did a fantastic job with this fanfic! Thank you for sharing it with us.

This was a pretty good story. I liked how serena was still strong after what she went through. Darien was a jerk some of the time though. And shouldnt of acted like that. Though I think that if I didnt know about my daughter i would be abit upset to. I liked the romance in this it wasn't to graphic and fairly believeable. I am glad that serena got her own back against darien. Even though I think she should of taken longer to forgive him and abit fluffy. I't was still a pretty good story.

Wow, that was one hell of a story. Lovely writing, beautiful characterizations, so realistic. I think I must've cried about ten or twelve times, especially around chapters nine and ten.
Wonderful job--keep up the great writing! :)

oh my god this is the second time I read this story I love it you make it seem like if the whole story is true and I love it congratulation keep up the good job

I love it!!! It's so well written. I love stories that make me tear up and then have a happy ending! Thank you for posting it...

Wow! I simply enjoyed this fic, certainly one of the best in the Sailor Moon fandom.

I loved Serena's personality and her past, it was so real and you really understood her pain. Not to mention the dynamic between her and just everyone that she met. The ending was the icing on the cake, it certainly did the story justice.

Awesome Story, completely stole my breath away!!!!!!

-- Lena

I am with out a doubt overwhelmed by this story! I have never read a fanfic that made me laugh and actually CRY! I have to say it takes alot for me to even tear up, but you are the first author that actually got me to cry from just READING a sailormoonfanfic! You can see the passion you have for writing in this story, especially the way you go in detail in every emotion and the lives of each character, not just Serena and Darien. I love how you go in depth about their kids and how Raye and Amy later on went through their struggles. I applaud you on how you tastefully wrote the problems Serena had to go through and how Darien would later have to deal with. This is an extraordinary piece of work and I wish you the best in all that you that and hope you write more stories, as it is evident that you possess great talent and have innate writing skills to invigorate imaginations!
Sunwritten :)

this is a trully wonderfull story I was so happy to know you had finished it. I hope to read more of your stories in the future! good luck.

This was amazing.

Are any of the stuff on AriasInk ever on ff.net or anythin???

I've been reading since 7 and i finished at three. In the morning.

TGIF!

Wow.. that was amazing. I completely understand how this is the no. 1 favourite story!! =]

great story!

I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVED it!!!

It was SO well written, especially when Serena went back with Isabella and got the cold shoulder, you expressed her feelings perfectly. And it wasn't rushed either, nor was it cheesy. I really enjoyed this, and I will be adding this to my favourites!!

This story was written so exceptionally well. I laughed tons of times and wanted cry several other times(but being the ever cynical thirteen year old I am crying didn't happen). C'est magnifique! This story is wonderful.

Loved the story~! Keep it up. =D

This is my favorite fanfic yet! It's soooo well written. I love how you really captured the carachters and went in depth about their background. (I also loved your use of the word "Stud muffin"...one of my favorite words...lol) Also how you didnt make serena innocent and shy, it was great. i also found the part about serena finding out it wasn't her fault and those names werent true very moving. This was one of the best fanfics ever, and i can't wait until more of your work comes.

I love this story it's so great one of the best serena and darien story

I read this story all at once.... I was addicted! The story was awesome and so nice to read. Good job!

I've read this story so many times and it still brings tears to my eyes. I love your work, keep it up!!!

A bit average, if you ask me.

WONDERFUL story! I know you get that a lot, but really, it was great. I couldn't stop reading! Keep up the good work!

This is a really good story... ....even though it took forever to read. I really liked it. crystal rose you're a good writer

Luv,
Alana Cherice

Although it took a while to read. It was very much worth the effort. Excellent job. You're a VERY talented writer.
I loved how you kept the original personalities of the characters. Yet still made them different. GREAT JOB!!!!!!!

you did a excellent job on this story i felt as though the characters were real. it was a little long but hey it was worth it! keep writting.

Well I gotta confess I'm not really into the whole romance thing but this story was the exception. My only critique is that I started reading around midnight one evenining and ended up being frightfully late for work the next morning, having only recieved about three hours of sleep. ;D

It was getting rather eerie at some points the way the story echoed my own reservations about relationships, but I guess everyone is in the same boat more or less and it all depends on your situation. Anyway, great stuff keep it up.

This is probably the best story I have ever read. I loved it! I cant wait to see what comes next from you.

OH MY GOD!!! This is one of THE best stories I'ev ever read in my entire life (and trust me when I say that I've read quite a few). I love the way you slowly made the story grow and progress over time. I find that a good amount of authors who write stories with an extensive plot, just like this on has, they tend to release information about the characters in their stories a bit too quickly. There are just some bits of information that should be left for later chapters. I didn't see any anything like that at all while I was reading. Although, you need to be careful about dragging out certain peices of info for long periods of time. For instance, the time that Darien was miserable when Serena left.There were specific parts which I felt did not need to be included because you were basically restating the same thing. When these little tibits came up I felt it was basically pointless and repetitive.It sort of left me hanging on the for a tiny bit and I was like, COME ON ALREADY!! But all in all, it was good, very good. Leaving your readers wanting more is a great skill that many authors need but very little have. And you are most certainly an author who is very accomplished when it comes down to this. You just need to perfect it a litte bit more. Remeber, there's a big difference between enticing the reader to read more and unecessarily stretching out certain pieces info. You are so definently on your way there. Ok, enough with the constructive criticism.
I LLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDDDDDD ITT.
I am soooooooo glad at the way this story turned out. It was the perfect ending. Keep it up and keep me posted on when you write more stories.

I cried & laughed. It was brill. Please keep writing.

IMMM BACKKKK!! finally i have found your story again, i saved this story and when i lost internet access i could not remember the name of the story i was guted i have spent over 30 hours tryin to find ur story, i have found and read again and still i want to cry and still u left me speachless, this deserves every award goin this is still the best story by far, wel done girl, im really proud of u n this story.. please if u ever wanna tlk you no how to get me...thank you for this pleasure..xxxx
kimmy xxxx

hi this is the first story that i have read and i really like it it was funny at first buy after it was very sad that i cried so much but it is different from other stories as it tells about some real facts that happen. once again the story is fantastic.

this story is good i love it its so good i like it

wounded souls is one of the best stories i have read congrats

That was great! I laughed, I cried, I couldn't stop reading. I throughly enjoyed the story. :)

I loved it! It have emotions you could feel! You have a wonderful talent! It's one of the best I've read!

I liked it vry much!
I hated it because since it was long I had to read it in 3 day, it was hard to stop reading! LOL after everychapter I wanted to read more but I knew I had to stop to go to bed!!

Well again it was a very good story!!
Can't hear more from you!

This is a fantastic story, makes me cry ;p

Congradulations on such an awesome story. It was amazing. It had me laughing, crying and on the edge of my seat in anticipation of what was to come next. You are an excellent writer, awesome!

i loved the story! absolutly love it^^

I love this story. I could not get myself away until I finish it.

omg i think im gonna cry again... your story stopped time, i cant say a word to describe your fanfic... im speachles.. all i can say is do more stories and especially ones like this.... im actually speachless and still cryin..... loves you lots and i hope you can produce more like this

kim.. a number 1 fan of this fic

This is a lovely story. It's the third time I've read it but the first time i reviewed since i just started reviewing recently.
I like your other stories as well and can't wait til the next one if you decide to write another one.

This story rocks. Congratulations!!!!!

This story really captured my mind. I found myself on the verge of tears at some of the situations Serena had to endure when she came back to the Shields home (especially with what had happened in her past). I love how you gave life to Darien's parents, and I enjoyed seeing Walter's "transformation" from being a grumpy, stubborn old man into somebody Serena was able to turn to and trust.

Great, great story!

Good Story really good sorry for Darien and Serena for not being able to have some.

Finally I just finished reading it .I think that this story is really fantastic and interesting. I would recommand anyone , who hasnt read yet , should.

this story is really great

I am in love! That was the best story I have read! Great Job!

Moon_Princess

Hey, I really like this...it's so original -- never seen anything like it before -- and I'm really liking the character development. At least Serena and Darien aren't fumbling around, but they're self-assured adults, and I love the characters of Walter and Candace Shields!

I read your story so long ago, and just browsing through today.. the title caught my eye, looking awfully familiar, nothing something i ever did the first time i read it, even though i highly doubt you'll ever ead this, I just wanted to tell you that your story was probably the best i've ever read.. I remember trying to print it out for when i went on vacation without a computer.. horrible, isn't it? You are an awesome writer, anything you write has got to be wonderful.

Wow...verrry loooongg...but very gooood too! You have a talent...keep on using it!!

that was nice!! very sad...i was telling my friends the story n there were all "u must tell me what happens next!!"

Ok so my review isn't going to be as long as the one before this one, nor is it gong to be as er... shall we say informative, but I liked this story a lot! Well thought out and well executed, great job! Yeah, the part i liked the most was seeing all the Canadian/Toronto references (haha zellers... and understanding how far it actually is from queen and yonge to the CN tower, lol)But this is my second time reading this and it just keeps getting better! Look forward to seeing more of ur work!

I must say CR, as this is the first story of yours I've R & R , its certainly deserved the praise its recieved. It has a stratified structure, blending the real & surreal in a brilliant tapestry of human emotion. I found the intensity both cathartic & very moving, tears are the hallmark of any good story, & most writers strive to evoke this response ffrom our readership & you've succeeded ... Your story possesses the power of a V C Andrews novel, re-its narrative tension. The character's interactive dynamism was truly amazing. The issue re-child abuse struck a heartfelt cord ... I believe such accounts can stir us to heal deep wounds many of may relate to, cultivating empathy & awareness- you've succeeded in this regard, I salute you. Reviews can sometimes spark emotive reactions in others as sometimes the story can shake the heart & soul cutting a little too close tfor some, but it may be part of a healing process not just a review-flame as they may be grappling with their own issues just hitting out ... so don't be discouraged as there are few flaws in your fic. I love the SM references, the horses names & Dianna the kitten, sooo cute! ... I love the humour and the strength of the human spirit & hope this story promotes-The sub-plots re-Sere's family & friends was also worthy of praise as these balanced the central plot... the atmospherics & visualisations ... Isabella & the parenting of Darien & Serena's children are gorgeous - truly heart warming ... over all your story stands as a testiment to the ability to overcome all adversity with lots of love, courage & determination! *gold roses showering down for CR from Tux! many bows*

my dear CR,

three words, to paraphrase The Phantom from PHANTOM OF THE OPERA. BRAVI BRAVI BRAVISSIMI! nicely done. very poignant and very entertaining. methinks we have an issue with the Outer Scouts. looking forward to more masterpieces and a suggested challenge-Beryl NOT being her usual b***hy self. peace out and again a terrific job.

;_; great chapter!!!

;_; great chapter!!!

There are no words that can describe this story. It took my breath away. The writing, fabulous... ENTERTAINING. I just couldn't keep the tears of laughter out of my eyes. Amazing..... Breath-taking..... Inspiring...... Humorous.... THE BEST EVER!

..~..*..~..A Fan..~..*..~..
Sweet Dreamer

This is the one of the best stories I've ever read. You're great and should keep writing good things!

I love this story! I love it so much that I would copy it by hand chapter after chapter just so that I could read it whenever I wanted to. Of course if I did that I would definitely write your alias on the top of the pages so that nobody would think I wrote it. Your story is just so captivating. I laughed when Serena talked about how she would eat shoe leather and wood glue, and when Darien did that soliloquy. I cried when Serena's mother died. I was in suspense every time Serena and Darien had a fight. I love the name you came up with for Serena's child and also the meaning behind it. Beautiful. Keep up the good work!

*does the Snoopy dance of Joy©*

It's finished! It's finished! Bathroom scene....my imagination...cold water now. Kudos to you and now...
>>

Beautiful, magnificient,wonderfu; and shoot I can't of anymore dang that was such a good story hhmmmmm that story won me over write when you put "Nobody Knows" by The Tony Rich Project my favorite song in the whole wide world in it. Thanks to you this story got me through many nights that would have been boring if i didn't have this story to read. Thankyou for not stopping it this story is truely amazing

This is a great story! I love reading every bit of it. I hope that u will continue to write great stories like this one!

Oh, say can you see by the drama's early light... what so awed we just read in the chapter named seven... WOW Girl, forget TNT you know drama ^_^

WOW! Just finished chap6.. that was very tender the way you handled the sitch there .. I apreciated the realism .. Keep it coming !

Just started and I object to the orange joke. The word is awww rang ... not oooh range!!!! Ha, but this is a really good read..I see why it is# 1.

I really liked this story! It shows that all women are strong and in control of their decisions. One of my best friends was, you know, and when she read this story, she thought she could at least try to get out of her depression. Anyways, keep up the good work!!!

Your story captivated me and I spent hours reading it until I clicked on the last chapter, instead for studying for my exams. But it was worth it!
Wonderful! =)
It's been such a long time since I've discovered a good story so thank you so much!!

If i haven't mentioned before, i like and hate this story at the same time. i hate the fact the two had to go through so many obsticles, however, it make the story a lot more interesting, as i obviously have to admit. and as any U/M or S/D lovers/ supporters would agree, as long as the two are together in the very end, it's still a good fic. Once again, CR had a outstanding write!

Oh yes, I am DEFINITLY glad that I skipped studying and taking my pills for this! ^_~ Wow, you finally finished it! It's such a great story, written fantastically and kept us hooked on the lives of Serena and Darien. You did an amazing job portraying Serena and Darien wonderfully and I loved how you took your time and didn't rush the story. Fab job and I can't wait to read more form you!

i love this story it one of my fav. keep on writing

All righty! I can finally post my last review! (Darn freaking computer)

(Scene Graveyard: Dark and dreary day)

We have gathered here today to say good bye to "Wounded Souls." May we never forget the good times that we all shared together, and always keep WS in our hearts. WS's road may have come to an end but we will always remember it fondly.

(Bag-pipe music plays)

All right everyone lets get out of here and go for some Italian! (Everyone cheers and rushes out)

Fantastic! One of the best Sailor Moon stories I´ve ever read. The epilogue was extremely interesting and just felt like real. Hope this is not the last I read from you. Congratulations.

wicked! absolutly bloody wicked! this is such a good story! it made me laugh it made my cry it's a total literary wonder-piece. i've been reading this for a very long time -it's kinda what really got me into sm fanfiction, and i started reading it on ffnet, so sorry i havent given other reviews -im just lazy. regardless of expectations and possibly some critisicm you have written a story that is so original and doest conferm to dodgy sterotypes and cliches! i dont even think that i can write a review that's good enough to express this - so i'll just stop
Jenn

i was hoping for another chapter but i found something BETTER...an epilogue..it was really good.. i really liked it,it ended very nice..hope we find another good story from you soon....lol

wow
that was awesome
I'm gonna miss it, although there's always rereading
hoping to a new story.
you're an awesome writer

I ABSOLUTELY love..... wait i adore ur story!!!!! GREAT JOB!!! *gives a high five, then gives a bone-crushing hug* ((/^_~\))

*wails* WAHHH!!!!! Hmph, WS is over *pouts* at least I'm not waiting impatiently anymore but still.....Oh well, JUST GET MORE STORIES AS GOOD AS THIS ONE OUT SOON!!!!! kapeesh?

~*S.Angel*~

Oh CR I loved it! This story made me laugh and cry and scream at my computer! I cant believe its over! You did a great job with it! I hope you have a new fic in mind cause I want to read more of your stupendous(sp?) writing! Luv ya!

~*RENA*~

Congrats on finally finishing your story! That was amazing! I'm truly sad to see that the end is finally here but it was well worth the wait. The story was marvelous, excellent, wonderful, great, magnificent, ect. Your probably sick of all the flattery but I just couldn't help myself. (Course, who could be get tired of that?) I hope you keep writing cause I love your stories. I can't wait to see what you do with Six Degrees! *wink*

~Good Luck~
PsychoBunny

Congratulations with your wonderful story!!!
Great job! I have truly enjoyed reading your story, and it was definitely worth waiting for the final chapter! I hope to see future stories written by you.

-smiles- Bye.

Crystal... This story was good!! I praise you for writting it!!! I just want to cry knowing that this is the end of wounded souls!!! I just hope and pray that you write another sailormoon story!!!! I beg of you to... please!!Even if you are not wanting to go in the writing buisness i praise you that you should!!! you have good writing talents!! and i hope that you use it to the best of your ability!! And if you decide for writing in your career just to let you know that i will be your first buyer of your first book!! Good Work!!!

noooo...it is finished i can't believe it!!!!ohh well fantastic story thow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That is the perfict ending!!!!! this is much better than a wedding!!!! it was funny and sad at the same time. I really loved this story! and i'm so excited about the ending. Great job! i can't wait to see what you come out with next

omg...i love this story. i absolutely adore it. haha. i think i am gonna go back and read it 10 more times!

*cries* it's over...

I will so miss the updates to this story. It has made me laugh, cry, and read for hours on end. Of course, it will be reread often...

WOW this stoey is sooooo great I'm soo glad is not over yet Please Update SOOn Cr You're doing a fantastic job.....U are a great insperation to me and many other writers out there..so please continue!

WOW!!! that was really good CR!!REALLY REALLY GOOD!!!~0*
Hope u update soon and congrats for achieving 10000 views heres one more LOL!!

Wah Scarborough *o* I go to school there! hehehe That's right, US citizens, we don't say, "a-boot" o_0;

great chapter crystal_rose ^^

This is absolutely the best story I have ever read. I have never cried so much, actually I usually don't cry for sad parts, my eyes just get watery, but this time actual tears fell out of my eyes!(Just for the sad parts) It is so detailed that it seems I'm actually there watching the whole thing like a movie. I LOVE IT SOOO MUCH! It's sooo sweet. Please continue your work. It would be so tragic if you stopped.

i completly adore this fanfic! i love it i love it i love it!!! please update as soon as you can!!!!

I LOVE this story...and I mean it...You really got me into it, and even made me cry. I like how you balance out your story with the sad parts and the funny parts. I don't really know what to say except I love this story...Keep writing!!!

totally love this story!!! keep up the great work!! and update soon

That was a wonderful story! i havent finished reading the 3 remaning chapters yet but i just have to compliment you on your amazing work! It was amazing! i absoloutely have to leave a review.! i get touched reading well written stories esp with godd drama. Again wonderful work!

i just wanted to say that i started this novel back in god, maybe july? august? and it was extremely well written then. even now as i finish reading it, i think this is one of the best fanfics that i have ever read and tops my list of my top 10. this story is amazing with its ups and downs. it makes you cry, and it makes you laugh. this was an amazing story.

(this is Poshers)

This story is with out a doubt the most awesome romantic and just the greatest fanfiction out there!!! Can u write a sequel? PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'M so happy this storie is finish. It was sooooo very good. And I'm just happy that everything whent well with the both of them. Loved the chapter!!!Great Storie!!!

yay they worked out i hoped they would i can't wait for the next chapter i hope it's out soon i don;t think i could wait for more than 2 weeks at the most for the next one well until then thanks for right this story it's close to heart and it's was great to read bye

wow...that was nice...very waff...places me in a good place...I'm in a good mood now.

mg

i think ur story is really raelly great i can't wait for more and one last thing me real name is ambrosia like the wife of the vp in this chapter and i've always gotten the best complimeantson it and it was surprising to see it in this story but a pleasent surprise lol well thanks again

Is Serena going to find out that Darien slept with trista???

WOW!!! I just love your story!!! I hope your next chapter will come out soon. KEEP WRITING :-D

Hmm...Let's see...14 new chapters since the last time I've been on. Read that...read that...that was weird...I'M HAVING VISIONS, THAT CAN'T BE A NEW CHAPTER OF WOUNDED SOULS!!!! IT IS!!! (gasp...choke...*THUD*) (doctor steps up) We regret to inform you that Wreath of Roses has collapsed due to extreme shock produced by authors that haven't updated for quite some time. If you want to keep this or similar episodes from happening to others, remember to update your stories in a timely fashion!!!

(Several days later) Well now that I have recovered, I just want to tell you, CR, that that was a great chappie. Sweet and spicey...TRY ALL THE FLAVORS OF CR'S FAMOUS WOUNDED SOULS IN A BUN!!! There's Bitter Sweet, Light and Fluffy, and Lemon Pepper!!!

Great job CR..I loved the story line, not quiet what I expected, but great all the same:). Can't wait till you Complete the story, I'm looking forward to an interesting ending.....Oh and a congrats goes out to LS too (can't thank the author without mentioning the editor).

omg, you FINALLY got this chapter out! Even if it WAS good, very good, so good that I could read it all over again, I was waiting for...just about HALF a YEAR. Geez...O, this isn't finished yet, is it? 'cause then...that wouldn't be good

Oh, and was the rumor about the lady who originally wore the ring? The person got cut off by Darien...

~C Lily~

Oh my gosh!!!! u finally updated, i've been waiting monthes for this chapter to come out and woot woot its finally out i just wanna be the first to sumbit a review although i haven't read the the story yet, but i will as soon as i'm done writing this review. *speechless* i luv u!!!i still can't believe it.

CR the ending was beautiful, it was well worth the wait. I bet the next story you write I'll be buying from Barnes and Noble. Congrats on finishing an outstanding and exremly well writen story. (congrats to LS also)

Whoa, haven't read this fic for ages...

Mistake:
1. Unable to resist, he leaned over and teased the pout away from her lips using her own.
A: using his own, maybe? otherwise it doesnt make too much sense.

2. ust as soon as the perfect opportunity presented itself.
A: Ust..? hehe, what language is that? *grin* is it like 'ustard? *laughs* ^_~

Awww, very nice.
Glad to see it finally has an end.

Acid.

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh it's finnaly done oh oh ohoh so so excited -this was truely wonderful -and who gives a damn if it took 6 months it was worth it! you have no idea how fast my heart raced when i saw that you had updated!
wow-i'm speechless -that was great hope you write more in the future -you truely have talent

YAY!! Another fantastic chapter!! Thankyou Crystal Rose!!

sniff sniff...i waited so long 4 dis...

WOW!!! So good! I loved it

OH MY GOD!

CR: I love it! You're a goddess! I've been waiting forever for this chapter. I can't figure out which part I love the most.... my favorite angsty part in chapter 13 - The Last Straw or this chapter with the conclusion. *sighs* Pssh! Love it all! Girly, you're awesome!

YOUR ALIVE! *runs and hugs author to pieces* Where have you been young lady we have been worried sick? *while smothering author w/a pillow* Its good to read from you again and once again you did an excellent job. Keep it up! ;-)

As always, very good.

I was totally blushing during some *ahem* provacative scenes....

and I want that ring. Emerald cut...ONE DAY I shall have thee.