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Story: Changed by an Angel
Posted on Sunday August 25, 2002 at 15:07 by Ashlee_A
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Members Stories Season: Alternate Universe
Main Characters: Mamoru/Darien, Usagi/Serena

Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural

Rated: PG13
Status: Completed

17-year-old Serena Terrin is a nerd. A geek. A social pariah. Enter Darien, your typical male angel, who's received Serena for his next mission. But this assignment doesn't exactly go as planned, especially when it's the angel who starts breaking all the rules.


Number of Chapters: 11          Total Size: 256k          Word Count: 44,101

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Nich - Sunday November 09, 2008 at 03:05
Whoah! Great! But does that mean he is normal but does not remember her since he called her miss? Is there a sequel?? Great job! Loved it!
anweaver2007 - Sunday June 22, 2008 at 02:40
I didnt like the ending...did he come back as an angel or did he come back as a human?
lexie_06 - Monday December 10, 2007 at 04:54
amazing story! i love it!
moonie - Wednesday March 07, 2007 at 09:25
please write more it feels like the story hasnt ended yet i need more itell you more
Mayonaka - Friday January 26, 2007 at 22:20
I actually cried at your story at the end, believe it or not. See the fool I am??Well anyway, everybody's always said I've been an emotional person...but I LOVED your story...witty and so sweet. But the ending was a bit confusing though, how could Darien be back? Wasn't he dead? Or did he become human because god became merciful on the two?
Anonymous - Sunday December 24, 2006 at 07:18
you have write another one..!!
its really good.
XxMelaxX - Friday July 14, 2006 at 20:10
AHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!! That was a good story and the ending!!!! :-( I wanted to know more!! But I guess that will do hee hee. Really good story, made me teary at some point :-) Good job and continue writing!!!
Gabyttita - Wednesday June 28, 2006 at 20:38
amazing!!!! the best story ever!!!!!!!!
i loved it sooo much!!!
it was incredible!! wonderful!! beautiful!!
sooo sweet!! so cute!! so... everything
the best!!
you wrote it so well, and i loved the characters...
when darien left it was soo sad.. i cried!!!
i really did...
but besides that.. your story was amazing.. so fun, and exciting... i couldn't stop reading it until i had finished!!
so.. i'm going to read the sequel now .... hehheh
take care!!
and thank you sooo much for that wonderful story!!
thank you thank you thnak you thank you
bye!
babydee - Wednesday May 31, 2006 at 19:38
you did a good job on your story. but i wish that darien didnt have to leave. and also i wish that u would of had him appear as someone else sooner.
purple1793 - Sunday April 30, 2006 at 15:20
this story is AWESOME!!!!! i think your brill and u need to keep writing, coz it would be a shame if you didnt.
love ya
jade
x x x x
AuroraNight - Wednesday February 15, 2006 at 03:21
Perfect. Absolutely perfect. This story just sucked me in and would not let me go(even to the bathroom!)Which is saying a lot since I had just drank 2 sodas=) Definetly going on my favorite list and a awesome Valentine Day treat.Thanks for writing!
cittykat21 - Friday February 03, 2006 at 07:51
Wow that was excellent.
Nasuki - Monday January 16, 2006 at 06:46
beutiful i love this story so sad at the ending i am rereading this story the second time i cried when he left her and the ending was well done good job :a pat on the back: well done..nice storyline
darkodango-kiko - Tuesday November 22, 2005 at 00:20
^_^ amazing! hehehe i love your stories! they're so adorable and sooo kute! welp you keep up the good work alright?! ^_~
KuroTsuki - Monday October 17, 2005 at 21:44
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! ummmm... sowwee^^ hehe...got caught up in the moment! i wuv the story!! yes i do!it rocked!
cosmoscrystal - Saturday October 08, 2005 at 22:33
Beautiful. You are gifted.
Kao_Misao1728 - Sunday July 31, 2005 at 22:35
that story was awesome! are you going to continue it? i think you should. once again great story.
Eternia - Saturday July 30, 2005 at 08:39
Wow, wow, and wow!!!! so are you gonna do a sequel to that or what??? you can't just leave people hanging like that.....please write more. it was such a good story, and it made me cry!!!
yolande - Monday April 18, 2005 at 21:01
I always enjoy well written stories and this was one of the best I ever read. It kept me awake for much longer than I should have been in 2 nights, but I needed to find out how it ended!
Thanks for two really nice evenings and nights!
MoonieDream - Wednesday May 12, 2004 at 02:55
Listen... if u dont write a sequal, i might just have to find you and tie u up in a chair until u do. no lie. i will! jeesus! that story was INSANE! *in a good way* i fully loved it, and i NEED more, as in more NOW. cant leave a girl hanging. thanks again.

sequal. sequal. sequal. (all i have to say..)

-love,
MoonieDream
Serafina - Thursday January 29, 2004 at 00:22
That is THE sweetest, most touching story I believe I have ever read...

Serena and Darien's characters are developed so wonderfully and it's easy to fall in love with him (as if it were ever hard to...)

He's so utterly oblivious yet he knows more than he should. She's so perfect yet she doesn't know it...I love it. It's such a beautiful story, I wanted to cry.. *cries* lol.

The ending had me kicking myself, but I thought it fit, anyway. Great work, I loved it (as if you coldn't tell from my endless gushing)!
SweetSins54 - Wednesday August 20, 2003 at 04:28
Wow this was one hell of a story! Wow wow wow! I really enjoyed it, have you written any others? I'm new to this site so this would be a whole new thing for me. Keep up the good work!
SweetSins54 - Wednesday August 20, 2003 at 04:28
Wow this was one hell of a story! Wow wow wow! I really enjoyed it, have you written any others? I'm new to this site so this would be a whole new thing for me. Keep up the good work!
Violet - Monday March 03, 2003 at 01:25
I love this story, it's sweet and touching. I read your other work the continue of this story, please write more of that, I want to know what happen.
Sailor_Rose - Tuesday December 31, 2002 at 14:22
WOW Ash I didn't know u wrote stories!! This story is amazing! There better be a sequel!!!
princess-bb - Tuesday December 31, 2002 at 06:30
OH HOW WONDERFUL! Totally well written but the ending? How coul dyuo leave us hanging like that? Did they live happily ever after or what? ANYWAYZ GOOD JOB!
Lillian - Tuesday December 24, 2002 at 22:50
*glomps ash* I finally read the whole story and it's great! *goes off to read other story now*
Anonymous - Monday November 18, 2002 at 23:21
It's a simple and cute idea, but I find it hard to believe that Serena's self esteem is so bad that she tries to look dowdy and frumpy at school, but wears close fitting tank tops and shorts at home.

I like the first person POV, and maybe it's just a personal pet peeve but I'm not so fond of switching from Darien to Serena to Darien again...
Belle - Sunday November 03, 2002 at 10:06
Hey, OMG! That was such a good story. There were a few SDIs -Sudden Death Infractions- sorry, I have my English thinking cap on right now. Anyways, back to the review.

Changed by an Angel is a very romantic story about two people. A low esteemed high school student and an angel, who is not allowed to love. Two people who shared laughter, anger, and cries. Two people whose destiny is determined by a red rose. Two people whose love will conquer all... Even their destiny.

Okies, I just had to put that. I just love this story. I think I'm gonna read it again. I especially love the ending. You know what would have been better though? If Ashlee just left it so that Darien's star will still be burning and they don't get back together again. You know kinda like Cowboy Bebop, when Spike died in the end and Titanic, when Jack died in the end. So the couples were to be together but things just got in the way. Then the story would have a much stronger affect. It would be buried in the back of the reader's mind that though Darien is not with Serena anymore, Serena will know that he'll always by guiding her and protecting her, for all time.

Anyways, that's it. Lates. Great job Ashlee.

Thank you for the great story,
Meeh...
Sere2002 - Monday October 14, 2002 at 21:06
From the start I was hooked. I had to finish it. Now that I have, I loved it!!! You are a very gifted writer. I was very impressed with the emotion the the characters evoked. Thank you.
Anonymous - Thursday October 10, 2002 at 11:28
ahhh...no way that was pure evil!!! i like the ending i did but.....ahh can't ya keep going plz so many questions, like does he remember her? why's he back? is he re-born or is he still an angel? i think you should do a sequal plz!!!!!!! ok great story it was a great read your a really good writer but plz write a sequal!

thanks
magickal
Anonymous - Tuesday October 08, 2002 at 23:26
This was a great story!
Sailor_Sista - Sunday September 29, 2002 at 08:41
Oh. Ma. Gosh.
And you say IM good!!
I loved that!! I'm heading off to read the sequal right away!!
Um... i liked it, it was an interesting plot.. slightly cliche'd but that was okay, it was good all the same.
But you should htink about getting that looked over, edited nad what not. I saw quite a lot of mistakes.

Ciao, Sista.
Fantasia - Wednesday September 25, 2002 at 09:37
OMG!!! What an amazing story!!! You certainly must write again ashlee!!! Go go go!! ^_^ This story rocks...!! It's been so long since I have had a great story and this one is better than great!
ladysolo - Wednesday September 25, 2002 at 05:56
Ash, I told you I was reading it, and now I'm finally done (two nights of 2AM readings just so you know). And now I need a sequel. *grins* Good thing you've already started it or I would have to of bugged you endlessly! Now I only have to bug you for updates! *winks* That was a great story--I can see why it's #1 (literally:) and you have to keep in mind that you have to write no matter what anybody tells you. Just some words of sage advice from the mouth of solo.
Anonymous - Sunday September 22, 2002 at 12:20
WheRes the sequel??? -_-
Anonymous - Thursday September 19, 2002 at 10:53
SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL!SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL!SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL!SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL!SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL! SEQUEL!ok i'm done.....I want a sequel..:D
Anonymous - Monday September 16, 2002 at 08:58
We nEEd A SEquEL!!!!!!!
Lady_Artemis - Thursday September 12, 2002 at 12:06
im confused, but i love it. i want an epilogue! im confused! but this story is so fabulous and sweet!
Anonymous - Thursday September 12, 2002 at 07:49
AHH!!!! you have to wirte a sequel!!!!!! WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?????
CrystallineLily - Wednesday September 11, 2002 at 16:19
u no how i said i wanted an epilogue in my last review? ya, well scratch that out. I WANT A SEQUEL!!!!! i swear, ur evil, ending the story like that. I don't even know WHY he's BACK. seriously, Ashlee.....u should consider a sequel...and by consider, i mean say 'yes i'll write a sequel' and WRITE one.......or else..............
CrystallineLily - Tuesday September 10, 2002 at 23:11
it's OVER????? will u write an epilogue? PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZZZZZZZZZ???
browneyes - Sunday September 08, 2002 at 02:06
Omg!!!!! You have to have a sequel. I love this story. It's so great. Please, please, please "with 2 cherries on top".
SilverRunningWater89 - Sunday September 08, 2002 at 01:43
This is like the best story I've read! I love it! You are such a talented author, I'm in awe! Keep up the greatest work! *sniff sniff* that was so sweet!
Sovereign_Lily - Saturday September 07, 2002 at 19:14
*scowl* You don't have an ending like that without a sequel. I DON'T SEE A SEQUEL!!!! *glare*
Anonymous - Tuesday September 03, 2002 at 20:13
There were a few grammar mistakes like missing words, but they were really easy to figure out so it didn't really make a big difference. That's my little technical critique aka constructive critism bleh. Just thought I'd shove it in.

*starts chanting* Sequel, sequel, sequel. Even just a one parter. ^^ I've actually been reading this story on FF.net. You might have noticed my review there. ^.^ I loved it! Great story! I'm looking forward to reading more by you. Keep writing.

~*Chikara*~
Anonymous - Tuesday September 03, 2002 at 04:31
Aww you have to do a sequel!!! PLeaseeeee!!
Clover - Monday September 02, 2002 at 22:57
I like it. It's really good, but I don't know perhaps you could write an epilogue?
Jamestown - Monday September 02, 2002 at 22:05
Is there going to be some kind of continuation of this SM fic or are you going onto bigger projects. I really like the story it's just that for once I really want to maybe here a POV from Darien or something. What ever you plan on writing next I'm sure it will be great.
Silentstar - Saturday August 31, 2002 at 23:39
You write the greatest cliffhangers!!! Can't wait for the next story to come out. Hurry!
Anonymous - Saturday August 31, 2002 at 20:44
You are incredible!!! You got 7 chapters out in such a short amount of time* I am going to cry, I really want to see the ending!!!!!!
*keep up the great work*
Sovereign_Lily - Saturday August 31, 2002 at 00:48
AUGHH!!! YOU CAN'T DO THAT TO ME!!!
Also, I went poo twice today. Thats too healthy so you should finish this story! I also had diarea yesterday so you have to finish the story! I even ate the diarea (aren't you jealou)

^^; My sister blackmailed me into posting this thing she wrote. Please don't htink things of me just because she is like that. *huddles by wall*
ChibiJ - Friday August 30, 2002 at 22:53
ugh! what did he write! tell me!!!! or...just post the next chapter. *grins*
Anonymous - Friday August 30, 2002 at 18:57
I love it* Please post chapter 4 ASAP, thanks!
Anonymous - Wednesday August 28, 2002 at 20:41
CUUUUUUTE!!!!!!!! please send the next part out sooooooooooon!!
Sovereign_Lily - Tuesday August 27, 2002 at 19:01
Hurry, hurry up for chapter 4!
foenixfyre - Tuesday August 27, 2002 at 17:31
Interesting and different. I like it.
Anonymous - Tuesday August 27, 2002 at 14:23
This is getting veeeery good, it's unbeleivable how quickly you can finish a chapter. HOWEVER PLEASE COME UP WITH A NEXT ONE SOOOON !!! I REALLY WANT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS!
thanks*
Anonymous - Monday August 26, 2002 at 01:08
Definitely something I'd like to see more of.
Sovereign_Lily - Monday August 26, 2002 at 00:52
It is to laugh. (I've been watching Bugs Bunny.) Two chapters at different times on the same day.
I LOVE YOU!!! Not many people can do that unless the chapter was predone. *shakes hand*
Anonymous - Sunday August 25, 2002 at 21:54
Hey,
This is getting very very good, I cannot wait until you finish the rest of it *pleeeeeeeease don't stop*
austin - Sunday August 25, 2002 at 21:10
Great story I am really enjoying it. Hope to see a new chapter soon.
Sovereign_Lily - Sunday August 25, 2002 at 20:46
It's got a very good beginning. *growls at Ashlee* You had damn better finish this . . .
ChibiJ - Sunday August 25, 2002 at 20:21
interesting...i'm definitely curious to see where this goes. hope to see the next chapter soon!
Anonymous - Sunday August 25, 2002 at 19:29
Hey,
I really like your way of writing *i hope you get a chance to read this* Do you think you'll ever get around to finishing it ? Now thatyou started you can't stop!!! I really want to read more, thanks*

Alley
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