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Story: Changed by an Angel
Posted on Sunday August 25, 2002 at 15:07 by Ashlee_A |  |
Season: Alternate Universe Main Characters: Mamoru/Darien, Usagi/Serena
Genre: Drama, Romance, Supernatural
Rated: PG13 Status: Completed
17-year-old Serena Terrin is a nerd. A geek. A social pariah. Enter Darien, your typical male angel, who's received Serena for his next mission. But this assignment doesn't exactly go as planned, especially when it's the angel who starts breaking all the rules.
Number of Chapters: 11 Total Size: 256k Word Count: 44,101
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 |  |  |  |  | Nich - Sunday November 09, 2008 at 03:05 |  |
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 |  |  |  | Whoah! Great! But does that mean he is normal but does not remember her since he called her miss? Is there a sequel?? Great job! Loved it! |
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 |  |  |  | I didnt like the ending...did he come back as an angel or did he come back as a human? |
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 |  |  |  |  | lexie_06 - Monday December 10, 2007 at 04:54 |  |
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 |  |  |  | amazing story! i love it! |
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 |  |  |  |  | moonie - Wednesday March 07, 2007 at 09:25 |  |
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 |  |  |  | please write more it feels like the story hasnt ended yet i need more itell you more |
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 |  |  |  |  | Mayonaka - Friday January 26, 2007 at 22:20 |  |
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 |  |  |  | I actually cried at your story at the end, believe it or not. See the fool I am??Well anyway, everybody's always said I've been an emotional person...but I LOVED your story...witty and so sweet. But the ending was a bit confusing though, how could Darien be back? Wasn't he dead? Or did he become human because god became merciful on the two? |
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 |  |  |  |  | Anonymous - Sunday December 24, 2006 at 07:18 |  |
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 |  |  |  | you have write another one..!!
its really good. |
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 |  |  |  |  | XxMelaxX - Friday July 14, 2006 at 20:10 |  |
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 |  |  |  | AHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!! That was a good story and the ending!!!! :-( I wanted to know more!! But I guess that will do hee hee. Really good story, made me teary at some point :-) Good job and continue writing!!! |
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 |  |  |  | amazing!!!! the best story ever!!!!!!!!
i loved it sooo much!!!
it was incredible!! wonderful!! beautiful!!
sooo sweet!! so cute!! so... everything
the best!!
you wrote it so well, and i loved the characters...
when darien left it was soo sad.. i cried!!!
i really did...
but besides that.. your story was amazing.. so fun, and exciting... i couldn't stop reading it until i had finished!!
so.. i'm going to read the sequel now .... hehheh
take care!!
and thank you sooo much for that wonderful story!!
thank you thank you thnak you thank you
bye! |
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 |  |  |  |  | babydee - Wednesday May 31, 2006 at 19:38 |  |
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 |  |  |  | you did a good job on your story. but i wish that darien didnt have to leave. and also i wish that u would of had him appear as someone else sooner. |
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 |  |  |  | this story is AWESOME!!!!! i think your brill and u need to keep writing, coz it would be a shame if you didnt.
love ya
jade
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 |  |  |  | Perfect. Absolutely perfect. This story just sucked me in and would not let me go(even to the bathroom!)Which is saying a lot since I had just drank 2 sodas=) Definetly going on my favorite list and a awesome Valentine Day treat.Thanks for writing! |
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 |  |  |  |  | Nasuki - Monday January 16, 2006 at 06:46 |  |
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 |  |  |  | beutiful i love this story so sad at the ending i am rereading this story the second time i cried when he left her and the ending was well done good job :a pat on the back: well done..nice storyline |
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 |  |  |  | ^_^ amazing! hehehe i love your stories! they're so adorable and sooo kute! welp you keep up the good work alright?! ^_~ |
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 |  |  |  | aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! ummmm... sowwee^^ hehe...got caught up in the moment! i wuv the story!! yes i do!it rocked! |
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 |  |  |  | Beautiful. You are gifted. |
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 |  |  |  | that story was awesome! are you going to continue it? i think you should. once again great story. |
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 |  |  |  |  | Eternia - Saturday July 30, 2005 at 08:39 |  |
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 |  |  |  | Wow, wow, and wow!!!! so are you gonna do a sequel to that or what??? you can't just leave people hanging like that.....please write more. it was such a good story, and it made me cry!!! |
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 |  |  |  |  | yolande - Monday April 18, 2005 at 21:01 |  |
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 |  |  |  | I always enjoy well written stories and this was one of the best I ever read. It kept me awake for much longer than I should have been in 2 nights, but I needed to find out how it ended!
Thanks for two really nice evenings and nights! |
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 |  |  |  | Listen... if u dont write a sequal, i might just have to find you and tie u up in a chair until u do. no lie. i will! jeesus! that story was INSANE! *in a good way* i fully loved it, and i NEED more, as in more NOW. cant leave a girl hanging. thanks again.
sequal. sequal. sequal. (all i have to say..)
-love,
MoonieDream |
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 |  |  |  |  | Serafina - Thursday January 29, 2004 at 00:22 |  |
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 |  |  |  | That is THE sweetest, most touching story I believe I have ever read...
Serena and Darien's characters are developed so wonderfully and it's easy to fall in love with him (as if it were ever hard to...)
He's so utterly oblivious yet he knows more than he should. She's so perfect yet she doesn't know it...I love it. It's such a beautiful story, I wanted to cry.. *cries* lol.
The ending had me kicking myself, but I thought it fit, anyway. Great work, I loved it (as if you coldn't tell from my endless gushing)! |
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 |  |  |  | Wow this was one hell of a story! Wow wow wow! I really enjoyed it, have you written any others? I'm new to this site so this would be a whole new thing for me. Keep up the good work! |
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 |  |  |  | Wow this was one hell of a story! Wow wow wow! I really enjoyed it, have you written any others? I'm new to this site so this would be a whole new thing for me. Keep up the good work! |
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 |  |  |  |  | Violet - Monday March 03, 2003 at 01:25 |  |
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 |  |  |  | I love this story, it's sweet and touching. I read your other work the continue of this story, please write more of that, I want to know what happen. |
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 |  |  |  | WOW Ash I didn't know u wrote stories!! This story is amazing! There better be a sequel!!! |
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 |  |  |  | OH HOW WONDERFUL! Totally well written but the ending? How coul dyuo leave us hanging like that? Did they live happily ever after or what? ANYWAYZ GOOD JOB! |
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 |  |  |  |  | Lillian - Tuesday December 24, 2002 at 22:50 |  |
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 |  |  |  | *glomps ash* I finally read the whole story and it's great! *goes off to read other story now* |
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 |  |  |  |  | Anonymous - Monday November 18, 2002 at 23:21 |  |
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 |  |  |  | It's a simple and cute idea, but I find it hard to believe that Serena's self esteem is so bad that she tries to look dowdy and frumpy at school, but wears close fitting tank tops and shorts at home.
I like the first person POV, and maybe it's just a personal pet peeve but I'm not so fond of switching from Darien to Serena to Darien again... |
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 |  |  |  |  | Belle - Sunday November 03, 2002 at 10:06 |  |
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 |  |  |  | Hey, OMG! That was such a good story. There were a few SDIs -Sudden Death Infractions- sorry, I have my English thinking cap on right now. Anyways, back to the review.
Changed by an Angel is a very romantic story about two people. A low esteemed high school student and an angel, who is not allowed to love. Two people who shared laughter, anger, and cries. Two people whose destiny is determined by a red rose. Two people whose love will conquer all... Even their destiny.
Okies, I just had to put that. I just love this story. I think I'm gonna read it again. I especially love the ending. You know what would have been better though? If Ashlee just left it so that Darien's star will still be burning and they don't get back together again. You know kinda like Cowboy Bebop, when Spike died in the end and Titanic, when Jack died in the end. So the couples were to be together but things just got in the way. Then the story would have a much stronger affect. It would be buried in the back of the reader's mind that though Darien is not with Serena anymore, Serena will know that he'll always by guiding her and protecting her, for all time.
Anyways, that's it. Lates. Great job Ashlee.
Thank you for the great story,
Meeh... |
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 |  |  |  |  | Sere2002 - Monday October 14, 2002 at 21:06 |  |
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