New Orleans is a town full of mystery and superstititon. But what happenens when Serena, a prominent art student, winds up in the bed of a dark stranger after a violent night on the town? She was out for inspriaton, but seemed to get a bit more than expected.
Number of Chapters: 15 Total Size: 424k Word Count: 77,571
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|heaven85 - Tuesday July 10, 2012 at 07:04|
Great job on this story. It is very interesting and a great read.
|Nich - Friday October 24, 2008 at 04:47|
OMG!!! That was absolutely captivating! That was one of the best I have read! You have an amazing talent! Please keep it up!
i love this story...very refreshing and thought provoking...a few grammar errors, but none to ruin the thickening plot.
wow...i just reread this story and its amazing as always...this is one of my favorite stories and i enjoy it please write more often your a wonderful writter!
wow....i dont even know where to start...
its an amazing story i loved it please write more stories i love your writting...i loved how the story ended and how she killed jacob...and im not really sure what to think of him being human...i like it but then again i kinda wish he wasnt...it kinda makes him the same as everybody else!
but anyways great story please keep writting
lots of love
|lexie_06 - Thursday November 15, 2007 at 02:42|
AWE! the ending is amazing! a couple spelling erros but what an amazing story! I loved it!
wow! I LOOOVED this story! you did an amazing job with this!! Thank you!
|babydee - Wednesday May 17, 2006 at 23:03|
you did a great job on your story. u need to use spell check next time though! i like how u kept everything flowing. i didnt get lose not one time. and it didnt get boring. keep up the great work!
|nav - Friday December 30, 2005 at 21:59|
WOW I absolutely love the story it has something different and the ending it just perfect. you are an absolute genius please keep writting stories cause you are a really good can't want for your next story.
It's great! I love to read story about Darien and Serena in Vampire stories. It have an attractive mystery inside it. You're doing a wonderful job.
Absolutely wonderful? I love vampire stories involving Serena and Darien. You really did a great job!
|appleme - Thursday August 04, 2005 at 22:07|
CUTE! ehehe sorry cant say anything else its juss cute!!!
|twinrisk - Tuesday June 07, 2005 at 13:37|
IN-CRE-DI-BLE!!! The storyline is so cool and the ending is almost perfect! I bet you've spent a whole lot of time thinking and planning for this entire story. Although you do need to sort out the typo errors all over the pages.
Guess what? Half the night has passed and I've a club meeting tomorrow, a research report to hand-in tomorrow (which i've not even started typing) and 2 tutorials to complete by TOMORROW! And I brushed them off the moment I read the 1st few paragraphs of "Try Me"!!!
Even so I'll be quite happy to be kicked if i can't finish my stuff by tonight 'cos I've not wasted 6hours in vain. I'VE READ AN INCREDIBLE MASTERPIECE TONIGHT!!! :)
Awe!! The cutest thing ever!!! How did you manage to write such an amazing fic that I stayed up for an extra four hours to read??? Anywho, thank you for such a wonderful experience!!! It's beautiful and amazing!!
That was really good. I'm sorry Dave was bad, I liked him. At first I thought he and Molly would get together, but I guess not since his head seems to have been removed. Be kind of difficult for Molly to date a headless man. *shrugs* Oh well. I really liked the story, it flowed nicely though I did notice that you had some spelling mistakes mostly putting her when you meant he and quite when you meant quit. I'm going to read the sequel now!
|lyss - Sunday May 16, 2004 at 12:44|
wow!!!! its damn good and i am so happy that its completed...i won't be dying of anticipation....hehe
|Nani - Tuesday February 03, 2004 at 16:54|
I have been bored with some of the new stories that have been coming out. They lack originality. And I feel that if a writer is going to write about classic times they should at least do it with class and excellence. This story is one of the bet I've read in a great while. I was disappointed when I had to stop reading and enthusiastic when I could sit down and start reading again. Twigs_Violet took a classic love story and made it her own. And from one writer to another I say, "Story well done."
|Loki - Tuesday January 20, 2004 at 17:15|
Well I must say, this is a fantastic story. Its got everything; dark and dangerous vampires, a good hearted vampire master & his re-incarnated beloved returns ... the action, horror, suspense, romance, the moments of humour the tension between the main characters & the palpability of the characters is fabulous! ... This story is soooo wonderful, the typos and minor hick-ups can be easily overlooked. If you smoothed those out, it would add polish to a fic I am absolutely in love with and in awe of ... & I've only finished the eighth chapter! Wow! You are a mistress of storytelling that's for sure, looking forward to finishing this gem!
*Tuxedo Mask bestowes more midnight blue roses upon Twigs*
|Anonymous - Thursday November 13, 2003 at 21:32|
I really enjoyed your story. It had a very intersting twist.
This is such a great story. I reread it (cause I forgot I read it awhile ago) and I loved it. I always liked the character you made Darien to be....only if I could have a vamp boyfriend like Darien....*dreamland*.......*sigh* all well. Great story!
Stories like yours, that are finished, and great, are very hard to find. And probably here, is the only place to find them.
If you have time, write another one. I'd love to see what other ideas, and writings you have under your sleave.
All the praises that u guys can think up
|Kittycat - Friday February 28, 2003 at 06:47|
I loved it. Plain and simple. It was a really good story that was a little dark and a little fluffy all at the same time which in my opinion is the best combination. Good work!
|Krissy - Monday December 30, 2002 at 09:00|
I soooooooooooooooooo lovedddddddddddd your story !!!!! :)
i must say that at the beginning i found it to be a little boring but when i started to read the second chapter i couldn't stop reading it.
If ever you do a sequel please send it to me ASAP. (firstname.lastname@example.org)
you did a very good job and i look foward to read more of your stuff
P.S. Your story was really original too ;)
|MoshiGirl - Thursday December 26, 2002 at 07:21|
Oh wow, I loved it Em! Great Job, I was certainly surprised by a lot of the scenes. But hey, it's all you. Keep up your fabulous writing. Mark would be proud.
I loved this story so much I read it twice I just wish she would have had more of an ending than it did but the story overall was great
Wow awsome story. right now im speachless I don't not what to say other then(wow)!!!!!! That story just sends shivers up my spine. write other storys please. Your so good at them...... (smiles) keep macking storys (jumps up and down)
I so loved this story!!!! You should be very proud of what you have done. It definitly held me attention right to the very end. I only hope that a sequel to this is written, you can really carry on with this. Sensational stuff!!!
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|Anonymous - Tuesday December 10, 2002 at 05:12|
Please! Please please please please... you can't just leave it there... you need to get the sequel out very very soon..
Would tomorrow be easy enough? Please? Onegai?
::sits in corner crying pitifully waiting for the sequel::
|Lillian - Saturday November 23, 2002 at 02:42|
wow. this story is just... a work of art. I luved it!
|Anonymous - Monday November 18, 2002 at 21:07|
I love it. I can't wait for the epilogue though. Please write it fast.
:-o Woah . . . that was an unexpected ending. It actually surprised me subconciously that it had to end. To me, the great ones go on forever, unless they're finished when I find them. *sigh* The epiloge will be out soon, right? Right?
|RebaJean - Sunday November 17, 2002 at 16:21|
Wonderful story. I absolutely did not pick up on your clues pointing to THAT ending. So that's what Jacob meant when he said she would be then end of them.
|Anonymous - Sunday November 17, 2002 at 04:53|
wow what awsome story you realy need to write a epiloge cause ihave to no what happened.
Ps Awsome story
First rate story
|jin - Sunday November 17, 2002 at 02:57|
It definitely need an epilogue to answer some of the questions. Is Darien cure?
|Anonymous - Sunday November 17, 2002 at 02:36|
Ah! that's it, this has gotta be my favorite fic ever! *please do an epilogue* THIS IS FANTASTIC>>KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK>>>>>
I absolutely love this story......and I desperately need another chapter. The plot is so cool and your writing style is really descriptive. I can picture what is going on with ease. Amazing......please keep writing.
this story is great!!
|Anonymous - Tuesday November 12, 2002 at 14:14|
I couldn't stop reading this. Although I do wonder that if you change the names a little you could make it into an original story... Just a little thought since the storyline is an alternative reality (unless you decide to add their Sailor powers in the next few chapters...)
|Anonymous - Friday November 08, 2002 at 03:31|
WRITE MORE!!!!! I DEMAND IT!!!!!!!!! lol jk i just really really liked it! ^_~ So seriously...... PPLLLLlEEEEAAAAASSSEEE write more or if u ve got it written but just want more reviews ill be glad to review fifty hundred times lol ^_^ Ummmmmmm, hmm well ne whooz its a great story, love the plot and how its going... ^_^ so does Darien have ANY friends whom he can trust? Or are ALL of them out to get Serena??? Confuzzling at some points but overall its great! Kk well ill leave u alone now buh bye
|Anonymous - Thursday November 07, 2002 at 21:22|
Great story keep writing...
|Anonymous - Monday November 04, 2002 at 03:00|
nice story.please contin. soon
|Pheosha - Monday November 04, 2002 at 01:14|
AWESOME~~~!! you are soo telling me what all you have plained in the morning!! *sticks tounge out to other readers* hahaha i get to know before you do, b/cuz i am editor, which yes it is taking her a while to get the editted chapters up but anyways i'm also one that rides to school with her in the morning so BOO-YAH! heheh i know i'm evil anyways to get down to buisness..yes it was awesome chapter. and very thought out. we are really going to have to get those co writing ideas down here soon. well i g2g. talk to ya in the morning
|Anonymous - Thursday October 31, 2002 at 04:55|
put out the next chapters sooon i cant take not knowing whats going to happen....keep putting chapters out..i just love this story:)
|Anonymous - Wednesday October 30, 2002 at 21:23|
ok that was a very strange twist and i like it
|Anonymous - Wednesday October 30, 2002 at 02:05|
WTF? You leave w/a cliff hanger like that! C'mon, next chapter, next chapter, next chapter! I'm waitin here....
lol, but seriously, update soon. Love the story!
|Anonymous - Tuesday October 29, 2002 at 21:54|
YAY* you wrote more (and it's great!) please write more soon!
|Pheosha - Friday October 11, 2002 at 22:56|
Way to go girl! I loved editting for ya. Always got good ideas, can't wait till you get another going. Remember we need to think up ideas on the co writing thing ;)Talk to ya later.
|Anonymous - Saturday October 05, 2002 at 17:45|
God, i love your writing. Chapter 11 just take my breath away.
|Anonymous - Thursday October 03, 2002 at 23:51|
okay......hi..I just wanted to tell u that ur story is really entertainig and...it keeps ur atention for the hole story. Just have to beg u to plese finish it soon 'cuz my mom saw that last chapter and i figure i'll be off punishment sometime soon..hopefully...yeah..i'll end this cuz she's standing behind me...
Love you story and I hope you write more chapters.
Star gazer AKA Smoon
|ChibiJ - Saturday September 28, 2002 at 01:36|
twigs-chan! more please! this is such a great story! i can't wait to find out what is going to happen!!
|Anonymous - Thursday September 26, 2002 at 00:08|
O my god, what a great story ! (so far your on 7) I really really hope you keep writting this cause you clearly have a HUGE fanclub for it. I really love this story, please get the rest out ASAP, thanks!
***Great Work, Keep It Up***
|ChibiJ - Sunday September 22, 2002 at 00:38|
twigs-chan!! this is a great story! i just read up to ch. 6 (i am so behind on my reading!) and i can't wait for more!! this is a really good vamp story.
|Anonymous - Wednesday September 18, 2002 at 18:25|
Awesome, hope to read more very soon. Don't stop now!
|Ariel - Tuesday September 17, 2002 at 15:17|
That was soooooooo good!!!
Please writte some more...I whant to know the rest!!!
|Anonymous - Saturday September 14, 2002 at 07:20|
sounds good so far, write more
The story itself was pretty good so I won't offer you any advice plot-wise. I will, however, offer you a bit of advise in the way you write it. First of all, separate each person's dialogue into its own paragraph for easier reading. There are times you did that but then you went back to clumping all the dialogue together. Be consistent with your style. Second, in your effort to make your sentences conscise and to the point, you have made your story sound choppy. Sometimes, if you combine two sentences into one, it will make your story and your sentences flow better. Take these two sentences for example: "Looking around quickly, she spotted her. Standing still, she had her hands to her temples." (Chapter 1). Why don't you try, "Looking around quickly, she spotted her standing still with her hands to her temples." It still has basically the same words as the first example, but it just sounds like it's finished as opposed to the other one. There were other grammatical and spelling errors but I think they're easily fixable and you don't need me to point them out to you. Please don't think that I'm dissing your story, because I'm not. Just think of this review as a way of helping your good story become even better.