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Story: Game of Seduction
Posted on Tuesday October 01, 2002 at 19:43 by MG
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Members Stories Rated: R
Status: Incomplete

It's a game of life, love, and morals...It all begins when a seventeen year-old Serena sets her sights on her 25 year old Math Teacher Mr. Shields...illegal and sexy, this story brings about a true reality with interesting romantic curves.


Number of Chapters: 16          Total Size: 574k          Word Count: 104,978

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Anonymous - Tuesday April 30, 2013 at 09:16
That's it!

I loved this story at the beginning eagerly awaiting more. I was patient now I have had a gut full of this story. I am sick & tired of waiting for an ending. Get a fn ending to this
Anonymous - Friday October 26, 2012 at 16:13
50 shades is better this is inflated by fans finish the dam thing and be done with this crap
Anonymous - Monday December 12, 2011 at 09:25
The last comment sums up a lot, but I do know all of us at FF.net are getting tired of trying to keep this fic up and noticed so you'll update - sorry but I am not bothering any more
Anonymous - Friday November 19, 2010 at 09:51
I am so over this story. It started out as one of the best fanfics ever written and now...........nothing!
Its been going on for the last 8 years with no update in site. The author has been busy but this story deserves an ending. Especially ending for the long suffering fans who follow this story!!
lovelyl - Sunday November 14, 2010 at 04:39
I have read this story so many times it would have to be one of my favourite SM fan fics of all times. :D So when you get around to posting another chapter or 2 I will be ecstatic. :D
Amethyst-Heart - Tuesday October 26, 2010 at 17:26
Hey, I just wanted to drop by and say that I really love this story (rereading it yesterday reminded me just how much I loved this story since when you first started writing it), and I hope you plan on finishing it one day. I know your life is incredibly busy (I hope you're doing well academically and professionally!), so I understand if it takes you a while, but I'd really love to see what you had planned for Serena and Darien, and how it all ends. Your writing is incredible, and I just love the way you've meticulously planned everything out - the execution is brilliant! Your characters are awesome (I can definitely relate to your Serena and I'm sure all your readers want to shag Darien), and just... your attention to detail is absolutely amazing.

The one issue that I did have at first was some of the excessive punctuation because it got distracting, but after realizing that you meant these as italics or to serve as emphasis (I remember this was on FFN and they completely changed their system, so all your formatting must have disappeared, so you probably used the commas and apostrophes to make up for that), I don't really mind it at all (because I know why it's there and that it's intentional). Actually, if you'd like someone to format the story (add italics where you had wanted them), I'd love to help!

Anyway,I hope you continue writing, and I wish you well!
Moonhawk - Tuesday March 16, 2010 at 08:09
I love GOS as it is my favorite story. I stepped away from Sailor Moon for a bit but it was a combination of your stories and some other authors that brought me back. I was on the mailing list that you had a while back. I just hope that you keep going with your writing and I wish you the best. Did you ever get your Master's?
Red_Elephant - Monday November 09, 2009 at 12:27
I think I read this a few years ago and thought it was ok so I am deliriously happy that you have revised it because its brilliant. Your language is great, characterisation brilliant and you had me laughing quite a bit. Would really love to read the whole thing if/when you have the time to post it which, I hope, won't be too long a wait. Wonderfully sexy and honest. Love it.
AshleyJanee - Friday November 14, 2008 at 16:59
Oh my god!
You are seriously one of the best writers I have ever seen on this website and Fanfiction. I absolutely LOVE this story.
Please please please please pleaseeeeee update soon.
Please!!
deli - Wednesday September 17, 2008 at 14:31
heey love your story but i think i read it years ago and you havn't posted any more. would love to read the rest!!!
anaovcaric - Friday September 05, 2008 at 07:12
when are you going to update?! i'm dying here.... ;-D hurry! :-)
enggirl - Thursday August 28, 2008 at 07:24
I know this is sad, but I love Andrew. His comments are hilarious XD
lovelyl - Friday August 15, 2008 at 13:35
Great story I am really enjoying this, so far I have read the chapters 2ce, can't wait for the next one. :)
The_Crystal_Rose - Thursday August 14, 2008 at 23:51
Wow, I've been reading this from Fanfiction.net and I came here because I was curious of the changes and I love it! I cannot wait to see what the rest of the story has in store! Great job!!!
Britney - Thursday July 03, 2008 at 07:06
update quickly! this is a great story!!!! please update MG (=

i love your stories
Anonymous - Thursday March 27, 2008 at 14:19
Whoaa. You really have to update soon! The cliffy you ended it with was completely awesome. I cannot wait for more!! ^^
anweaver2007 - Tuesday February 05, 2008 at 22:53
i like this story alot but how could you leave us hanging??
i really hope that you will update this story soon because i love it!
Lena204 - Tuesday February 05, 2008 at 18:54
Yay! I'm soo glade to see another chapter up, I've always loved this story!

Can't wait to see more.

^_^
Miakoday - Monday January 28, 2008 at 22:17
wow! what a cliffhanger to end on! I can't wait for more! I started reading this awhile ago but just recently came back and read it again! I love your work! The way you write always manages to draw me in! Thank you! I can't wait to see what happens!!
awakeandreeming - Wednesday January 23, 2008 at 02:29
This chapter, although long-awaited, was worth every excruciating moment lol.

Your writing style is fantastic, the language and word choice is so evocative, and the characterizations are absolutely incredible.

I'm 100% in love with Serenity and Charles and am desperately hoping that they'll make it through together. And Darien...oh, he's gotten himself into a pickle, eh? lol Darn that Andrew and his big mouth!

I can't wait for the next sinfully delicious chapter! Keep up the awesome work! :D
lexie_06 - Tuesday January 22, 2008 at 02:46
OMG yay you added another chapter! you left me at the edge of my seat...again! hope to read more soon, hope everything is going good with school!
anaovcaric - Sunday January 20, 2008 at 11:37
Thank you sooo much for this new chapter!! I've been going crzy waiting for it. and again, it was incredible! I agree that Darien really feels something for Serena, but doesn't want to confess it to himself. Well, looking forward for the next one!! :-)
Kimmi-Chan - Saturday January 19, 2008 at 07:35
Wow, I wasn't expecting a this chapter to appear (it was definitely a nice surprise).

This chapter was definitely intense! Darien is quite an a*****e, if that was your aim you're doing a great job. He's real this time around but I personally think he truly feels something for Serena. This crass mantra seems to be a cover, a mask he's using due to his past with Rei. I state this because Darien (and the narration) is far too explicit in terms of cruelty; like Darien is trying too prove something to himself or is in denial (i.e him stating he'll leave her before she leaves him, him emphasizing the difference between exclusive and relationship). I'm still unsure if I like this submissive Serena, I'm waiting for her to stand her ground and fight.

I really like the scene at the house party, I think it's better than the original. It's a small re-write but I like how it was Serena who decided to go in, I enjoyed her eavesdropping and the dialog between Mina and Andrew added to the intensity.

Good luck with school, I'm glad you're still working on GOS. I'm excited to see how things turn out between Serena and Darien now.
AmusingChild - Saturday January 19, 2008 at 06:24
wow... I sort of remember reading the chapter that was like this before when you first posted it. I have to say the editing and changes are really impressive. I know that you are trying really hard with this story, so I am rooting for you. And don't worry I don't hate you (I liked you AN lol) I'll just sit here... waiting...
...
still waiting...
Deandra - Thursday November 22, 2007 at 01:18
Good luck with your grad program. Its much more important than finishing this story right now, and should be your first priority. And to the anonymous reviewer. No one cares if you'll be old and gray, Grad programs are tough. We all love this story, but we don't disrespect the author because she has other things to do that are obviously important to her.
kbrown2012 - Friday November 09, 2007 at 01:00
hi you may know me as moonfan2012, i still love the story i cant wait for you to finish it. and good luck with school.
ladydee_1au - Saturday November 03, 2007 at 13:28
Goodluck to you at school MG and I sincerely hope all goes well for you! i have been throughquite a bit myself to reach my own career. Years at Uni is never easy. To the last anon reviewer you have to give people a chance to give there opinions, i know this is to review stories and give constructing critism but some people have different ways of dealing with it. Again goodluck MG!!
Anonymous - Friday November 02, 2007 at 06:21
Writing a story like this and balancing life is a juggling act many people struggle with to bring our fans a hot cool and sexy story like this, to anon, last reviewer, MG has a life, you might wish to consider getting one yourself. She has explained her reasons in the forums if you bother to read and while you're at it, learn how to review, this is to talk about the story, not to hear your whining and carrying on, PM MG and if you have the guts and say this! *grrr shakes head*
Anonymous - Friday November 02, 2007 at 04:45
Why are we not surprised! Your track record at finishing this story is absolutely pathetic. i will be old and grey before you complete this
awakeandreeming - Thursday October 25, 2007 at 19:26
Amazing, amazing, amazing. The characterization is fantastic, the plot is simply superb! lol and your writing style is movie-like, in quality. I pictured every single moment in this fic absolutely perfectly and not once did I lose interest. Very well done; can't wait for the rest.

Good luck with school! :D
anaovcaric - Thursday October 04, 2007 at 07:08
WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE??!! It's been ages since the last one... Hurry... ;-)
Anonymous - Thursday September 13, 2007 at 22:15
wow did u take some chapters off?
sailormoonlover12 - Saturday September 08, 2007 at 06:07
when r u going to up date
Setryochi - Friday August 17, 2007 at 18:00
I love this story so much! I can't believe how you keep the characters in character so well. I feel that you have changed the original characters into something quite oc but you've managed to make it work in a way that if they were real people this is how they might be (maybe not as much swearing on Darien's part, he seems kind of too sensitive for that) but yes, you keep it together well. Their reactions to situations are consistant and I love it! Please keep working along, I support you! ^^
tsykes2005 - Tuesday August 14, 2007 at 03:27
Damn this story is good and i think serena wants to feel sex without a condom
Annerabbit - Monday August 13, 2007 at 18:39
I'm really enjoying the edited chapters! There's loads more detail in them!! Really love this story! Am so glad you're still going on it! Can't wait for chapter 19!! new chappie! YAY!!!! :0)
anaovcaric - Monday August 13, 2007 at 16:20
WOW, two chapters in one week!! I love it, they were great! Looking forward for the next! :-)
flipstahh-93 - Monday August 13, 2007 at 01:37
Ouu, well here comes the [even more] exciting part!! Now that you've uploaded chapter 12/13(?), the next chapter you post will be... one that I haven't read yet! Heh, may be a little dramatic considering the fact that I know you've written more chapters, but I have searched google and various other fanfic sites and they're either not uploaded or broken-linked!

But no matter. As long as you continue to update until the story is done (with an epilogue containing marriage, children, and a happily ever after .. ?) I shall be happy =D
anaovcaric - Friday August 10, 2007 at 14:33
OMG, you have to update ASAP!! I love you story, it's one of the best stories I've ever read. Update pleaseeee!!!!
lexie_06 - Thursday August 09, 2007 at 20:03
wow, amazing story! I really got into it! I hope you get to finish it cause it'd be a shame to leave it unfinished!Please don't leave it incomplete cause in a way it's suspencful to know what happens next!
Hope to finish reading it once its all done.!!
p.s you're one heck of a writer!
princesa_angelbebe - Friday August 03, 2007 at 05:34
OMG OMG OMG this story is awsome! I love the whole love/hate forbidden story, it's defenetly diffrent than anything I have read, I can't wait to read more.. keep up the good work and please please please update soon!
Setryochi - Tuesday July 24, 2007 at 03:32
When is changed to her mother and father's situation I got REALLY confused. I figured it out after a while but yeah, it's confusing in those transitions.

All'n all it was a good chapter.
AmusingChild - Monday July 23, 2007 at 02:50
still goin strong!
Kimmi-Chan - Sunday July 15, 2007 at 04:34
Very glad to see another update so soon =)

I agree with past reviews that the characters have more depth, I really like that Darien and Serena are working towards a relationship. I also like that the revised version of GOS reveals more to their relationship than just sex. However, chapter 10 seemed very rush and didn't have the same humor I remembered from the original. Serena gave into the relationship way too fast (where as before she told Darien that she was uneasy and that she didn't want to get into a relationship with a man who didn't want commitment). As well the little jokes between them seemed almost nonexistent.

Although chapter 10 wasn't my fave chapter, I think the story is coming along great overall. I can't tell you how much I love Darien's character (sooooo much more than the original Darien). Can't wait to see more MG!
Kiwi - Sunday July 15, 2007 at 01:57
This story is so excellent. The characters have more depth to them this time around. Keep up the great work :)
Lena204 - Friday July 13, 2007 at 14:49
OMG! I'm falling back in love with this story with every chapter you repost!

I can't wait for the next one

-- Princess
serenitykiss - Friday July 13, 2007 at 06:20
flu make her puke....??? i think not
Setryochi - Thursday July 05, 2007 at 21:22
I swear a few years ago when I first started reading this it had more chapters and I was sure I had read them. Are these chapters updated old chapters? I love this story to death, I like it so much it's years later and I'm STILL hoping to read to the end. No rush or anything :P.

^^ Anyways, you write so well I'm surprised. I also think that, if you really wanted to you could take these characters and turn them into your own (the characters are really different from their original forms) and publish this as an original story.

Keep up the good work!
Deandra - Wednesday July 04, 2007 at 07:39
Great chapter, can't wait for the next nine chapters.
lizparker180 - Sunday July 01, 2007 at 19:24
WOW! Thanks so much for updating! I love the character development, and the narrative pace is perfect! Please keep up the great work!
RENA630 - Monday June 18, 2007 at 03:38
I wish I had time to leave you a lengthier comment then the one I'm about to give but sadly I'm in a rush...

I absolutely adore this story. The characters, the sexual tension you create with your writing, the plot, everything is mesmerizing. I never read a fic unless it's already been finished and you have been my one and only exception to that rule. Absolutely fabulous.
Lena204 - Thursday June 14, 2007 at 18:54
I absolutely LOVE this fic no matter how many times you revise it! Please update it very soon as I'm just dying to read more!

-- Princess
LiLo_LaO_eMoShUnZ - Tuesday June 12, 2007 at 04:58
I've been trying very hard not to read the revised version of the story until you've finished... = [ but it's just too darn hard! I just love it and I don't mind reading it over and over and over again = ]
sweet_bella - Thursday May 31, 2007 at 20:22
I love this story!! Update soon...please!
SerenityAngel - Monday May 28, 2007 at 20:46
OMG! this story rocks
Annerabbit - Wednesday May 23, 2007 at 17:43
Oh that was really good!! I noticed you changed that last scene quite a bit, same sort of context, but put more in about the date, or rather the end of the date!

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!! :0)
SailorPheonix3 - Wednesday May 23, 2007 at 14:41
I don't think it is a game anymore. The more the two are involved the more they want of one another. I think Darien should end it but I think he is obsessed with Serena now.
teresa - Wednesday May 23, 2007 at 11:09
Ok, my immediate thought after reading this revised chapter is - vagina power. Vagina power is this ridiculous show about vagina power VS penis power (yes, so basically female empowerment done distastefully LoL) hosted by this black woman with her mother in Atlanta. I've never seen it, I watched it on YouTube and it's absolutely ridiculous. Anyway, this chapter, what with Serena chanting to herself about her vagina totally reminded me of that show. Love it!
Anonymous - Wednesday May 23, 2007 at 04:57
What a hot chapter! Darien is so irresistible! Can't wait for the next!
flipstahh-93 - Wednesday May 23, 2007 at 03:06
Ouu goody you added a chapter!! =]
Anonymous - Wednesday May 23, 2007 at 02:26
Love this story. So well written. Well developed characters. And the chemistry between Serena and Darien is sizzling. :)
Anonymous - Wednesday May 09, 2007 at 02:57
Best fic ive ever read in my life.
Not even jk. But theres only 7 chapters..?? =/ Ive read this story before and it had more.. Was that still you who wrote it? Well, even if it wasnt, it doesnt matter.. as long as you're still working on this story and are going to finish it.. ?? preferably within a couple of months..?? *smiles innocently* =]
SailorPheonix3 - Monday April 16, 2007 at 19:00
lol Darien's charater is too much.
Annerabbit - Sunday April 15, 2007 at 10:21
I'm so glad you're working on this story again! It's one of my favourites and I can't wait to read the end of it... but I understand the wanting/need to rework it... :D What a great story, keep up the awesome work!! :0)
FireKitten - Saturday April 14, 2007 at 20:02
i love this story, especially since you can see what both sides (serena and darien) are thinking. i laughed, i almost cried, and i was angry at the situations you put forth....very important if you want to keep readers coming for more. you are an AMAZING writer, keep up the good work, and i cant wait for the next chapter ;)
tokyo_rabbit - Saturday April 14, 2007 at 19:31
I can't wait until you update! I've heard whisperings that a new chapter is on the way! Hopefully this is true! It's been so long that I'll have to reread this story! Yay!
babyonyee - Monday April 09, 2007 at 08:07
really good!!!! cant wait for you to post the next chapter! I like how you added a little more to each chapter!!!!
SailorPheonix3 - Wednesday April 04, 2007 at 14:48
I remembered when I came across this story. Wow, it is a blast from the past. Well written and the flow of the words give the reader a glimpse to see comparisons or contradictions of what it was like to be a teenager and the relationiships they start to develop. Sigh...I remember dating my husband before kids lol.... ^-^ Keep the chapters comming!
aquaserenity2002 - Tuesday March 20, 2007 at 17:54
OMG Its back Its Back Yay. I'm so excited that you brought the fic back to life. Thank you. Keep uo the excellent work and finish the fic please.
Kimmi-Chan - Monday March 19, 2007 at 07:19
I am enjoying the re-write immensely MG! The characterization is deeper than before, especially in chapter 5. I pegged Darien as an a*****e in the beginning –but this chapter showed that there was definitely more to him. He was far more thoughtful and I love how he had such a soft-spot for Serena. Can't wait to see more, great work once again.

P.S
Some of the sentence structures and paragraphs are broken, probably from uploading. Easy fix so I wouldn't worry too much abut them.
RENA630 - Monday March 19, 2007 at 03:28
I can't remember when I last read this...probably 4 years ago and I reached the last chpater you posted and almost sobbed when I realized it was unfinished (and yes I am trying to make you pity me and feel so extremely guilty that you actually HAVE to finish it this time around heehee) Anyway, what I'm getting at is that, even with the fact that I have previously read it, it is still as magnificent as the first time.

You have great story telling abilities and have an extraordinary gift of weaving a sexy, sensual and raw tale and yet keeping it classy. Bravo! I hope to see the next edited chapter up soon.
wei_gon_da_en_en - Sunday March 18, 2007 at 16:43
Ahh I'm so glad this is back. This might of ssaved my sexlife. Not even kidding. :)
Midnight16 - Sunday March 18, 2007 at 15:47
yay! you brought it back! I've missed this story.
beastofnature - Saturday March 17, 2007 at 16:26
i am loving thid ... plz cpontinue...
anaovcaric - Saturday March 17, 2007 at 10:52
This was an amazing chapter! You have to update ASAP! :-)
beastofnature - Monday March 12, 2007 at 17:02
when is the next chapter comin i need it sooo bad lol..... lovin it
Anonymous - Sunday March 11, 2007 at 21:01
All i will say is this:
This had better go further than chapter 18 which is stored on my PC!!
Anonymous - Sunday March 11, 2007 at 10:29
It is worth "bothering."
lilsonigirl - Sunday March 11, 2007 at 04:17
i just read this story and it went to chapter 18...now it only goes to chapter 2...??
Don't bother with this story, you'll prob get as far as i did and the author will repost it starting at chapter 2 AGAIN!
....don't bother!!!
flameblessed - Monday January 15, 2007 at 23:03
Wow, I love this story can't wait to read the rest!
hotpinkgumboot - Sunday January 07, 2007 at 02:22
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!DYING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT PLEASE!!!!
PEACE
kmwest2305 - Monday November 27, 2006 at 21:34
GREAT JOB! PLEASE DO NOT LET SERENA GET PREGNANT! IT WOULD BE TOO WEIRD WITH A BROTHER OR SISTER THE SAME AGE AS HER CHILD! IT WOULD BE GREAT IF CHARLES AND SERENITY MADE UP IN THE NEXT CHAPTER! WHEN ARE YOU UPDATING, I'VE BEEN WAITING FOREVER! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lazifelicous_2-18 - Thursday November 23, 2006 at 15:38
This is one of the best stories I have ever read. It's a lot more believable than some of the stories I"ve made the mistake of reading. Please continue with it, this type of story deserves to be finished.
Anonymous - Sunday November 19, 2006 at 14:00
Loved de story~! well written! wat can i say?! FABULUS~!
I cant wait for new chapters to come out ^_____^V
aquaserenity2002 - Monday November 06, 2006 at 22:50
I LOVE your stories, they are the best. I especially love GOS. It is awesome so PLEASE, PLEASE FINISH.
jupiter_2005 - Thursday October 19, 2006 at 19:15
PLEASE PLEASE FINISH. I want to know if Serena is pregnant by her teacher and what her parents will say about it!
Anonymous - Monday October 16, 2006 at 21:19
UPDATE, UPDATE , UPDATE !!!! QUICKLY
marabara - Sunday September 24, 2006 at 06:13
I'm starting to think that this story will never be finished. I read it back in July, and check every so often to see if anything new has happened. But not yet. I will continue to check up on this story to see if you've updated. I'm sure you've got alot of other things to do, but us fans are waiting for you ;). Please finish. :)
uchihalover - Tuesday September 12, 2006 at 12:43
UPDATE SOON! IM SO EXCITED WHAT GONNA HAPPENED NEXT. YOUR STORIES IS MY FAVORITE KEEP WRITING
2Late4Me - Thursday August 31, 2006 at 14:46
I first began reading this story on fanfiction.net, and when I saw it was here I was really excited. This is seriously the best fanfic I've ever read because you put your own creative spin on the same old characters. I just want to say good job, and one day I hope to write a fic as good as yours! Keep it up!
xxangelxx - Monday August 28, 2006 at 14:39
please update it take your time i cant wait to read more
Nani - Monday August 28, 2006 at 04:19
MG are you busy with work or school? Is that why you don't write as much as you used to. If so I can definitley relate. School is putting a big damper on my writing.
moonwaltz - Thursday August 24, 2006 at 12:51
i love it!! i can read this story over and over again without gettin bored >_< im so happy that u finally updated yeay :D
KeKe05 - Tuesday August 01, 2006 at 04:55
OMGosh, this story was one of the first SM stories I ever read (that was a loooonnnngggg time ago), and I have been hoooked ever since. Every so often I'll reread it ALL over. What I guess I'm tryin to say is.....PLEASE UPDATE.....take your time and do whatever is you need to do.....BUT PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE.....I'm desperate.....;-D
Anonymous - Tuesday July 11, 2006 at 15:12
Great story. Please continue. I'm dying to know the next story.
Gabyttita - Sunday July 02, 2006 at 19:38
I love this story soo much!!
and I have read it many times too... xD
please update soon!!!
I just can't imagine what is going to happen... and I want to know soon!!
so please update soon because is a great story!!
bye!
Anonymous - Saturday July 01, 2006 at 15:08
I hope you kick out another chapter soon!
Jolaine - Wednesday May 24, 2006 at 23:45
Hey ther MG... I started reading your story yesterday and I'm already done... I need more!!!!!!! lol I'm addicted to it!!!! Do you plan on adding anymore chapters in the future and when? Let me know ok? my email is ladybug83@hotmail.com
Cya later!!!
Amazing job on the story 1000000000 thumbs up!
andreadm - Friday May 19, 2006 at 04:32
Please finish the story!!!!!!!!!!!! Ilove it!!!!!!!
Anonymous - Tuesday May 16, 2006 at 07:23
please finish :( i love this story and it seems as if its been forgotten about.
xxangelxx - Tuesday March 07, 2006 at 17:29
amazing story i love the story i cant wait to see what comes next when do you think the real chapter 18 well b put up update soon
clockwork - Friday March 03, 2006 at 03:01
Gah, more please!!

I've been reading this story since it first came out. And that was bloody years ago!!!! So pleeeease, more!! *sob*

xxL/ssista/acid/clockwork
bugged - Wednesday February 08, 2006 at 08:09
that was a really cool chapter! when are you planning to update?? i hope it comes soon...
glowstixxz - Monday February 06, 2006 at 20:40
Fantastic update! I honestly thought you gave up on this fan fic, which would have been a dissapointment. This is a wonderful story, and you are honestly one of the most gifted writers I've ever seen. Please don't let this story go. It is by far the best one I've read, and I'm sure other readers feel the same way.

Please, update soon!
Unek530 - Tuesday January 31, 2006 at 20:53
You're an extremely talented writer. One of the best I have ever come across (and that's saying *A LOT* because I read a new book everyday). And I understand that there's other things in life besides writing and finishing a story, so I'm not going to hound you 'bout updating (although, I wouldn't complain LoL). I just hope that you will continue you're writing (even if it's not doin' fanfictions) because you have such a talent and one such as yours shouldn't be wasted. It'd be great to seen an update on both of your works, but if not.. I'd still like you say you are truly a wonderful and beautiful writer.
xMoon_Princessx - Tuesday January 31, 2006 at 06:45
WAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!

why havent u updated??? *sniff* i luv ur stories!!!!! >.< i know u probably have better things to do than to listen to me whine and complain and beg for updates all day but hey, cant blame a girl for trying ^^;;

anyways hope u update soon!!!!!!


always and forever ur loyal fan,

xMoon_Princessx
angelvenus - Saturday January 28, 2006 at 04:44
Hi I like your updated storie. Please keep on writing
Velvet - Tuesday January 24, 2006 at 07:19
I love this story so much. I've been keeping up with it for years. You have no idea how excited I get when I see that you've updated. I was really worried that you had abandoned this fic; I'm so glad that's not the case. Anyway, I'm patiently looking forward to the rest of Chapter 18.
Anonymous - Sunday January 22, 2006 at 08:43
thanks so much for posting a new chapter, even if it is a short one. I've been follwing this story for a few years now and I'm so happy to see where your heading in the future. I totally understand this is the last thing on your mind, but I wanted to wish you good luck on future chapters. good stories are worth waiting for.
nav - Tuesday January 17, 2006 at 16:34
hi i just read your story it is really nice i can't wait to find out what andrew does next cause it is not serena'a fault from what i think. but keep on wrting and i can't wait for the next chaper please finish this story.
Anonymous - Saturday January 14, 2006 at 07:49
I have lost respect for you as a writer. Do you feel any king of obligation or even respect for your faithful readers.
cosmoscrystal - Saturday January 14, 2006 at 05:17
Ok MG . . . looking forward to future chapters. You've got a sure fire hot hot story. HHHHHOOOOOOTTTTT! :)
lacyloss - Thursday January 12, 2006 at 06:02
OMG! Please bring in this chapter ( just one more is all i ask and you can disappear until next year) I read one of your post on your insight of what the difference between a great writer and just a writer and you said that a great writer leaves their fans in suspense on the edge of their seats wanting for more, and let me tell you, you are doing just that and you have deemed yourself worthy of the title congratulations you are one of many and i only hope that you never change your story will be read and talked about for many years to come! Update fast and soon!
LACY
Anonymous - Tuesday January 10, 2006 at 05:15
I was surprised to see you post this chapter finally on this website!! I have had this chapter on my computer now for months maybe even a year or so!! Dare i hope that this will mean the continuation of this story or will it be the same as before!! Leaving this story here??? I know your busy and all but this is a story that deserves to be finished maybe even published with perhaps the names of these characters changed!!! I truly hope you continue with this. There are so many things inside to be finished off!!
crazzieblue - Monday January 09, 2006 at 04:49
And the Plot Thickens...
It was an interesting chapter. A problem that I had with it was the switching between scenes or character. It would go from one to the next with no indication of a change. This made this chapter really hard to read and I had to reread it a few times to understand certain parts. Other than that I like the chapter and I was surprise to see that you updated. I can't wait to see what happens next.
usagi_mamoru4ever - Monday January 09, 2006 at 02:47
i really hope andrew doesn't do what i think he's going to do, please update!! but all in all this story is reall good and i wonder if u are going to be author someday? ^_^
lacyloss - Sunday January 08, 2006 at 08:07
OH No!! I cant believe drew is going to do what i think hes going to do! I only hope that you update soon but i know that i will as well as other fans have to wait a good little minute before we hear from you again! Though i hope that you suprise us and get one more chapter out before you disappear again!! I love all of your stories that you have written and let me tell you get better and better with each moments pass! I think you should really think about publishing some of your work because you have already proven to us that you have the ability to be a great writer(maybe even a famous writer) Keep up the outstanding work and hope to hear from you soon on ariasink.net and hopefully in stores! LACY
JerzeeGurl - Sunday January 08, 2006 at 01:12
I would love to tell you to update like everyone else is, but I won't because I know that you never intend to. I just wanted to let you to know (if you didn't already) that you are one of the best Sailor Moon fanfiction writers ever. I hope you're doing something writing-related as a profession because you truely have a gift with it. And if you ever want to talk a walk down memory lane and update one of your fics, it would be much appreciated by every.

Good luck with... life.
andreadm - Friday January 06, 2006 at 07:13
Hurry and write another chapter.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
usagi_mamoru4ever - Tuesday December 27, 2005 at 05:53
molly is such a good friend even thought she seems like a worry-wart sometimes
SHsailormoon - Saturday December 10, 2005 at 21:59
GODDAMNIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!c'mon finish it finish it please!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dark-Huntress - Wednesday November 23, 2005 at 22:50
Good job, as once again you've left me wanting more.... Please update again soon!!!
CrossWings - Thursday November 17, 2005 at 23:12
I think she is!!!!!!!!! But what happens?!?!?!?!?! WRITE SOON!!!!!!
cosmoscrystal - Friday August 05, 2005 at 06:18
Totally awesome! You have got to finish this story! The wait is going to kill me! I love this!
Anonymous - Sunday July 31, 2005 at 05:36
i've read this story soo many times. keep up writing.
whitey9h - Friday July 01, 2005 at 17:19
this story is great i read it 3 times plzzz update
angelvenus - Thursday June 30, 2005 at 07:05
Hi, I've just read your lastest chapter. I liked your story. I was hoping there was going to be lot romantic than that. But keep reading.

Thank you, please reply asap
angel84_forever - Monday June 13, 2005 at 04:17
I hope you start some more chapters soon. I understand that you've got school or work though so I don't expect anything. What happened to the yahoo group though?
beastofnature - Saturday June 04, 2005 at 18:15
i walk over to the computer and scream..ARGHHHHHHHH....y have u ended it on such a high note.. evil i tell u evil... finish the go damn story i need more
beast
serenity84 - Monday May 23, 2005 at 06:17
very very good story i have been reading it and i really like it when are you going to finish it ?
JerzeeGurl - Monday April 04, 2005 at 00:58
If your waiting for MG to post another chapter, check out this thread: http://www.ariasink.com/viewtopic.php?topic=7706&start=0#83677

There are two more chapters at ff.net of GOS but after that... no more. :( http://www.fanfiction.net/s/88689/1/
J5 - Wednesday March 23, 2005 at 06:12
OMG... you haven't updated this fic in ages and YOU JUST LEFT IT AT SUCH A HORRIBLE HORRIBLE HORRIBLE CLIFFHANGER???

Do you WANT me to come and murder you??

please please please please please please please UPDATE

This is such a good story... interesting. There are bits here and there that you get wrong... like Lita's boyfriend was one minute Chad then it suddenly is Ken... then one minute Serena is living in America... suddenly it's Japan...

But otherwise I really like your story... I love how long your chapters are... but you gotta update! please! Just think, to leave a great story hanging there unfinished... can you face us dedicated reviewers? And just think, you can manage to write so many pages for each chapter... so there must be some story for you to continue. You cannot be stuck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
freaky - Monday March 21, 2005 at 05:20
wow! that's something you dont think about everyday but hey it was still good and suspenseful! keep on writing i want to know what happens^^
nina_girl - Friday March 18, 2005 at 23:04
why!!! ( nina) why did you just leave us hanging there? You need to update the story. I love what you did to make such a pair of young and old lovers. Why did she scream? Is it beacause she is having a baby or she is not and she is really bum that she thought she had one and it suddenly died? please update soon. I don't thnk I can take it!!!

Nina
Anonymous - Tuesday March 08, 2005 at 04:30
i read both versions, this one and the one on ff.net and i noticed something! You have less chapters here then there! you also havent' updated in a long time and your readers are getting quite anxious to read the next chapters. i hope you have time to finish them soon!!! i know you must have a busy life and i appreciate what time you share with us! PLEASE update soon! i think i might start crying soon b/c of the suspense you keep me in! I luv this story and i hope darien and serena get together and i like the drama in this story and i'm hoping for more! I luv ur stories!!!! A Dangerous Pairing rules too!!!
Marisa - Friday February 18, 2005 at 14:10
Hey! i love this story, found it origianlly on ff.net, but like the better version of the story here! please update soon! i would really love to know how it all ends
young_geezer - Saturday February 05, 2005 at 07:12
When are you going to update this? It's really good
Dagger - Tuesday December 28, 2004 at 23:33
wow I never get tierd of reading this story though I would like you finish it so i can find out what happens. yes I have no patientce but thats me.
Midnight46 - Tuesday December 07, 2004 at 08:44
Great work, love it. Very interesting and intertaining story. Up date soon or pay the conciquences (laughs evily)
Jupiter - Thursday November 18, 2004 at 03:46
You've got dozons of fans. So, PLEASE FINISH THE STORY!
Raye73 - Tuesday August 24, 2004 at 11:49
great story ive been following it for a long time now and am dying to find out if serenas pregnant... PLEASE UPDATE
danielle - Monday July 05, 2004 at 17:36
is that it?
starzstruck - Friday July 02, 2004 at 21:16
Awww... do you really have to stop there? :( EEK! Im soooo scared. Just imagine what Serenity will do to her if she's pregnant! Cant wait to read the rest!

~Blessed Be~
~`Chele~
Anonymous - Wednesday June 23, 2004 at 23:44
I Luv This Story soo much!! It's great. i can't wait 'til the next chapter. more more more. hope u'll update more soon!
princess2005 - Friday April 02, 2004 at 01:33
MORE
Pefer - Wednesday November 05, 2003 at 23:05
when u gonna update this story? fix the stupid question mark problem, and update.ive been waiting for a while.
springfiry - Friday October 31, 2003 at 05:50
Very good story~!
One of the best(Or even THE BEST)~!
scarletmoon - Tuesday October 28, 2003 at 09:44
damn this story is good gotta be one of the best SM ive read
also this is the edited version some ppl here say it is better or worse can someone tell where i can find the orginal version
MoonieDream - Tuesday October 07, 2003 at 20:29
u annoy me! get a new chapter already ive been waiting forever! i cant stand it anymore! lol!this is SsSSSSssSooOOOoOO good!
PureEuphoria - Saturday August 30, 2003 at 19:09
Dramatic and intriguing.

One of the best stories I have read to this day. The character development is shown to the last bit. Great plot and surprising twists.

The writing itself holds an aura of sophistication.
Anonymous - Tuesday July 29, 2003 at 22:16
This is a realy really goos story please please please continue, I'm doing to read your next chapter ..... pwetty please!!!!! ;)
Sailor_Angel - Sunday July 06, 2003 at 15:12
I LOVE IT!!! WRITE!!WRITE!! WRITE!! get the message or do I have to repeat it again? WRITE!! WRITE!! WRITE!! *now* do u get it?
Linka_Mouri - Sunday June 15, 2003 at 04:17
PPPPPPLLLLLLLEEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSSSSEEEEEEEE UPDATE!!!!!!!!! IT'S BEEN SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO LONG!!! but of course no pressure as sovern of evil says ^_^; This is the greatest fic I've ever read!
Anonymous - Tuesday June 10, 2003 at 05:19
I started reading this at asmr and kept waiting for you to update.. finally someone told me were to find more ch. but i've finished them ahhh. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I need more :o) I love this story. you are very good keep it up.
Anonymous - Thursday May 15, 2003 at 02:12
AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*sniff* I
hate it when people stop writing their stories right when is getting
good!!!*sniff*
PLEASE
UPDATE>>>>>>>>>PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Anonymous - Thursday April 24, 2003 at 00:28
Hey Mg. This is like the best storie ever!!! Plezzzzzzzzzz update soonnnnnnnn!Love your story!!!!!!!!!!
JerzeeGurl - Sunday April 20, 2003 at 04:28
Millenium Guard,
This is definately the best Sailor Moon fanfic on the net. It is sooooooooo good! I have just one request . . . UPADATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!
- Just a chick from Jersey
Anonymous - Saturday April 19, 2003 at 14:53
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!please update pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!i'm dying to know what's going to happen next please please
thanx
the best story i have ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sovern_of_Evil - Saturday April 12, 2003 at 22:44
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

PLEASE FINISH!!!!

heehee.....no presure........^_^;;
raPsteZ_o2 - Tuesday April 08, 2003 at 23:20
PLEASE update the next chapter soon and i mean chapter 17 cause i read chapter 16 on FF.NET please update soon cause i'm dying of waiting PWEASE!!!!!!!!!! *___* i LOVE this story it's so original and i love the plot of it>oh MAN how i wish i was a good writer like u but i'm not and no one is as good as u!!LOL!!!
see ya
Dagger - Friday April 04, 2003 at 21:07
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I WANT TO KNOW OHMYGOD I WANA KNOW IS SHE PREGO!!!
YOur a woaunderful writer...keep it up
sexysailor - Wednesday March 26, 2003 at 19:17
please please please finish this story it's getting too good
for me to stop reading so please put up more chapters.
Kyosuke - Wednesday March 19, 2003 at 07:54
i noticed that in chapter 14 when the disney video is mentioned, that they are said as being in japan, but in the beggining of the story, it was said that they were in florida...

What GIVES?!!!!!!!!! get the damn story straight! (like darrien's prick n.n )
Sexylover - Tuesday March 18, 2003 at 00:48
hey mg,
i absolutly luv this story it has so much life to it if that makes sense. Anyway i read the versions on ff.net and on a sailor moon romance and noticed a lot of changes. Such as Darien is definatly a much bigger ass hole in this one and Serena is kind of TOO shy. And i really do believe that the hentai sences where better. i don't know it just seemed more romantic for some reason and it showed exactly what darien would do to make serena happy. anyway cant wait for the next chapter.
Keep writing sexylover
Linka_Mouri - Monday March 10, 2003 at 17:33
Yet another great chapter. Please write more!
sexysailor - Wednesday March 05, 2003 at 17:06
this story is really good so keep up the good work and keep the chapters coming you are a great writer so i hope you keep writing you have a brilliant mind for stories.
sexysailor - Tuesday March 04, 2003 at 18:48
i love your story game of seduction i hope you continue writing!
Sovern_of_Evil - Friday February 28, 2003 at 23:42
Wonderful. A beautiful story. Please update! ^^

::giggles and jumps on a rainbow:: :sweatdrop:
Violet - Friday February 28, 2003 at 00:49
Wicked, but I love it. It has a lot of f**king and s**t, but I think it Okey. Keep written, I'm looking foward to your next chapter. What's next!!!!!!!!!!!!
crescent_wolfie - Sunday January 12, 2003 at 11:11
Damn it! YOU LEFT ME IN THE MIDDLE OF THE f**kING CLIFFHANGER! Sorry, just recalling the last phrase of your current chapter. Man, you should do that to people. Cliffies are bad for the health; someone might get a heart attack from a broken heart or something. I think you story is extremely sexy, sassy, and comical. Not your regular teen movie. Please keep updating. Damn, I'm only in my twenties, I shouldn't get heart attacks.
Linka_Mouri - Thursday January 09, 2003 at 06:04
I love chap. 14. Excellent work. Please, please, please, write more! I love this story!
PrincessofLight - Saturday January 04, 2003 at 04:23
It is and always has been a great story that I am loving reading again!!
Sweetcece15 - Wednesday January 01, 2003 at 07:12
This a very good story. I couldn't stop reading it when I started. Can't wait till you finish it.
kurea_13 - Sunday December 29, 2002 at 05:28
*jaw drops*...wow MG, I did NOT see that one coming...it looks like you've got quite the 1-2 punch lined up for this plot. Just when I think it's wrapping up, showing signs of ending - poof, another excellent twist! But I'm so sad there's not more posted, I NEED RELEASE! (that sounds so hentai) but seriously, this story's had me in limbo for three straight hours, and then I hit the end of the update, and it's one of the most evil cliffies I've ever seen. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!
SamusPrime - Sunday December 29, 2002 at 01:05
Hurry up with the next friggin' chapter already!!!!! This is to good!!!! I need to read about more amatory things!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep writin!!!
DevilPrincess - Friday December 27, 2002 at 21:44
I know I already reviewed at FF.net but I just wanted to say that this is still one of my absolute favorite stories of all time! ^_^
Belldandy711 - Sunday December 22, 2002 at 17:54
ohmygodohmygodohmygodohmygod!!! that is unbelievable!!! i was wondering what was gonna happen the whole time and i thought of different things, but that ending completely blew me away!! u really surprised me. i can't imagine what's gonna happen next.
u so need to get published. you're such a talented writer and so very creative. i really mean that. you are my favorite author of all the fanfiction authors, and i cannot wait till the next chapter!!
Joey - Sunday December 22, 2002 at 06:46
ooooo....almost chapter 14
and then new ones can come out, yaya!
welp
contin. soon

Joey!
cuttie_blossom - Sunday December 22, 2002 at 00:24
okay first of all i loves it!!!! lols!!! but please do update!!!
ClaidiWinter - Monday December 02, 2002 at 20:22
Whatever girl, i never read any other old versions save the stuff posted on ASMR, but I love it to death. Like the others said you might want to add in a space or something for a scene change, but other than that this story is amazing. You are an awesome writer, and really know how to thicken the plot, get your reader in sync with the characters, and the sub-plots are fun too! Anyways i won't make this any longer just keep on writing! and update more often! *Claidi looks behind her as her own readers are following her with pitchforks, demanding an overdue chapter of her own story.* Uh oh, as Mina would say, gotta book it! keep up the good-no! INCREDIBLE work!
ClaidiWinter - Monday December 02, 2002 at 20:22
Whatever girl, i never read any other old versions save the stuff posted on ASMR, but I love it to death. Like the others said you might want to add in a space or something for a scene change, but other than that this story is amazing. You are an awesome writer, and really know how to thicken the plot, get your reader in sync with the characters, and the sub-plots are fun too! Anyways i won't make this any longer just keep on writing! and update more often! *Claidi looks behind her as her own readers are following her with pitchforks, demanding an overdue chapter of her own story.* Uh oh, as Mina would say, gotta book it! keep up the good-no! INCREDIBLE work!
Anonymous - Monday December 02, 2002 at 12:58
i love reading your story and have been following it for quite a while now. i think the change in points of views sometimes ruin the flow of the story but thats my opinion. otherwise i like the plot and the humour and i'm dying to know what happens next. Update soon.
Sailor_Sista - Monday December 02, 2002 at 07:07
Hee hee, keep it comin'!
You changed stuff, but i like it all the same.
There are a few mistakes, might want someone to take a look at it.
Sista.
Silvery_Moonlight - Monday December 02, 2002 at 06:23
Great chapter! Can you believe I became a member just to read your story? There are some spots where your reediting makes a difference and can be seen. Others seem as if you haven't touched them. Still, it is for the best as I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. Can't wait till the next one!
makulit - Monday December 02, 2002 at 02:21
Nice chapter. I had read your previous version of this story, and at first I did not notice a big difference other than the change of location. However, this chapter (12) seemed very different. I don't remember that part about Serena's parents but it was beautifully incorporated. One suggestion though: you may want to put some sort of symbol (maybe ****) to indicate when you're changing scenes to make reading clearer.
Sabra - Monday December 02, 2002 at 02:04
MUST.......READ.......MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!! Keep writing!
chrissyann - Monday December 02, 2002 at 01:12
all I can say is very very good
ladydee_1au - Sunday December 01, 2002 at 23:01
I've read this story lots of times so far and I thoroughly enjoy it each time. It is great to see you keep at it. Keep em coning.
Rainsong - Monday November 18, 2002 at 20:58
i liked it, but i thought you kept sticking in a lot of stuff that the plot didn't need.
ladydee_1au - Friday November 15, 2002 at 01:56
I truly hope you finish this. I am really enjoying it
foenixfyre - Wednesday November 13, 2002 at 21:02
So, I think I have to agree with many of the above. The story's placement is a little confusing, and you throw in a lot of new information in the last few chapters that seems awfully random to me. Please take this as good C&C, because I'm very much enjoying your story!
ladydee_1au - Saturday November 09, 2002 at 11:26
I've just finished reading this and thought it was very exciting and interesting. Excellent writing MG I cant wait to find out how this ends. I hope I find out soon.
Yanachka - Sunday November 03, 2002 at 21:24
Great story :-) the plot and everything about this story is amazing. The writer is a genious and I can't wait for more.
Sailor_Sista - Friday November 01, 2002 at 04:05
Two words..
More, Please!!!

^_^
Cool chappy, keep it comin'
Sista.
silvermoonruge - Monday October 28, 2002 at 05:43
more plz
Sabra - Saturday October 26, 2002 at 20:39
keep writing! I love this story! I hope to see the next chapter up! You're work is great! Thanx again! I LOVE this story!
Anonymous - Saturday October 26, 2002 at 04:29
I new to reading fanfiction, but I know a good story when I read one. I'm now hooked on SM fictions, especially S/D or U/M, whichever the author prefers. Nice handling of their relationship.
BLUE - Thursday October 24, 2002 at 20:54
I love this story it's just great. Hope you post
chapter 15 soon mg.
Anonymous - Thursday October 24, 2002 at 11:17
In chapter 10 you say that Serena puts her hair up in a 'chiffon'. It's a 'chignon'. Chiffon is a type of material. Just thought you should know. Otherwise the story is pretty good. A little risque, but not bad.
Anonymous - Thursday October 24, 2002 at 04:01
I have to agree with two of the viewers about your story. First, to the reference of whether the story takes place in Tokyo or in Florida, and second about the sex scenes being better in your original story. Otherwise, can't wait till the next chapter!
crystal_rose - Thursday October 24, 2002 at 03:45
*scratches head in confusion*

I like this story, but there are times when you refer to them living in America then switch to Tokyo then back to Florida. Maybe you should go back and fix this up.
Anonymous - Monday October 21, 2002 at 01:24
WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO FINISH THE STORY?!!!!!!!!! *quickly breathes in and out*
Anonymous - Thursday October 17, 2002 at 21:47
you must keep writing i love this story so much it wonderful
Anonymous - Tuesday October 15, 2002 at 05:04
oh dear lord......please finish uploading the rest of this story!!!!!!!!!
Anonymous - Monday October 14, 2002 at 04:08
I love this fic! I've read it a couple of times. I started reading it on ff.net and then found out about this place from you profile. Please write more, this is great!
Anonymous - Sunday October 13, 2002 at 11:15
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!! I've been reading this story since it was on ASMR. Keep up the great work!!

Lov ya
Usagi-chan ;)
Anonymous - Sunday October 13, 2002 at 08:00
I love the changes you have done to the story! Keep up the good work. You have a lot of talent. Great job. I hope you can get the rest of the chapters out soon. I can't wait to read them.
Anonymous - Friday October 11, 2002 at 20:09
this story is really really good i read this at 3 different sites including ff.net i was kind of piss when i heard u were rediting it but this is good to if not not better than the origanl i have to agree with with the person who was talking about how the hentia chapter were alot better in the older version. so keep up the good work and will u plez finish you other 2 story DP and one u wrote call Love affir i am dying to find out what happen next
Sabra - Wednesday October 09, 2002 at 15:07
Your story is awesome! I've gotta read the next chapter! Please get it out soon! Keep up the awesome work!!
Sailor_Sista - Wednesday October 09, 2002 at 07:22
Well, i noticed a lot of spelling mistakes, but it was very good. Keep it comin MG!
Sailor Sista
Anonymous - Wednesday October 09, 2002 at 05:21
I thought that these were supposed to be hentai chapters and the non-hentai on ff.net. The older version was much better description-wise and grammatically-wise. I think that you have to re-edit what has been edited so that it makes a little bit more sense. I am in no way flamming the story, just giving constructive criticism. The story's great and you're a great writer. And I like some of the changes that have been made. It's just that I personally think the hentai scenes were better before and did not have as many grammatical errors as this one.
KaKGurlie - Tuesday October 08, 2002 at 17:39
This is the most amazing story ever to be written, and I am not kidding! I love this story... I will do about anything to see the next chapter... and I mean come on... the re-written one! You also need to get out Chapter 15 on FF.net! I mean, seriously!
Anonymous - Tuesday October 08, 2002 at 06:47
love the story can't believe you're making us suffer by re- writing it I just ask that you can put out the new chapters fast because I love your work and can't wait to see the new new stuff keep up the good work
Anonymous - Tuesday October 08, 2002 at 03:11
LOve ur story, please hurry up with he next
Thanxs

^.^ ~~@ngelblood~~
Sailor_Sista - Monday October 07, 2002 at 15:08
Wow.. haven't read this for a while. But i look forward to more chapters.
Sailor Sista
Anonymous - Monday October 07, 2002 at 05:18
great fic you got going. i read what you had til you said it was posting here now. i like you story tho. its really good.
Wreath_of_Roses - Monday October 07, 2002 at 04:43
I love your story, as I have been a devoted reader at ff.net. I see one tiny problem though, all your quotation marks and such, in the first chapter, have been turned into question marks. That's really odd! It might have something to do with the format that you have used. Anyway ask Aria about it, I'm sure she can figure it out!

Now keep writing and don't forget to work on chapter 15!!
Anonymous - Monday October 07, 2002 at 03:14
I love your STORY!!!!!!! I already read it and the revisions are even better, can't wait until chapter 15 comes out.
ladysolo - Wednesday October 02, 2002 at 15:48
I remember reading your stories such a long time ago . . . you were one of the first authors I read (you and Lady M. Harris), so I started out in the SM fan fiction world with only the best stories (and still to this day expect nothing less--you spoiled me for all other . . . fiction). This story is definitely lives up to that expectation and I cannot wait to see what you're doing with the re-write.
psycho4moon - Wednesday October 02, 2002 at 15:28
I'm soooooo happy that you posted here. I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! Thank you so much, it made my day!!!!!
grafitti_dust - Wednesday October 02, 2002 at 02:19
yay mg posted on ariasink. *dances* i love this story btw, there's just no words to say how much. so yeah, i'm happy you decided to post here.
Unwanted - Tuesday October 01, 2002 at 23:55
I have read this story so many times. It was actually the first fanfic I ever read on Fanfiction.net and I have loved it ever since then. I hope to see you post the chapter often so I am able to read more of it again.
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