2013-04-22 11:34 In the name of Glamour & Glitter, Fashion & Fame…- Amy Mebberson http://t.co/icF4yx6qZW @amymebberson

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That was great! Very funny!

that was so funny I laughed so hard I had tears in my eyes! that was good

Hahahahahhahahahahahahahah ...
Funny =P

o geez...
I don't even know what to say. That was so

well

Random...
Any who, it seems like u two had fun writing it. You should team up again... that would be fun!

Nicely written!!

hilarious story!

Ha HA HA!!!!That was absolutely brilliant!!I couldn't get through the whole story without breaking up into fits of giggles and falling on the floor! This was the funniest story I have ever read!!!You two were absolutely more than budding novices with a knack at writting a lot of swear words!

Oh my god. I couldn't get through half of the first chapter without snorting my butt off in near tears... and unfortunately it's 2:22 am, and I need to be quiet- I'll have to finish it at a more appropriate hour, LOL. Thanks much for this; you've made my night!

Love it!! great story!!1

Haha, I can't help but laugh everytime I read this story. Well done ladies.

i love this story its funnie how they gave their friends nicknames i love it keep up the good work

That was a great story. Keep making hilarios stories.

Hillarious! Definitely R-rated, and definitely worth the read!

It is soooooooooo funny!!!!! I hope that you will write another one like this!

it was funny and i enjoyed it. the way they talk and act reminds me off me and my friends. that's probably why i enjoyed it so much. great story!

Wow, you guys kept me up until 2:10 in the morning reading this, and I have to go to school at 6 tomorrow.

YOU GUYS ROCK!!!

Loved the story had fun reading it. And the last comment you all left i get wgere your comming from hope to read more from you

tears
R O F L O L

WOw Ive read this soo many times I dont think I have ever read a story as genious or hilarious in my life THANK YOU!
Dagger

Shooot I just realized its over sniffels DAMN IT!! oh well I will just have to read it over and over again !
Thanks anyways
Dagger

ROFLMAO OMG I couldnt stop laughing !I insist that you not only finish this story but continue to colaborat this stuff is amazing!! woweee wipes the blasted tears from eyes.. Im absolutly sure that my neighbors think Im crazy for laughing so loud and hard...
Thank yOU
soo much
Dagger

this is now one of my favorite stories ever....I've never submitted a review before and quite frankly never intended to but after reading this story i knew my first review would be well worth it praising this story. I laughed my butt off and found most of your comments extremely funny as hell. I'm going to chech and see if you have any other stories that i can read but just know that this story is very much apperciated. thanks and keep up the good work

I was expecting way more childish than this! But oh well, I guess it was you guys' way to get ride of some frustration. Keep writting guys... just not about Moomoo Stink... this fanfic actually scared me for a minute there...

Oh Kami-sama, I can never get sick of reading this story. It is sooo damn funny, and I lost count of how many times I p***ed my pants. Very well written, and the insults were a scream. Very imaginitive indeed. I rate this with a thumbs up (after she comes back from the bathroom from having to excuse herself after laughing so much)

OMG this is the funniest story I have ever read I laughed at every sentence I LOVE IT!

hahahahahahahahahahahhhehehehehehehehahahaha! That was soooo funny! slap-stick ending & surreal! I thought it was good fun, with its witty and clever puns and the satire took the edge off the gratuitous expletives... really enjoyed this laugh a minute story, LOL & loved the romantic flavour & the encounters with the island wildlife-the coconuts Oh My!*Tuxedo Mask glares at Motoki & shakes his head as Usagi takes Tuxie's hands in hers & nods* L.

o man..i was laughing so hard when serena launched the coconut at darien...that sentence was just side burning funny.

that was sooooo funny please write more .... i haven't read a story about serena and darien fro mthis point of view !!

LMMFAO!!!

very, very good. i'm definitely reccomending this to everyone i know.

Shadow

That was great! The eploige (did i spell it right?) was kinda weird but other then that it was fantastic!

That was great! The eploige (did i spell it right?) was kinda weird but other then that it was fantastic!

I thought that was a great story...very humerous...I liked it a lot..keep it up for future stories

oh my god that was the funniest story i have every read and it was well written sry but i haven't read until tonight so i couldn't give u good reviews but it was faking harlious and i wish u two would pair up more often

Not bad. Not bad at all.
Too be completely honest, I was expecting a little more insanity - I think I'm biased because of my own fic's insanity level - but there was enough to get me to laugh out loud quite a few times. The drunken bears bit was perfect. Definitely didn't see that one coming. ^_^

Oh. By the way, there was a goddamn sh*tload of motherfaaking cursing as well, but I didn't really give an airborne rodent's inflamed and abuse-battered sphincter about any of it. In fact, I thought it was quite inventive. ^_~

*gasps for air* I was LMAO the entire time, keep writing more stories like that. *laughs too much and goes psyco and is transferred to a asylum but before she reaches there she dies of laughter*.....(can't say anythin cuz I'm dead, so where am I? Must be in hell, can't be in heaven cuz my mind is too evil and full of stuff my parents would disown me if they knew of, lol ~_^)

*haha* OMG!!!*gasp* that was THE funniest story I have EVER read! Please dear god can you make an Epilogue or something?

OMG...I really can't belive i never read this before today. That was so good...could'nt stop laughing my ass off. And the holl stuck on a deserted island thing is a genius idea.

You two are really geniuses!!! Keep up writting great hilarious storie like that one!!!

I really love it, it's funny and romantic or wicked.

You have some fanatical fans at FFN. Check out your reviewers. Geez.

I loved the story, so ugh... do I get to live?

I think that this story might just be the most abso-f**king-lutely hilarious thing that i have ever read. And to think that i almost let the title dissuade me from reading it. Keep up the hilarious work. P.S. I think that Neo is my favorite character!!
Cat

Crystal_Rose and Lady Solo,

WOW!!!!!!!!!!! that was the most beautiful "little tidbit" I have ever read *wipes away a tear*. Seriously, I have never laughed so hard in my entire life!! It was as great as Mamo-chan in a loincloth! *swoons* Keep up the good work!!!!

*waves arm* 5th time in a story! Ba dum!
That girl was so cool! I'm so proud! *sniffs like parent watching kid go off to Harvard University* She reminds me so much of me!
And about that c**t thing . . . you sure you the term a lot . . . lot . . . lot . . .
And thanks CR, for clearing that up.
I loved the ending! But, isn't Usa a little young?

LLOOOOLLLLL!!!!!!!!! CR, LS, this is a great story! I told you I'd get around to reading it CR! In case you're wondering who the hell I am, I'm DBZ!

*giggles* this is the funniest story I've ever read!! I think I'll go read it again...or print it out and read it later!!! Great job guys-er, girls!!

~DBZ~
=^_^=;;

That has got to the the most f*cked up story I have ever read, but also thte BEST f*cking story I have ever read.

f**king hilarious. I have thouroughly enjoyed reading all of the chapters for your story -- far more so then the other version i have read. Your title was utterly original and it just couldn't have been done any better. I have to be honest that I laguhed more in the last four chapters then in the fifth, although the romantic scene with Usagi and Mamoru in the middle makes up for all of that. Anyhoo. I hope you keep writing and keep churning out funny stories such as this one. It was a different writing style and quite "refreshing" to read (okay, have to admit that I stole the "refreshing" bit from Iron Chef when some actress described noodles and snape as refreshing or some other b.s.).

No dieing for us, although we almost got sent back to the mental ward 'cuz we kept laughing at the weirdest times reading this. We are convinced our parents are sending us to thearpy or something tomorrow for temporary insanity. By the way we had to explain to our little sister what a c**t was and my dad overheard us so now we have to go do that whole sex talk thing. I am in high school and my older bro's in college and we have to hear a sex talk 'cuz our little sister ain't ever heard of the discovery channel expo on c**ts.
-Cupid's Reject,Arentimissted,and Baby Cuz

*FALLS OVER* HAHAHHAHAHA! I LOVED IT!!!!!!! You two did such a good job. Made me feel all better....and now I'm happy again! *snoogles to you both*

Oh my good lord, I have been corrupted!! That was the funniest thing I have ever read!! You two should be very happy with yourselves. I have to say, I think you two are complete pyschos, but no one ever said geniuses were sane. Bravo, bravo! May I never doubt you again!

*LMAO* You guys are some of the BEST authors I have even Seen!!!!! This was AWESOME! Hillarious! *ROTFLMMFAO* MY GOsh! You guys rock! I'm litterally gonna read this again!
Later!
SAbra

This story cracked me up. I think i have never laughed so much out loud as a i read a story. I loved how foul mouthed the story got and how they survived. i thought that they could of done something worse to them at the end but other than that this was my favorite comedy story that i have read in a long time. keep up crazy stories like this.

Have I told you that you two are weird weird creatures...
That was an, interesting.. two chapters, but you know.. for extra effect "Whats Your Fantasy" came on... have you heard it?
"I wanna li-li-li-lick you from your head to your toes and i wanna move from the bed down-to-the down-to-the floor, and i wanna uh-uh you make it so good i dun wanna leave but u gotta let me know whats your fan-ta-sy!"

So.. it was really quite appropriate, no?

START WRITING YOUR f**kIN STORIES YOU WHORES!!

Sista ^_^

O_O.....W.O.W....!!!....

very ... uhm interesting. quite intertaining.

Hilarious to the end . . . I wounder if "Anonymous" reviewer was one of the members of the hentai writers guild that got body slammed?

HAHAHAHAHAHA! you guys are such a great pair! you're so funny! sigh... I have to go wipe the tears of laughter off my face...

Woo-hoO! You're finally finished! Yea! It's great, hella funny! What more can I say? =P At least I don't have to harass ya'll...did I say harass? I mean...-er-...gotta go! *Runs off* Later!!

OH! THis sooooooo cheered me up after the last few days I've had. Thank you guys! This is too funny! I cannot wait for more.

Hmm...what can I say...this fic is hilarious, awesome... uh... hilarious? Yes, I think so!! Supa funny, yo! Fo sho!! This be dope, son! Aite enough wid my ghetto fabulous shiznit... hah. Yah anyways...kool fic. Payce!!

*bursts out laughing*
Noooooo... please don't ask your mum!! Hahha..
Cute chapter, guys. You really love to swear, dontcha....
*laughs*
Keep it comin'
Sista

Well, I don't know how many people have answered your demands for a review but here's mine. I love it! I think its the funniest thing, and i love your author's notes in random places. It wouldn't work in a more serious story but it fits in nicely in this one. Oh and the title is great too! Please keep writing, i'm alternating between fan fiction and boring Greek philosophy homework. Please keep giving me stuff to laugh at.
Thanks!

I love this sooo much. Great imaginations with the name-calling. I actually print this out for my bf who is too lazy to get his ass on the computer. I can't wait for the next chapter!

your unique writers and your pushing a few borders.
your story reflects the inner looney in us all and the need to be amused by sensless yet witty humour.

oh and ppl ,just a hint of advice. Reveiw with more then the oh so 'unique' begging, threatening cliche phrases.

Cr and Ls ,I'm sure, wish to have inisghtful and unique reveiws to encourage and help them write. Try telling them why you like it...which parts?
I just don't think more more more.. or else does ,it for em.
*coughs*ILIKETWRITEMORE*coughs* ^_~ oh I am evil...

*rofl* Awesome, very funny story. Great work ladies, can't wait for the next chapter.

Great story guys! Can't wait to read more, so please hurry- and try not to interrupt this one with another snake attack! ^_^

Awww.. I love IT!!!!

Yay!!! good readin's
Are we allowed to suggest our own methods of REVENGE¬.¬?
TeeHeeHee
(no log in so me is LOLA!)

Strange conversation w/ Neo but I guess being stranded on an island can make any guy go schizophrenic.

Haha... Funny. But this is more one of those preverted humor stories, right? Can I give you a suggestion? Add a little more imagery.

*LMAO* Ha! THis was hillarious! again...you guys are awesome writers! Keep it up! You have GOT to get the next chapt out soon! YOU GUYS ROCK! Keep writing!

hey! i got a mention!

*waves around giant concrete donkey*

i have to say this is a VERY entertaining fic. keep writing pls! hahahahahahaha can't wait to see the look on neo's face... ^_^

extremely entertaining and amusing once again girls! keep it up!

LMAO, guys! Funny shiz right there!! And guess what?? I'm reviewing!! Woo-hoo! This chapter was great! You guys better update the next chapter soon or else! Don't ask what 'else' is yet...haven't thought of it yet! ^_~ Hehes! Keep it up! Take cares! -DK-

has anyone told you girls how deranged you two are??? i can understand the island deal and it is funny, and i can't wait for the next chapter!!! MORE!!! MORE!! MORE!!!!!

- Mamoru's Playmate

hillarious. however, is this thing going to be done by halloween? anyways, cant wait for the next installment.

hehehehehehehehee....LMAO! That is sooo funny! U two rule the world!

You guy are great I can't wait to see how all of this is going to turn out ands I wonder I Usagi's hair will ery grow back. Ialso wonder about her friends in school. (sigh) I wish you guys came out with a chapter evry Day.


Star gazer AKA Smoon (sniffle)

HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! This is so funny! You guys crack me up! hahaha.... lol. y'all know that i want more and soon. other wise i wouldn't be writing this. and i'm too lazy to capitalize everything. lol. this is a great story... *goes off laughing ass off*

~Silver-chan

Eww . . . how could you do that to the bears?!?!
And, what's c**t?
Doesn't matter. I'll beat your c**t silly if you don't hurry up.

though I now hate the snake *coughs* well the REAL one...

I loved this.. Its was hilarious! lol. I essecially love dteh drunk bears and the clothing! go loin cloth!!! but really.. how did that lil peice of cloth survive.. and WHY hasn't it dissapeared yet? hmmmmmm???? Once again you two have wicked humor and a UNIQUE approach to the human interaction...

*cracks up* You two, are way to much for anyone to handle. This is one of my favorite stories so far! *dies of laughing*

crystal_rose,

Great writing, funny as anything.... I hope you keep this going, I was laughing and the people around me are giving me really weird looks...anywho...Congrats on the great comedy, can't wait to read the rest:)

???????????????

I haven't laughed so hard in a long while! I loved the name calling! Authors notes are hilarious too! All I can ask for is more of everything! Plus some more sexual tension between Usagi and Mamoru, who wouldn't?

you two are too much. and that's all i'm saying. oh, and that i love it.

Oh, dear. You two really take the cake.
*Shnirk* The MAMO-cake.

Damn that was one great kick azz chapter, (laugh)you must make more chapters I love were this is heading (cry) please don't let the wait be to long for the next chapter.

*thinks*
*starts snickering at the picture of a certain SOMEONE'S face*
*sees Lily rolling on the ground, laughing her head off*
*wipes away a tear*
I love this story!!! Especially the part where Usagi grabs the wrong thing. Yup. Te he. The look on Mamoru's face! Not that I would have done that....I don't think. It depends. On his 'assets' as you could put it.................
*starts laughing again*
*CR stares at CL, thinking that CL should be put in a mental hospital*
*Lily just laughs harder*

**falls over laughing**

BRAVO BRAVISSIMO!!!! and all those other italian band words... that was sooooo funny....and that's only the prologue. *evil grin* I cannot wait! *bounds away*

Lily like story. *beats chest*
ow.
Lesson of the day: Never beat your chest in an imitation of somehting if you're female. -_-;;
I like it. But, you seem to have an . . . interesting . . . choise of words.

Aligator is considered quite a delicacy in Lousiana & nearby areas. (Don't care for it that much myself. Tastes like chicken strips deep fryed in the same vat as the fish from fish & chips take out place.) A gator should last them quite a while, even with the way Usagi eats!

**Dies Of Laughter** How can anyone flame this? This story is just so funny... god...YOU MUST GET MORE OUT... NOW!!

you have GOT TO write more to that!!!!

MORE!!! MORE!! MORE!!!! Yes, you guys are nuts!!!! and just bad hentai's as me!!!! and if i had the time i would help you guys!!!

- Sere-chan

*gasps for air* I haven't laughed that much since the last chapter of 'Faults'.

I would give you a bad review for writing such a disturbing story... BUT DAMNED IF I'M NOT PSYCHOTIC TOO! It has been a long time since I have found anyone as strange as myself!
And that's saying something!!! Now you better write more or else I'll sell you both to the Basques and they just don't eat the livers you know!! They eat it all, although I don't think that they enjoy fava beans. And I'm afraid that you will have to settle for being washed down by Muscatel.

*coughs* you two DO realise you posted the story twice... right??
AND! I have some info about snakes, being the reptile lady and having... 7 live in my home (and we just had eggs, so thats MORE snakes!!)
Snakes DO NOT Hiss!!! *laughs* And they don't have slits for eyes. They have beady eyes. And NO eyelids (i don't know if you know this or not, but the people in Harry Potter screwed up royally)
Um.. and i was going to say they could see, but now im not so sure... So lets just go with .. yeah.
*grinS*
Good story, keep it coming.

ok, this is great. you gotta get more out quick cuz this is some funny stuff.

err... it was... interesting? lol! Seriously though, I luv it. keep on writing!

OMG! This story was totally and amazingly 100% immature and crazy! In other words! I LOVED IT! 5 stars from me! Keep the chapters coming! *grinz*

This had me laughing so hard I had tears spilling from my eyes! *wipes away tears* again...YOUR STORY ROCKED!

LoL!!! That was *too* hilarious!! I think this is going to be a great story!! You guys are crazy :P!!! Post a new chapter soon ^.^

mai lOVEDDD this..Itz sooo kewl!!! finish...finish!!!...you 2 ROX! so kewl.. i like so want mamo-chan. like way much!!! You to so rock at writing..this was FUN-EEEE!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA *breathes* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! Total Genius!!! What can I say but GREAT STUFF!!!! You guys are amazing!!! Keep it coming! I need my doses!!!

Thatttt wasssssss sooooooooooo funnnnnnnnnnnnnnny. lol. I know most of that though was ladysolo's ideas, but I must admit you pulled her genius ideas off very well. Very nice job, you crazy whores, and I KNOW ladysolo will do an even BETTER job than crystal rose. Wounded Souls isn't that great, I must admit, but Merletto . . . damn, that was just genius in motion.

Crystal_Rose!!!! You genius!!!!
*tackles* that was...
great!!!
I can't wait to see if Lady_Solo does as great!!!
I have wait to see more....(of mamoru's hands)
*sobs* I'm so in awe of you Crystal_Rose...

you two have a thing for violence..no? *sweat drops* ^^ it was rather amusing with it's elaborate usage of certain 'words' lol. But yeah..when do we get to the part where someone ..*coughs* thing *coughs* dies???
It was good ans funny... so get out more!!!!!!
*throws cows at them and walks off*

*wipes tears from eyes*

BRAVO! BRAVO! I almost DIED laughing but I think I'll go back for more! That was the BEST story I've ever read and trust me, I've read plenty. You are my favourite author! Oh, and ladysolo's ok too. Merletto was a fluke but she managed to pull it off ok. But you're my favourite!

*bows down and worships her*

I won't tell you my name. I'm satisfied with loving you from afar...

PLEASE get another chapter out and SOON! *hint, hint* ^^ Anyways, please don't forget about Wounded Souls and Merletto 2 while you're working on this story--even though M2 probably won't have the same luck it did with M1. BYE!