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Story: Love Labors Lost
Posted on Tuesday November 26, 2002 at 19:24 by ClaidiWinter
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Members Stories Rated: PG13
Status: Completed

When Usagi finds she is pregnent she flees, not wanting to face the truth of her child's conception. However she is forced to come to terms with her past when her son's father re-appears, and still wants the same thing he's always wanted. R&R please! (this story can also be found on ff.net)



Number of Chapters: 13          Total Size: 352k          Word Count: 65,784

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Nich - Monday November 26, 2012 at 07:44
Absolutely wonderful! A beautiful tale. I love the way you portrayed the characters. I look forward to seeing more from you!
Loki - Tuesday February 15, 2011 at 14:53
I just finished the last chapters, and you are amazing, and words are never enough as I think you are the super heroine girl, the shining light and a gifted storyteller,

*hearts*

Loki <3
Loki - Tuesday February 15, 2011 at 13:53
Dear Claidi, I am honored to have just spent the best hours reading your amazing story.

On pure creativity, dedication, world building and characterisation, it was breathtaking, despite any BETA tidying up, that is incidental as far as the power of the story, the raw emotions you portrayed and how you had me unable to stop the moment I started reading.

Yeah, a labor of love and truer words could not be applied here, I know what it is like to pour your heart into s story, it is like a friend, friends, your child, even your only love... ^_^ and appreciate as all writers do the devotion you put into this story.

I am only sorry it took me this long to discover it, and I am glad I finally have. You are as anyone who touches us as readers and or writers, precious as you share a part of your self, your time and your love of your craft with us and I loved this story, and I hope you do write up an epilogue - wonderful and thank you for a powerful touching and magical gift,

With love,

Loki <3 XOXO
cittykat21 - Monday December 11, 2006 at 11:25
And I read this again. What an amazing work of art you have created. The characterization, the story line and lastly the ending message, everything as wonderful as the next. I applaud you. Well Done.
ButtaUsagi - Sunday October 15, 2006 at 11:27
Such a compelling story! Very Refreshing. Although I read this a long time ago i can't stop reading it over and over again. lol you are a great writer and i hope you continue to write great stories like this one.

This is truely a Sailor Moon AU which give us a different point of view on the big "What IFs" in the R season which i love. The twist in this story made me want to read more lke this story but not everyone can master what you have given us with this story.

And with that i give you two thumbs up.....lol
cosmoscrystal - Thursday March 23, 2006 at 02:17
OMG! That story was just. . . .wow! Once I started reading it, I couldn't stop! You did an amazing job.
cittykat21 - Saturday February 04, 2006 at 03:13
An amazing story. The plot, characterisation and the depth of emotion is amazing. I couldn't stop reading it. A great story.
red_rose18 - Tuesday May 10, 2005 at 03:24
This story was amazing and teaches a great lesson!! I loved it and could not stop reading it. It was just absolutley wonderful.
Sailor_Angel - Wednesday November 12, 2003 at 18:51
Fantastic ending, nice um, book titles lol, couldn't've done better myeself ;) So....what are you waiting for? get your next story/chappie out already!
Kimmi-Chan - Saturday November 08, 2003 at 04:15
Breathtaking story which led me to tears! I love the emotion and the originality this story holds. I laughed, I cried, I poured all my emotion reading this and felt truly inspired. I commend you for wrtiting, "Love Labors Lost" and look forward to your future work =).
arashi - Friday November 07, 2003 at 20:57
The only reason I'm not crying now is that I'm at work and I can't. Your story is really, really inspiring, and I must congratulate you for it. Being attacked must be a terrible thing, and I thank God I've never been thru this. Being strong is difficult and I admire people who can do it.
I loved the new characters, and Usagi and Mamoru were just great!
You really have talent, girl, and that's something hard to find. Keep writing!!!
ChibiJ - Friday November 07, 2003 at 02:27
It's over...I shed a tear for the end of a great story, but give love and compassion for someone who has stayed strong through so much. I know someone who is fighting now, not against an actual attack, but something similiar that could have come to such an end...but luckily didn't.

Stay strong!!

I anxiously await more of your excellent writing.
Sailor_Angel - Monday October 20, 2003 at 18:27
*wipes tar away* The ending was so sweet! I really like the story, fanstastic piece of writing. Just to make sure, isn't kido spelt kiddo? and there was ONE mistake, nothing big but the editor in me won't let it slip by. Yoma, it's Youma. But other than that, I gave it a Fanstastic for rating. I got to go now but I want that epil!

~*S.Angel*~
andreadm - Friday October 17, 2003 at 18:59
i want more i loved that story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It almost made me cry! please write more and finish the story.
yadrianne - Tuesday October 14, 2003 at 05:45
great

what a great chapie

almost 20, she's old, I'm old
Critika - Tuesday October 14, 2003 at 05:25
Your story is like a good book one hates to see end! Your last chapter did clear up a lot of things, except for that scene in the future with Neo King Endymion and Setsuna's strange words. Nonetheless, I love the happy ending! I can't wait for your next story!
Anonymous - Thursday August 28, 2003 at 08:30
Love it!! Though I do wonder when you will be updating again... *sniffles* it's been quite awhile and I really wanna see what happens next!! Can't wait to see!
crystal_selene - Friday June 27, 2003 at 16:42
Ooooh this was a really sad story, but it was really, really good. i hope the epilogue comes out soon i cant wait to find out how it all turns out.lol
SerenaJojhan - Friday June 27, 2003 at 04:54
There are no actual words in any language I know of - and I know of a lot - to describe exactly how fantastic this story is. I've read a lot of different stories - written a lot of different stories - but none have ever come close to the magnitude of this one. I've enjoyed reading this immensely and am looking forward to anything else you have/will post. Very well done.
selenitey1000 - Wednesday June 25, 2003 at 14:42
Wahoooooo!!!! I've been waiting for that chapter at ff.net!! Very good!
Ezza - Wednesday June 25, 2003 at 07:43
wonderfull, i can't wait to read the EP.
Sovereign_Lily - Wednesday June 25, 2003 at 01:12
*sniffle*
I'm so proud of you!!!
*blows nose into Claidi's newly washed underwear*
*puts underwear back in clean underwear drawer*
And you got it out on my birthday!!! *hug* Thank you for your present!!!

Truly, you have captured the overwhelming emotions and inner trauma of a rape victim and you have led them to overcome it. You've presented it in such a heart-moving way that leaves me in tears because it is over.
I'd better see an epilogue coming out in time for my Canada Day present.
yadrianne - Tuesday June 24, 2003 at 23:33
that was so good, do an epilogue or something, I'v eliked you're story a lot since the beginning,
arwen - Tuesday June 24, 2003 at 23:22
whats next, whats nexts
kireisnowtenshi - Tuesday June 24, 2003 at 22:38
Im pratically in tears from reading this story! Loved it of course and I want a really long epilogue from this story! Its about time Ive been for them to get back together! Great story! Great writer!
ChibiJ - Tuesday June 24, 2003 at 20:00
As always, excellent! This was a great chapter and I love the way that she fought to the end!
Anonymous - Thursday May 29, 2003 at 19:11
lovin it so can you please stop enjoying the praise you're basking in and get your ass off the bed and get into the computer chair and start typing more of the story.

P.S.
Sorry if it seems harsh but I just wanna see more, puh-leez can u do what I told a to?
Anonymous - Thursday May 01, 2003 at 18:17
Well, I do truly wish you a happy birthday with lots of presents, but do you really need all that time to plan a party, when you have loyal readers desparately checking the internet for updates?

I love this story line! I'll be checking for updates from June 11 onwards!
Skysong - Thursday May 01, 2003 at 07:39
Wow.....
Wow....
Wow

you want your review...here it is.

i adore it. i just read it for the first time today and i'm captivated.

i await the next chapter....and congratulations on such a wonderful job. Thank you.

Lia/skysong
Anonymous - Wednesday April 30, 2003 at 22:25
I get some part of it, but the over all truth, is that this story is very, VERY, confusing.

Try not to hop from each POV so often. It gets the readers confused, and you usually skip it when it's starting to get to the good part.

And if you continue to do that, at least put what POV's they are from.

I hope you get this story to a better start. A little too immature for my taste.
Sweetcece15 - Sunday April 27, 2003 at 22:37
*looks evily at author* I can't believe you left it there! Mamoru finally gets what he wants, and Usagi is going with him?! Oh, you must update soon. Usagi's poor son, someone innocent always gets stuck in the middle. Great story! Can't wait!
Sovereign_Lily - Friday April 25, 2003 at 00:26
*kisses Claidi*
I love for getting a chapter out.
*drags Claidi face first through hot coals*
I hate you for making Usagi so gullible, even though I understand the circmstances.
*bashes Claidi with mace*
I still wish that somehow Casey will turn into Chibi-Usa or that Casey will somehow magically be of Mamoru's genetics. Yep, waiting for that chapter . . .
Rapists go on at the top of the list of "People I would like to pull their guts out with a white-hot hook, slowly rip off their *cough* piece by piece, force the person to eat the thing, drag through hell and a cesspool face down, and send to that place in hell where they make you do tortures forever."

And read up about us Canadians. You seem to have a few misconceptions.
Rhiannon - Thursday April 24, 2003 at 22:11
Ahh!! OH MY GOD! This is by far one of the best stories that I have read in a while. Please write more, this is awesome!
okawaiibabbito - Thursday April 24, 2003 at 20:57
NOOOO!!! Stupid cliffhangers! =( LOL. Please update soon...even know you should take your time...authors should always...but...NOOOOOOOO!! -anxiety attacks- Poor Usagi...I hate Diamond now...*growl*... heh heh. Keep on posting. =)
ChibiJ - Thursday April 24, 2003 at 20:47
*groans* why is it that all of us in the fanfic world have such an obsession with cliff hangers?? I mean really, we all hate them, so why do we do it to each other??

another great chapter! I have to say that I would have never guessed that you are only 16 (or going to be)! your writing is excellent and provokes such emotion. I can't wait for the next chapter!
lexie - Tuesday March 18, 2003 at 02:46
How could you leave me hanging like that. I love this story and have dieing for the next chapter. Please write the next chapter, maybe Serena tells all of her story to Darien and she becomes Salior Moon and goes and saves Casey. Please up date soon.
angeleyes13 - Saturday March 15, 2003 at 04:57
O MY GOD!!! GREAT STORY!!! You can't end this here!!! You must, must, must, must (and a few million more musts) continue and send in chapter 9!! I will be waiting! ;)

P.S
You really do have an awesome talent for writing!
Nararuki - Saturday March 15, 2003 at 01:20
DAMNIT JENNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 *strangles you* I'm going to bug you every day in japanese if you dont put the next chapter up soon! Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr......::sniffle::....this is why romance novels, stories, etc should be illegal! They drive you insane!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


....oh ya...I guess its good...lol j/k
Taryn
ChibiJ - Wednesday March 12, 2003 at 00:44
*growls* that is probably one of the most cruelest, evilest, not very nicest cliffhangers i have ever had to deal with! how could you!

i hope to see the next chapter out soon, as i will probably have a heart attack waiting for it!

ps. another great chapter!
GoddesGr14 - Tuesday March 11, 2003 at 22:25
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!What happened!!!!! Omg...this is one story kicks butt! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Sovereign_Lily - Tuesday March 11, 2003 at 21:33
*dies*
Look. You killed me. I'll need chapter 10 for compensation.

*sigh* I finally admitted that Casey MIGHT not be of Mamoru's blood. Now, of course, I am waiting for that turn of plot where Casey really does end up as Mamoru's child. *twiddles thumbs waiting*
Critika - Tuesday March 11, 2003 at 14:38
I love the plot and the way you write! When I read the story I can really feel Usagi's anguish and her love for her son and Mammoru. I hope the next chapter will be out soon!
Anonymous - Tuesday March 11, 2003 at 05:18
OMG, another wonderful chapter!! I'm in heaven!! I can't wait to see what happens now that Mamoru knows. Are Kate and Max gonna find out about the sailor scouts? Are the scouts going to come pay a visit...? OHHHH, hurry and update!!! I'm gonna go nutty wondering!!
selenis - Tuesday March 11, 2003 at 04:39
Fine, fine, u want the little note? Here's the bloody note... I want my next chappie! Seriously, a very well put together story. I CANNOT wait to read the next part!
Violet - Monday March 03, 2003 at 00:18
I really like it, please keep it up.
gwin - Thursday January 16, 2003 at 03:01
ah lovely evil cliffhanger! (pout) How could you leave me like this!
ChibiJ - Tuesday January 07, 2003 at 03:08
i really like this story. for once i am not seeing a story where the girl just blurts out what happened and everyone pretends that it was all okay. the fact that she didn't realize what it was exactly that happened and that she is going to finally be able to gain strength and hopefully grow from the experience is a well appreciated change.

i still hope in my heart that keisei is actually someone elses son and we just haven't gotten to that and that he got his mama's hair and it is just very light. i mean if Chibi-usa's her and mamo-chan's daughter with pink hair why can't he be theirs with silver hair? ne? please?
Anonymous - Wednesday January 01, 2003 at 21:37
This is such a good story. I felt like I was in Serena's place... and I want to kick Diamond's butt too.
Anonymous - Saturday December 28, 2002 at 21:17
where is Chapter 5 & 6?
Anonymous - Saturday December 28, 2002 at 18:16
Ya, same thing happened here too.
darkprincess - Saturday December 28, 2002 at 07:58
Whatever happened happened here too.
darkprincess - Saturday December 28, 2002 at 07:57
ummm...what happened?
ChibiJ - Sunday December 08, 2002 at 23:51
i have to say that it has been a while since i've read something that has totally absorbed me. this did though. i was worried at first that this would become a cliched story line, but the twists and turns it takes are very effective.

i hope to see more soon.
SilverRunningWater89 - Wednesday December 04, 2002 at 03:17
oOo! I can't wait to see what happens! This is so good! Please continue soon.
Anonymous - Thursday November 28, 2002 at 03:11
Wow! That's all i can say! This is just...wow! totally...wow! This is good, more than good. This is...WOW! lol- hurry with the next chapter! such cliffhangers are torture!
Anonymous - Wednesday November 27, 2002 at 15:56
Damn!!! This is truly getting good. I can't wait to see what is going to happen in the next chapter. Also is Jen and Tyler the two you were talking about, about not being brother and sister? Or are you going to introduce Alan and Ann.
I just have to say again that I love this story. It was well thought out, and original. I just have one question for you. Will Rini still exist or will Casey be the only child that Serena have? I also can't wait to see what happens when Darien finds that Serena is right in front of him. What will he do when Serena tells him the whole story about what Diamond did to her? Ohhh I can't wait, please don't leave me hanging.
cici - Wednesday November 27, 2002 at 06:10
hmm i love but hate this story lol...its like im mad because i want her son to be dariens kid and yet i have to keep reading to see what happens next and maybe it will be dariens kid(i hope :)...so i have to say you have a great story in your hands...and if it were a book i was reading i would have turned to the last chapter to see how it turned out...well i just love this story and keep writing it okay DONT STOP...PUT OUT NEXT CHAPTER SOON@!!!!!!!
Anonymous - Wednesday November 27, 2002 at 01:05
WOW...wow, wow, wow, wow, wow...
This story is amazing!*! How can you leave it there?!? Please write more as soon as you can and keep up the good work!
~Ali
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