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Story: Tsuki no namida
Posted on Sunday December 01, 2002 at 21:01 by Stargirl
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Members Stories Season: Alternate Reality
Main Characters: Mamoru/Darien, Usagi/Serena

Genre: Adventure, Fantasy, Romance

Rated: PG13
Status: Incomplete

Their moon destroyed, the surviving silver-haired race flee to their neighboring planet. They find refuge in the wondrous Earth--and they find prejudice. The people of the Earth grow wary and suspicious of the pale Lunarians with their unnatural power over the elements. Fear turns to hatred, hatred into oppression. The kingdoms of the Earth unite, and the greater king finds a way to conquer the gentle Lunarians that plague their lands. In one cruel, bloody night, the Lunarian elders are slaughtered, their children--powers bound--left to a life of slavery.

Serenity is a survivor, protected and raised hidden in the noble home of Luna and Artemis, innocent to the ways of the world. The love of a Terran Prince throws her into harsh tribulations, and battling grief and sorrow she discovers a rebellion threading the kingdom and one man's efforts to help his kind. Learning the secret of who she is, she struggles to find herself as she is forced into an even greater destiny.

This is a story of a young girl who finds her own strength, the power of friendship and the fine line between enemies, peace and war. Its a story of joy and heartache, magic and human nature.

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MUSIC PLAYLIST ~ Songs that have inspired me, you can listen to here! http://www.playlist.com/node/40830093


Number of Chapters: 18          Total Size: 725k          Word Count: 130,360

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heaven85 - Saturday December 15, 2012 at 07:55
Great story. Please continue.
elii - Wednesday June 27, 2012 at 02:53
Stargirl, i encouarge & beg u 2 plz continue wit this story.
Usagiandmamoru4ever - Monday October 24, 2011 at 09:32
Hello There Brilliant writer.
I understand that this is a shot in the dark as it may have been years since your last update, but as someone who appreciates compelling plots and works of beauty I feel it is my duty to at least ask, nay, beg you to please continue to see this masterpiece through.
You are a very skilled writer and I can understand the loss of the muse, but I still hope that maybe you can rekindle the flame of inspiration and create an ending to this amazing adventure you have taken your readers on.
All the Best
-E
Anonymous - Friday October 16, 2009 at 14:56
Ace
Loki - Friday September 18, 2009 at 15:23
Pure magic,

Classic,

What Sailor Moon is all about and what drew me to her and her world,

An honor and privillage to read and to help you with Star, you're truly awesome! <3
tiffanybgood - Thursday September 17, 2009 at 16:46
I absolutely love! I'm so glad you're coming back to this story with a renew vigor. Please keep it coming!
Anonymous - Tuesday September 15, 2009 at 02:52
thanx for finally updating and caint wait for more chapters 2 come...
Critika - Monday September 14, 2009 at 21:51
This story is getting better and your writing style is improving in leaps an bounds. In chapter 15, I was eagerly reading every word as I was caught up in the suspense of the story. It's good to see Serenity developing a backbone - I can't wait to read the next update!
StarGoddess - Monday September 14, 2009 at 10:34
BEAUTIFUL! Now please don't make me wait a year for the next chapter.
Terri721 - Sunday July 26, 2009 at 13:35
please update soon! this is brilliant!
dani8951 - Friday February 06, 2009 at 16:47
well i caint wait 4 more chapters ...and hope 2 read them soon
amaterasu-no-ki - Monday December 15, 2008 at 07:25
I have been following this story since about 3 or 4 years ago...I still love it. I read your writing before embarking on my own, as inspiration. And your author's notes make me feel like you're a kindred spirit...I, too, began writing a long time ago, as a teenager, and got a little lost along the way, and am struggling to pick back up that fanciful strain of writing that I used to capture late at night or very early in the morning.

You definitely have grown as a writer -- I feel the difference between chapter 11 and the subsequent chapters -- but it is all for the better, as Tsuki no Namida has become even more compelling and beautiful as time has worn on. I've never given up on this story as I'm so interested to see what will happen next! I cannot wait to see more of what you'll write and even if you only come out with one more chapter a year, I'll grow along with the story as I read it.

Keep writing, and good luck!
Anonymous - Saturday November 29, 2008 at 03:01
i love this story ...caint wait for more chapters
Anonymous - Saturday August 02, 2008 at 20:50
Being a bit of a lurker, I've read plenty of great SM fics, but this one, and a couple of others right now on the site written about the Silver Milenium, are uber good and this is no different!!! Love it, looking forward to another one!!!
Bakayaro - Friday August 01, 2008 at 05:22
Man.. =s Endymion is being a huge jerk. Even so, I would just hate it if Serenity was with anyone else.
Loki - Thursday July 31, 2008 at 13:19
Whoops, I meant the last review to be a private one, oh well, doesn't matter BC I wanted to say the images in chapter 2 were absolutely striking, particularly the images of the butterflies landing on Serena's arm and the birds also, the fountain and that entire sequence has a breathtaking visual style that is lavish and supports the text, so rare a gift.

I think of people like Stormlight, Alicia Blade, Baine, Crystal Rose, Aria and Alaverity, Lady Solo, Goddess Althena, Jessica Pendragon and Lady Moon Cat, Zai Zai and others also come to mind, but oh so good! I am looking forward to losing myself in this fic. Good on you for taking up the pen or keyboard' ^^ in this case, and continuing and I bet you've plenty more stories to share with us, too!

*hands you Moon roses*
Loki - Thursday July 31, 2008 at 05:45
Hi Stargirl,

I thought I would ask here if you had found yourself a new editor? ^^

While I am frightfully busy, ATM, with my own writing and editing, I would extend to you my offer of help if you wish it, I know you may have somebody already for such a wonderful story, but if by chance not, please consider my offer.

Most of the errors I have seen are basic, and minor structural homonyms, redundant qualifiers, and expression in places, slight word usage in mundane 'body in action' etc, easily corrected and little things like that. But beautiful work. I have just finished chapter 2
If you accept my offer, email me at:

loki.onyx@gmail.com

If not, I wish you well! <3 Steve
Merry - Thursday July 31, 2008 at 04:43
This story keeps getting better and better! After everything that's happened thus far, I would have been very disappointed in Serenity if she had taken Endymion back, so I think you did a fantastic job with the final scene. Every character is very well defined, and behaving very logically, even during emotion fueled scenes (I hope that makes sense!). Also, reading about Endymion touring the abyss - I had hoped you'd put a scene like that in the story! I don't know about anyone else, but I had a smug look on my face the whole time.

In light of the Serenity/Endymion break-down, while I'm not quite a Serenity/Diamond shipper, I have to say that I've never liked him as a character as much as I do here. Same goes with Raye, and I'm enjoying seeing her gentle side. The scene when she extinguished the candle in Serenity's room was very sweet~

I'm really excited for further chapters, and eventually the ending of this story! I just hope that if it does lead up to a Serenity/Endymion pairing, that something major happens to Endymion to make him change his worldview. I've read far too many stories where he "comes to his senses" suddenly, or Serenity swallows her pride, etc. With two headstrong characters, getting them together won't be easy, but if anyone can write it believably I'm sure you can, as you've proved in the past 14 chapters! Good luck with the rest!
lunasol - Thursday July 31, 2008 at 00:29
*tears* This was beautiful. I am so glad that you didn't put Endymion and Serenity back together. At this point he doesn't deserve her at all. I can't wait for the next chapter :)
Anonymous - Wednesday July 30, 2008 at 23:58
wow im love this story is very good cain't wait till read new chapters
sugarlily - Tuesday July 29, 2008 at 21:16
You have no idea how excited I was to find out that you were returning to this story. I've finally made my way through the entire story again, and I was as utterly entranced by your tale as I was reading it for the first time. Your beautifully descriptive prose never fails to amaze me and you do a remarkable job with showing Serenity's growth. I'm glad to finally see her embracing the strength she has been reluctant to see in herself in the last chapter and I thought you depicted it perfectly.

I will be anxiously awaiting the next chapters. I'm dying to know what is going on with Endymion and what he's been up to since the brief encounter with Serenity a few chapters back. Best of luck with the writing. *cheers you on* ^^
md13 - Wednesday July 23, 2008 at 07:27
Thank you so much for updating, I was very glad to see you're still working on this. Please continue...
Bakayaro - Wednesday July 23, 2008 at 06:24
Wow! I can't believe you updated! I thought you had given up on this story.
I had forgotten most of the story as I read this last chapter & I considered rereading the story again. I'm hesitant though because I'm not sure when you're updating next & if it isn't soon, I'll end up forgetting the story once more.
Would you suggest I reread it? Are you updating soon & are you close to the ending?
Rae - Tuesday July 22, 2008 at 12:06
im so glad that this story is back up and running..keep upt he good work
Loki - Tuesday July 22, 2008 at 07:04
Wow! I am speechless!

WISE: while there are some grammar and other little things that need attention, this story is incredible. I had not read it before, and as we have such a rich repository of fic in our archives, I am so happy to have started on this journey.

Here is a scene that warmed my heart and I could picture the little princess of silver hair, the eyes, the fear and the vulnerability, and in that image, are we not all moved, in that image can we but see a fragment of hope that lies within. This passage was like a lightniing bolt, it sparked something and also I admit, a few tears.

Beautiful story and you will see from this exert from the first chapter:

He fumbled with the hilt of his sword and then pulled it out with a smooth sliding noise, watching the girl closely. Her young eyes widened a fraction at the blade and her breaths quickened.

"I'm sorry," he said, voice hoarse and short. "I don't want to do this." He raised the sword, his own breaths ragged. He had braced himself for the child's
eyes boring into his--accusing as he deserved--but they were simply stuck on the sight of the sword. Tears skimmed down her cheeks and her small chest heaved.

Moments dragged, his fingers white in their grip as his sword loomed above her. She just stood there, frozen as if a rabbit caught in the sight of its prey.
Her strangled breaths and tears were like the sound of a deathly flood. He was already dropping his sword and wrapping his large arms around the terrified
girl, tears on his own face. She trembled and shook in his embrace, but slowly her fingers curled over the course material of his uniform and she hugged
him.

If only darkness and light could find such a moment

*hands you a crystal orb and a Lunarian basket of roses*
CosmicAngel - Tuesday June 03, 2008 at 23:45
You must update this one! It is my absolute favorite! Does she end of working in a small village or an a farm where Darien accidentaly stumbles upon her. Just please... tell me what happens to her... It's been driving me insane. If you need any help with this story or any others, please let me know.
lexie_06 - Saturday April 26, 2008 at 15:22
You MUST finish!! i love this story, it's so well thought out! please update soon!
Anonymous - Monday November 05, 2007 at 00:11
OMG UPDATE SOOON!!! I wonder what happens next with serena and what will happen to her,where will she go?
moonangel47 - Tuesday May 08, 2007 at 00:50
please update!!!!
Love the story so far.
freaky - Sunday April 15, 2007 at 01:36
i love the story but u have to finish it!!!
CosmicAngel - Sunday April 15, 2007 at 00:12
another amazing fanfic lost to the title of incomplete.
moonchild08 - Monday April 09, 2007 at 19:03
the whole thing with the prince reminded me of Ever After. That is a great movie! Great story.
CrossWings - Friday April 06, 2007 at 08:06
You can't just stop with her running away! You have to continue! Update update update!
Armonokiataya - Saturday January 13, 2007 at 10:34
great story can't wait to read more
Mayonaka - Tuesday January 02, 2007 at 21:59
That was amazing!Completely incredible!YOur choice of words were so descriptive-so powerful. Even though there were a few spelling errors, it did nothing to the meaning of the story. Please continue!!!!
elise - Monday October 23, 2006 at 04:32
PLEASE UPDATE! I REALLY WANT DARIEN BACK IN THE STORY! I LOVE YOUR IDEA ITS AMAZING. JUST UPDATE!
CosmicAngel - Friday June 16, 2006 at 21:09
When was the last time this story was updated? Its one of my favs! so please update soon!
xMoon_Princessx - Sunday February 05, 2006 at 07:27
arggg....

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
nina_girl - Wednesday February 01, 2006 at 11:46
Wow! More, please write more. I want to now what happens.
sugarlily - Friday December 30, 2005 at 04:48
You never fail to impress me, Star. It was a beautifully written chapter and nearly worth the wait (that is really saying something for an impatient girl like me). You flawlessly depicted Serenity's turmoil and really set the stage for her to develop even more than she has. I can't wait for more! Especially once Endymion comes back into the picture. ;)

It was definitely a lovely Christmas present, even if it took me until after Christmas to read it. ^^
devilsangels02 - Sunday December 25, 2005 at 18:36
ah.... i loved it .. .please send in the next chapter soon!! its really interesting!! defintely continue this fic and have more D/S action!! too.. its really good.. keep up the great work!!
kasumi - Sunday December 25, 2005 at 18:00
Star, I haven't given up on you. I know what it's like to be busy, and to be scared of writing sometimes. I was sooo happy when you posted this latest installment of Tsuki no Namida; it was like a Christmas present.

I don't know exactly how to explain it, but I like your writing a lot.
lydials - Sunday December 25, 2005 at 13:03
Thank you so much for updating! Your story is absolutely fantastic, and this chapter is no exception! You write with such an elegant, flowing style that truly is a pleasure to read! You're also extremely skilled at crafting very three-dimensional characters.

This chapter was especially fantastic -- the emotional situations, such as Luna's conflict over telling Serenity her true identity, were very well-written. Great job!

My only qualm about this section was when Luna told Serenity she was the princess -- the beginning of the conversation seemed a little forced, Luna's admission a little abrupt. But it was a small, negligible issue, and the chapter was amazing! Thank you so much for an enjoyable read!
thypari - Sunday December 04, 2005 at 03:04
:O:O UPDATE PLEASE!!!! I REALLY WANT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS!

:D
asianprincess - Thursday October 27, 2005 at 21:14
wicked so far, keep up the good work- i want to know how it ends!!!
MissChristina - Wednesday July 13, 2005 at 06:05
Oooh I can't wait for the next chapter! I've just read from start to finish, and I've got to say, the plotline is really unique. I love the history of Tsuki no Namida, you've made it seem almost real - it's so depressing, but it's an event the reader must know more about.

I love how you've turned Endymion into your own character - he's still Endymion to the core, but he isn't a replica of the Endymions you read in most stories. For once, he isn't the perfect, handsome prince we've all known to love - he's harsh and ruthless, and I hate him! <<; Hahaha.. I can't wait to see more of him; to see if he'll change overtime.

Throughout the chapters, I've noticed your writing skills have seriously improved. They've always been good, but towards the last chapters, your characterization skills and description have both improved immensely, so kudos for that. ^^

I've noticed a few minor spelling errors (Do you know you called Serenity 'Serena' in chapter 8? o.O) but they're only minor, and no stories are flawless. Another one would be in chapter 9, "excepting her mother, that is." Feel free to yell at me if I'm wrong.. but it should be "except", not excepting. Other than that, the fic is fine, just a few minor errors. ^^

Overall, lovely story! And I REALLY can't wait for an update. I want to see how everything turns out between Endymion and Serenity, and what's going to happen now that Artemis' safehouse is gone. ;.;

<3 Christina - who really rambles too much. x_x
Anonymous - Sunday May 29, 2005 at 07:20
THIS IS SUCH A GOOD STORY!! Very well written. Please continue the plot is amazing!!! It truly is!! Please update soon!!!
beastofnature - Monday May 09, 2005 at 18:32
get writin girl... i need more be4 i grow old
kimmy xx lol
ps a brilliant stoy.. really enlightin though i need morte of endymion/darien... nneeed to see them get back togeva..plzzzz
beast of nature
Eli - Thursday November 04, 2004 at 22:32
im still waiting and will still be waiting so please put a chapter so i know you will finish thanxs
Anonymous - Sunday September 12, 2004 at 18:09
i LOVE your story, especially chapter 11. i'm hoping your gonna finish this story and write more. its really interesting and i like how you write it. one of the best stories i've read, and i've read alot =] please dont take a long time to update this story, i want MORE
brat - Thursday August 05, 2004 at 18:13
This is an great story, you need to write more.
Anonymous - Thursday July 08, 2004 at 03:18
what .. u need to write more
Mirrorgirl - Friday May 21, 2004 at 00:59
You know,I'd like to know what happened next....
^^
Come one, bring on the next update!! ^_^
Sailor_Angel - Thursday February 19, 2004 at 10:39
^^ I loved this chapter! Rei's finally discovered she's at least part lunarian? Or maybe just has an abnormal control over fire... *shrugs* But I really want to see what happens next, this is wayyy too exciting for me to wait another 8 months for!
moonflower - Monday February 16, 2004 at 22:57
I'm glad to see a new chapter came out. ^_^ I keep hoping that Endymion would show up in the new installments you put up, but I see you're saving the best thing for last. What has me most intrigued is how Endymion and Serenity's relationship will work and if they'll ever get together despite the hatred going on between Terrans and Lunarians.

I would comment on your writing, but I think I've done enough of that in my previous reviews. ^^;; Keep on writing, Sarah.
Angelgrl185 - Monday February 16, 2004 at 01:20
I just wanted to say that I really like your story. I just read the whole eleven chapters today and its so interesting, it just kept me entranced!! Please don't wait to much longer to update!! I'm so impatient and its such a different story than all the others I've read! So original!!
Anonymous - Sunday February 15, 2004 at 07:32
this has got to be the greatest fic i have ever read, i cant wait for the next update (you better be typing the next chapter right now"
md13 - Saturday February 14, 2004 at 21:47
dudette... that was... good!
What took you so long?!
Please write more, and try not to make us wait so long!
lexie - Tuesday October 28, 2003 at 12:54
This is one of my favorites. I just want to know is this a S/Da or S/Di? Becuse in this cases they both seem like a nice pairing. Update soon
serenasangel - Wednesday September 17, 2003 at 01:25
great stogoing on fav. list! i love it!
Lady_Artemis - Sunday August 24, 2003 at 07:56
*needs more or shall die of Tnn withdrawal*

Can't wait for the next chapter, I love the setting and the characters- it's perfectly balanced! Hope to see more soon! ^_^
Anonymous - Thursday July 17, 2003 at 07:35
I love it and I want more
arwen - Sunday June 08, 2003 at 15:59
oh please you have to write another chapter
Cappuchino_Princezz - Sunday May 18, 2003 at 16:57
You must continue this story and get the next chapter out soon! It's a very good story and your writing is amazing.
Sweetcece15 - Thursday May 15, 2003 at 00:46
I've been waiting for you to update! So what's going to happend with Diamond and Serena? *wink wink* And is she ever going to be face to face with Endymion again? Or is he still going to be a butt and not react to his feelings? Some guys are just so stubburn...well I like the story. Keep it up!
ChibiJ - Monday May 12, 2003 at 23:02
I feel like I have to review, because it would be a crime not too... Once again, another wonderful chapter. This is one of the four stories that I constantly am looking for an update from, thank you for writing so well and keeping me entertained!

As for the story...I'm dying for some Endy/Sere confrontation! I just wanna see what happens! Did he see her at the church?? Is it just me, or is Sere getting close to discovering who she is? *growls* I am not feeling patient at the moment!
Sovern_of_Evil - Monday May 12, 2003 at 19:07
You finally updated! Since you said that you update at ff.net and your site more..and quicker, I think I'll go check it out! ^_^

Hope you update somemore. ^_^
LadyBlackWolf - Monday May 12, 2003 at 14:17
Great, and yes, it has been quite a while since the last update. Please don't take so long next time. I really enjoy this story.
Clover - Monday May 12, 2003 at 04:10
*claws at Stargirl* That's for getting my hopes up when I saw that you had posted a chapter... I thought it was 11.

Anyways, you know I love this story, so work on getting the next chapter out!
kasumi - Monday May 12, 2003 at 02:05
Does this mean you'll be posting the eleventh chapter on FF.net? You've already kept us waiting for a month!
Sailor_Angel - Sunday April 13, 2003 at 16:23
I LUV THIS STORY!! It's fantastic so please finish it
Sovern_of_Evil - Friday April 11, 2003 at 02:14
This is the second time I've read this, and you know what? I can NEVER get TIRED of it!

::huggles::

Please continue ^_______^
aman_akira - Wednesday April 09, 2003 at 19:10
I've been reading this story of ff.net, and I have to say I was hoping for a new chapter. ^_^
I absolutely love your story. And I'm really enjoying Rei's character. Update soon.
arwen - Monday April 07, 2003 at 19:38
it so romantic it really made me and my friends cry some times(and thats really cool the last time I saw time cry was over his dog that died years and years ago,and now I have so thing to laghf at now so thank you so much.)well your really doing a great job so I'm going to tell you some thing iwant more, iwant more, i want more, i want more,i want more.

"I WANT MORE YOU HERE ME MORE AND I MEAN SOON"
lexie - Monday April 07, 2003 at 02:18
When is everyone going to find out that Serenity is the queen of the Lunarian society. Do they find out when they take off her chain around her neck. Please update soon. I can't take the waiting.
Aallycat - Monday March 17, 2003 at 05:13
Why wont u write more waaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh I'm Gonna Tell my mommy!!!!!!!!
GlitteringFairy - Friday March 14, 2003 at 23:35
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW I LOOOOOOOVE this fic!!!!!!!!
hurry hurry hurry!!!!!! =P
post the next chapter(s)!!!!!!! =D
*thumbs up* great job!!!!! a really really really good fic!!!! absolutely wonderfull!!!!
GoddesGr14 - Tuesday March 11, 2003 at 02:51
***WOOOHOOOO!!!!!!!*******SHE ESCAPED!!!!!!Yay! I'm so happy,now! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

Crazy about your story,

GoddesGr14
LadySelenity - Monday March 10, 2003 at 19:17
She escaped!!!!! Yeah!!! With Amy and Lita's help!! I knew it was them!!! Star, you are amazing!! I love this story. It has me spellbound. Excellent work.
Anonymous - Thursday March 06, 2003 at 02:31
Oh My God!!!!!!! That has to be one of the best stories i have read over and over agin..... keep up the good work...
Kawaii_Neko84 - Tuesday March 04, 2003 at 15:58
This story has me addicted, and trust me it's not easy to get me hooked on a story. I started this on ff.net, and since you seem to update it there faster then here, I guess I'll stick to reading it there. Great job! Best Original Serenity & Endymion story I've read in a long time
LunarGlitterBabe - Tuesday March 04, 2003 at 11:55
Oh Stargirl, must you mock us so? I would really love for you to finish this beautiful story. Waaaahhhhhh!!! Don't make us beg!!!!
ChibiJ - Tuesday March 04, 2003 at 02:01
yea! reviews are back!

so i can once again say how much i love this story and ask you to keep working on it. i think you need to give us a little more agony. *grins* just kidding. but i would love to see in a chapter or two how endy is doing. is he miserable or worried or does he even know that serenity was captured...

can't wait to see the next chapter!
Violet - Sunday March 02, 2003 at 03:24
Love it, please keep writting.
ChibiJ - Wednesday January 08, 2003 at 02:20
this story just seems to pull me in and hold me captive. i just can't bare to stop reading it once i start. it is a wonderfully passionate story and i cannot wait to read more!
Lady_Artemis - Monday January 06, 2003 at 03:33
I love the setting of this story. Its dramatic, well balanced in description and emotion, and generally well-written. I can't wait to see more!
Tsuki1 - Sunday January 05, 2003 at 12:38
*blinks* huh!!?? wha!!?? you stopped THERE!!?? *falls over* this is torture! Pure torture!! *wails* oh the irony! An original fab fic emerges and. you. leave. it. there!! wheres the rest!!!?? *shakes you* more i say more!!! *ahem* thankyou and have a nice day ^.~
Tyler - Thursday January 02, 2003 at 06:59
Oh. My. God. That was amazing. How could you do this to all your poor innocent readers and leave it there? More! More!
Anonymous - Friday December 27, 2002 at 20:16
please write the next chapter soon. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Lilbluebear - Tuesday December 24, 2002 at 13:50
EGAD! You can't do this to me... leaving me here at another cliffhanger. *wails* Unfair! You best be getting another chapter out missy! B/c it's great stuff, and you don't wanna leave Lil-B at a cliffhanger. Keep those chapters rolling! *throws creative dust at Stargirl so she can keep typing*
sweet-_-silence - Monday December 23, 2002 at 23:41
Beautiful. There is no other word to describe your story. Please continue writing your elegant words, I'm sure that the story will continue to be marvelous.
Keep up the excellent work
Naomi
sailorperfect - Monday December 23, 2002 at 20:32
Please hurry and add the next chapter! Poor Serena! I feel so sorry for her. I'm dying to know what happens next.
Sere2002 - Monday December 23, 2002 at 12:47
That was some cliffhanger, Star! I can't believe you left it like that!! But I am not disapointed. You express yourself very well, and the story is easy to follow. Your plot is interesting and enjoyable and I look forward to the next chapters!!
Anonymous - Monday December 23, 2002 at 04:58
I loved it!!! You're mean, ::pouts:: you can't just leave it like that. Hurry write the next chapter soon.
cici - Saturday December 21, 2002 at 02:00
aaaaaahhhhhhhhhh how could you just end this chapter like that huh huh hhhmmmm well if you put the next chapter out soon i will forgive you lol....it was a great chapter and i cnat wait to see what else serena can do with her powers
Anonymous - Friday December 20, 2002 at 06:28
bah write more soon cuz i hate when stuff get left off like that.
jin - Friday December 20, 2002 at 05:15
How sad, it almost make me cry. I really like to know what will happen next. Will Edymion help her?
ivory - Tuesday December 17, 2002 at 03:11
You would be really evil to leave me hanging like this. You would.
Medea - Monday December 16, 2002 at 08:30
AHHHH!!!!!!! OMG need *gasp* more! *pant pant*
pwease!

It took me a while to get the ending of chpt.4, INGENIOUS!
SerenityBliss - Monday December 16, 2002 at 06:40
You had to leave it at a cliffhanger...Love it and want more
Tyler - Monday December 16, 2002 at 04:53
OMG! You have to finish this story! It's so amazing! I need to know what happens. Please, please, please!
jin - Sunday December 15, 2002 at 02:56
Oh no, what happen next? Please update ASAP....
Ezza - Sunday December 15, 2002 at 02:09
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

get the idea?
Anonymous - Sunday December 15, 2002 at 01:42
Great Story! Write more soon please!
Anonymous - Friday December 13, 2002 at 06:57
omg....
you have no idea how happy i was when i came on AI and saw that you had posted this story here!
i started reading it on SMRFF....and i'm even more delighted to find that there is another chapter here!!!!!
thank you sooooo much....i luv it...love it..adore it.
*grins* didn't you mention that you wrote FOUR chapters? i could have sworn....
maybe....there might be a chance.....that the next chapter will be posted very soon?
if not as soon as i think...welll..don't worry..take your time to write..but just know that there are people who eagerly await the chap!
thank you, thank you, thank you

Skysong aka lia
Lilbluebear - Wednesday December 11, 2002 at 07:46
Ahh! More more! I love the great descriptions. I wonder how will Serena and Endymion stay together this time. Please post the next chapter up soon.
Anonymous - Wednesday December 11, 2002 at 02:09
Oh my god. Don't do that. Please write the next chapter soon. I can't wait to see what happens next. I love this story.
ChibiJ - Monday December 09, 2002 at 02:01
This is an excellent story. i can't wait to read more.
Anonymous - Thursday December 05, 2002 at 05:17
I LOVE this fic!!!!! more!!
Clover - Thursday December 05, 2002 at 03:44
*pokes Star* Get another chapter out soon, alright?
DiamondPrincess - Wednesday December 04, 2002 at 21:07
this is a really great story i have read nuttin like this well not exactly like this any way so i can not wait to read the rest update this story soon
Anonymous - Wednesday December 04, 2002 at 13:53
Ohhhh! I can't wait to see what happens next. Please write the next chapter soon.
CrystalMoonBunny - Wednesday December 04, 2002 at 07:09
WOW! Im addicted.. I love it!!! More please? please?
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Anonymous - Monday December 02, 2002 at 23:29
Interesting story. i'll be waiting for the next update
moonflower - Monday December 02, 2002 at 22:18
I love this fic! I better see more soon, Sarah! *grins*
Anonymous - Monday December 02, 2002 at 13:32
Oh I truly love this story. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please write the next chapter soon.
Ezza - Monday December 02, 2002 at 02:30
W-O-W! that is a great start. i can't wait to read more.
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