I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It was extraordinary and I like how you twisted it to force Darien and Serena together. You can see how they fell in love, each in their own way and how in the end it worked out all well.
I feel bad for Andrew but I'm sure with him everything will turn out okay.
Excellent job.
I first read this story a few years ago and it was great to find it again. I really enjoyed it, it was well written and the plot was entertaining and wonderful.
I don't know how many times I've re-read this story. I love all your work but this one always seems to stick out in my mind. I hope you're still writing because I'd love to read more of your stories.
You know I'm a little sad that Andrew and Serena won't be getting married. I love Serena with Darien, but it still is sad that Andrew is still in love with her and Serena isn't.
I really don't know why you don't have more reviews. Well maybe because there really isn't anything more to say than that this is a great story. This was the first story I've read from you and ever since I've loved all your works. This story is a true classic and if only there more authors like you.
What a fabulous story! In the words of Yoda, gifted you truely are. And such a happy ending. I would love to have seen some of the fantastic loving between Darien and Serena though...
Awesome story!! Wow. I started reading and couldn't stop reading til I finished it =) It was really well written and I thought the characters were quite well developed too. I had a couple of minor issues with it- scene changes weren't marked in any way and a couple of times it was hard to tell who was speaking. Also, it seemed a little quick for Serena to accept her father's deal. Though it makes sense if she actually liked Darien but didn't know it and since she really wanted to please her dad. An editor could help you fix things such as extra quotes and such (I've never really edited before but if you do want to edit it(I don't know how long ago you finished it and understand if you don't want to go back), I could help some while I'm on break from school).
Other than that, I thought it was great! I almost wish Andrew had been paired off and Serena's friends could have somehow been able to attend the wedding, but really- your story is good =)
