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Story: Strangers on a Train
Posted on Saturday December 28, 2002 at 05:43 by elysia
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Members Stories Season: Alternate Reality
Main Characters: Mamoru/Darien, Usagi/Serena

Rated: PG
Status: Completed

Serena's traveling home for Christmas, and she meets a very interesting person on the train... one with secrets and a past of his own. Can these two strangers show each other the true spirit of Christmas?


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Number of Chapters: 6          Total Size: 72k          Word Count: 13,297

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dani8951 - Tuesday November 03, 2009 at 21:39
what an adorable story!!!
Yumecosmos - Thursday October 15, 2009 at 14:13
Aww... this story is very sweet. It's refreshing to see the two of them getting along at the beginning. I really liked the imagery of frost on the glass in the beginning.
Sometimes I think you get a little bit repetitive--I would try to avoid using the same word more than once in a paragraph.
Your first chapter made me smile all the way through. A perfect feel-good holiday piece (even if it's not Christmas right now, hehe.)
Nich - Thursday January 08, 2009 at 22:41
How sweet! Great job, I loved it! Thank you for sharing! You're awesome!
xXJessieXx - Monday November 17, 2008 at 17:00
I like your stories a lot and I've read them over and over again but this particular piece is absolutely fantastic. It's romantic and so Serena-like that she invites a complete stranger to her home. <3
Lialyn - Thursday February 21, 2008 at 03:13
I LOVE THIS SOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!
Highlighter21 - Monday April 02, 2007 at 17:06
There are so many words to describe how amazing this story was: cute, adorable, well-written, suberbe... etc. I am absolutly in love with it. I love the way you had the exchange of letters between the two. You really got the sence of distance across between the two lovers... it was a very good trick. Of course the whole notion of inviting a stranger over for christmas was a littly far-fetched, I didn't care at all! This story was too magical for reality to really play an important role. I hope to read more of your works soon... and I hope you keep writing.

Sincerely,
Highlighter21
Mayonaka - Wednesday February 07, 2007 at 22:48
That was so incredibly cute!A little fast on the plot, but so cute!Oh, and there are some grammar and punctual mistakes, but that did not effect the story line.
galena_steel - Monday October 23, 2006 at 10:24
A wonderful story. I must remember to go back and read it again this Christmas. A little unbelievable I suppose. Meeting someone on the train like that but I think its more like the world as we all wish it could be an not the world we have to live in. I found your characters very sweet and I liked how you focused on the important ones without letting all the other interesting people distract from the story. Thanks for a great story! It really cheered me up!
Anonymous - Sunday April 09, 2006 at 00:14
that was THE BEST STORY I have ever read. Cute funny and it kept me laughing i love your other story crazy for you to! keep writing!
lexie - Saturday February 11, 2006 at 23:59
That was such a cute little story. I love the love story between Serena and Darien.
Dirinu - Monday September 26, 2005 at 04:19
I love this story! I remember reading it a long time ago and I'm so glad that I got the opportunity to find it again! Very sweet and heartwarming! Encore!
Angelgrl185 - Tuesday April 05, 2005 at 18:29
Awe that was really cute! Such an enjoyable read. I really liked it! Good job!
Lydz - Tuesday December 07, 2004 at 06:54
My fave story so far!!!!! Keep on writing!

Hope u keep it up!!!

.:Lydz:.
michaela - Wednesday August 04, 2004 at 19:28
OMG!!! I LOVE that story! I've read that from ur site and I absolutely fell in love with it!!! I'm going to say this again, I LOVE IT!!!!
Skysong - Tuesday September 16, 2003 at 07:43
*just stares in awe*

OH MY GODS!!!! THAT HAS TO BE THE VERY BEST STORY I HAVE READ IN A LONG TIME!

reading this made me soooooo happy! it had so many cute, sweet, endering parts, at first i was going to name them, but then they kept on coming and coming, so many wonderful touching parts!

*gives a great big giganticly humongus hug and a lifetime supply of chocolate*

this is one of those stories that really touches you, and i think most importantly, this inspires me to try and work harder to write myself.

Thank you so much.

Keep up your beautiful work

Lia....skysong
Sailor_Angel - Wednesday June 04, 2003 at 14:39
oooh I love it! but I wish you'd have an epilogue too.
Violet - Sunday March 02, 2003 at 23:11
Beautiful, I love the story.
Anonymous - Thursday January 02, 2003 at 18:40
I loved this story. It was really cute. I wish you wrote an epilogue for this story. One when you mention Serena and Darien's children.

It was a beautiful story
Kittycat - Thursday January 02, 2003 at 01:38
That was probably the cutest story that I have ever read. I am definately one for sweet and sappy and this story certainly delivers. It is very well written and is very believable. It's soooooooooo cute! Everyone must read it!!!
SilverRunningWater89 - Wednesday January 01, 2003 at 00:23
I've read this story so many times! I love it! It's so sweet! *sniff* Bravo for the fantastic work on this story! Fab job!
SlrEuropa - Sunday December 29, 2002 at 06:58
You know I love this story. ^^ And you know WHY!! HAHAHAHA! I loved re-reading it though. You have such a flair for sappiness, and even I need a dose every once and a while. And I know just where to get it! :)
Jamestown - Saturday December 28, 2002 at 20:50
I have always enjoyed this SM tale. Thankyou!
Anonymous - Saturday December 28, 2002 at 17:51
That was very sweet*
LadyBlackWolf - Saturday December 28, 2002 at 15:48
Cute, I liked it.
Lillian - Saturday December 28, 2002 at 15:08
Wonderful story! ^____^
Lillian - Saturday December 28, 2002 at 14:46
I'm only on chapter one but I'm giggling already. It's so cute! Luv it so far. Hopefully Serena and make Darien happier, especially since he seems so lonely...
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