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Competition: Once Upon a Raindrop
Posted on Monday January 27, 2003 at 14:58 by AlexisWinn		AIMod Download Enabled - Click to Download
VDay Competition Rated: PG
Status: Completed

It has always eluded me how Sailor Moon can be afraid of a little thunder. I admit that it is scary and powerful stuff, but when you're a superhero holding the fate of the world in your hands, being afraid of thunder seems a little silly. This story tries to delve into the "psychological" aspect of Serena's fear. Written during the break-up period between Serena and Darien, Once Upon a Raindrop is yet another attempt at bringing our favorite couple back together while trying to delve a little deeper into Serena's inexplicable fear of thunder. (This story takes place during one particular dubbed episode whose name escapes me, but I'm sure you'll recognize it when you start reading.)


Number of Chapters: 1          Total Size: 26k          Word Count: 5,073

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Dream_Angel1986 - Friday July 08, 2005 at 03:33
That was so sweet!!!
Loki - Tuesday June 14, 2005 at 02:34
I read your latest piece and loved it so much I indulged myself once more. I'm glad I did, for you're a skilled and talented writer of the first order. This story was revealing from its angst to its affirming declarations of love. You're easily one of AI's best writers without doubt. *hands you a sapphire rose & bows* L.
pure - Friday March 25, 2005 at 19:49
aww that was sweet. it was interesting to know why she feared the lightning and the thunder. i forgot that when beryl attacked there was lightning and thunder. it was good keep up the awesome work.
Moon_Destiny - Tuesday August 03, 2004 at 00:28
Good story but you sometimes skip tenses like in the seventh paragraph where you talked about Fate, you kind of skipped from past tense to present tense. And this line 'The elevator ride couldn't have taken any longer if Zoicite truly had been at the top.' confused me because Zoicite wasn't waiting for them and you made it sound like he did and you kind of just threw in his name without any mention of him before or afterwards. 'I never once told him the truth' also confused me because that's all the info you have written and that's a vague thing that I think could've been explained more. 'I gave in' that paragraph is also very vague. What was she giving into? Her tiredness? Fantasies of her and Darien?

I also think you could've made the elevator ride a seperate paragraph from the fate one just because they are two different things. But besides those little details it was an enjoyable story to read.
Anonymous - Friday July 23, 2004 at 03:57
This story is beautiful. I loved it!!!!
Sapphire666 - Sunday March 07, 2004 at 21:28
great story, loved it, it was also very cute,
Aurora_21 - Friday March 28, 2003 at 02:43
Cute! Very cute! I like it!
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