Runner Up: Most Recommended Story - October 2004
As if life weren't complicated enough, Usagi has acquired a stalker and he won't be content just to follow her around.
Number of Chapters: 14 Total Size: 314k Word Count: 58,097
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|Loki - Tuesday July 19, 2011 at 21:56|
That was incredible: at first I expected Endy to turn into Diamond, then I thought the realm was a hologram and Endy was under the control of a dark power, then the Victorian idealism of royalty of a severe sought came to mind, there were apsects of that control and patriarchal scenario in Endy's manner, I admit I didn't like him - but the epilogue altered the picture in a way that helped demonstrate that he had isssues of security, the wounded soul, that needed re-assurance despite his manner and Usagi's growth through it all was so well written - the epilogue was perfect and the symmetry of the story as a whole did proove that love conquers all, even the oldest of hurts, and the ending was great, a fabulous read, thank you!
|Loki - Tuesday July 19, 2011 at 18:05|
There is a reason this story so far, chapter 6, is a classic and as I've just gotten to it recently I am totally fascinated with the spin on Endymion, the guy is a paradox, contradiction, determined and hard to like right now, poor Usagi, she may not be handling things properly, but with past lives you don't always, or so rarely recall alll you once lived as a different individual.
The Serenity of the Silver Millennium is a very different woman to the odango haired adolescent that has just had epochs shoved in her face and carnal intentions poured upon her as she kicks and screams across two embodiments, a great fic...
|Allison - Thursday November 25, 2010 at 04:14|
This was different from most stories that I've read but it was good and kept me reading! I can't believe I haven't read this yet! 5 stars!
Absolutely wonderful! I started reading this years ago when you had only finished the first two or three chapters. I was delighted when I came across it again, was thrilled to find that it was completed, and happily finished reading it. I love the happy ending and especially loved how Usagi and Endymion's relationship turned out in the end. Thanks for such a wonderful story!
I'm sorry, I've given this one a go because I love so many of your other stories but this is definatley not one of your best. I found Usagi and Endymion competely unlikable and didn't believe their chemistry. That kind of ruined the whole thing for me. Sorry.
|Nich - Wednesday November 18, 2009 at 10:49|
I have read this story several times and each time is as good as the last. I love your possessive portrayal of Endymion. By far my favorite.
great story. i enjoyed that version of serena and darien getting together.
Hot and Steamy!
i love it..even if his way of telling her was a little weird....if i had dreams like that..i'd be calling my boyfriend alot lmao!
but anyways good story i love it!!
|lexie_06 - Tuesday August 14, 2007 at 17:24|
this story did indeed have a very sweet ending. I enjoyed reading it. Great job!
|Anonymous - Sunday May 27, 2007 at 09:31|
I just wanted to say that I read this story with immense pleasure, and having posted this review, intend to read it again. Thank you for a new plot line with a non standard ending.
First off great plot, with the number of SM fics there are it's always amazing when a writer can create something original. Secondly I Loved it from start to end, I'm too tried to tell you all that I loved but the whole thing was a wonderful read which is why I couldn't stop reading it and now very tired.
|babydee - Wednesday March 28, 2007 at 22:26|
thank you for putting a happy ending to this story . you did a great job and good luck on any future writings .
|chazkame - Tuesday February 20, 2007 at 15:46|
It's sooo sweet (at the end... since I rather skipped the first chapters...). It's nicely done. Well done!!
Thank you very much
|Mayonaka - Monday February 05, 2007 at 17:49|
Ha...the ending was so cute and the plot and wit was superb. Although I did not like the fact that Endymion was so crude and harsh and that Usagi had to marry so soon and give birth in the same manner.
|Anonymous - Monday December 18, 2006 at 16:04|
I loved every bit of it. It was cute.
I absolutely love this story. It is so sweet (even if he was being an ass!).
MarshAngel, as usual, GREAT story. :)
YOUR STORIES IS MY FAVORITE
|Kittycat - Saturday August 12, 2006 at 20:27|
All I can say is awwwwww!
|twine - Tuesday July 25, 2006 at 07:01|
everytime I read this it makes me shiver, laugh, and out right smile. Your writing is fantastic, I only wish I had half your talent.
|RENA630 - Friday July 14, 2006 at 21:54|
This was wonderful to say the least. It was great to see Usagi transform before my eyes. It was also great how you were able to mature the relationship between Usagi and the girls. It was sexy, romantic, heart wrenching, sweet and extremly realistic all at once. You managed to keep the story very real and you didn't end it with a "too-perfect" happy ending, you left it very realistic. Though there was a huge problem with formatting I didn't mind too much because the story was unbelievable! I loved it! Great job!
I absolutely love this story. So well written. *sighs* Its a shame you wont be writting any more.
|maf - Tuesday June 13, 2006 at 08:18|
|minna - Sunday April 30, 2006 at 02:40|
love this story very awsome
|maymay23 - Thursday February 09, 2006 at 00:03|
well done...it was a very good story and very exquisitely written...you are definitely a well versed writer...i loved how you incorporated the past, present and future lives of usagi, endymion and the senshi...good job!!!
A wonderful story. You're a wonderful writer and I love reading your stories.
|Nasuki - Monday January 30, 2006 at 03:21|
such a touching story i like it beautifully written good job a happy ending.
|Ginger - Sunday January 15, 2006 at 20:13|
I've read this so many times - it's one of my favorite stories. It's so cute and sweet, and very realistic. I absolutely loooovveee it! Would you ever consider writing a sequel? Please? :(
|bluesands - Monday November 07, 2005 at 11:44|
awww i loved it!!! Great job!
|glicky - Wednesday August 10, 2005 at 17:27|
|jennie - Friday May 20, 2005 at 23:16|
I must have read this story a hundred times and I still come back to read it again and again. Just now was one hundred and one times and I thought that I would leave a message to say how much I still love it.
|Anonymous - Sunday May 01, 2005 at 16:33|
This is great,but I just wish that her friends and family could of gone with them. hey, you know what at lest they can vist right!!! Keep up the great work.
I really like this story and how the relationship develops between Usagi and Endymion. Boy, it is so sexy. Of course, I like the epilogue more because it tied up a lot of the loose ends of the story. When you ended it, I didn't like how Usagi left it with her friends. Now, it's all better! Hope you write more!
wow i love this story though the only part that i dont like is the other guy that she dated with for alittle bit
I love this fic. Don't remember the genre of this fic but it gave me a feel of a fantasy/mystery fic. Fantasy's my fav.
The stalker's coming and going at the begining of the fic make me think that he was a ghost, but later found out he's not. The fiance seemed to be evil in the old days, not sure if the nice guy was supose to be his incarnation, but I thought that he would be evil too but he surprised me and let her go free without a fight. I was disappointed that she didn't have a chance to tell the stalker that she was being blackmail in the SM by meal.
I love that endy has power. My take is if the girls have powers so should he. In the anime he is so weak without it.
What I don't get is the issue with the people from the other dimension under his (endy) rule. I think you explained, but it's still vague. Everyone that lives there, are they used to be the people of earth from the silver millenium. They were under metallia's control, woke up when she was destroyed and recognize, accept Endymion as the prince, ruler. Is that what happen? Endymion never die or recarnated like usagi, he's the same prince from the silver millenium. And how old does he look really because her father seems to bring up the age difference a lot.
|Anonymous - Saturday February 26, 2005 at 20:00|
love the story. it was written well and i'm glad tat endy and sere ended up in the end.
|MMHYUM - Thursday February 17, 2005 at 20:28|
Wow! I can't believe I read all this in one sitting, but it was so addicting! I loved the plot-- It's a very different way to portray Usagi and I thought that was great!
I did happen to see that you called Motoki "Andrew" in one of the later chapters, but no biggie.
|serena004 - Wednesday February 09, 2005 at 00:26|
this is very long but a very good read.
|brat - Monday August 09, 2004 at 20:05|
GREAT you need to write an cont. Please!!!!!!!
|Rakusa - Saturday May 15, 2004 at 08:46|
That was so cute, and utterly well written, all guys should be like Endymion in your story, he's not a wimp at all, and can express his feelings. Though... i don't recall ~him~ ever saying he loved her. I also like how you dealt with everything, it was very moving, and realistic, well kind of, if super-heroines, reincarnation, crystals, multiple demensions and demons can be condesidered normal. Anyways, never quit writing, you're just to good to be dropped of the face of the universe.
|Adamina - Friday March 19, 2004 at 04:26|