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Story: Touch
Posted on Wednesday March 13, 2002 at 07:43 by MarshAngel
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Members Stories Runner Up:Most Recommended Story - October 2004 
Runner Up: Most Recommended Story - October 2004

Rated: R
Status: Completed

As if life weren't complicated enough, Usagi has acquired a stalker and he won't be content just to follow her around.



Number of Chapters: 14          Total Size: 314k          Word Count: 58,097

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Loki - Tuesday July 19, 2011 at 21:56
That was incredible: at first I expected Endy to turn into Diamond, then I thought the realm was a hologram and Endy was under the control of a dark power, then the Victorian idealism of royalty of a severe sought came to mind, there were apsects of that control and patriarchal scenario in Endy's manner, I admit I didn't like him - but the epilogue altered the picture in a way that helped demonstrate that he had isssues of security, the wounded soul, that needed re-assurance despite his manner and Usagi's growth through it all was so well written - the epilogue was perfect and the symmetry of the story as a whole did proove that love conquers all, even the oldest of hurts, and the ending was great, a fabulous read, thank you!
Loki - Tuesday July 19, 2011 at 18:05
There is a reason this story so far, chapter 6, is a classic and as I've just gotten to it recently I am totally fascinated with the spin on Endymion, the guy is a paradox, contradiction, determined and hard to like right now, poor Usagi, she may not be handling things properly, but with past lives you don't always, or so rarely recall alll you once lived as a different individual.

The Serenity of the Silver Millennium is a very different woman to the odango haired adolescent that has just had epochs shoved in her face and carnal intentions poured upon her as she kicks and screams across two embodiments, a great fic...
Allison - Thursday November 25, 2010 at 04:14
This was different from most stories that I've read but it was good and kept me reading! I can't believe I haven't read this yet! 5 stars!
Silvercrystal77 - Friday February 12, 2010 at 10:24
Absolutely wonderful! I started reading this years ago when you had only finished the first two or three chapters. I was delighted when I came across it again, was thrilled to find that it was completed, and happily finished reading it. I love the happy ending and especially loved how Usagi and Endymion's relationship turned out in the end. Thanks for such a wonderful story!

~Silvercyrstal77
Red_Elephant - Saturday December 12, 2009 at 11:33
I'm sorry, I've given this one a go because I love so many of your other stories but this is definatley not one of your best. I found Usagi and Endymion competely unlikable and didn't believe their chemistry. That kind of ruined the whole thing for me. Sorry.
Nich - Wednesday November 18, 2009 at 10:49
I have read this story several times and each time is as good as the last. I love your possessive portrayal of Endymion. By far my favorite.
jupiter_2005 - Sunday September 07, 2008 at 19:37
great story. i enjoyed that version of serena and darien getting together.
anweaver2007 - Tuesday February 12, 2008 at 02:25
Hot and Steamy!
i love it..even if his way of telling her was a little weird....if i had dreams like that..i'd be calling my boyfriend alot lmao!
but anyways good story i love it!!
lexie_06 - Tuesday August 14, 2007 at 17:24
amazing story!!!
princesa_angelbebe - Friday August 10, 2007 at 03:27
this story did indeed have a very sweet ending. I enjoyed reading it. Great job!
Anonymous - Sunday May 27, 2007 at 09:31
I just wanted to say that I read this story with immense pleasure, and having posted this review, intend to read it again. Thank you for a new plot line with a non standard ending.
darksilk22 - Monday April 02, 2007 at 09:19
First off great plot, with the number of SM fics there are it's always amazing when a writer can create something original. Secondly I Loved it from start to end, I'm too tried to tell you all that I loved but the whole thing was a wonderful read which is why I couldn't stop reading it and now very tired.
babydee - Wednesday March 28, 2007 at 22:26
thank you for putting a happy ending to this story . you did a great job and good luck on any future writings .
chazkame - Tuesday February 20, 2007 at 15:46
It's sooo sweet (at the end... since I rather skipped the first chapters...). It's nicely done. Well done!!

Thank you very much
Mayonaka - Monday February 05, 2007 at 17:49
Ha...the ending was so cute and the plot and wit was superb. Although I did not like the fact that Endymion was so crude and harsh and that Usagi had to marry so soon and give birth in the same manner.
Anonymous - Monday December 18, 2006 at 16:04
I loved every bit of it. It was cute.
StarzAngelus - Saturday November 04, 2006 at 00:13
I absolutely love this story. It is so sweet (even if he was being an ass!).

MarshAngel, as usual, GREAT story. :)
uchihalover - Tuesday September 12, 2006 at 13:25
YOUR STORIES IS MY FAVORITE
Kittycat - Saturday August 12, 2006 at 20:27
All I can say is awwwwww!
twine - Tuesday July 25, 2006 at 07:01
everytime I read this it makes me shiver, laugh, and out right smile. Your writing is fantastic, I only wish I had half your talent.
RENA630 - Friday July 14, 2006 at 21:54
This was wonderful to say the least. It was great to see Usagi transform before my eyes. It was also great how you were able to mature the relationship between Usagi and the girls. It was sexy, romantic, heart wrenching, sweet and extremly realistic all at once. You managed to keep the story very real and you didn't end it with a "too-perfect" happy ending, you left it very realistic. Though there was a huge problem with formatting I didn't mind too much because the story was unbelievable! I loved it! Great job!
spoiltkami88 - Friday June 30, 2006 at 06:11
I absolutely love this story. So well written. *sighs* Its a shame you wont be writting any more.
maf - Tuesday June 13, 2006 at 08:18
LOVED IT!
minna - Sunday April 30, 2006 at 02:40
love this story very awsome
maymay23 - Thursday February 09, 2006 at 00:03
well done...it was a very good story and very exquisitely written...you are definitely a well versed writer...i loved how you incorporated the past, present and future lives of usagi, endymion and the senshi...good job!!!
cittykat21 - Friday February 03, 2006 at 13:31
A wonderful story. You're a wonderful writer and I love reading your stories.
Nasuki - Monday January 30, 2006 at 03:21
such a touching story i like it beautifully written good job a happy ending.
Ginger - Sunday January 15, 2006 at 20:13
I've read this so many times - it's one of my favorite stories. It's so cute and sweet, and very realistic. I absolutely loooovveee it! Would you ever consider writing a sequel? Please? :(
bluesands - Monday November 07, 2005 at 11:44
awww i loved it!!! Great job!
glicky - Wednesday August 10, 2005 at 17:27
that.... is hot.
jennie - Friday May 20, 2005 at 23:16
I must have read this story a hundred times and I still come back to read it again and again. Just now was one hundred and one times and I thought that I would leave a message to say how much I still love it.
Anonymous - Sunday May 01, 2005 at 16:33
This is great,but I just wish that her friends and family could of gone with them. hey, you know what at lest they can vist right!!! Keep up the great work.
AmethystSerenity - Monday April 25, 2005 at 04:10
I really like this story and how the relationship develops between Usagi and Endymion. Boy, it is so sexy. Of course, I like the epilogue more because it tied up a lot of the loose ends of the story. When you ended it, I didn't like how Usagi left it with her friends. Now, it's all better! Hope you write more!
loverofendy - Saturday April 02, 2005 at 06:36
wow i love this story though the only part that i dont like is the other guy that she dated with for alittle bit
Labyrinth - Monday March 28, 2005 at 19:57
I love this fic. Don't remember the genre of this fic but it gave me a feel of a fantasy/mystery fic. Fantasy's my fav.

The stalker's coming and going at the begining of the fic make me think that he was a ghost, but later found out he's not. The fiance seemed to be evil in the old days, not sure if the nice guy was supose to be his incarnation, but I thought that he would be evil too but he surprised me and let her go free without a fight. I was disappointed that she didn't have a chance to tell the stalker that she was being blackmail in the SM by meal.

I love that endy has power. My take is if the girls have powers so should he. In the anime he is so weak without it.

What I don't get is the issue with the people from the other dimension under his (endy) rule. I think you explained, but it's still vague. Everyone that lives there, are they used to be the people of earth from the silver millenium. They were under metallia's control, woke up when she was destroyed and recognize, accept Endymion as the prince, ruler. Is that what happen? Endymion never die or recarnated like usagi, he's the same prince from the silver millenium. And how old does he look really because her father seems to bring up the age difference a lot.
Anonymous - Saturday February 26, 2005 at 20:00
love the story. it was written well and i'm glad tat endy and sere ended up in the end.
MMHYUM - Thursday February 17, 2005 at 20:28
Wow! I can't believe I read all this in one sitting, but it was so addicting! I loved the plot-- It's a very different way to portray Usagi and I thought that was great!

I did happen to see that you called Motoki "Andrew" in one of the later chapters, but no biggie.
serena004 - Wednesday February 09, 2005 at 00:26
this is very long but a very good read.
brat - Monday August 09, 2004 at 20:05
GREAT you need to write an cont. Please!!!!!!!
Rakusa - Saturday May 15, 2004 at 08:46
That was so cute, and utterly well written, all guys should be like Endymion in your story, he's not a wimp at all, and can express his feelings. Though... i don't recall ~him~ ever saying he loved her. I also like how you dealt with everything, it was very moving, and realistic, well kind of, if super-heroines, reincarnation, crystals, multiple demensions and demons can be condesidered normal. Anyways, never quit writing, you're just to good to be dropped of the face of the universe.
Adamina - Friday March 19, 2004 at 04:26
^^

*beams*

I LOVE this story. It's absolutely amazing. The way you've made Mamoru (not only in this story, but in all your writings) simply rockets my heart into speed (very sexy). And your plot lines are always original. Thank you for a great read!
starryice18 - Wednesday September 10, 2003 at 19:03
MarshAngel, you're stories are wonderful. I have read all the completed ones I could find multiple times over. You are a great author, please continue writing so I'll have new stories by you to read. To anyone reading this, READ THIS STORY + ALL HER OTHERS, they are WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!
SweetDreamer - Monday September 01, 2003 at 17:56
A sprinkle of humor... a ton of romance, and a bucket full of feelings both good and bad, makes this story so wonderful.
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
I ABSOLUTLY LOVE this story.

MarshAngel, you are a delight to the fanfiction world... If you haven't read this story... READ IT!
c_futt1214 - Monday August 04, 2003 at 03:48
Perfect Story! What else can I say? this was such a great story. I love the ending its so cute.
Darrien_4_Serena - Sunday August 03, 2003 at 10:34
that is so cute!!!!!
gwenie - Sunday July 13, 2003 at 06:41
Yet another wonderful story by you! I loved this one just as much as the others! :)
Sailor_Angel - Saturday July 05, 2003 at 18:16
P.S.

SEQUEL!!!!! (unless you've already gotten one out)
Sailor_Angel - Saturday July 05, 2003 at 18:13
Nice, I luv it, I espec. like the epilogue ~_^ wish I ahd some of the 'Body Liquer' sounds nice. Hmm, I wonder which body parts they used it on? hmm....lol :) just kidding. Like the "and she's gonna look like me bit" too
darkprincess - Sunday December 29, 2002 at 11:20
That was a really cute story, I liked it.
Sailor_Sista - Wednesday December 11, 2002 at 09:39
*almost starts to get teary-eyed herself*
Oh.. that was just wonderful. I loved the ending.. it was so gorgeous.
I'd ask for a sequal, but i don't know... maybe its best to leave it where it ended, hmm?
Well done, i really enjoyed reading Touch. It's been lovely.
Sailor Sista.
Tsukino_Serenity - Monday December 09, 2002 at 22:23
OMG OMG OMG!!!
i LUUUVED it!! *huggles* Brilliant fic!! verry original, i liked the idea of the other dimension...n u finally did an epilogue!-which was a really good idea, cuz it gave the story a sense of completion n wrapped up the various storylines(seeing as i was left hanging n unsatisfied when i saw the 'The End' in Chap.13)!..hmm...i'd hav liked to see the senshi n Serena's parents visit the other world?.., but still, Good on u! U go, gal!!

...now...abt ur other fics...*hint hint* any other chapters coming out soon? ^v^~
Lady_Artemis - Monday December 09, 2002 at 01:55
this was really excellent, i enjoyed reading the epilogue to wrap it up. at first it didn't appeal to me as much, but it grew on me very well! thank you for it, hope to see more great work from you.
Angel_Grrl - Monday December 09, 2002 at 00:17
Good epilogue! YAY!!!! The story wasn't complete..and now it is! woo hoo! I absolutely LOVE this story. Thank you for adding yet another part to it. ^_^ KUDOS!
bLusH - Sunday December 08, 2002 at 10:24
omg!! an epilogue!! yay!! *jumps for joy..then stops..* but it was kinda jumbled and all..but i still read it!! it's really a great story!! keep up the good work!
Anonymous - Sunday December 08, 2002 at 07:46
*sobs* I can't understand it... ^.^; it's all jumbled... I hope you posted this chapter on ff.net. That's where I first read this story, and fell in love with it. I'm SOOO happy that you wrote an epilogue. Now I'm asking myself, why are my still typing here when I know that you're story is just a click in my favorites away... I know I'll love it!
crystal_rose - Sunday December 08, 2002 at 07:45
It's a credit to me that I was willing to put up with the messed-up format of your story just to read how things turned out for Usagi. It was great and I'm glad that you decided to do the epilogue. It wrapped things up quite nicely and left me feeling more satisfied than if I had just consummed the most kick-ass of chocolate cakes in the world. Write more stories because the satisfaction I get from reading them is less fattening than my endless craving for chocolate, meaning I could read them again and again without the bother of expanding waist lines. Once again, great story but maybe you should upload a basic html file instead of the one you've got up to make reading easier for the less determined readers.
dozenrose2001 - Sunday December 08, 2002 at 06:49
What a lovely ending. You really should fix it so that it's a plain text file though. Other than other, it was wonderful. This is a favorite of mine. Probably because it combines the excitement of obsession with the warm fuzziness of romance and love. Thanks.
armitage374 - Saturday November 09, 2002 at 16:47
SEQUEL!SEQUEL!SEQUEL!

Great story !!!!
Anonymous - Saturday October 26, 2002 at 22:35
Very romantic and intruiging storyline. You sure know how to write an captivating love story.
Anonymous - Sunday September 22, 2002 at 12:19
WhEn ArE yOU goNNa UpdaTe?? I neEd A New ChaPPie :S.....PlEaSE!! do It sooN
Moon_Blade2591 - Thursday September 19, 2002 at 03:55
Hey!!!! I have read your story at your home-page and at ASMR and I love it! But maybe you will remeber me if i tell you I was the little annoying girl who kept emailing you cause i wanted to give you reasons why you should finish your story? Well that was me! The only reason I stopped was cause I think I was gettin on your nerves...but oh well, great story!I'm glad i finally got to read the last chap, I have been trying to for about a half year!
Nikitsuki - Tuesday July 30, 2002 at 22:49
That's it?! What about the senshi and everyone? You better write a sequal!! This fic was abosolutely awesome though!! I just love your work!!
Sailor_Sista - Wednesday July 24, 2002 at 11:04
Whaaaa!!
Brilliant brilliant brilliant!!
More more more!!
I have to go go go!

BYE!

Sista!
Anonymous - Wednesday July 24, 2002 at 08:29
great story loved it but then again i love everything you write you are a very good writer bye!!
Anonymous - Tuesday July 23, 2002 at 15:16
that was a great story i hope you put out more stories
Anonymous - Tuesday July 23, 2002 at 06:51
oh i love this story, mayby u sould write another one like it.
Jamestown - Tuesday July 23, 2002 at 03:15
WooHoo...Alright an ending that leaves you thinking theirs more, but who needs it! Your awesome Marshangel! I liked how you made this tale and how you made Usagi far more different than she has been viewed. Showing her inner struggle is something most of us fans don't stop to delve into and explain. I reiterate your awesome Marshangel!
keera-chan - Tuesday July 23, 2002 at 02:30
oh my god! i can't believe that it's finally over. i'm happy that the stories finally over but it still leaves my wanting more. oh well, i still loved it.
Serendipity - Monday July 22, 2002 at 23:18
It's over!? NO!!!!! *sniff* It was too short, I tell you, too short! I mean... is she ever going to see the others again, and what about the future. Will they have Chibi-Usa, and how will Shingo take it...? *sigh* Even though I'm dissappointed that it's over, I still like the story. But, the last chapters were kinda short and not as great as the rest... but good none the less! ^_^ To many more great stories like this and your others! *about to knock glasses* Wait! What are you drinking...? Can I have some of that!? My parents don't let me drink much... ^_~

~Dipity
ChibiJ - Monday July 22, 2002 at 21:39
Although it was so worth the wait, i am so sad that it is over. Will there be a sequel? Maybe just an epilogue? I'm begging!!!

You are a great writer, I love all your stories, and I can't wait to see what you come out with next!
Angel_Grrl - Monday July 22, 2002 at 21:29
OH! So good........^_^ Um....there is gonna be a sequel right???? ^_^ PLEASE?! Very good. BRAVO!
crystal_rose - Monday July 22, 2002 at 20:44
great story! are you going to do an epilogue cuz it seems like there's some loose ends that you might want to tie up, like what happened to the senshi and her parents. anyhoo, it's a great ending and i hope to see more of your stories!
lovelyNori - Monday July 15, 2002 at 22:57
ohhh..kawaii..I think this is one of the best story that I have ever read....I hope you write more soon..I can't wait
Anonymous - Monday July 15, 2002 at 21:27
wow! amazing story u got there!! hurry with another chapter!! ^_^
Anonymous - Thursday July 11, 2002 at 12:18
AHHH!!! okies, what happen to the rest of the chapters? Anyways, this is a very interesting story of what might have had happen after the Sailor Senshi defeated Beryl. If you would just forget about the original Sailor Moon (manga and all) this will all make very good sense to you. Needless to say that I love this fic! I can't wait to read what happens next. Angel, where's the next chapter?!?!?! You have quite an imagination! Keep imagining and writting!

~*^*~Neo~*^*~
Anonymous - Wednesday July 10, 2002 at 00:39
OMG this is such a gooooood story!!!!! i wanna read more!!! i could never be as brave and daring as Usagi is in this story!! Keep it up gurlie!!!
Anonymous - Thursday June 20, 2002 at 08:46
Pretty damn good.That's about all I can say; her work is superb,no grammatical errors as far as I can tell. The story flows and keeps the reader entranced. Can't wait for the next chapter.


Just keepin' it real,
LmoeJiggles
Anonymous - Tuesday June 18, 2002 at 16:25
where are you ?
you know you have
a story to finish
Anonymous - Wednesday May 29, 2002 at 16:23
please more, this story is great.
Usa-Chan
Sailor_Sista - Sunday May 26, 2002 at 01:26
wow... she's leaving her family to become queen.
How amazing!!

I await the next chapter! *grins*

Keep it comin' girly,

S-chan
Anonymous - Sunday May 26, 2002 at 00:00
How is it going to end? Is she going to fight any more? Please tell!
Serendipity - Sunday May 19, 2002 at 03:42
You have to hurry with the next chapter, pleaz... It is so good right now! And that was just evil, what you did with that clifhanger. Sham on you!!! ^_^ I'll feel better if you put up the next chapter though.
Anonymous - Friday May 17, 2002 at 23:24
come on finish you need to finish this story it is so good please don't make me write 100 reasons why you need to finish this story so please please please please please please please please please please please please please finish
Sailor_Sista - Tuesday May 14, 2002 at 06:45
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!
*falls out of her seat*
You can't leave it THERE!!
Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!
*sinks to the ground and sobs*
But it's so.. *sniff* good... *Sniff sniff*
*brightens up*
But the next chapter will be up soon! Right??
*sees you backing away nervously*
Good! I thought it would be!
LATA!
*hands you chocolate*
Is good for the brain!
S-chan
Anonymous - Monday May 13, 2002 at 00:02
PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
right another chapter SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!
CAUSE IM WAITING
Serendipity - Saturday May 11, 2002 at 19:23
This story is great! I can't wait for the next chapter to be out. I soooo hope E and U get together... *sigh* If only that story was finished already so I could know the ending!!! Well, we all have to be a little patient, unfortunatly. ^__^
Serendipity - Saturday May 11, 2002 at 02:22
That was great! Can't wait for the next chapter. I so hope you let them get together. M and U, I mean. Not that other guy. *smile* I don't even remember his name!!! hahahaha
Anonymous - Wednesday May 08, 2002 at 23:32
that was a great story
Sailor_Sista - Wednesday May 08, 2002 at 07:45
Have I told you how much I love this?
No?
Well i do!
Pleeeeeease finish the next chapter soon!!

S-chan!
Anonymous - Monday April 22, 2002 at 23:48
we'll be waiting for the next chapter
Sailor_Sista - Friday April 19, 2002 at 13:14
Wow. That was good.
Scrap that... it was excellent!
"the curse had selective hearing"
*laughs* now that is just too funny!
You must put out the next chapter, as soon as possible please!
Thank you

Sailor Sista
Anonymous - Friday April 05, 2002 at 17:34
This is a very great story and I hope that you will have more chapters soon. You are a great writer!
Dagger - Thursday April 04, 2002 at 00:07
omg ohh tears I love it write more.
Hoshizora - Tuesday April 02, 2002 at 01:15
I just read chapter 6 and it's fantastic! I love this story! It makes you want to punch and kiss Endymion at the same time! Of course i'd probably opt for kiss...:)

I can't wait to read more!

H
Argos - Monday April 01, 2002 at 20:23
please write more, i am going crazy waiting for the next chapter.
Dagger - Monday April 01, 2002 at 18:18
Hey angel so wuz up I just think your story is awsume I cant wait for the next ch. bye hugels!
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