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Story: Falling Away
Posted on Tuesday January 28, 2003 at 15:16 by MarshAngel
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Rated: R
Status: Completed

A Silver Millenium drama in which Serenity and Endymion make a decision that starts them down an unchageable path, setting various events in motion that will forever change the future.

Number of Chapters: 12          Total Size: 343k          Word Count: 60,851

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tiffanybgood - Wednesday September 16, 2009 at 00:22
the ending is not what i expected and i was hoping for a happy ending, but i know not all stories end happy. I'm glad there's a string of hope at the end afterall. bottom line, i love the story! thank you.
nif - Tuesday March 10, 2009 at 04:55
wonderful. i quite enjoyed the ending. it was a breath of fresh air.
angeleyes13 - Friday August 31, 2007 at 04:31
I've read this story so many times and I have never gotten sick of it. It is so beautifully written. It is in my opinion one of the best written stories about the Silver Millenium ever. Marshangel you are amazing, and I sincerely mean that.
Rae - Tuesday November 28, 2006 at 23:22
your story was AWESOME, it was very well written. nad the detail and the story line couldnt of been better
jenna - Thursday October 05, 2006 at 16:56
i absoultily loved your story. And the way you put in there moder relationship at the end was inspired. Keep up the good work.
XxMelaxX - Tuesday September 05, 2006 at 17:49
It's a beautiful story. While I was reading it, I couldn't wait to see what happens next, very well written. The ending is just perfect, I liked the way you switched the timeline. Keep up the good work.
Anonymous - Monday May 29, 2006 at 07:55
amazing. love to see a sequal
xscatteredmoonlightx - Monday November 14, 2005 at 22:20
I can honestly say that this is one of the best fan fiction I've ever read. The entire story is simply marvelous and simply well-done. I'd give it a five-star rating.
MG - Monday May 16, 2005 at 23:41
You definitely outdid yourself with this one. Ive been waiting to see how you would end it and I am happy to say that i am very satisfied. I was worried that it would just end with the kingdome being destroyed and Serenity and Endymion dying, but you really but a heartfelt touch on it. Its a different spin and well worth the wait.
Kimmi-Chan - Sunday May 15, 2005 at 22:53
Wow, after such a long journey this story has reached its end, and I must say, it ended on a good note. Great way to end the story, it provided hope for us readers and though Endymion and serenity ...well you know (I dont want to ruin it for others) -the audience is left content. Aside from a few speeling and grammatical errors I love this story, especially the last chapter. It left me in tears and I stayed at my computer re-reading this story completely moved.

Kayla chavi said it best, "The ending doesn't always have to be happy, it just has to have hope," and you did exactly that. As sad as it is to see you leave the world of SM fandom you left us a great story many will and have already enjoyed. Good luck in your future endeavours, ja ne.

Critika - Saturday May 14, 2005 at 21:45
I had originally thought Falling Away was going to be a prequel to Touch, but once I realized this story was to stand on its own, I have to admit, I loved it. As usual, you've managed to portray emotions beautifully. I've enjoyed all of your stories since you began writing and I think this is a wonderful story to end your fanfic career with. Good luck to you! Hope to find your published books at the store one day!
astro - Thursday May 12, 2005 at 18:48
maybe its just hormons, but i am crying
wonderful story
Jupiter - Thursday May 12, 2005 at 06:24
Honestly, I thought the your story was great and with a perfect ending. Stories have to end somehow and you did that beautifully. Thankyou for such a beautiful and well rounded story. I really with you would write somemore, because I absolutly love your work. Good luck to you! Once again, I loved your story and I became so excited when I noticed that you had finally finished it. Thanks!!! I might just read it all over again. Hehe...
Usako4life - Thursday March 24, 2005 at 22:00
I really enjoy this story and I can't wait until you finish it. Which I will take you on your word, that is, that you do plan on finishin it! I also, just last night finished reading, Touch, and LOVED IT! You are a truly talented writer, I wish I had been hit with the talent stick.
josie - Wednesday January 12, 2005 at 02:13
OMG!!! What an amazing story, you've got me hooked. You are a very talented writer and have great ideas. Im LOVING this story.
I understand that life gets in the way and we all get busy but PLEASE PLEASE (on knees begging) PLEASE finish this story, i keep going over in my head whats going to happen next...i can't do it anymore, so please finish it. Something that good can not be left unfinished.
Thanks for writing such a great story but please finish it.
Can't wait to see the finished results. Good luck.
Jewelz - Friday December 17, 2004 at 19:11
Wow...interesting chapter, the tension is just off the charts now, but I noticed something interesting.

During Serenity and Ami's conversation on Pluto, we learn that Endymion's father has already died. At the end of the chapter however, it was stated through Endymion's thoughts that "now that his father was confined to the bed" that he was taking over every responsibility. The way the chapter concludes with the 'personal feeling' that Enydmion had that was ominous, ~implies~ that he felt Serenity give birth to their child or soemthing of the sort(to me at leasy), but as we know from earlier, Serenity is still pregnant *after* the king dies.

So anywho, am I just overanalyzing again or did you purposely do that to throw us off? That's very clever if you did!! That vagueness at the end of the chapter was perfect. If I'm right about the time sequences though, I think that Endymion's ominous feeling was about his father's death--not Serenity giving birth. (That *would* be something momentous because then there would be an even greater amount of conflict and would pressure Endymion to marry and produce an heir with Beryl.) That pain he felt in his dreams was likely Serenity's, but just means that his strong connection to her allowed him to feel her current state. I also thought it was good that Sailor Pluto was briefly discussed rather than introduced. Whether or not you meant to do that or didn't want to write about her, works well for the story because Pluto would be privy to many things given her powers and abilities.

On that note, there are so many possibilities because I think Endymion has already made a connection with his child even if he doesn't know it. I'm curious too, about whether or not the senshi or Serenity have thought about the child's magical abilities. If they mean to hide her, she needs to be raised by people familiar with magic in case she does something beserk with powers she might have inherited from either parents. The senshi afterall, were very surprised at Endymion's abilities, especially in teleportation and they don't know that in Endymion's family, they can immediately recognize their own children. The dreams Serenity has been having about the desolate moon makes me think that the child is provoking those images somehow...*shrug*

As for Serenity, I don't know if she can survive letting go of her child. On one of my guesses as to what would happen, I imagined that children from Endymion's family were different and formed an immediate bond with the parents. I think that came from watching Charmed and how when Piper was pregnant, her child shielded her from anything harmful and afterwards, was able to form a protective dome barrier around him away from people he didn't like. Isn't that funny? Anyways, whatever happens, I'm really looking forward to it.
FiCassidy - Monday December 13, 2004 at 22:55
This is a very good story. I hope that Endymion and Serena will see each other again before the worst happens! Can't wait for the next chapter.
jennie - Sunday December 12, 2004 at 20:17
ohhh, i love this story you have to finish it please.
its just starting to get really good to!!!!
please hurry and finsih it!!!!!!
j2 - Sunday November 28, 2004 at 23:45
As usually great chapter but too short.
Critika - Sunday November 28, 2004 at 23:05
When I first started reading this, I thought it was going to be a prequel to Touch and since there was no mention of pregnancy in it (that I remember), I was surprised by Serenity's pregnancy. But, I appreciate the twist. I'm going to be more anxious than ever to find out how this story ends! I've loved Perspectives, Inc and all of your others and I look forward to adding this to my list of favorates!
SlrEuropa - Monday August 09, 2004 at 18:00
This was FABULOUS! I absolutely love it - the twist at the end of 9 took me by surprise. For some reason, I never expected it and it never crossed my mind.

I can't wait for more.
Kastallia - Saturday July 31, 2004 at 20:07
I love updates, especially when you find a long awaited one.

I've been following this story since the beginning (which has actually been quite a while now), but it's been worth it because I've been kept interested every step of the way. I'm usually so impatient that I try not to read a fic until it's finshed, but with some (like this one), I just can't help myself.

I thought it was about time that I left a review, just as a gentle reminder that there are people who are still following your work and awaiting the updates. :)

Loved the plot twist, and eagerly awaiting Endymion's reaction. *evil grin*

MG - Tuesday July 27, 2004 at 01:34
I want to rant and rave about how its "about d*mn time you updated"...but I guess that would maked me a hyprocrite considering that I just recieved a review for one of my fics that said I haven't updated in 9 are still keeping me on the edge of my seat. I did figure she was pregnant as soon as her clothes didn't fit, but I have to admit that I didn't think you would make her pregnant until this chapter. I wondered how similar to your other story this would be and I have to say that I am glad you changed it. I'm hoping this won't be another Serenity/Endymion suicide...but still i trust you to make it good no matter what you do. For once, I really don't care about overanalyzing the story and trying to figure out how it will end...I just wanna read...and thats a good feeling.

Kimmi-Chan - Monday July 26, 2004 at 18:34
I must say the twist you added, though predictable, was damnnnn gooood =). I'm loving the development of all the characters and their relationships to one another, it makes the story have more depth and all the more intruiging. Pleaaasseeeee continue, you're killing me here!

Darrien_4_Serena - Monday July 26, 2004 at 07:50
silverbootycall18 - Monday July 26, 2004 at 03:24
hello!!!! its been a while since i read this fic, it wasn't long as the other chapters, its still good. i hope to read your next chapter!
Cappuchino_Princezz - Friday June 25, 2004 at 06:14
Oh come ON! Are you seriously going to be leaving it there for so long? WHEN does Beryl die or Endymoin comes to his senses? Where is the happy ending we're all craving? :( *sniffle sniffle* I love this story..please do continue it.
Sovern_of_Evil - Sunday May 16, 2004 at 20:22
I like where it's going so far. =) I saw a few mistakes in the location of the quotation marks, but otherwise everything seems alright.

Please continue! =)
silverbootycall18 - Sunday April 04, 2004 at 01:15
hey!!! ur story is absolutely fantastic!!(getting chills all over) Its was very interesting, i liked how you show their characters' personality through out the chapter. Once i read it i just couldn't stop! you did a wonderful job!im sorry if it has been difficult for you, but your hard work has definitely payed off! so long!lolz!!! cant wait for the next chapter!!!!
Sailor_Angel - Saturday April 03, 2004 at 20:53
I read the whole story through again and especially in the earlier chapters there's some format problems like lack of speech marks or incorrectly placed speech marks. But despite all that I still love this story and *nudges* I want you to write more!
Critika - Tuesday March 30, 2004 at 19:30
This last chapter was written very well - you've captured Serenity's and Endy's internal dilema very well. I'm sorry that the story has been difficult for you to write, but rest assured that it's come out great! I loved Touch as well and I can't wait to find out all the events that lead up to it.
aman_akira - Tuesday March 30, 2004 at 03:43
Whoa. I like the twists this story is taking. I really enjoy the fact that you make Serenity and Endy's inner turmoil so blatant and that you don't gloss over their responsibities to their respective crowns. Anyway, I can't wait to see where this story goes. Update soon. :)
angeleyes13 - Saturday December 27, 2003 at 06:52
As u can see missy....we r dying in suspense and we want chapter 8!!!! PUUUUHLLLEEEASSEz! U r the goddess, the queen of fanfic, the genius of writers....we love u!!! *now will u please hurry up and write chapter 8?* ;0)
MG - Sunday December 14, 2003 at 18:53
you know what woman...u need to get back to this story...don't make me have to come over there...
Static - Monday September 22, 2003 at 03:21
This is a fantastic story. The development, particularly of chapter 7 holds me riveted to every emotion, painful and sweet. If it takes you months to produce such moving work, so be it. I'll wait.
lemon_87 - Saturday September 20, 2003 at 00:53
I love your stories. You have got to keep writing. Never stop.

Oh, btw update more often if you can please. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Goldeneyes - Wednesday September 17, 2003 at 19:37
I love this story soooooooo much! i've been waiting for this chapter in what feel like years!(lol) I'm so glad u updated. Finally!!!!!!!!

could u update soon this time *pouting* please with a strawberry (hate cherries) on top?
Emythenia - Wednesday September 17, 2003 at 04:02
I could have sworn this is a prequel to "Touch"... well, is it??? Because all the characters are alike.

All I have to say is, MORE PLEASE!!! Although the first few chapters were a bit slow-paced for my taste, the later chapters were really well constructed! I look forward to more chapters!
nika1107 - Tuesday September 16, 2003 at 23:45
finally!!! you finally put up this next chapter!!! you have no idea how long i've waited for this!!! you just saved me from death you know!!! [uh... i guess i'm exaggerating a bit...]

next time, update really really soon okai?

no, wait... no... if you had the time, then you can work on it... i don't want to force peeps to work on their fanfics when they have other things to work on that is very important... just take your time...

no, no... i take that back... update right now!!!!

hehe... jas kiddin' (^_^);;
Sailor_Angel - Tuesday September 16, 2003 at 16:59
One word comes to mind: Trouble and that's exactly what I think it happening, approximately when is the next chappie coming out? a month? 2? 5? I have to go now but


yadrianne - Tuesday September 16, 2003 at 06:06
that was a great one
great fight,
and she's going away and he will not know...
Oh My!!!
This is getting better and better
Anonymous - Tuesday September 16, 2003 at 03:39
more more more more. please!!
Kimmi-Chan - Tuesday September 16, 2003 at 03:10
I could almost feel tears coming down my cheek after reading this chapter! The fight was pretty heated and I felt so sorry for Serenity, having her lover say all those things...I hope Endymion feels bad!!! I also hope he feels jealous hahaha, what's he going to do when he finds out about Serenity's trip?? Opps, I hope I didn't give anything away...please update soon!!!!!!! I love this story.

Darrien_4_Serena - Wednesday August 27, 2003 at 08:18
hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry hurry did i mention hurry??(i mean hurry with more chaps)
Twinklinlilstar - Saturday August 16, 2003 at 01:16
This story is so good hope you update sooonnn!!
HonorableBunny - Saturday August 02, 2003 at 16:03
another capter please pretty pretty please i love this story sooooooooooooooooooo much
aman_akira - Friday August 01, 2003 at 20:51
I'm certain that Endymion won't "commit this travesty", right? RIGHT???
I like the fact the Mael isn't really interested in Usagi, so when she crushes his little heart it won't be too devastating. And the Beryl twist is cool too.
I don't having anything really constructive to say other than the fact that I'm loving it. Thank you Marshangel and you too MG!!!
Stringhead - Wednesday July 30, 2003 at 22:01
As always, you have once again managed to produce a spectacular chapter.
(sure took long enought though)
(*ladylike grunt*)
MG - Monday July 28, 2003 at 20:46
hmph::MG narrows her eyes:: you are evil.::points finger in Marsh's direction::I was expecting some more Serenity/Endymion interaction but noooo....::crosses arms and breathes::I "GUESS"---the chapter was still well written...and I "GUESS"---it's on track the way it should be...but hmph::points nose up in the air::I was just hoping I could see more of how they act in public places...hmph::MG walks away with arms crossed...::d*mn writers and their g'd*amn cliffhangers.::

Sailor_Angel - Monday July 28, 2003 at 17:29
stupid council, they had to choose BERYL of all people, idiots oh yeah and I love the chapter
Ezza - Monday July 28, 2003 at 07:38
this is such good story! i wana read more!!!! write more soon please?
Anonymous - Monday July 28, 2003 at 02:12
update soon
Sailor_Angel - Saturday July 05, 2003 at 19:55
Nice, I really like it, keep going
angeleyes13 - Wednesday May 14, 2003 at 02:07
YAY! Chapter 5 was great! I want chapter 6, please, please please!*falls on her knees*

MESSAGE TO ALL AUTHORS: Continue ur stories do not give up and abandon them cause u have fan fic readers dying to read ur next posts!!!
CrystallineLily - Monday May 12, 2003 at 21:26
YES! You FINALLY updated. And it seems like Serenity has taken Endy's proposal. I wonder if they're gonna end up together. I mean, it's not the prequel to Touch, so...

~C Lily~
darknessangel - Sunday May 11, 2003 at 23:53
more more more please i love this story i can't wait to see where it is going well until next chapter keep it coming bye
Luna - Saturday May 10, 2003 at 02:10
I really hate the way you leave us all hanging and same time leave us longing for the next chapter

I love the story with all the cliffhangers and the longing for the next chapter. i hope you make the next chapter as enjoyble as the last one...with all more suspense

MG - Wednesday May 07, 2003 at 14:08
This story is really getting interesting. I can't imagine how they will get out of the trouble that they are setting for themselves. The idea in itself is a cliffhanger. Man, this story is really tight. I can't even express the emotions that come out when I read it. Forget getting the next chapter out, you need to finish the whole freakin' story fast. I'm a patient person but this is kinda torture. I want to read the next chapter but at the same time, knowing the next chapter isn't the end, I don't want to be left hanging again. Sigh. The dilemnas of life.

Kimmi-Chan - Wednesday May 07, 2003 at 02:14
Ohh, danger, secrets and lies. Definietly a good mix. I like how they both considered their consequences aloud so the readers know exactly what would happen if word came out. I believe chapter 6 is going to kick off the story know that a "relationship" is settled between Serenity and Endymion. I really hope to see more, the story is unbelievably amazing! Continue the amazing job.
Rhiannon - Tuesday May 06, 2003 at 18:46
::GASP:: You must write more! This is an incredibly good story and I am totally impressed.
cici - Saturday March 22, 2003 at 10:12
i love it the story is coming together and its getting better and better...hope to see and new chapter out soon.:)
Anonymous - Wednesday March 19, 2003 at 07:20
wow! love the story!!! keep up great work and can;t wait for more!
Anonymous - Wednesday March 19, 2003 at 05:42
you are doing a wonderful job. i am very interested in what is going to happen. keep it coming!
HonorableBunny - Wednesday March 19, 2003 at 01:17
write another chapter!!!!!!!!!!
Im so glad you updated (smiles) Yeah
I will be waiting for more hehehehehe
Anonymous - Monday March 17, 2003 at 22:26
U gotta continue this. Hopefully it will have more R rated stuff.
MG - Sunday March 16, 2003 at 23:03
Everytime I wanted to review before the button wouldn't click...oh well, i wanted to say that I really like this story. I liked the one you had before but this one is even more senusal. I've been witing for you to get that next chapter out! I'm gonna stop typing now and read it....I know, reviewing and I have yet to read ch4. I'm printing it so that I can read it in my room. I can't wait. This is a really good story...:0)

Stringhead - Sunday March 16, 2003 at 17:07
Funny how you updated here but not at *shrugs* Oh well, I'm not complaining.
It was good. The plot finally seems to be really moving.
Darrien_4_Serena - Tuesday March 11, 2003 at 08:14
what finished already
you can not do this to me!!!!!!
ok now here is the plan
you wright more fansatic stories and i will read the fantastic chapters
is that a good plan or not?
well each chapter got a 10/10 for each of them
i have 2 go now
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